| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.087 | | leniency | 0.174 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 725 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 725 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 716 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.83% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 604 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 2.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.258 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like them—drifted between the bran" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 4.19 | | wordCount | 716 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with fire, not with lanterns, but with veins of light" | | 1 | "not with lanterns, but with veins of light" | | 2 | "Not carved from wood or stone, but woven from roots" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 19.89 | | std | 16.96 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 57 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here smelled different—thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something sweet and cloying beneath it." | | 1 | "The trees ahead weren’t just trees—they were too tall, their bark too smooth, their leaves shimmering with an iridescence that hurt to look at directly." | | 2 | "The further they walked, the more the light shifted—golden one moment, then silver, then a deep, bruised purple, as if the sky itself couldn’t decide what color it wanted to be." | | 3 | "Fireflies—or something like them—drifted between the branches, their glow pulsing in time with the pendant’s warmth." | | 4 | "The whispers faded, replaced by the sound of water—dripping, trickling, somewhere ahead." | | 5 | "Not with fire, not with lanterns, but with veins of light—pale blue, shifting to green, then gold—like the inside of a geode, but alive." | | 6 | "A sound echoed through the cavern—a chime, clear and bright, like a struck crystal." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 613 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.037520391517128875 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004893964110929853 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 8.95 | | std | 6.67 | | cv | 0.745 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 41.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.275 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the path split." | | 1 | "Then, the cave opened up." | | 2 | "Then she stepped forward and" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "they murmured, voice barely louder" | | 2 | "She didn’t leave footprints in" | | 3 | "she said, turning her lavender" | | 4 | "She was already moving deeper" | | 5 | "It came from the trees." |
| | ratio | 0.107 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air here smelled different—thick" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "they murmured, voice barely louder" | | 5 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 6 | "Isolde stepped between the standing" | | 7 | "She didn’t leave footprints in" | | 8 | "she said, turning her lavender" | | 9 | "The moment they crossed the" | | 10 | "The trees ahead weren’t just" | | 11 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 12 | "Nyx stretched their arms, their" | | 13 | "Isolde didn’t answer." | | 14 | "She was already moving deeper" | | 15 | "Rory followed, her boots sinking" | | 16 | "The further they walked, the" | | 17 | "Fireflies—or something like them—drifted between" | | 18 | "A sound cut through the" | | 19 | "A whisper, but not from" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.44% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees ahead weren’t just trees—they were too tall, their bark too smooth, their leaves shimmering with an iridescence that hurt to look at directly." | | 1 | "The further they walked, the more the light shifted—golden one moment, then silver, then a deep, bruised purple, as if the sky itself couldn’t decide what color…" | | 2 | "The pool’s surface shattered, the black water retreating into the stone as if sucked away." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, voice barely louder than the rustle of leaves" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.087 | | leniency | 0.174 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |