Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPS1BGYF01RXQBN25ZXYH5

Run Details

Duration:
30.8s
Cost:
$0.002714
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped back with a sound like a knife being drawn. Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening around the edge of the door. The chain rattled, the last barrier between her and the hallway’s dim light. Lucien stood there, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, the other adjusting the cuff of his charcoal suit. His amber eye caught the light from the stairwell, sharp as a blade. The black one swallowed it whole. "You’re not Eva." Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. "No. She’s at work." A beat. The scent of bergamot and something darker, like burnt sugar, curled into the flat. Ptolemy wound between Lucien’s ankles, tail flicking, but the cat’s usual hiss was absent. Traitor. Lucien’s gaze flicked past her, taking in the clutter of scrolls on the coffee table, the half-empty mug of cold tea, the way Rory’s hoodie swallowed her frame. "I see." She didn’t step aside. "What do you want?" His mouth quirked, not quite a smile. "Straight to the point. I forgot how much I missed that." The cane tapped against the floorboards. "May I come in?" "No." The word hung between them, brittle. Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound too controlled to be a sigh. "Rory. It’s important." "Everything’s important with you." She crossed her arms, the crescent scar on her wrist pressing against her sleeve. "That’s the problem." His jaw tightened. The platinum of his hair gleamed under the bare bulb, making him look like something carved from ice. "I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t." Ptolemy meowed, loud and insistent, and butted his head against Lucien’s shin. The cat had never liked anyone this much. Rory’s stomach twisted. She stepped back. Lucien moved past her, the fabric of his coat brushing her arm. The flat shrank around him, the low ceiling, the stacks of books, the scent of old paper and curry spices from downstairs. He turned, cane resting against the back of the sofa, and watched her shut the door. The three deadbolts clicked into place, one after the other. "You always did lock up like you were expecting an invasion." Rory leaned against the door. "Habit." Silence. The kind that had always been too easy between them, before. Before the lies, before the way he’d looked at her like she was something fragile, something to be handled with care. Before she’d walked away. Lucien’s fingers drummed against the cane’s handle. "I need your help." She laughed. It came out sharp, ugly. "Of course you do." His eyes narrowed. "This isn’t a game." "Neither was the last time." The words slipped out before she could stop them. The air between them thickened, charged. Lucien’s throat worked. "That’s not—" "Not what?" Rory pushed off the door, stepping closer. The heat of him radiated through the space between them, familiar and unwelcome. "Not fair? Not the time? You don’t get to decide when we talk about it, Lucien." His gaze dropped to her mouth. Just for a second. Then he turned away, moving to the window, parting the curtains with one finger. The street below was slick with rain, neon signs bleeding into the pavement. "I’m not here to rehash the past." "Then why are you here?" He didn’t answer. The muscles in his back shifted under the tailored fabric of his suit. Rory knew that tension, the way he held himself when he was choosing his words like bullets. She exhaled. "You’re really not going to make this easy, are you?" Lucien turned, the amber of his eye catching the light again. "When have I ever?" The truth of that settled in her chest, heavy. She crossed to the kitchenette, yanked open the fridge. The clink of bottles filled the silence. "Drink?" "Please." She pulled out two beers, popped the caps, and handed him one. Their fingers brushed. A spark, a memory, the way his skin had always been too warm. She pulled back too fast, nearly sloshing the beer over her hand. Lucien took a sip, watching her over the rim of the bottle. "You look tired." Rory leaned against the counter. "And you look like you haven’t slept in a week." A ghost of a smile. "Touché." She took a long pull of beer, the bitterness grounding her. "Talk, Lucien. Or leave." He set the bottle down on the coffee table, the glass chiming against the wood. "There’s a job. High risk. High reward." "Of course there is." "It involves the Avaros Court." Rory’s grip tightened on the bottle. "Your father’s people." Lucien’s expression didn’t change, but his knuckles whitened around the cane. "Yes." She should say no. She should tell him to walk out that door and not come back. But the Avaros Court meant demons, meant power, meant things that could burn the world down if they got loose. And Lucien knew that. He knew her. Rory set her beer down. "What’s the job?" Lucien’s shoulders relaxed, just a fraction. "There’s an artifact. A key. It’s being moved through London in two days. I need someone to help me intercept it before it reaches its buyer." "Who’s the buyer?" "A collector. Human, but connected. Dangerous." She studied him. The way his suit fit him like a second skin, the way his hair never had a single strand out of place. The way his eyes tracked her, always watching, always calculating. "Why me?" Lucien’s gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist. "Because you’re the only one who can get close enough without being noticed." Rory laughed, short and humorless. "That’s rich, coming from you." His mouth twisted. "I’m serious." "So am I." She stepped closer, close enough to see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his pupils dilated. "You could’ve asked anyone. Why me?" Lucien didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. "Because I trust you." The words hit her like a punch. She turned away, pressing her palms against the counter. The cool surface steadied her. "You have a funny way of showing it." Behind her, the floorboards creaked. Lucien’s voice was low, rough. "I know." She should tell him to go. She should walk away. But the Avaros Court wasn’t something she could ignore. Not if people were going to get hurt. Rory turned. Lucien stood there, cane in hand, the picture of control. But his eyes betrayed him. The black one was too wide, the amber too bright. She exhaled. "Tell me about the key."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.102
leniency0.204
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicked"
2"stomach"
3"silence"
4"charged"
5"familiar"
6"tension"
7"calculating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1077
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount828
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien17
Rory12
Avaros2
Court2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Court"
places(empty)
globalScore0.473
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1077
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"knew that tension"
1"out that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean18.89
std13.64
cv0.722
sampleLengths
036
141
23
310
431
530
68
728
81
922
1021
1128
1223
133
1460
1511
166
1737
1811
1911
207
2120
225
2338
2444
255
2633
2712
2815
2926
301
3140
3215
3315
346
3515
3622
374
385
399
4012
4144
428
4332
443
456
4637
4722
4810
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was choosing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences139
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount829
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.031363088057901084
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0024125452352231603
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean7.75
std5.75
cv0.742
sampleLengths
012
111
213
322
413
56
63
76
84
92
1014
1114
121
1328
142
154
164
177
1817
194
201
216
2213
233
2418
253
263
2718
287
2912
308
313
323
3312
3422
3516
3610
3711
385
391
401
4111
4221
434
447
454
462
475
484
493
51.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3237410071942446
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners45
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just for a second."
1"Then he turned away, moving"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences87
matches
0"His amber eye caught the"
1"She didn’t step aside."
2"His mouth quirked, not quite"
3"She crossed her arms, the"
4"His jaw tightened."
5"She stepped back."
6"He turned, cane resting against"
7"It came out sharp, ugly."
8"His eyes narrowed."
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"He didn’t answer."
11"She crossed to the kitchenette,"
12"She pulled out two beers,"
13"Their fingers brushed."
14"She pulled back too fast,"
15"She took a long pull"
16"He set the bottle down"
17"She should say no."
18"She should tell him to"
19"He knew her."
ratio0.299
17.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences87
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped back with"
1"Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening"
2"The chain rattled, the last"
3"Lucien stood there, one hand"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"The black one swallowed it"
6"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
7"The scent of bergamot and"
8"Ptolemy wound between Lucien’s ankles,"
9"Lucien’s gaze flicked past her,"
10"She didn’t step aside."
11"His mouth quirked, not quite"
12"The cane tapped against the"
13"The word hung between them,"
14"Lucien exhaled through his nose,"
15"She crossed her arms, the"
16"His jaw tightened."
17"The platinum of his hair"
18"Ptolemy meowed, loud and insistent,"
19"The cat had never liked"
ratio0.885
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before the lies, before the"
1"Before she’d walked away."
ratio0.023
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.3834%