| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His lips quirked just [just]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 94.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 908 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 908 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "tracing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 900 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "for" | | 1 | "Rory, if you’re reading this, I’m already gone. Don’t trust the usual channels. Lucien knows the way in. Find me before they do." | | 2 | "am" | | 3 | "Find me before they do." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.07% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 692 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Rory | 13 | | Lucien | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.561 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like danger and dark promises" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 900 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 16.36 | | std | 14.65 | | cv | 0.895 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 51 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 10.58% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "Something dark and expensive—bergamot, leather, a hint of smoke." | | 1 | "“Rory,” he said, and the way her name rolled off his tongue—like a secret, like a sin—made her stomach tighten." | | 2 | "Eva’s flat was exactly as she’d left it—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the faint scent of old paper and candle wax." | | 3 | "The way he said it—careful, measured—made her stomach drop." | | 4 | "But Eva’s note burned in her hand, the ink smudged as if written in haste—or fear." |
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| 90.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 700 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.05142857142857143 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004285714285714286 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 8.33 | | std | 5.91 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 56.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.37962962962962965 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she stepped back." | | 1 | "Then, with a flick of" | | 2 | "Instead, she said," |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 66.58% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 1 | "He didn’t smile." | | 2 | "He didn’t have to." | | 3 | "he said, and the way" | | 4 | "She didn’t move." | | 5 | "His gaze flicked past her," | | 6 | "His lips quirked, just slightly" | | 7 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 8 | "She should slam the door." | | 9 | "She should walk away." | | 10 | "He turned to her, slow," | | 11 | "He set the cane against" | | 12 | "He was wound tighter than" | | 13 | "she said, crossing her arms" | | 14 | "He reached into his breast" | | 15 | "She looked up, her vision" | | 16 | "His voice was low, rough" | | 17 | "She wanted to scream." | | 18 | "She wanted to hit him." | | 19 | "She wanted to press her" |
| | ratio | 0.384 | |
| 14.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolt clicked like a" | | 1 | "Rory stood in the doorway," | | 2 | "The scent of curry from" | | 3 | "Something dark and expensive—bergamot, leather," | | 4 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 5 | "The ivory-handled cane rested against" | | 6 | "He didn’t smile." | | 7 | "He didn’t have to." | | 8 | "he said, and the way" | | 9 | "She didn’t move." | | 10 | "His gaze flicked past her," | | 11 | "A beat of silence." | | 12 | "The cane tapped again." | | 13 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 14 | "His lips quirked, just slightly" | | 15 | "The quirk vanished." | | 16 | "Lucien’s expression didn’t change, but" | | 17 | "The hallway felt too small," | | 18 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, wound" | | 19 | "Her pulse hammered in her" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The door clicked shut behind him, the three deadbolts sliding home with a finality that made her chest ache." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.119 | | leniency | 0.238 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |