Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPT7JSNVF3FPP3HNBE22A0

Run Details

Duration:
30.2s
Cost:
$0.002853
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped back with a sound like a knife being drawn. Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening around the edge of the door. The chain rattled, the last barrier between her and the hallway’s dim light. Lucien stood there, one hand resting on the frame, the other gripping his ivory-handled cane. His amber eye caught the glow from the curry house sign below, sharp as a blade’s edge. The black one swallowed the light whole. "You’re not Eva." Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. "No. She’s at work." A beat. The scent of spices curled between them—cumin, cardamom, something smoky. Ptolemy wound around Lucien’s ankles, tail flicking, but the cat’s usual purr was absent. Lucien’s mouth quirked. "Then I suppose you’ll have to do." She should’ve slammed the door. Should’ve told him to leave. But the words stuck, and instead she stepped back, letting him inside. The flat was a mess of scrolls and half-empty teacups, the air thick with the weight of Eva’s research. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floorboards as he moved, his tailored suit a stark contrast to the clutter. He stopped in front of the bookshelf, running a finger along the spines. "You always did have a habit of turning up where you weren’t wanted." Rory crossed her arms. "Funny. I was about to say the same." His laugh was low, rough. "Touché." She watched him, the way his shoulders filled the space, the way his heterochromatic eyes tracked her like she was prey. Or maybe that was just her pulse jumping again. "You look different," he said. "Three years’ll do that." "Three years, two months, and—" He checked his watch. "Sixteen days." Her stomach twisted. "You kept count?" "Didn’t you?" The question hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Rory turned away, busying herself with straightening a stack of papers that didn’t need straightening. "What do you want, Lucien?" His cane tapped once, twice. "I need a favor." "Of course you do." "Rory—" "No." She spun back around. "You don’t get to show up after all this time and ask for favors. Not after the way you left." His jaw tightened. "You know why I had to go." "Do I?" Her voice cracked. "Because from where I stood, it looked like you just walked away." Ptolemy leapt onto the couch, tail lashing. Lucien’s fingers flexed around his cane. "You think I wanted to leave?" "I think you did." The words hung there, sharp and final. For a moment, neither of them moved. Then Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar above his eyebrow, the way his breath hitched when she didn’t back away. "You’re wrong," he said softly. Her throat went dry. "Then why?" "Because I had no choice." "Everyone has a choice." "Not when the alternative was watching you get hurt because of me." The air left her lungs. "That’s not—" "It is." His voice was rough. "You think I didn’t see the way they looked at you? The way they *still* look at you? You’re human, Rory. Fragile. And I—" He cut himself off, jaw clenching. She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him he was wrong, that she wasn’t some damsel in need of saving. But the words died on her lips because she *had* been hurt. Because of him. Because of what he was. Lucien exhaled, long and slow. "I didn’t come here to fight." "Then why *did* you come?" His gaze dropped to her wrist, to the crescent-shaped scar peeking out from under her sleeve. "Because I need your help." She laughed, sharp and bitter. "Of course. Because that’s all I’ve ever been to you, isn’t it? A means to an end." "That’s not fair." "Isn’t it?" She stepped closer, close enough to see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. "Tell me, Lucien. If I wasn’t useful, would you even be here?" His silence was answer enough. Rory turned away, pressing her palms to her eyes. "Get out." "Rory—" "I said *out*." The floorboards creaked as he moved toward the door. She didn’t watch him leave. Didn’t let herself breathe until the deadbolt clicked back into place. Ptolemy jumped down from the couch, rubbing against her legs. She sank onto the floor, fingers trembling. The door handle rattled. Rory’s head snapped up. Lucien stood there, one hand still on the knob, the other pressed against the wood like he was holding himself back. His black eye gleamed in the dim light. "You’re right," he said, voice rough. "I *did* come here because I needed something. But that’s not the only reason." She swallowed. "Then what is?" His gaze burned into hers. "Because I missed you." The words hit her like a punch to the chest. She opened her mouth, but nothing came out. Lucien stepped inside, letting the door swing shut behind him. "I tried to stay away. Tried to tell myself it was better this way. But I—" He cut himself off, jaw tightening. "I can’t do it anymore." Rory’s heart hammered. "Lucien—" "I know I don’t deserve another chance." His voice was low, raw. "But I’m asking for one anyway." She should’ve told him no. Should’ve walked away. But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing in the world that mattered—made her chest ache. Ptolemy meowed, breaking the spell. Rory exhaled, long and shaky. "You’re an idiot." Lucien’s mouth quirked. "I’ve been called worse." She stepped closer, close enough to see the way his breath hitched when she reached out, her fingers brushing the back of his hand. "You hurt me." "I know." "And you left." "I know." She swallowed. "If you do it again—" "I won’t." The words hung between them, heavy with promise. Rory’s fingers curled around his, pulling him closer. "You’d better not." Lucien’s free hand cupped her face, his thumb brushing her cheekbone. "I won’t," he repeated, softer this time. And then he kissed her. It wasn’t gentle. It wasn’t sweet. It was desperate, hungry, like he’d been starving for three years and she was the only thing that could sate him. Rory kissed him back just as fiercely, her hands fisting in his lapels, pulling him closer. When they finally broke apart, Lucien rested his forehead against hers, breath ragged. "I should’ve come back sooner." Rory’s laugh was shaky. "Yeah. You should have." His thumb traced the scar on her wrist. "I’m sorry." She leaned into his touch. "Me too." Ptolemy meowed again, tail flicking as he wound between their legs. Lucien chuckled, low and rough, and Rory’s heart stuttered. Maybe some things were worth the wait.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:21:14.723Z" 2/20/2026, 2:21:14 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She spun back [back]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.313
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.063
95.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1113
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1113
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"clenching"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"stark"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"clenching"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences93
matches
0"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1108
ratio0.005
matches
0"still"
1"had"
2"did"
3"out"
4"did"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount778
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Eva1
Ptolemy5
Rory12
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.665
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1108
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean14.39
std12.04
cv0.837
sampleLengths
036
139
23
310
426
510
622
750
813
912
106
1130
125
134
1411
156
162
1731
189
194
201
2125
2210
2317
2419
254
2640
275
286
295
304
3112
327
3336
3440
3511
365
3721
3822
393
4029
415
4211
431
443
4525
4617
474
484
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was holding"
1"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences145
ratio0.014
matches
0"The scent of spices curled between them—cumin, cardamom, something smoky."
1"But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing in the world that mattered—made her chest ache."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount783
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.037037037037037035
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006385696040868455
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean7.64
std5.75
cv0.753
sampleLengths
012
111
213
315
417
57
63
76
84
92
1010
1114
123
137
145
155
1612
1719
1818
1913
2013
214
228
235
241
2521
269
275
284
299
302
313
323
332
3411
3515
365
375
384
394
401
415
4220
433
447
455
4612
477
486
496
46.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.27586206896551724
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners40
74.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then Lucien stepped closer, close"
1"Maybe some things were worth"
ratio0.022
58.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences89
matches
0"His amber eye caught the"
1"She should’ve slammed the door."
2"He stopped in front of"
3"His laugh was low, rough."
4"She watched him, the way"
5"He checked his watch"
6"Her stomach twisted."
7"His cane tapped once, twice."
8"She spun back around"
9"His jaw tightened."
10"Her voice cracked"
11"he said softly"
12"Her throat went dry."
13"His voice was rough"
14"He cut himself off, jaw"
15"She wanted to argue."
16"His gaze dropped to her"
17"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
18"She stepped closer, close enough"
19"His silence was answer enough."
ratio0.404
44.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences89
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped back with"
1"Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening"
2"The chain rattled, the last"
3"Lucien stood there, one hand"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"The black one swallowed the"
6"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
7"The scent of spices curled"
8"Ptolemy wound around Lucien’s ankles,"
9"Lucien’s mouth quirked."
10"She should’ve slammed the door."
11"The flat was a mess"
12"Lucien’s cane tapped against the"
13"He stopped in front of"
14"Rory crossed her arms."
15"His laugh was low, rough."
16"She watched him, the way"
17"He checked his watch"
18"Her stomach twisted."
19"The question hung between them,"
ratio0.831
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Because of him."
1"Because of what he was."
ratio0.022
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory turned away, busying herself with straightening a stack of papers that didn’t need straightening."
1"It was desperate, hungry, like he’d been starving for three years and she was the only thing that could sate him."
2"Rory kissed him back just as fiercely, her hands fisting in his lapels, pulling him closer."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He cut, jaw clenching"
1"he said, voice rough"
2"He cut, jaw tightening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.031
87.0798%