| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1674 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1674 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "tapestry" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "unreadable" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 41 | | markdownWords | 248 | | totalWords | 1649 | | ratio | 0.15 | | matches | | 0 | "gift" | | 1 | "\"This place does not like us.\"" | | 2 | "\"It is.\"" | | 3 | "\"Older than the stones. Older than the Fae who carved them.\"" | | 4 | "\"Hurry, little moths. The grove does not wait for the hesitant.\"" | | 5 | "could" | | 6 | "thickened" | | 7 | "see" | | 8 | "lush" | | 9 | "light" | | 10 | "was" | | 11 | "\"This place is not entirely of your world,\"" | | 12 | "\"Nor theirs. It is the space between, where the Veil is thin as spider’s silk.\"" | | 13 | "\"Or the Fae Courts. Or nowhere at all.\"" | | 14 | "\"The in-between is hungry.\"" | | 15 | "\"You feel it, don’t you? The weight of the unseen.\"" | | 16 | "\"The grove offers gifts to those who listen.\"" | | 17 | "\"Clever girl.\"" | | 18 | "\"The catch is that the grove does not give without taking. A memory. A breath. A name.\"" | | 19 | "\"Come. There is something you must see.\"" | | 20 | "shift" | | 21 | "Singing" | | 22 | "\"Do not.\"" | | 23 | "\"Fae song is not for mortal ears.\"" | | 24 | "\"A trap,\"" | | 25 | "\"Or a test. The Fae do not distinguish between the two.\"" | | 26 | "anything" | | 27 | "that" | | 28 | "\"A warning. Or an invitation.\"" | | 29 | "her" | | 30 | "\"The Veil weakens. The solstice approaches, and with it, the hunger of those who wait beyond.\"" | | 31 | "\"You have been marked, Aurora Carter. The pendant. The blade. The scar on your wrist that was not always yours.\"" | | 32 | "\"You are a key. And keys are meant to turn locks.\"" | | 33 | "\"Not yet. But you will.\"" | | 34 | "wild" | | 35 | "\"We are not alone.\"" | | 36 | "watching" | | 37 | "\"Run, little moth. The grove has shown you what it will. Now you must choose: stay and be consumed, or flee and carry the fire with you.\"" | | 38 | "\"We should not have gone,\"" | | 39 | "\"Some doors should not be opened.\"" | | 40 | "You are a key." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1378 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Fae | 6 | | Nyx | 11 | | Ahead | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 21 | | Resting | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.738 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 33.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite pain, not quite pleasure—more like the prickle of a half-remembered dream" | | 1 | "not quite pleasure—more like the prickle of a half-remembered dream" | | 2 | "quite grasp" | | 3 | "not quite a smile" | | 4 | "as if beckoning" |
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| 78.71% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.213 | | wordCount | 1649 | | matches | | 0 | "neither day nor" | | 1 | "not her reflection, but a swirl of images: a flash of fire, a scream frozen in time" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 32.98 | | std | 29.19 | | cv | 0.885 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 105 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 101 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 96 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 69 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 89 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 79 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 55 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 47 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 94.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "being made" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 222 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was tilting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 23 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.128 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of damp earth and green things gave way to something richer—wild honey and crushed herbs, the faint metallic tang of ozone." | | 1 | "One moment they were a ripple of darkness clinging to the trunk of an ancient oak, the next a solid figure—tall, limned in the faintest violet glow of their eyes." | | 2 | "Ahead, the standing stones loomed—gnarled oaks petrified into jagged monoliths, their bark blackened as if scorched by some long-ago fire." | | 3 | "A shudder ran up her arm, not quite pain, not quite pleasure—more like the prickle of a half-remembered dream." | | 4 | "Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx—if a being made of shadow *could* exchange glances—and stepped forward." | | 5 | "Her skin tingled, the fine hairs on her arms rising as the Veil—thin here, almost translucent—brushed against her." | | 6 | "The trees here were impossibly tall, their trunks wide as houses, bark etched with symbols that writhed when she tried to focus on them—like words in a language her mind couldn’t quite grasp." | | 7 | "The sky—if it *was* a sky—was a swirling tapestry of twilight hues, neither day nor night but something in between." | | 8 | "Stars flickered, but they weren’t stars; they were too close, too bright, shifting like fireflies trapped in amber." | | 9 | "*\"Clever girl.\"* She closed her fingers, and the flower was gone—vanished, or perhaps never there at all." | | 10 | "Rory’s boots made no sound on the ground—no crunch of leaves, no snap of twigs." | | 11 | "No—not music." | | 12 | "Nyx’s hand—cool and insubstantial—closed around her wrist." | | 13 | "A sky the color of storm clouds, a city of spires and bridges that defied physics, and—" | | 14 | "The liquid parted like silk, revealing not her reflection, but a swirl of images: a flash of fire, a scream frozen in time, a pair of hands—*her* hands—clutching a dagger slick with blood." | | 15 | "She could feel it—the press of unseen eyes, the weight of something *watching*." | | 16 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, the way out—a tear in the world, a wound that bled golden light." | | 17 | "She burst through the Veil—" | | 18 | "—and collapsed onto damp earth, gasping." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1402 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.033523537803138374 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003566333808844508 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 11.14 | | std | 7.67 | | cv | 0.689 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 48.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.31756756756756754 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she was through." | | 1 | "Only Nyx’s passage marked the" | | 2 | "Then the water rippled, and" | | 3 | "Then the water stilled." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She flexed her fingers around" | | 1 | "Their voice, when they spoke," | | 2 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 3 | "Her skin tingled, the fine" | | 4 | "She could *see* it, if" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes reflected the" | | 6 | "She extended a hand, palm" | | 7 | "She closed her fingers, and" | | 8 | "She turned, her silver hair" | | 9 | "She glanced down." | | 10 | "It raised the hairs on" | | 11 | "She found herself moving toward" | | 12 | "Their voice was sharp, urgent" | | 13 | "She shook her head, suddenly" | | 14 | "She stood before a pool" | | 15 | "It wasn’t *anything* Rory recognized." | | 16 | "Her breath caught." | | 17 | "They stood at the edge" | | 18 | "She knelt, trailing her fingers" | | 19 | "She looked at Rory, her" |
| | ratio | 0.265 | |
| 26.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before the" | | 1 | "Rory exhaled, her breath curling" | | 2 | "The scent of damp earth" | | 3 | "She flexed her fingers around" | | 4 | "The dagger had been a" | | 5 | "Their voice, when they spoke," | | 6 | "Rory shot them a look." | | 7 | "Nyx’s form wavered at the" | | 8 | "Moss grew in the crevices," | | 9 | "Rory reached out, hesitated, then" | | 10 | "A shudder ran up her" | | 11 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 12 | "Isolde had already passed between" | | 13 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 14 | "The half-Fae didn’t look back," | | 15 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 16 | "The world folded." | | 17 | "The next, the air *thickened*," | | 18 | "Her skin tingled, the fine" | | 19 | "She could *see* it, if" |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 44.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "—and collapsed onto damp earth," |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 56.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The dagger had been a gift, though *gift* felt too small a word for something that hummed against her hip like a living thing, its weight both foreign and famil…" | | 1 | "Ahead, the standing stones loomed—gnarled oaks petrified into jagged monoliths, their bark blackened as if scorched by some long-ago fire." | | 2 | "She moved without sound, her silver hair catching the strange, golden light that filtered through the canopy above." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, blooming in impossible colors: blues so deep they bordered on black, reds like fresh-spilled blood, whites that hurt to look at…" | | 4 | "Rory tilted her head back, dizzy for a moment, as if the grove itself was tilting beneath her." | | 5 | "They stood at the edge of the pool’s reflection, one hand outstretched, as if beckoning." | | 6 | "The trees blurred past her, their whispers rising into a chorus of voices, some pleading, some laughing, some screaming." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s form wavered, shadows peeling away like silk in a breeze" | | 1 | "She closed, and the flower was gone—vanished, or perhaps never there at all" | | 2 | "She turned, her silver hair swaying like a river of liquid metal" | | 3 | "She looked, her pale eyes knowing" |
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| 89.39% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |