Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPVDS54JNPDHZ77Q5KEFHH

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Duration:
24.3s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm light that spilled onto the dimly lit staircase. Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes wide with surprise, stood in the doorway of her flat, her straight black hair slightly disheveled, as if she'd been running her fingers through it in frustration. She blinked, her gaze traveling up and down the figure standing before her, taking in the tailored charcoal suit, the slicked-back platinum blond hair, and the ivory-handled cane that she knew concealed a thin blade. "Lucien," she breathed, her voice barely above a whisper. She swallowed hard, her fingers tightening around the edge of the door. "What are you doing here?" Lucien Moreau offered her a small, enigmatic smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—searching her face. "Aurora," he greeted, his voice smooth and rich, like aged whiskey. "Or should I call you Rory? I believe that's what your friends call you." Rory's eyes narrowed slightly at the mention of her nickname, a gesture that didn't escape Lucien's notice. She stepped back, allowing him to enter, and he brushed past her, the scent of his cologne—a mix of sandalwood and something darker, more exotic—lingering in the air. The flat was small, cramped, every surface covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, regarded Lucien with wary yellow eyes from his perch on the back of the couch. Lucien glanced around, taking in the clutter, the three deadbolts on the front door, the faint scent of curry wafting up from the restaurant below. "This is where you've been hiding, then," he remarked, turning back to face her. Rory closed the door, her back pressed against it as if bracing herself. "I'm not hiding," she said, her voice steadier now. "I'm living. There's a difference." Lucien raised an eyebrow, his gaze flicking to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of the past they shared. "Is there?" he asked softly. "Because from where I'm standing, it looks like you're hiding from the world, Rory. From everything that happened." Rory pushed off the door, her eyes flashing with a familiar fire. "I'm not hiding," she repeated, crossing her arms over her chest. "I'm trying to move on, Lucien. To forget." Lucien sighed, running a hand through his hair, ruffling the perfect slicked-back style. "I know," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I know you are. And I know I'm the last person you want to see right now. But I need your help, Rory. I wouldn't be here if I didn't." Rory studied him, her eyes searching his face for any sign of deceit. She knew Lucien was many things—a fixer, an information broker, a half-demon with a complicated past. But she also knew he was not a liar. Not to her. She sighed, her shoulders slumping slightly. "Come in, then," she said, stepping aside to let him pass. "But I can't promise I'll be able to help you. I'm not the person I used to be, Lucien. I'm not the person you knew." Lucien nodded, his expression serious. "I understand," he said, stepping further into the flat. "But I hope, perhaps, that you might still be the person I... cared for. The person I still care for." Rory's breath caught in her throat, her eyes widening slightly at his words. She looked away, busying herself with making tea, her hands shaking slightly as she poured the hot water into the cups. She could feel Lucien's gaze on her, heavy and intense, and she knew he was waiting for her response. "I don't know what to say," she admitted finally, her voice barely above a whisper. "I don't know what to feel, Lucien. You know what happened between us. You know what he did to me." Lucien's expression darkened, his eyes flashing with a familiar anger. "I know," he said, his voice low and dangerous. "And I swear to you, Rory, if I ever get my hands on that bastard, I'll make him pay for what he did to you. For what he put you through." Rory looked up at him, her eyes searching his face. She saw the truth in his words, the sincerity in his gaze, and she felt something inside her shift, something she thought she had lost forever. "Thank you," she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper. "But I don't need you to fight my battles for me, Lucien. I need you to be here, to be present, to be the person I can lean on when I need to. I need you to be my friend." Lucien reached out, his hand cupping her cheek, his thumb brushing away a stray tear. "I'm here, Rory," he said softly. "I'm here, and I'm not going anywhere. I promise." Rory leaned into his touch, her eyes closing briefly as she savored the warmth of his hand on her skin. She knew that this was just the beginning, that there were still so many things left unsaid between them. But she also knew that she was ready to face them, ready to face him, and ready to face the future, whatever it might bring. She opened her eyes, her gaze meeting his, and she saw in his heterochromatic eyes a reflection of her own feelings, her own fears, and her own hopes. She took a deep breath, her hand covering his, and she smiled, a small, tentative smile that held the promise of something more. "Okay," she said softly. "Okay, Lucien. Let's do this. Let's face whatever it is that's coming, together." Lucien smiled back at her, his eyes warm and tender, and he leaned in, his forehead resting against hers. "Together," he agreed, his voice barely above a whisper. "Always together, Rory. No matter what." And in that moment, surrounded by the clutter of her flat, the scent of curry wafting up from the restaurant below, and the warm, comforting presence of her friend, Rory felt a sense of peace wash over her, a sense of belonging, and a sense of hope for the future. She knew that the road ahead would not be easy, that there would be challenges and obstacles to overcome. But she also knew that she was not alone, that she had someone by her side who cared for her, who supported her, and who would stand with her, no matter what. And for now, that was enough.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:21:53.84Z" 2/20/2026, 2:21:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he asked softly [softly]"
1"she admitted finally [finally]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
3"he said softly [softly]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
35.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count5
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count5
2
adverb"softly"
count4
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"whisper"
count5
1
word"enigmatic"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count3
highlights
0"whisper"
1"enigmatic"
2"eyebrow"
3"reminder"
4"familiar"
5"perfect"
6"could feel"
7"warmth"
8"comforting"
9"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
60.90% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences52
matches
0"e with surprise"
1"t in frustration"
2"a sense of belonging"
3"a sense of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1070
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount787
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Rory8
Lucien12
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.738
windowScore0.667
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if bracing herself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1070
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences66
matches
0"knew that this"
1"knew that she"
2"knew that the"
3"knew that she"
90.02% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean44.58
std20.73
cv0.465
sampleLengths
085
126
241
378
439
527
645
731
853
941
1042
1134
1253
1335
1450
1536
1651
1730
1864
1951
2017
2134
22101
236
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was waiting"
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences66
ratio0.045
matches
0"Lucien Moreau offered her a small, enigmatic smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—searching her face."
1"She stepped back, allowing him to enter, and he brushed past her, the scent of his cologne—a mix of sandalwood and something darker, more exotic—lingering in the air."
2"She knew Lucien was many things—a fixer, an information broker, a half-demon with a complicated past."
93.27% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount797
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04642409033877039
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.02132998745294856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean16.21
std9.37
cv0.578
sampleLengths
017
133
235
39
412
55
616
711
814
917
1028
1114
1219
1325
1414
1513
169
175
1822
195
2018
2112
2211
238
2413
2510
2630
2713
2816
299
303
316
3211
3325
345
359
3620
3713
3821
3919
4015
4120
4210
439
4431
4510
4626
4711
4840
4915
38.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.30303030303030304
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences52
matches
0"She blinked, her gaze traveling"
1"she breathed, her voice barely"
2"She swallowed hard, her fingers"
3"he greeted, his voice smooth"
4"She stepped back, allowing him"
5"he remarked, turning back to"
6"she said, her voice steadier"
7"he asked softly"
8"she repeated, crossing her arms"
9"he said, his voice barely"
10"She knew Lucien was many"
11"She sighed, her shoulders slumping"
12"she said, stepping aside to"
13"he said, stepping further into"
14"She looked away, busying herself"
15"She could feel Lucien's gaze"
16"she admitted finally, her voice"
17"he said, his voice low"
18"She saw the truth in"
19"she said softly, her voice"
ratio0.519
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences52
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora Carter, her bright blue"
2"She blinked, her gaze traveling"
3"she breathed, her voice barely"
4"She swallowed hard, her fingers"
5"Lucien Moreau offered her a"
6"he greeted, his voice smooth"
7"Rory's eyes narrowed slightly at"
8"She stepped back, allowing him"
9"The flat was small, cramped,"
10"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, regarded"
11"Lucien glanced around, taking in"
12"he remarked, turning back to"
13"Rory closed the door, her"
14"she said, her voice steadier"
15"Lucien raised an eyebrow, his"
16"he asked softly"
17"Rory pushed off the door,"
18"she repeated, crossing her arms"
19"Lucien sighed, running a hand"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm light that spilled onto the dimly lit staircase."
1"Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes wide with surprise, stood in the doorway of her flat, her straight black hair slightly disheveled, as if she'd been running …"
2"She blinked, her gaze traveling up and down the figure standing before her, taking in the tailored charcoal suit, the slicked-back platinum blond hair, and the …"
3"Rory's eyes narrowed slightly at the mention of her nickname, a gesture that didn't escape Lucien's notice."
4"Rory closed the door, her back pressed against it as if bracing herself."
5"Lucien sighed, running a hand through his hair, ruffling the perfect slicked-back style."
6"She looked away, busying herself with making tea, her hands shaking slightly as she poured the hot water into the cups."
7"Lucien reached out, his hand cupping her cheek, his thumb brushing away a stray tear."
8"She took a deep breath, her hand covering his, and she smiled, a small, tentative smile that held the promise of something more."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she breathed, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"he greeted, his voice smooth and rich, like aged whiskey"
2"she said, her voice steadier now"
3"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
4"she admitted finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"he said, his voice low and dangerous"
6"she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"he agreed, his voice barely above a whisper"
12.07% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she admitted finally (admit)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.276
58.5861%