| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he asked softly [softly]" | | 1 | "she admitted finally [finally]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 3 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 4 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 35.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 14 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 5 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "enigmatic" | | 2 | "eyebrow" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 60.90% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "e with surprise" | | 1 | "t in frustration" | | 2 | "a sense of belonging" | | 3 | "a sense of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1070 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 787 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Lucien | 12 | | Ptolemy | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.738 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 96.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1070 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that this" | | 1 | "knew that she" | | 2 | "knew that the" | | 3 | "knew that she" |
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| 90.02% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 44.58 | | std | 20.73 | | cv | 0.465 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 101 | | 23 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 12.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau offered her a small, enigmatic smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—searching her face." | | 1 | "She stepped back, allowing him to enter, and he brushed past her, the scent of his cologne—a mix of sandalwood and something darker, more exotic—lingering in the air." | | 2 | "She knew Lucien was many things—a fixer, an information broker, a half-demon with a complicated past." |
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| 93.27% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 797 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04642409033877039 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02132998745294856 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 66 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 66 | | mean | 16.21 | | std | 9.37 | | cv | 0.578 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 40 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 38.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.30303030303030304 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.31% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, her gaze traveling" | | 1 | "she breathed, her voice barely" | | 2 | "She swallowed hard, her fingers" | | 3 | "he greeted, his voice smooth" | | 4 | "She stepped back, allowing him" | | 5 | "he remarked, turning back to" | | 6 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 7 | "he asked softly" | | 8 | "she repeated, crossing her arms" | | 9 | "he said, his voice barely" | | 10 | "She knew Lucien was many" | | 11 | "She sighed, her shoulders slumping" | | 12 | "she said, stepping aside to" | | 13 | "he said, stepping further into" | | 14 | "She looked away, busying herself" | | 15 | "She could feel Lucien's gaze" | | 16 | "she admitted finally, her voice" | | 17 | "he said, his voice low" | | 18 | "She saw the truth in" | | 19 | "she said softly, her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.519 | |
| 17.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open, revealing" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, her bright blue" | | 2 | "She blinked, her gaze traveling" | | 3 | "she breathed, her voice barely" | | 4 | "She swallowed hard, her fingers" | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau offered her a" | | 6 | "he greeted, his voice smooth" | | 7 | "Rory's eyes narrowed slightly at" | | 8 | "She stepped back, allowing him" | | 9 | "The flat was small, cramped," | | 10 | "A tabby cat, Ptolemy, regarded" | | 11 | "Lucien glanced around, taking in" | | 12 | "he remarked, turning back to" | | 13 | "Rory closed the door, her" | | 14 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 15 | "Lucien raised an eyebrow, his" | | 16 | "he asked softly" | | 17 | "Rory pushed off the door," | | 18 | "she repeated, crossing her arms" | | 19 | "Lucien sighed, running a hand" |
| | ratio | 0.885 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm light that spilled onto the dimly lit staircase." | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes wide with surprise, stood in the doorway of her flat, her straight black hair slightly disheveled, as if she'd been running …" | | 2 | "She blinked, her gaze traveling up and down the figure standing before her, taking in the tailored charcoal suit, the slicked-back platinum blond hair, and the …" | | 3 | "Rory's eyes narrowed slightly at the mention of her nickname, a gesture that didn't escape Lucien's notice." | | 4 | "Rory closed the door, her back pressed against it as if bracing herself." | | 5 | "Lucien sighed, running a hand through his hair, ruffling the perfect slicked-back style." | | 6 | "She looked away, busying herself with making tea, her hands shaking slightly as she poured the hot water into the cups." | | 7 | "Lucien reached out, his hand cupping her cheek, his thumb brushing away a stray tear." | | 8 | "She took a deep breath, her hand covering his, and she smiled, a small, tentative smile that held the promise of something more." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "he greeted, his voice smooth and rich, like aged whiskey" | | 2 | "she said, her voice steadier now" | | 3 | "he said, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "she admitted finally, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "he said, his voice low and dangerous" | | 6 | "she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 7 | "he agreed, his voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "she admitted finally (admit)" | | 3 | "he agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |