| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.351 | | leniency | 0.702 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.035 | |
| 85.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1766 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1766 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "moths to flame" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "tapestry" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "wavering" | | 12 | "cascading" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "electric" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "beacon" | | 17 | "moths to flame" | | 18 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 166 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 65 | | markdownWords | 408 | | totalWords | 1750 | | ratio | 0.233 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Veil is thin here,\"" | | 1 | "\"Can you feel it?\"" | | 2 | "\"We’re not in Richmond Park anymore, are we?\"" | | 3 | "\"Not quite,\"" | | 4 | "\"The Grove remembers those it welcomes. And it has welcomed you before.\"" | | 5 | "Welcome. Stay. Wonder." | | 6 | "\"Time moves differently here,\"" | | 7 | "\"An hour could be a minute. A day could be a year. The Grove decides.\"" | | 8 | "seeing" | | 9 | "\"Isolde’s here?\"" | | 10 | "\"She’s always here,\"" | | 11 | "\"But she won’t come to us. Not yet.\"" | | 12 | "alive" | | 13 | "\"What did you see?\"" | | 14 | "\"Memories,\"" | | 15 | "\"Not mine.\"" | | 16 | "\"The Grove shows what it wishes,\"" | | 17 | "\"Be careful what you touch.\"" | | 18 | "\"It knows this place,\"" | | 19 | "\"Or it knows what we’re here for,\"" | | 20 | "\"What the hell is that?\"" | | 21 | "\"A guardian. They won’t harm us unless we threaten the Grove.\"" | | 22 | "thing" | | 23 | "falling" | | 24 | "Aldric." | | 25 | "\"Rory?\"" | | 26 | "\"I saw—\"" | | 27 | "\"I don’t know. Something about the Veil. And you.\"" | | 28 | "\"What about me?\"" | | 29 | "\"You were human once,\"" | | 30 | "\"Aldric.\"" | | 31 | "\"Yes.\"" | | 32 | "breathe" | | 33 | "\"Little thief,\"" | | 34 | "\"You’ve returned.\"" | | 35 | "\"I’m not here to steal.\"" | | 36 | "\"Aren’t you?\"" | | 37 | "\"The Grove remembers your last visit. The way you plucked the nightshade from its roots. The way you lied to its guardians.\"" | | 38 | "\"That was different.\"" | | 39 | "\"Was it?\"" | | 40 | "\"You take what isn’t yours. You ask questions you shouldn’t. You walk the line between worlds and pretend you don’t see the cracks.\"" | | 41 | "\"I’m here because I need answers.\"" | | 42 | "\"And what makes you think I’ll give them?\"" | | 43 | "\"Because you *want" | | 44 | "\"You’re Fae. You can’t lie. And you wouldn’t have let us in if you didn’t have something to say.\"" | | 45 | "\"Clever girl.\"" | | 46 | "\"Come. The Grove is patient, but even it grows weary of mortals who linger too long.\"" | | 47 | "shifted" | | 48 | "\"The Veil weakens,\"" | | 49 | "\"Not just at the solstice. Everywhere. The rifts grow. The Helbound slip through. And something stirs beneath Dymas, something hungry.\"" | | 50 | "\"What does that have to do with me?\"" | | 51 | "\"You carry a piece of Dymas in your pocket, little thief. The Heartstone is not just a key—it is a *beacon" | | 52 | "\"You’re saying it’s calling them? The demons?\"" | | 53 | "\"I’m saying it is calling *him" | | 54 | "\"Belphegor. Prince of Gluttony. And he is not the only one who has noticed.\"" | | 55 | "\"Who else?\"" | | 56 | "\"Take it,\"" | | 57 | "\"You’ll need it before the end.\"" | | 58 | "\"It will cut through the Veil,\"" | | 59 | "\"Through flesh. Through lies. But be warned—Fae steel has a price. Every wound it inflicts is a debt. And debts must be repaid.\"" | | 60 | "\"Noted.\"" | | 61 | "\"The Grove will let you leave. For now. But remember, little thief—you are marked. By the Heartstone. By the blade. By the blood in your veins.\"" | | 62 | "\"And blood calls to blood.\"" | | 63 | "\"We should go.\"" | | 64 | "\"Aurora.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 1345 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.38 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 32 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 4 | | God | 1 | | Nyx | 13 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.31 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 15.59% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 1 | "as if responding to the Grove’s energy" | | 2 | "not quite a person" | | 3 | "skin that seemed to shift between bark and flesh" | | 4 | "as if recognizing her" |
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| 85.71% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.143 | | wordCount | 1750 | | matches | | 0 | "not from any instrument Rory could see, but from the Grove itself" | | 1 | "not the sky, but a swirling void, stars blinking in" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 28.69 | | std | 22.12 | | cv | 0.771 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 100 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 90 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 56 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 50 | | 42 | 56 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 255 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 166 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was different—thicker, sweeter, laced with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in late November." | | 1 | "It wasn’t just a circle of mushrooms or a glade of silver trees—it was a living tapestry of impossible beauty." | | 2 | "And the sounds—God, the sounds." | | 3 | "Birds—if they were birds—flitted between the branches, their wings leaving trails of starlight in their wake." | | 4 | "The ground wasn’t just soft—it was *alive*, pulsing faintly beneath her soles like a heartbeat." | | 5 | "The moment her skin made contact, images flashed behind her eyes: a woman with silver hair laughing as she danced beneath a waterfall of light; a child with pointed ears weaving flowers into a crown; a man with eyes like polished river stones, his hands stained with ink as he wrote in a book that never ended." | | 6 | "Between the trees, something moved—not an animal, not quite a person." | | 7 | "The creature—*thing*—stepped forward, its movements fluid, unnatural." | | 8 | "And then—nothing." | | 9 | "She was exactly as Rory remembered—ageless, ethereal, her silver hair cascading down her back like a river of moonlight." | | 10 | "The ripples spread outward, and the void *shifted*, revealing glimpses of other places—other worlds." | | 11 | "She held it out—a dagger, its leaf-shaped blade catching the light." | | 12 | "She gasped, clutching it as the crimson gem pulsed like a heartbeat—once, twice—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1358 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.039764359351988215 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007363770250368188 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 166 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 166 | | mean | 10.54 | | std | 7.57 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 57 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 48.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3072289156626506 | | totalSentences | 166 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 59.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the echo of a" | | 1 | "Instead, she reached into the" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 2 | "It prickled along her skin," | | 3 | "She nodded, then glanced back" | | 4 | "Their shadow stretched long and" | | 5 | "She sucked in a breath." | | 6 | "It wasn’t just a circle" | | 7 | "It vibrated in her bones," | | 8 | "Their songs were wordless, but" | | 9 | "they said, though Rory hadn’t" | | 10 | "She’d heard the warnings, of" | | 11 | "She flexed her fingers, the" | | 12 | "She crouched, pressing her palm" | | 13 | "She jerked back with a" | | 14 | "She reached into her bag" | | 15 | "It tilted its head, watching" | | 16 | "It reached out a hand," | | 17 | "She flinched, but didn’t pull" | | 18 | "She gasped, stumbling back." | | 19 | "She pressed a hand to" |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 26.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air here was different—thicker," | | 3 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 4 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 5 | "The violet glow of their" | | 6 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 7 | "It prickled along her skin," | | 8 | "She nodded, then glanced back" | | 9 | "The trees beyond the stones" | | 10 | "Nyx said, stepping forward" | | 11 | "Their shadow stretched long and" | | 12 | "Rory didn’t have time to" | | 13 | "She sucked in a breath." | | 14 | "The Fae Grove was nothing" | | 15 | "It wasn’t just a circle" | | 16 | "Flowers the size of dinner" | | 17 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 18 | "A melody hummed in the" | | 19 | "It vibrated in her bones," |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 44.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 44.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was different—thicker, sweeter, laced with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in late November." | | 1 | "She exhaled, watching her breath curl into mist that didn’t dissipate, but instead drifted upward like smoke caught in an unseen current." | | 2 | "It prickled along her skin, a static charge that made the fine hairs on her arms stand on end." | | 3 | "The trees beyond the stones were already fading, their edges blurring as if viewed through warped glass." | | 4 | "The grass beneath her boots was soft as velvet, springing back with each step as if eager to cradle her weight." | | 5 | "It vibrated in her bones, a low, resonant thrum that made her teeth ache." | | 6 | "The glow inside it pulsed brighter, as if responding to the Grove’s energy." | | 7 | "It reached out a hand, fingers elongating into vines that curled toward Rory’s wrist." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx observed, their voice tight" | | 1 | "Isolde stepped, her presence pressing against Rory’s skin like a physical weight" | | 2 | "She turned, her dress whispering against the grass" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her voice distant" |
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| 79.82% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.263 | | leniency | 0.526 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |