| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 770 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 770 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "lurched" | | 6 | "maw" | | 7 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 761 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "hates" | | 1 | "melted" | | 2 | "unfurled" | | 3 | "breathed" | | 4 | "teeth" | | 5 | "shivered" | | 6 | "hunger" | | 7 | "smell" | | 8 | "broken" | | 9 | "leaned" | | 10 | "Unsealed" | | 11 | "sweet" | | 12 | "throat" | | 13 | "he" | | 14 | "Who" | | 15 | "wants it back" | | 16 | "Chewing" | | 17 | "burning" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 606 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 6 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Fae | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Nyx | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Prince" | | 5 | "Belphegor" | | 6 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.51 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 761 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 23.78 | | std | 18.78 | | cv | 0.79 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 103 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary of Isolde’s grove wasn’t just a line—it was a breath held between worlds." | | 1 | "The ground didn’t just shift underfoot—it *melted*." | | 2 | "One moment, crunching leaves and damp earth; the next, a carpet of silver moss that gave like memory foam, warm and alive." | | 3 | "The trees here didn’t grow—they *unfurled*, their bark smooth as polished bone, branches twisting into impossible geometries." | | 4 | "A brook cut through the clearing ahead, its water black as ink but clear as glass, revealing smooth stones that weren’t stones at all—*teeth*." | | 5 | "\"Don’t.\" Nyx’s hand—if it could be called a hand—closed around her wrist." | | 6 | "Her dress—if it was fabric at all—shifted between green and gold and the deep blue of bruises, the colour bleeding at the edges." | | 7 | "Rory had read the stories—whispers of Hel’s realm of gluttony, where feasts never ended and hunger was the only guest of honour." | | 8 | "A sound slithered out—wet, rhythmic." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 615 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03739837398373984 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004878048780487805 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 9.17 | | std | 6.58 | | cv | 0.717 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 64.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.42168674698795183 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Its crimson glow pulsed, weak" | | 1 | "It didn’t ripple." | | 2 | "She yanked back." | | 3 | "Her dress—if it was fabric" | | 4 | "She inhaled, slow and deliberate" | | 5 | "She stepped aside." | | 6 | "She was too busy staring" | | 7 | "Its glow wasn’t faint anymore." | | 8 | "It was *burning*." |
| | ratio | 0.155 | |
| 28.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before they" | | 1 | "Rory exhaled, her breath curling" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "The boundary of Isolde’s grove" | | 4 | "Nyx’s form rippled, their shadowy" | | 5 | "Rory shot them a look." | | 6 | "A step forward." | | 7 | "The ground didn’t just shift" | | 8 | "The trees here didn’t grow—they" | | 9 | "Wildflowers bloomed in colours that" | | 10 | "Nyx’s voice dropped to a" | | 11 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 12 | "Its crimson glow pulsed, weak" | | 13 | "The deeper they went, the" | | 14 | "The air thickened with the" | | 15 | "Shadows stretched long and wrong," | | 16 | "A brook cut through the" | | 17 | "Molars, canines, some still strung" | | 18 | "Rory crouched, hesitating before she" | | 19 | "It didn’t ripple." |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oak surfaces etched with symbols that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 1 | "One moment, crunching leaves and damp earth; the next, a carpet of silver moss that gave like memory foam, warm and alive." | | 2 | "A brook cut through the clearing ahead, its water black as ink but clear as glass, revealing smooth stones that weren’t stones at all—*teeth*." | | 3 | "The seer’s silver hair caught the strange, diffused light, each strand moving as if submerged in slow current." | | 4 | "But the seer was already stepping back, her form dissolving into the grove’s shifting light." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |