Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPYZ21BSTEKW9REDD2FDG2

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.000362
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, or Rory as her friends called her, stepped into the grove, her breath misting in the chill night air. The Heartstone pendant around her neck pulsed faintly, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold surrounding her. She had come here for a reason, though she couldn't quite remember why. The grove was supposed to be empty, a hidden clearing in Richmond Park, but the air hummed with an unsettling energy. The ancient oak standing stones loomed around her, their gnarled branches twisting like skeletal fingers against the moonlit sky. Wildflowers bloomed in an unnatural riot of colour, their sweet scent cloying and overpowering. Rory's boots crunched on the frost-kissed grass, the sound too loud in the silence. She pulled her jacket tighter around her, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows between the trees. Something felt off. The silence was too heavy, too complete. No rustle of leaves, no distant call of an owl. Just the faint, rhythmic pulse of the pendant against her skin. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. Rory froze, her heart pounding in her chest. She turned slowly, her eyes searching the darkness. Nothing moved. No shape, no shadow. Just the endless night and the silent trees. She took a step forward, then another, her eyes never leaving the spot where the sound had come from. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth spreading across her collarbone. She reached up, her fingers brushing against the smooth surface of the gemstone. It was warm, almost hot to the touch. A whisper of movement caught her eye. A shadow detaching itself from the darkness, slipping between the trees. Rory's breath hitched, her fingers tightening around the pendant. She took a step back, then another, her eyes never leaving the shadow. It moved like a living thing, a dark stain against the pale bark of the trees. It didn't walk, didn't run. It flowed, a dark river of nothingness, slipping between the trees with an eerie grace. Rory's heart pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She turned to run, her feet slipping on the frost-kissed grass. The shadow was faster. It was everywhere, a dark tide swallowing the light, the sound, the world. She stumbled, her hands reaching out to break her fall. Her fingers closed around something cold and hard. A branch, gnarled and twisted, lying on the ground. She grabbed it, her fingers tightening around the rough bark. The shadow was upon her, a dark wall of nothingness. She swung the branch, her heart pounding, her breath ragged. The branch connected, a solid thud echoing through the night. The shadow recoiled, a dark wave of nothingness rippling away from her. Rory didn't wait to see if it would return. She turned and ran, her feet pounding on the frost-kissed grass. The grove was a blur of darkness and light, the trees a twisted maze of shadows. She ran, her breath ragged, her heart pounding, the pendant around her neck pulsing with a fierce, steady rhythm. She didn't stop until she reached the standing stones, their ancient bark rough and cold under her fingers. She leaned against them, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps, her eyes scanning the darkness behind her. The shadow was gone. The grove was silent, the night still. But Rory knew, with a cold certainty, that she was not alone. Something was out there, something dark and hungry and alive. And it was watching her. She turned away from the grove, her feet crunching on the frost-kissed grass. She didn't look back. She didn't dare. The pendant around her neck pulsed faintly, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold fear gripping her heart. She walked quickly, her eyes scanning the darkness, her ears straining for any sound. The grove was behind her, the standing stones a silent sentinel in the night. She didn't know what she had encountered, what she had disturbed. But she knew one thing for certain. She would not be coming back. Not to this grove. Not to this place. Not ever.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount685
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount685
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"stark"
count2
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"scanning"
count3
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count4
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"sentinel"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"stark"
4"loomed"
5"silence"
6"scanning"
7"rhythmic"
8"pulse"
9"pounding"
10"whisper"
11"echoing"
12"sentinel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords681
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount681
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory7
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.986
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite remember why"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount681
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
33.94% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean42.56
std11.44
cv0.269
sampleLengths
073
147
248
337
450
540
636
741
837
942
1055
1136
1238
1339
1446
1516
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs105
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount685
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.0364963503649635
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00583941605839416
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean10.64
std4.98
cv0.468
sampleLengths
021
118
213
321
419
514
614
717
83
97
1010
1111
127
138
148
152
164
178
1819
1910
2013
218
227
2311
249
2513
2616
275
2815
2913
3011
314
3213
3310
348
359
3610
3710
3810
3910
4012
419
4211
4316
4419
4518
4618
474
487
4912
31.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.234375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners15
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Just the faint, rhythmic pulse"
1"Just the endless night and"
ratio0.032
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences62
matches
0"She had come here for"
1"She pulled her jacket tighter"
2"She turned slowly, her eyes"
3"She took a step forward,"
4"She reached up, her fingers"
5"It was warm, almost hot"
6"She took a step back,"
7"It moved like a living"
8"It didn't walk, didn't run."
9"It flowed, a dark river"
10"She turned to run, her"
11"It was everywhere, a dark"
12"She stumbled, her hands reaching"
13"Her fingers closed around something"
14"She grabbed it, her fingers"
15"She swung the branch, her"
16"She turned and ran, her"
17"She ran, her breath ragged,"
18"She didn't stop until she"
19"She leaned against them, her"
ratio0.419
32.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
1"The Heartstone pendant around her"
2"She had come here for"
3"The grove was supposed to"
4"The ancient oak standing stones"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in an unnatural"
6"Rory's boots crunched on the"
7"She pulled her jacket tighter"
8"Something felt off."
9"The silence was too heavy,"
10"A twig snapped somewhere to"
11"Rory froze, her heart pounding"
12"She turned slowly, her eyes"
13"She took a step forward,"
14"The pendant pulsed again, its"
15"She reached up, her fingers"
16"It was warm, almost hot"
17"A whisper of movement caught"
18"A shadow detaching itself from"
19"Rory's breath hitched, her fingers"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She ran, her breath ragged, her heart pounding, the pendant around her neck pulsing with a fierce, steady rhythm."
1"She leaned against them, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps, her eyes scanning the darkness behind her."
2"She walked quickly, her eyes scanning the darkness, her ears straining for any sound."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8265%