Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPZ9X86MJF4DA6XCT7F01N

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Duration:
46.0s
Cost:
$0.005562
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt clicked like a gunshot. Rory stood in the doorway, her fingers still curled around the key she’d just turned, her bright blue eyes wide. The scent of curry from the restaurant below curled into the hallway, thick and spiced, but it did nothing to mask the cologne clinging to the man on her doorstep. Something dark and expensive—bergamot, leather, a hint of smoke. Lucien Moreau. His platinum hair was slicked back, just as she remembered, but the amber-and-black eyes that met hers were sharper than she’d ever seen them. The ivory-handled cane in his grip tapped once against the floorboards, a sound like a metronome counting down. "You’re not Eva," he said. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. "No. I’m not." A beat of silence. The kind that stretched too long, the kind that made her skin prickle. Then Lucien exhaled, slow and controlled, and stepped forward without waiting for an invitation. "Then I suppose you’d better let me in." She didn’t move. "What are you doing here?" "Business." His gaze flicked past her, into the flat, taking in the cluttered surfaces, the stacks of books, the tabby cat currently winding itself around his ankles with a purr that sounded suspiciously like a threat. "Though I admit, I expected Eva to answer. Not *you*." Rory’s jaw tightened. "Eva’s not here." "Clearly." He adjusted his cufflinks—silver, engraved with something she couldn’t make out. "But you are. And since you’re the one standing in the way of my meeting, I suggest you either let me in or tell me where she is." The cat—*Ptolemy*, she remembered—rubbed against Lucien’s leg again, tail flicking. Traitor. Rory crossed her arms. "She’s at work." "Work." Lucien’s mouth twisted, not quite a smile. "How... mundane." "Some of us don’t have the luxury of being half-demon fixers with a silver spoon up our arse." That got a reaction. His heterochromatic eyes gleamed, the amber one catching the light like a struck match. "Careful, *chérie*. Insults won’t make me leave any faster." "Neither will standing in my doorway." She stepped back, just enough to let him pass, but not enough to make it easy. "Five minutes. Then you’re gone." Lucien inclined his head, the picture of politeness, and stepped inside. The flat seemed to shrink around him, the low ceiling and cluttered shelves suddenly oppressive. He moved with the kind of precision that made Rory’s skin tighten, every step deliberate, every glance calculated. When he reached the centre of the room, he turned, his cane resting against his palm like a conductor’s baton. "Where’s Eva working these days?" he asked, though the way he said it made it clear he already knew. Rory shut the door harder than necessary. "The British Museum. Archive department." "Ah." He tapped the cane against his thigh. "Dusty. Quiet. Perfect for someone who prefers books to people." "Unlike some of us." Lucien’s lips quirked. "You always did have a talent for cutting remarks." "And you always did have a talent for showing up uninvited." The air between them crackled, thick with something unspoken. Rory could feel it pressing against her ribs, a weight she didn’t want to name. She turned away, busying herself with the kettle, though her hands shook as she filled it. "Tea?" "If you’re offering." "I’m not." "Then I’ll decline." She set the kettle down with a clatter. "What do you want, Lucien?" He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he wandered to the nearest bookshelf, running a finger along the spines of Eva’s research—tomes on folklore, demonology, obscure historical texts. His touch was light, almost reverent, but Rory knew better. Lucien didn’t do reverence. "I need Eva’s help," he said finally. "With what?" "Something that’s none of your concern." Rory turned, leaning against the counter. "If it involves Eva, it *is* my concern." Lucien’s gaze flicked to hers, sharp and assessing. "Protective. How... touching." "She’s my friend." "And I’m her *employer*." He stepped closer, the scent of him wrapping around her like a second skin. "Or have you forgotten?" Rory’s fingers dug into the edge of the counter. "I remember plenty." "Do you?" His voice dropped, low and dangerous. "Because the last time we spoke, you made it very clear you wanted nothing to do with me. Or my world." The kettle began to whistle, a shrill sound that cut through the tension. Rory ignored it, her eyes locked on Lucien’s. "That was before I knew how deep Eva was in it." "And now that you do?" "Now I know better than to trust you." Lucien laughed, a dark, velvety sound. "Trust has never been part of our arrangement, *chérie*." He reached out, brushing a strand of hair from her face, his fingers lingering just a second too long. "But then, you’ve never been one for rules, have you?" Rory jerked back, her pulse roaring in her ears. "Don’t." "Don’t what?" His hand dropped, but his gaze burned. "Don’t touch you? Don’t remind you of what we were? Don’t point out that you’re the one who walked away?" "I had my reasons." "Reasons." He scoffed. "You always did have a talent for those." The kettle screamed. Rory yanked it off the burner, the steam curling around her wrists like ghostly fingers. "You should go." Lucien didn’t move. "Not until I speak to Eva." "She’s not here." "Then I’ll wait." Rory’s grip on the kettle tightened. "She won’t be back for hours." "Then I’ll wait for hours." The flat suddenly felt too small, the walls closing in. Rory turned, pouring the boiling water into a mug with more force than necessary. Tea sloshed over the sides, scalding her fingers. She didn’t flinch. Lucien watched her, his expression unreadable. "You’re angry." "No shit." "At me?" "At *everything*." She set the mug down with a sharp *clink*. "At you for showing up here like nothing’s changed. At Eva for dragging me into this mess. At myself for—" She cut herself off, her breath coming too fast. Lucien’s eyes darkened. "For what?" Rory turned away, her fingers curling into fists. "For still caring." Silence. Then, softly: "That makes two of us." She whirled around. "Don’t." "Don’t what?" He stepped closer, his voice a low rumble. "Don’t tell you the truth? Don’t admit that I’ve thought about you every damn day since you left? Don’t remind you that you’re the one who *left*?" Rory’s chest ached. "I had to." "Why?" His hand lifted, hovering just shy of her cheek. "Because of him?" The name hung between them, unspoken but heavy. *Evan.* Rory’s stomach twisted. "That’s none of your business." Lucien’s jaw tightened. "It became my business the moment he put his hands on you." Rory’s breath hitched. "You don’t get to—" "I *do*." His voice was a whip-crack, sharp and final. "Because I was the one who found you that night. I was the one who cleaned you up. I was the one who *promised* you’d never have to go back to him." The memory slammed into her—Lucien’s hands gentle as he wiped blood from her split lip, his voice low and furious as he swore he’d kill Evan if he ever came near her again. The way he’d held her, like she was something precious, something *fragile*. Rory’s eyes burned. "And then you let me walk away." Lucien’s expression shuttered. "You made your choice." "I didn’t have a choice!" "Everyone has a choice." His hand dropped to his side. "You chose to leave. You chose to cut me out. You chose to pretend none of it ever happened." Rory’s vision blurred. "I chose to *survive*." Lucien went very still. Then, slowly, he reached into his jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He held it out to her. "Read it." Rory didn’t take it. "What is it?" "Proof that your survival is about to get a lot more complicated." She snatched the paper from his fingers, unfolding it with shaking hands. The words blurred at first, then sharpened into focus—a name. *Evan Whitlock.* And beneath it, an address. A date. A time. Her blood turned to ice. Lucien’s voice was quiet. "He’s in London." Rory’s fingers trembled. "When?" "Three days ago." She crumpled the paper in her fist. "Why the hell would you bring this to me?" "Because Eva’s the one who found it." Lucien’s gaze was unrelenting. "And because I know you, *chérie*. I know you won’t let this go." Rory’s breath came in short, sharp gasps. "You don’t know *anything* about me." Lucien stepped closer, his voice a dark murmur. "I know you’re still afraid of the dark. I know you bite your lip when you’re lying. I know you hate the taste of whiskey but you’ll drink it anyway if it means you don’t have to feel anything for a little while." His hand cupped her face, his thumb brushing over her bottom lip. "And I know that no matter how much you pretend otherwise, you still *want* me." Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. "You’re wrong." "Am I?" His thumb pressed harder, just shy of pain. "Then tell me to leave." She should. She *should*. But the words wouldn’t come. Lucien’s mouth curved, slow and knowing. "That’s what I thought." The door handle rattled. Rory jerked back, her pulse spiking. Lucien’s hand dropped, his expression smoothing into something unreadable just as the door swung open. Eva stood in the doorway, her arms full of books, her dark eyes widening as she took in the scene. "Oh. *Shit.*"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences98
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.408
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.041
81.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"roaring"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count2
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"flicked"
3"oppressive"
4"calculated"
5"perfect"
6"unspoken"
7"could feel"
8"weight"
9"tension"
10"roaring"
11"unreadable"
12"stomach"
13"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences184
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans20
markdownWords21
totalWords1580
ratio0.013
matches
0"you"
1"Ptolemy"
2"chérie"
3"is"
4"employer"
5"chérie"
6"everything"
7"clink"
8"left"
9"Evan."
10"do"
11"promised"
12"fragile"
13"survive"
14"Evan Whitlock."
15"chérie"
16"anything"
17"want"
18"should"
19"Shit."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
12.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount945
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory26
Lucien22
Eva2
Evan3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.124
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1580
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean17.17
std15.55
cv0.905
sampleLengths
06
161
242
35
49
539
68
746
86
940
1018
1110
1218
1327
1427
1564
1619
1712
1818
194
2012
2111
2241
233
242
253
2613
2741
287
292
306
3114
3211
333
3422
3512
3629
3732
385
398
4044
4110
4229
434
4411
4521
469
473
483
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences184
ratio0.033
matches
0"Something dark and expensive—bergamot, leather, a hint of smoke."
1"\"Clearly.\" He adjusted his cufflinks—silver, engraved with something she couldn’t make out."
2"The cat—*Ptolemy*, she remembered—rubbed against Lucien’s leg again, tail flicking."
3"Instead, he wandered to the nearest bookshelf, running a finger along the spines of Eva’s research—tomes on folklore, demonology, obscure historical texts."
4"The memory slammed into her—Lucien’s hands gentle as he wiped blood from her split lip, his voice low and furious as he swore he’d kill Evan if he ever came near her again."
5"The words blurred at first, then sharpened into focus—a name."
94.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount955
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04607329842931937
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008376963350785341
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences184
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences184
mean8.59
std7.76
cv0.903
sampleLengths
06
120
230
39
42
524
618
75
86
93
104
1113
1214
138
143
155
1636
1710
183
193
2012
2128
2210
231
244
253
268
272
2818
294
3014
319
3222
335
3411
3515
3618
3720
3819
397
405
418
4210
434
443
459
4611
479
4815
4916
47.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.31521739130434784
totalSentences184
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then Lucien exhaled, slow and"
1"Instead, he wandered to the"
2"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.03
90.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences99
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked"
1"She didn’t move."
2"His gaze flicked past her,"
3"He adjusted his cufflinks—silver, engraved"
4"His heterochromatic eyes gleamed, the"
5"She stepped back, just enough"
6"He moved with the kind"
7"he asked, though the way"
8"He tapped the cane against"
9"She turned away, busying herself"
10"She set the kettle down"
11"He didn’t answer right away."
12"His touch was light, almost"
13"he said finally"
14"He stepped closer, the scent"
15"His voice dropped, low and"
16"He reached out, brushing a"
17"His hand dropped, but his"
18"She didn’t flinch."
19"She set the mug down"
ratio0.323
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences99
matches
0"The deadbolt clicked like a"
1"Rory stood in the doorway,"
2"The scent of curry from"
3"Something dark and expensive—bergamot, leather,"
4"His platinum hair was slicked"
5"The ivory-handled cane in his"
6"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
7"A beat of silence."
8"The kind that stretched too"
9"She didn’t move."
10"His gaze flicked past her,"
11"Rory’s jaw tightened."
12"He adjusted his cufflinks—silver, engraved"
13"The cat—*Ptolemy*, she remembered—rubbed against"
14"Rory crossed her arms."
15"Lucien’s mouth twisted, not quite"
16"That got a reaction."
17"His heterochromatic eyes gleamed, the"
18"She stepped back, just enough"
19"Lucien inclined his head, the"
ratio0.949
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked back, just as she remembered, but the amber-and-black eyes that met hers were sharper than she’d ever seen them."
1"She snatched the paper from his fingers, unfolding it with shaking hands."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien’s mouth twisted, not quite a smile"
1"His hand dropped, but his gaze burned"
2"She cut, her breath coming too fast"
3"He stepped, his voice a low rumble"
4"His hand cupped, his thumb brushing over her bottom lip"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"His thumb pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences98
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.082
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.02
80.1582%