Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ07X9QN0XZNHS4BGT3G41

Run Details

Duration:
39.1s
Cost:
$0.004749
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for hours, a relentless drumming against the grimy window of Eva’s flat, the kind of sound that made the walls feel smaller, the air thicker. Rory sat cross-legged on the floor, Ptolemy the tabby curled against her thigh, his purr a low vibration as she traced her fingers over the spine of an old leather-bound grimoire. The scent of cumin and coriander from the curry house below seeped through the floorboards, mingling with the musty smell of yellowed paper and dried herbs hanging in bundles from the ceiling. She should’ve been working—Yu-Fei had texted about a last-minute delivery to Camden—but the thought of pedaling through the downpour made her shoulders ache before she even stood. A sharp *rat-tat-tat* at the door made her jump. Ptolemy’s ears twitched. Rory froze, listening. Not Eva’s knock—too precise, too *measured*. Eva hammered like she was trying to wake the dead. This was something else. Three slow raps, a pause, then two more. A pattern. Her pulse kicked up. She knew that knock. Setting the grimoire aside, she wiped her palms on her jeans and stood, the wooden floor creaking underfoot. The deadbolts gleamed dully in the dim light of the single bulb swaying overhead. She hesitated, fingers hovering over the first lock. *He wouldn’t.* Not after six months. Not after the way they’d left things—him with that infuriating half-smile, her with her pride burning like a brand in her chest. But no one else knocked like that. She undid the first bolt. The second. The third. The door swung open before she could turn the handle. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, his charcoal suit damp at the shoulders, his platinum hair slicked back despite the rain. Water beaded on the sharp line of his jaw, caught in the stubble there. His cane—ivory handle glinting—rested against his thigh, the other hand tucked into his pocket like he hadn’t just barged into her life unannounced. His eyes, one amber, one black, flicked over her face, lingering on the scar at her wrist before meeting her gaze. “Bonjour, *malphora*,” he said, voice low, rough-edged. The nickname sent a jolt through her, stupid and unwanted. *Malphora*. His little joke. A twist on her surname, something he’d called her the first time she’d outmaneuvered him in a deal. *Carter. Malphora. Bad luck.* She didn’t step aside. “What the hell are you doing here, Luc?” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” “You’re not my friend.” The words came out sharper than she intended, but she didn’t take them back. Friends didn’t leave you standing in the middle of a warehouse district at three a.m., watching their taillights disappear. Friends didn’t kiss you like they were memorizing the shape of your mouth, then act like it meant nothing the next day. His smile didn’t waver, but something flickered in his gaze—amusement, maybe, or the echo of an old argument. “No?” He leaned forward just enough that she caught the scent of him, bergamot and gunpowder, the faint metallic tang that always clung to him, like ozone before a storm. “Then what am I?” *A mistake*, she almost said. But the air between them was too thick with the weight of everything unsaid, and Ptolemy chose that moment to wind himself around Luc’s ankles, purring. Traitor. Rory exhaled through her nose and stepped back, letting him in. “You’ve got three minutes before I throw you back out.” Luc’s cane tapped softly as he crossed the threshold, his movements fluid, controlled. He shed his damp overcoat with a flick of his wrists, draping it over the back of Eva’s armchair—the one piled with scrolls. Rory bit back a protest. The flat was a disaster, but it was *her* disaster. “Still living like a scholar in a monk’s cell, I see,” he murmured, eyes roving over the stacks of books, the half-empty teacups, the map of London’s ley lines pinned to the wall with a dagger. “And you’re still dressing like you’re about to negotiate a treaty.” She folded her arms. “Talk. Why are you here?” He turned to face her, the heterochromatic glare of his eyes unsettling in the low light. For a second, she thought he might reach for her. Instead, he pulled a slim silver case from his inner pocket and flipped it open, offering her a cigarette. Rory stared at it. “You know I don’t smoke.” “Since when?” One eyebrow arched. “You used to steal mine.” “*Used* to.” She didn’t take one. “Cut the crap, Luc. It’s late.” He snapped the case shut and tucked it away, then reached into his other pocket. This time, he pulled out a folded slip of paper, worn at the edges. He held it out to her. She didn’t move. “What’s that?” “Your name.” His voice was quiet now, the teasing edge gone. “On a list.” Her fingers twitched. “What list?” “The kind that gets people killed.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the rainwater darkening the collar of his shirt, the pulse at his throat. “A client of mine intercepted a shipment meant for the Obsidian Circle. Inside was a ledger. Names, addresses, *details*. Yours was third from the top.” The Obsidian Circle. The name settled in her stomach like a stone. She’d heard whispers—Eva’s paranoid ramblings about a cabal of warlocks trafficking in cursed artifacts, dabbling in blood magic. Rory had assumed it was just another boogeyman, like the time Eva swore the toaster was possessed. “You’re lying,” she said, but her voice lacked conviction. Luc’s jaw tightened. “I don’t lie to you.” “*You don’t tell me the truth either.*” The words slipped out before she could stop them. His expression darkened, and she knew he was remembering the same thing she was—the warehouse, the way his hands had gripped her hips, the way he’d whispered *trust me* against her ear before vanishing into the night. He exhaled sharply, breaking the tension. “Fair enough.” He tossed the paper onto the pile of books beside her. “But I’m not lying about this. They’ve got your flat address. Your work schedule. The fact that you ride a bike with a broken chain and a habit of cutting through Hyde Park after dark.” A cold prickle ran down her spine. “How do you know about my bike?” “Because I *pay attention*, Rory.” His voice dropped, rough-edged. “Unlike some people.” She swallowed. “What do they want with me?” “I don’t know.” He dragged a hand through his hair, disrupting the careful slick of it. “But it’s not good. The Circle doesn’t collect names for fun.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the windowsill, tail flicking. The rain had eased to a drizzle, the rhythmic patter doing little to ease the sudden pressure in Rory’s chest. She picked up the paper, unfolded it. Her name stared back at her in precise, looping script: *Aurora Carter*. Below it, details she’d never given anyone—her route, her habits, the scar on her wrist. “Shit,” she breathed. Luc’s cane thudded against the floor as he shifted. “You can’t stay here.” “I’m not running.” She crumpled the paper in her fist. “Not again.” His eyes flashed. “This isn’t about Evan.” The name hit her like a slap. She flinched, then glared at him. “Don’t.” “Then don’t be stupid.” He closed the distance between them in two strides, his hand coming up to cup her face before she could pull away. His thumb brushed over her cheekbone, his touch warm, calloused. “You want to play hero? Fine. But you’re not doing it alone.” Her breath hitched. His scent wrapped around her, intoxicating. She should’ve pushed him away. Should’ve told him to go to hell. But the memory of his mouth on hers was a brand she couldn’t ignore, and the way he was looking at her now—like she was something precious, something worth fighting for—made her knees weak. “Why do you even care?” she whispered. His fingers tightened, just for a second. Then he let his hand drop, stepping back like she’d burned him. “Because I’m a selfish bastard, *malphora*.” His voice was a growl. “And I’d rather you owe me your life than some black-market warlocks.” She laughed, sharp and humorless. “That’s it? Debt?” His eyes darkened. “You know it’s not.” The air between them crackled, charged. She could’ve reached for him. Could’ve closed the gap and pressed her mouth to his, just to see if he’d kiss her back the way he had before—like she was the only thing keeping him grounded. But the moment stretched, taut as a wire, and then snapped when Ptolemy knocked a stack of books off the shelf with a yowl. Luc cursed under his breath and bent to pick them up. Rory turned away, pressing her palms to her eyes. She was tired. Tired of running, tired of secrets, tired of the way her body betrayed her every time he was near. “Fine,” she said, dropping her hands. “What’s the play?” He straightened, the books clutched in one hand. “We find out who sold you out. Then we make them regret it.” She almost smiled. Almost. “And if it’s you?” Something dangerous flickered in his gaze. “Then I’ll let you carve out my heart yourself.” The promise hung between them, heavy and real. Rory looked at him—the tailored suit, the cane, the way his eyes never quite hid the demon blood running through his veins—and knew, with a certainty that terrified her, that she trusted him. And that was the most dangerous thing of all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.38
leniency0.76
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1621
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1621
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"disrupting"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"measured"
2"pulse"
3"glinting"
4"flicked"
5"flickered"
6"echo"
7"weight"
8"eyebrow"
9"stomach"
10"tension"
11"down her spine"
12"disrupting"
13"rhythmic"
14"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans15
markdownWords29
totalWords1598
ratio0.018
matches
0"rat-tat-tat"
1"measured"
2"He wouldn’t."
3"malphora"
4"Malphora"
5"Carter. Malphora. Bad luck."
6"A mistake"
7"her"
8"Used"
9"details"
10"You don’t tell me the truth either."
11"trust me"
12"pay attention"
13"Aurora Carter"
14"malphora"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1298
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Ptolemy5
Yu1
Fei1
Camden1
Moreau1
Friends2
Luc5
London1
Obsidian1
Circle1
Rory9
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Fei"
3"Moreau"
4"Friends"
5"Luc"
6"Rory"
places
0"Camden"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1598
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences150
matches
0"knew that knock"
1"chose that moment"
2"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean28.04
std24.3
cv0.867
sampleLengths
0120
19
236
34
44
575
69
710
878
943
1012
1115
1259
1352
1432
1521
1651
1736
1820
1945
209
2110
2212
2335
245
2514
265
2753
2847
299
308
3153
3254
3314
3412
358
3627
3765
383
3913
4012
417
4214
4348
4455
457
4642
478
487
4966
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"was possessed"
86.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs235
matches
0"was trying"
1"were memorizing"
2"was remembering"
3"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences150
ratio0.08
matches
0"She should’ve been working—Yu-Fei had texted about a last-minute delivery to Camden—but the thought of pedaling through the downpour made her shoulders ache before she even stood."
1"Not Eva’s knock—too precise, too *measured*."
2"Not after the way they’d left things—him with that infuriating half-smile, her with her pride burning like a brand in her chest."
3"His cane—ivory handle glinting—rested against his thigh, the other hand tucked into his pocket like he hadn’t just barged into her life unannounced."
4"His smile didn’t waver, but something flickered in his gaze—amusement, maybe, or the echo of an old argument."
5"He shed his damp overcoat with a flick of his wrists, draping it over the back of Eva’s armchair—the one piled with scrolls."
6"She’d heard whispers—Eva’s paranoid ramblings about a cabal of warlocks trafficking in cursed artifacts, dabbling in blood magic."
7"His expression darkened, and she knew he was remembering the same thing she was—the warehouse, the way his hands had gripped her hips, the way he’d whispered *trust me* against her ear before vanishing into the night."
8"Below it, details she’d never given anyone—her route, her habits, the scar on her wrist."
9"But the memory of his mouth on hers was a brand she couldn’t ignore, and the way he was looking at her now—like she was something precious, something worth fighting for—made her knees weak."
10"Could’ve closed the gap and pressed her mouth to his, just to see if he’d kiss her back the way he had before—like she was the only thing keeping him grounded."
11"Rory looked at him—the tailored suit, the cane, the way his eyes never quite hid the demon blood running through his veins—and knew, with a certainty that terrified her, that she trusted him."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1320
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"old leather-bound grimoire."
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03333333333333333
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0030303030303030303
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean10.65
std8.72
cv0.818
sampleLengths
030
131
232
327
49
53
63
76
810
94
108
112
124
134
1418
1514
168
176
1822
197
205
212
222
2310
2420
2514
2623
2721
287
2910
301
313
3218
331
341
352
364
378
388
397
4018
4119
4222
4318
4430
454
465
4726
481
4911
57.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners55
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"Instead, he pulled a slim"
1"Then he let his hand"
ratio0.019
34.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences108
matches
0"She should’ve been working—Yu—Fei had"
1"Her pulse kicked up."
2"She knew that knock."
3"She hesitated, fingers hovering over"
4"*He wouldn’t.* Not after six"
5"She undid the first bolt."
6"His cane—ivory handle glinting—rested against"
7"His eyes, one amber, one"
8"he said, voice low, rough-edged"
9"His little joke."
10"She didn’t step aside."
11"His smile didn’t waver, but"
12"He leaned forward just enough"
13"He shed his damp overcoat"
14"he murmured, eyes roving over"
15"She folded her arms"
16"He turned to face her,"
17"She didn’t take one"
18"He snapped the case shut"
19"He held it out to"
ratio0.463
38.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences108
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Rory sat cross-legged on the"
2"The scent of cumin and"
3"She should’ve been working—Yu—Fei had"
4"A sharp *rat-tat-tat* at the"
5"Ptolemy’s ears twitched."
6"Rory froze, listening."
7"Eva hammered like she was"
8"This was something else."
9"Her pulse kicked up."
10"She knew that knock."
11"The deadbolts gleamed dully in"
12"She hesitated, fingers hovering over"
13"*He wouldn’t.* Not after six"
14"She undid the first bolt."
15"The door swung open before"
16"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
17"Water beaded on the sharp"
18"His cane—ivory handle glinting—rested against"
19"His eyes, one amber, one"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The rain had been falling for hours, a relentless drumming against the grimy window of Eva’s flat, the kind of sound that made the walls feel smaller, the air t…"
1"His eyes, one amber, one black, flicked over her face, lingering on the scar at her wrist before meeting her gaze."
2"Rory looked at him—the tailored suit, the cane, the way his eyes never quite hid the demon blood running through his veins—and knew, with a certainty that terri…"
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice low, rough-edged"
1"she said, but her voice lacked conviction"
90.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.12
82.3445%