"Not like heat haze—this was sharper, like the surface of a soap bubble catching the light."
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"It wasn’t just a gap—it was a doorway, framed by jagged edges of amber light that pulsed like a slow, steady breath."
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"The cobblestones beneath her dissolved into something softer, warmer—dirt, rich and dark, threaded with golden roots that pulsed faintly, as if alive."
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"The moment they crossed, their form flickered, solidifying into something almost human—tall, lean, with a face that was all sharp angles and hollows."
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"Not just apples or pears—these were things she’d never seen before."
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"Aurora had heard the name before—whispers in the dark corners of Silas’ bar, stories traded over pints by those who’d seen too much."
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"At its peak stood a structure that defied logic—a sprawling estate that seemed to be made entirely of food."
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"She could *smell* it—the buttery crust of a pie, the tang of citrus glaze, the rich, dark scent of chocolate so thick it was almost a taste."
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"The fruit pulsed with light, their colours shifting—deep reds bleeding into purples, golds melting into oranges."
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"Not the kind played by instruments—this was something deeper, richer."
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"Water—no, not water, something thicker, like melted caramel—bubbled from the mouths of stone cherubs, pooling in the basin before spilling over the edges in slow, syrupy waves."
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"Their clothes were fine—silks and velvets, embroidered with threads of gold and silver—but their faces were slack, their eyes glassy."
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"Her face was beautiful, but wrong—too smooth, too perfect, like a doll’s."
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"“But you’re *hungry*.” She gestured to the feast laid out on tables that groaned under the weight of food—whole roasted pigs with apples in their mouths, towers of fruit that dripped with nectar, cakes layered with cream so thick it looked like snow."
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"The music grew louder as they approached the estate’s grand entrance—a set of double doors carved from what looked like a single slab of dark chocolate, their surfaces etched with scenes of feasting and revelry."
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"They were dressed in finery—silks and velvets, jewels that caught the light like stars—but their faces were wrong."
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"The cobblestones beneath her dissolved into something softer, warmer—dirt, rich and dark, threaded with golden roots that pulsed faintly, as if alive."
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"Nyx was still on the London side, their silhouette wavering as if the tear itself was reluctant to let them pass."
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"The moment they crossed, their form flickered, solidifying into something almost human—tall, lean, with a face that was all sharp angles and hollows."
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"They stood at the edge of a vast orchard, rows of trees stretching into the distance, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed faintly in the amber light."
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"One tree bore fruit that looked like clusters of tiny, glowing lanterns, their skins translucent and pulsing with an inner light."
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"The trees leaned in, their branches creaking softly, as if whispering secrets to one another."
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"The fruit pulsed with light, their colours shifting—deep reds bleeding into purples, golds melting into oranges."
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"The ground here was paved with something that looked like polished bone, smooth and white, veined with gold."
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"Chandeliers made of crystalised sugar hung from the ceiling, their facets catching the amber light and scattering it across the room in rainbow prisms."
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"Towers of pastries that defied gravity, their layers stacked impossibly high."
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"They were dressed in finery—silks and velvets, jewels that caught the light like stars—but their faces were wrong."
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"One approached Aurora, holding out a platter of fruit that glowed faintly, their skins translucent and pulsing with light."