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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ1HTAVAZ38KP3WRXHWC4M
Run Details
Model:
Mistral Small 3.2 24B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
49.6s
Cost:
$0.000976
Provider:
Mistral
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
81.54%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
0.00%
Cliché density
(details)
52.08%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
76.47%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
52.71%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
44.96%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
94.02%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
48.29%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
35.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
89.29%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
78.57%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
68.4308%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The door creaked open, revealing
a sliver of dimly lit hallway.
Aurora Carter, her bright blue
eyes wide with surprise, stood frozen in the doorway of Eva's flat.
The scent of old books
and something faintly metallic
hung in the air
.
Her heart pounded in her
chest as she took in the sight before her.
Lucien Moreau leaned against the
hallway wall, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers. He looked impeccable as ever, dressed in a tailored charcoal suit, his platinum blond hair slicked back. In his hand, he held an ivory-handled cane, the thin blade concealed within it a silent
testament
to the danger he could unleash. "Lucien,"
Aurora breathed, her voice barely
above a
whisper
.
The sound of her own
voice
seemed to
snap her out of her stupor.
She stepped back, her hand
still gripping the doorknob. "What are you doing here?"
Lucien pushed off from the
wall, his movements fluid and graceful. "Aurora,"
he acknowledged, his voice smooth
and low. "Or should I call you Rory? I believe that's what your friends call you."
Aurora's grip tightened on the
doorknob. "How do you know that?"
Lucien smirked, a slow, knowing
smile that
sent a shiver down
Aurora's spine. "I know many things, Rory. More than you might think." Aurora's
eyes narrowed
. "Cut the cryptic crap, Lucien. What are you doing here?"
Lucien's smile faded, replaced by
a serious expression. "We need to talk. It's about Eva." Aurora's breath hitched. "Eva? What about her?"
Lucien stepped closer, his cane
tapping
lightly
against the wooden floor. "Not here. Inside. We need privacy."
Aurora hesitated, her eyes flicking
to the three deadbolts on the front door.
She had left London to
escape the complications of her past, and here he
was, standing
in her doorway, threatening to drag her back into it. "Rory,"
Lucien's voice was soft, almost
gentle. "Please. It's important." Aurora took a deep breath, her
resolve
wavering
.
She stepped aside, allowing Lucien
to enter. As he passed her, she caught a whiff of his cologne—something dark and spicy, with a hint of something else, something wild and untamed. The flat was small, cramped with books and scrolls covering every surface. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged on the armchair, his green eyes watching Lucien with a mix of curiosity and suspicion. Lucien looked around, his gaze taking in the cluttered state of the flat. "This is where you've been hiding, then?" Aurora closed the door, her back pressed against it. "I'm not hiding, Lucien. I'm living my life." Lucien turned to face her, his expression
unreadable
. "Is that what you call it? Living?" Aurora pushed off from the door, her eyes flashing. "What would you know about it? You're just a fixer, Lucien. A middleman. You don't know the first thing about living." Lucien's eyes darkened, his grip tightening on his cane. "And you think you do? Running away from your problems, hiding in this flat, pretending that the world out there doesn't exist?" Aurora's hands
clenched into fists
. "I'm not pretending anything. I'm trying to move on, Lucien. To forget the past." Lucien took a step closer, his voice dropping to a low growl. "And what about me, Rory? Am I part of the past you're trying to forget?" Aurora's breath caught in her throat.
She could feel the heat
radiating off him, could see the muscles in his jaw tensing. She wanted to look away, to break the
intensity
of his gaze, but she couldn't.
She was trapped, held captive
by the storm brewing in his eyes. "Answer me, Rory,"
Lucien demanded, his voice barely above a whisper
. "Am I part of the past you're trying to forget?" Aurora swallowed hard, her heart
pounding
in her chest. "I... I don't know, Lucien. I just don't know." Lucien's eyes searched hers,
as if looking for some hidden truth
. After a moment, he took a step back, his expression softening. "Fair enough, Rory. Fair enough." Aurora exhaled, her shoulders slumping. "So, what about Eva? You said you needed to talk about her." Lucien nodded, his expression turning serious once more. "Yes. Eva. She's in trouble, Rory. And she needs your help." Aurora's
eyes widened
. "What kind of trouble?" Lucien hesitated, his gaze flicking to the window. "The kind that could get her killed." Aurora's heart
skipped a beat
. "Killed? What are you talking about, Lucien?" Lucien turned to face her, his expression
grave
. "Eva's been digging into something she shouldn't have. Something dangerous. And now, people are after her. People who won't hesitate to kill her." Aurora's mind
raced
. Eva was her childhood friend, her confidante.
She couldn't let anything happen
to her. "What do we do, Lucien? How do we help her?" Lucien's eyes met hers, his expression resolute. "We find her, Rory. Before they do." Aurora nodded, her
resolve
hardening. "Then what are we waiting for? Let's go." Lucien hesitated, his gaze flicking to the window once more. "There's something you should know, Rory. Something about me. About what I am." Aurora's
eyes narrowed
. "What are you talking about, Lucien?" Lucien took a deep breath, his expression turning serious. "I'm not entirely human, Rory. I'm a half-demon. Born to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros." Aurora's
eyes widened
in shock. "A half-demon? What does that even mean?" Lucien's expression softened. "It means that I have certain... abilities. Abilities that can help us find Eva. But it also means that I'm a target, Rory. A target for the
very
people who are after her." Aurora's mind
raced
, trying to process this new information. "And you're telling me this because...?" Lucien's eyes met hers, his expression earnest. "Because I need you to trust me, Rory. To trust that I can help you save Eva. But I also need you to understand the danger that comes with it. The danger that comes with being associated with me." Aurora's
heart pounded in her chest
.
She knew that she should
be afraid, that she should run away from this dangerous man and his dangerous world. But she also
knew that she
couldn't leave Eva to face whatever danger she was in alone. She took a deep breath, her
resolve
hardening. "I trust you, Lucien,"
she said, her voice steady
. "And I'm ready to face whatever danger comes our way. Together." Lucien's eyes searched hers,
as if looking for some hidden truth
. After a moment, he nodded, his expression turning serious. "Then let's go, Rory. Let's find Eva before it's too late." Aurora nodded, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
She grabbed her coat from
the hook by the door, her mind
racing
with questions and fears. But she also felt
a sense of determination
, a
sense of
purpose.
She was going to save
Eva, no matter what it took. As they stepped out into the night, Aurora
couldn't help but feel
a sense of excitement
, a
sense of
adventure.
She was stepping into the
unknown, into a world of danger and darkness. But she was also stepping into a world of possibility, a world where she could make a difference, where she could save her friend and maybe even find
a sense of belonging
. As they walked down the street, Lucien's cane tapping
lightly
against the pavement, Aurora
couldn't help but feel
a
sense of
gratitude. Gratitude for this man, this half-demon, who had come into her life and offered her a chance to make a difference.
She knew that the road
ahead would be dangerous, that there would be challenges and obstacles to overcome. But she also
knew that she
was ready to face them, that she was ready to fight for what she believed in. And as they turned the corner, disappearing into the night, Aurora
couldn't help but feel
a sense of anticipation
,
a sense of excitement
for the journey that lay ahead.
She was stepping into the
unknown, but she was doing it with a
sense of
purpose,
a sense of determination
. And she knew that, no matter what happened, she would never look back.
created_at
"2026-02-20T14:25:14.599Z"
2/20/2026, 2:25:14 PM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.095
leniency
0.19
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
81.54%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1354
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
2
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
2
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
1
"lightly"
2
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1354
totalAiIsms
28
found
0
word
"testament"
count
1
1
word
"whisper"
count
2
2
word
"resolve"
count
3
3
word
"wavering"
count
1
4
word
"unreadable"
count
1
5
word
"could feel"
count
1
6
word
"intensity"
count
1
7
word
"pounding"
count
2
8
word
"skipped a beat"
count
1
9
word
"grave"
count
1
10
word
"raced"
count
2
11
word
"racing"
count
1
12
word
"sense of"
count
10
13
word
"anticipation"
count
1
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"whisper"
2
"resolve"
3
"wavering"
4
"unreadable"
5
"could feel"
6
"intensity"
7
"pounding"
8
"skipped a beat"
9
"grave"
10
"raced"
11
"racing"
12
"sense of"
13
"anticipation"
0.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
12
maxInWindow
8
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
2
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
4
2
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
3
label
"couldn't help but"
count
3
4
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
5
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes narrowed"
2
"eyes widened"
3
"clenched into fists"
4
"couldn't help but feel"
5
"hung in the air"
6
"sent a shiver down"
52.08%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
7
narrationSentences
80
matches
0
"e with surprise"
1
"a sense of determination"
2
"a sense of excitement"
3
"a sense of belonging"
4
"a sense of anticipation"
5
"a sense of excitement"
6
"a sense of determination"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
80
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"happen to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
117
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
39
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1347
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
8
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
58
wordCount
918
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
2.83
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Eva
4
Moreau
1
Aurora
26
London
1
Lucien
24
Ptolemy
1
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Eva"
2
"Moreau"
3
"Aurora"
4
"Lucien"
5
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"London"
globalScore
0.084
windowScore
0
76.47%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
68
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"as if looking for some hidden truth"
1
"as if looking for some hidden truth"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1347
matches
(empty)
52.71%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
4
totalSentences
117
matches
0
"knew that she"
1
"knew that she"
2
"knew that the"
3
"knew that she"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
48
mean
28.06
std
16.9
cv
0.602
sampleLengths
0
55
1
55
2
37
3
33
4
11
5
23
6
13
7
15
8
7
9
17
10
39
11
10
12
39
13
32
14
20
15
17
16
15
17
30
18
31
19
19
20
27
21
49
22
21
23
18
24
27
25
17
26
19
27
7
28
15
29
12
30
31
31
27
32
14
33
13
34
23
35
9
36
31
37
12
38
36
39
15
40
46
41
51
42
20
43
31
44
48
45
65
46
83
47
62
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
44.96%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
172
matches
0
"was, standing"
1
"was stepping"
2
"was stepping was doing"
94.02%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
3
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
2
totalSentences
117
ratio
0.017
matches
0
"Lucien Moreau leaned against the hallway wall, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers."
1
"As he passed her, she caught a whiff of his cologne—something dark and spicy, with a hint of something else, something wild and untamed."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
923
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.027085590465872156
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.0065005417118093175
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
117
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
117
mean
11.51
std
6.77
cv
0.588
sampleLengths
0
11
1
17
2
13
3
14
4
15
5
17
6
23
7
9
8
14
9
9
10
5
11
11
12
8
13
14
14
6
15
5
16
13
17
10
18
3
19
10
20
8
21
7
22
3
23
4
24
11
25
6
26
13
27
26
28
7
29
3
30
8
31
7
32
24
33
12
34
20
35
13
36
7
37
9
38
8
39
8
40
7
41
9
42
21
43
9
44
22
45
5
46
14
47
12
48
15
49
6
48.29%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.29914529914529914
totalSentences
117
uniqueOpeners
35
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
18
totalSentences
80
matches
0
"Her heart pounded in her"
1
"He looked impeccable as ever,"
2
"She stepped back, her hand"
3
"he acknowledged, his voice smooth"
4
"She had left London to"
5
"She stepped aside, allowing Lucien"
6
"She could feel the heat"
7
"She wanted to look away,"
8
"She was trapped, held captive"
9
"She couldn't let anything happen"
10
"She knew that she should"
11
"She took a deep breath,"
12
"she said, her voice steady"
13
"She grabbed her coat from"
14
"She was going to save"
15
"She was stepping into the"
16
"She knew that the road"
17
"She was stepping into the"
ratio
0.225
35.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
68
totalSentences
80
matches
0
"The door creaked open, revealing"
1
"Aurora Carter, her bright blue"
2
"The scent of old books"
3
"Her heart pounded in her"
4
"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
5
"He looked impeccable as ever,"
6
"Aurora breathed, her voice barely"
7
"The sound of her own"
8
"She stepped back, her hand"
9
"Lucien pushed off from the"
10
"he acknowledged, his voice smooth"
11
"Aurora's grip tightened on the"
12
"Lucien smirked, a slow, knowing"
13
"Aurora's eyes narrowed."
14
"Lucien's smile faded, replaced by"
15
"Aurora's breath hitched."
16
"Lucien stepped closer, his cane"
17
"Aurora hesitated, her eyes flicking"
18
"She had left London to"
19
"Lucien's voice was soft, almost"
ratio
0.85
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
89.29%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
40
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"She had left London to escape the complications of her past, and here he was, standing in her doorway, threatening to drag her back into it."
1
"She could feel the heat radiating off him, could see the muscles in his jaw tensing."
2
"Gratitude for this man, this half-demon, who had come into her life and offered her a chance to make a difference."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
4
uselessAdditionCount
4
matches
0
"Aurora breathed, her voice barely above a whisper"
1
"he acknowledged, his voice smooth and low"
2
"Lucien demanded, his voice barely above a whisper"
3
"she said, her voice steady"
78.57%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
1
"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
2
"Lucien demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.095
leniency
0.19
rawRatio
0.75
effectiveRatio
0.143
68.4308%