| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 89.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 44 | | totalWords | 904 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "watching" | | 1 | "Don’t go poking at things that don’t want to be found" | | 2 | "normal" | | 3 | "knowing" | | 4 | "breathed" | | 5 | "knew" | | 6 | "Inside" | | 7 | "\"Little lost thing.\"" | | 8 | "pressure" | | 9 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 10 | "\"Oh, but you did. And now you’re mine.\"" | | 11 | "angles" | | 12 | "unfold" | | 13 | "\"Pretty,\"" | | 14 | "\"Pretty little thing, all alone.\"" | | 15 | "many" | | 16 | "screamed" | | 17 | "feeling" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 882 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | October | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 0.933 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if tasting the leather" | | 1 | "quite a whisper" |
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| 89.38% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.106 | | wordCount | 904 | | matches | | 0 | "not deep enough to draw blood, but enough to hold her in place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 27.39 | | std | 22.72 | | cv | 0.83 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park should’ve been empty at this hour—just the rustle of leaves, the distant hum of the city beyond the trees." | | 1 | "Eva had warned her about this place—*Don’t go poking at things that don’t want to be found*—but Eva wasn’t here now." | | 2 | "The wildflowers at her feet shouldn’t have been blooming—not in October, not with frost creeping in at night." | | 3 | "She stumbled back, heart hammering, and the pendant burned again—this time with a sharp, insistent heat." | | 4 | "The crimson gem pulsed once, twice—then the glow flickered, dimming like a dying ember." | | 5 | "Rory yanked against them, but the vines only tightened, creeping higher, winding around her calves, her knees—" | | 6 | "The thing caught it effortlessly, its fingers—too long, too *many*—curling around the stone." | | 7 | "It held the pendant up to the slit of its mouth, and the gem flared back to life, glowing brighter, brighter—" | | 8 | "She lunged between the oaks—" | | 9 | "—and the world righted itself with a sickening lurch." | | 10 | "And the thing—whatever it was—hadn’t followed her out." |
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| 75.85% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 889 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.06074240719910011 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006749156355455568 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 8.61 | | std | 5.97 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 38.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3047619047619048 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Just shadows knitting themselves into" | | 1 | "Even the wind had died." | | 2 | "Then the ground shifted." | | 3 | "Too many joints." | | 4 | "Too many *angles*." | | 5 | "Then it *screamed*." |
| | ratio | 0.067 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She’d come for answers." | | 2 | "They stretched toward her, petals" | | 3 | "She kicked at them, and" | | 4 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 6 | "It curled around her ears," | | 7 | "She spun, but the clearing" | | 8 | "She stumbled back, heart hammering," | | 9 | "Their branches bent inward, as" | | 10 | "She should run." | | 11 | "She *knew* she should run." | | 12 | "It was *pressure*, a weight" | | 13 | "She gasped, tearing it off," | | 14 | "It moved wrong." | | 15 | "It didn’t walk so much" | | 16 | "It tilted its head, and" | | 17 | "She hurled it at the" | | 18 | "It held the pendant up" | | 19 | "She scrambled up, boots slipping" |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 48.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "Richmond Park should’ve been empty" | | 4 | "She’d come for answers." | | 5 | "The pendant had pulsed against" | | 6 | "Eva had warned her about" | | 7 | "Neither was Silas, or anyone" | | 8 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 9 | "The world tilted." | | 10 | "The air thickened, cloying and" | | 11 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 12 | "They stretched toward her, petals" | | 13 | "She kicked at them, and" | | 14 | "A twig snapped." | | 15 | "The noise had come from" | | 16 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 17 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 19 | "The wind picked up, carrying" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 55.56% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "—and the world righted itself" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant had pulsed against her skin all day, a quiet insistence that grew louder the closer she got to the Grove." | | 1 | "They stretched toward her, petals brushing her boots as if tasting the leather." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |