Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ30QP69V3V7005DVE5CHM

Run Details

Duration:
36.3s
Cost:
$0.003999
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of *The Raven’s Nest*, the evening air clinging to her coat. Inside, the hum of low conversation wrapped around the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—maybe the old pipes, maybe the ghosts of past deals struck in the back room. She shook the rain from her sleeves and slid onto a stool at the far end of the bar, where the light was weakest. Silas didn’t look up from polishing a glass. “Took you long enough.” “Traffic on Charing Cross was a nightmare.” She tapped her fingers against the counter, restless. “Also, I got held up at the restaurant. Yu-Fei’s nephew decided today was the day to ‘learn the ropes,’ which apparently means burning half the orders.” A ghost of a smile touched Silas’ lips. “Sounds like you needed this more than I did.” He set a tumbler in front of her, amber liquid catching the dim light. No ice. No fuss. Rory wrapped her hand around the glass but didn’t drink. Her gaze flicked to the mirrors behind the bottles, where the reflections of the bar’s patrons blurred into indistinct shapes. Then she froze. A man sat three stools down, hunched over a half-empty pint, his back to her. But she knew that posture—the way his shoulders angled just so, like he was bracing for a blow. The years had filled him out, softened the sharp edges of his jaw, but the set of his neck was unmistakable. Evan. Her breath hitched. The glass in her hand suddenly felt too heavy. Silas followed her stare, his expression unreadable. “Problem?” She swallowed. “No.” A lie. A stupid, obvious one. Evan turned then, as if sensing the weight of her gaze. His eyes—still that unsettling pale green—widened. The pint glass slipped from his fingers, hit the bar with a dull *thud*, beer foaming over the rim. “Rory?” The name sounded wrong in his mouth. Too familiar. Too much like the past. She didn’t answer. Just stared, cataloguing the changes: the new scar cutting through his left eyebrow, the way his hair had thinned at the temples, the wedding ring glinting under the bar lights. Her stomach twisted. He wiped his hand on his jeans—nervous habit, that—and stood. The stool scraped against the floor. “Jesus. I didn’t think—” His voice cracked. Cleared his throat. “I didn’t know you were in London.” “Neither did I.” The words came out colder than she intended. Silas’ hand landed on the bar between them, a silent anchor. His knuckles were scarred, his signet ring catching the light. “You two know each other?” Evan’s laugh was bitter. “Yeah. You could say that.” Rory finally took a sip of her drink. The whiskey burned all the way down, steadying her. “Small world, Silas.” “Not that small.” His voice was low, measured. He didn’t move, didn’t take his eyes off Evan. “You here for a reason, mate?” Evan’s jaw tightened. “Just passing through. Didn’t mean to—” He cut himself off, rubbed the back of his neck. “Look, Rory, I—” “Don’t.” She set the glass down harder than necessary. “Whatever it is, I don’t want to hear it.” He flinched. Actually flinched. Like she’d struck him. The bar seemed to shrink around them, the murmur of other conversations fading into white noise. Rory could feel the weight of Silas’ gaze, his silent question: *You want me to step in?* But she didn’t look at him. Couldn’t. Evan exhaled sharply through his nose. “You look good.” “Don’t.” “What?” “Don’t do that. Don’t act like we’re just… old friends catching up.” Her fingers curled into her palms. “You don’t get to do that.” He opened his mouth. Closed it. The muscle in his cheek twitched. “I know.” Silence. Thick and suffocating. Then, quiet: “I heard about your dad.” Rory’s spine locked. “Did you.” “Yeah.” He shifted, uncomfortable. “Brendan Carter, right? Big shot barrister. Read about the heart attack in the *Western Mail*.” She didn’t answer. Just stared at the rings of condensation her glass left on the bar. Evan’s voice dropped. “I’m sorry.” “Are you.” It wasn’t a question. He looked away first, his gaze landing on the old maps pinned to the wall behind the bar. “I thought about calling. After I heard.” “But you didn’t.” “No.” “Why not?” His fingers drummed against the bar. Once. Twice. “Because I knew you’d hang up.” She almost laughed. Almost. “You’re right. I would’ve.” Another beat of silence. Then, softer: “How’s your mum?” Rory’s nails bit into her skin. “She’s fine.” “Still teaching?” “Yes.” “And you?” His eyes flicked to her, searching. “You’re still in Cardiff, then? Law school?” A sharp, humourless laugh escaped her. “No.” “No?” “I dropped out.” She swirled her drink, watching the liquid cling to the sides. “Moved to London a couple years back.” Evan’s brows knitted. “But you—you loved that stuff. Debate club, mock trials, all of it. You were *good*.” “People change.” His mouth pressed into a thin line. “Yeah. Guess they do.” Silas finally moved, reaching for a rag to wipe down the counter between them. The motion was deliberate, a reminder of his presence. “You about done here, mate?” Evan didn’t take his eyes off Rory. “I just—” He stopped. Shook his head. “Never mind.” “No, go on.” Her voice was steel. “What?” He exhaled, long and slow. “I just wanted to say I’m sorry. For everything.” The words hung there, flat and insufficient. Rory studied him—the lines around his eyes, the way his knuckles whitened around his pint glass. He looked tired. Older than his years. Like life had taken its pound of flesh and then some. “You think that fixes it?” she said quietly. “An apology, after all this time?” “I know it doesn’t.” His voice was rough. “But I had to say it.” She wanted to scream. Wanted to throw her drink in his face. Wanted to ask him *why*—why he’d ever thought he had the right to touch her, to control her, to make her feel small. Why he’d made her spend years jumping at shadows, flinching at raised voices. But the words stuck in her throat. Silas’ voice cut through the tension, low and final. “Time to go, mate.” Evan didn’t argue. Just nodded, once. He pulled a crumpled note from his pocket, tossed it onto the bar. “Take care, Rory.” She didn’t watch him leave. The door swung shut behind him, the neon raven flickering again, casting long shadows across the floor. Rory stared at her hands. They were steady. No shaking. No tears. Silas slid a fresh drink in front of her. “You alright?” She picked up the glass. “Peachy.” He didn’t push. Just nodded, his hazel eyes knowing. “He won’t be back.” Rory took a slow sip, the whiskey warming her chest. “Good.” Outside, the rain started up again, a steady drum against the windows. Somewhere in the distance, a car horn blared. Life moving on. She turned her glass in slow circles, watching the light catch the amber. “You ever run into someone from your old life? Someone you thought you’d never see again?” Silas’ fingers stilled on the rag. His signet ring glinted. “Once or twice.” “What’d you do?” He met her gaze, steady. “Same thing you just did.” Rory exhaled, long and slow. “Yeah.” “Some ghosts,” Silas said quietly, “aren’t worth talking to.” She lifted her glass in a silent toast. And drank.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.056
92.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicked"
2"unreadable"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"eyebrow"
6"glinting"
7"stomach"
8"measured"
9"could feel"
10"silence"
11"reminder"
12"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences122
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords14
totalWords1245
ratio0.011
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"thud"
2"You want me to step in?"
3"Western Mail"
4"good"
5"why"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount879
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Raven1
Cleared1
Evan10
Couldn1
Shook1
Silas5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.874
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sensing the weight of her gaze"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1245
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences179
matches
0"knew that posture"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean15.18
std13.97
cv0.92
sampleLengths
081
112
241
335
433
554
61
712
88
93
106
1136
121
1314
1436
1533
1611
1726
189
1920
2023
2122
2218
238
2440
259
261
271
2824
2914
304
317
325
3319
3416
355
362
374
3825
393
401
412
4214
438
449
458
462
471
4815
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"were scarred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was bracing"
47.09% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences179
ratio0.034
matches
0"Inside, the hum of low conversation wrapped around the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—maybe the old pipes, maybe the ghosts of past deals struck in the back room."
1"But she knew that posture—the way his shoulders angled just so, like he was bracing for a blow."
2"His eyes—still that unsettling pale green—widened."
3"He wiped his hand on his jeans—nervous habit, that—and stood."
4"Rory studied him—the lines around his eyes, the way his knuckles whitened around his pint glass."
5"Wanted to ask him *why*—why he’d ever thought he had the right to touch her, to control her, to make her feel small."
88.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount265
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.052830188679245285
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0037735849056603774
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean6.96
std6.11
cv0.879
sampleLengths
026
131
224
38
44
515
626
78
823
92
102
1110
1220
133
1415
1518
1621
171
183
199
207
211
222
231
242
254
2611
276
2819
291
307
312
325
333
3430
353
3610
376
387
393
407
4111
4211
4310
445
454
465
478
489
493
59.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37988826815642457
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences102
matches
0"Then she froze."
1"Too much like the past."
2"Just stared, cataloguing the changes:"
3"Just stared at the rings"
4"Just nodded, once."
5"Just nodded, his hazel eyes"
6"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.069
59.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences102
matches
0"She shook the rain from"
1"She tapped her fingers against"
2"He set a tumbler in"
3"Her gaze flicked to the"
4"Her breath hitched."
5"His eyes—still that unsettling pale"
6"She didn’t answer."
7"Her stomach twisted."
8"He wiped his hand on"
9"His voice cracked"
10"His knuckles were scarred, his"
11"His voice was low, measured"
12"He didn’t move, didn’t take"
13"He cut himself off, rubbed"
14"She set the glass down"
15"Her fingers curled into her"
16"He opened his mouth."
17"He shifted, uncomfortable"
18"She didn’t answer."
19"It wasn’t a question."
ratio0.402
58.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences102
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered"
1"She shook the rain from"
2"Silas didn’t look up from"
3"She tapped her fingers against"
4"A ghost of a smile"
5"He set a tumbler in"
6"Rory wrapped her hand around"
7"Her gaze flicked to the"
8"A man sat three stools"
9"The years had filled him"
10"Her breath hitched."
11"The glass in her hand"
12"Silas followed her stare, his"
13"A stupid, obvious one."
14"Evan turned then, as if"
15"His eyes—still that unsettling pale"
16"The pint glass slipped from"
17"The name sounded wrong in"
18"She didn’t answer."
19"Her stomach twisted."
ratio0.804
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She tapped, restless"
1"He shifted, uncomfortable"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.028
leniency0.056
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.1011%