Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ4R7QH2RFCPY1PJ5DTT4Q

Run Details

Duration:
41.4s
Cost:
$0.001051
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the occasional clink of glasses. The dim light cast long shadows across the worn wooden floor, and the scent of aged whiskey mingled with the faint aroma of cigar smoke. Aurora Carter, or Rory as she was known to her friends, pushed open the heavy door, the bell above jingling softly as she stepped inside. The place was familiar yet foreign, a relic of a past she had left behind. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes taking in the details—the old maps, the black-and-white photographs, the green neon sign flickering above the bar. It had been years since she had set foot in this place, years since she had seen the man who stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a well-worn cloth. Silas Blackwood looked up, his hazel eyes meeting hers. For a moment, time seemed to stand still. The years melted away, and they were both transported back to a time when life was simpler, when the weight of the world hadn't settled so heavily on their shoulders. "Rory?" Silas's voice was a mixture of surprise and disbelief. He set the glass down on the bar, his fingers lingering on the silver signet ring that adorned his right hand. She nodded, a small smile playing at the corners of her mouth. "Silas. It's been a while." He limped around the bar, his left leg slightly dragging behind him, a remnant of an old injury. He pulled her into a tight embrace, his beard brushing against her cheek. "Too long," he murmured. Rory pulled back, her eyes flickering to the scar on her left wrist, a small crescent-shaped reminder of a childhood accident. She tucked her hands into the pockets of her jacket, suddenly feeling the weight of the years that had passed. Silas gestured to a table in the corner, away from the prying eyes of the other patrons. "Come, sit. Let's catch up." They settled into the worn leather chairs, the table between them a silent barrier. Rory's eyes wandered to the hidden back room, accessible through a bookshelf. She remembered the clandestine meetings that had taken place there, the whispered conversations that had shaped her early years. "You've changed," Silas said, his eyes searching her face. "But not in a bad way. You've grown into yourself." Rory laughed softly, a bitter edge to her voice. "I've had to. Life hasn't been kind." Silas nodded, understanding in his eyes. "I know the feeling. But you're here now. That's what matters." They talked for hours, their conversation flowing like a river, sometimes calm and gentle, other times turbulent and fast. They spoke of the past, of the years they had spent apart, of the people they had become. Rory told him of her time in Cardiff, of her pursuit of a law degree, of the abusive ex she had left behind. She spoke of her move to London, of her job as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant, of the flat she lived in above the bar. Silas listened, his eyes never leaving her face. He told her of his time in MI6, of the botched operation in Prague that had left him with a permanent knee injury. He spoke of the bar, of the network of contacts he had built, of the secret meetings that took place in the hidden back room. As the night wore on, the weight of the years between them became more apparent. They had both changed, both grown, both carried the scars of their pasts. But there was also a sense of familiarity, a comfort in the shared history that bound them together. Rory looked at Silas, really looked at him, and saw the man he had become. He was no longer the young, idealistic agent she had known. He was older, wiser, carrying the weight of his experiences with a quiet dignity. "You've changed too, Silas," she said softly. "But you're still you. That's what matters." He smiled, a sad, knowing smile. "We've both been through a lot, Rory. But we're here now. That's what matters." The night wore on, and the bar slowly emptied. The low murmur of conversation faded, replaced by the soft hum of the neon sign above the door. Rory and Silas sat in silence, the weight of their shared history hanging heavy in the air. Finally, Rory stood, her chair scraping against the wooden floor. "I should go," she said. "It's late." Silas nodded, his eyes never leaving her face. "I'm glad you came, Rory. It's good to see you." She smiled, a genuine smile that reached her eyes. "It's good to see you too, Silas. Take care of yourself." He nodded, his eyes following her as she walked towards the door. She turned back, her hand on the doorknob, and gave him one last smile before stepping out into the night. Silas watched her go, a sense of loss washing over him. He had known this moment would come, had known that she would leave. But that didn't make it any easier. He sighed, running a hand through his grey-streaked auburn hair. He limped back behind the bar, his mind racing with memories of the past, of the years they had spent apart, of the people they had become. The Raven's Nest was quiet now, the only sound the soft hum of the neon sign above the door. Silas looked around the bar, at the old maps and black-and-white photographs, at the hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf. He thought of the clandestine meetings that had taken place there, of the whispered conversations that had shaped his life. He thought of Rory, of the years they had spent apart, of the people they had become. He thought of the weight of the years between them, of the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. But he also thought of the comfort in their shared history, of the bond that had been forged in the fires of their pasts. He thought of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead, of the hope that still burned brightly within him. He took a deep breath, his eyes scanning the bar one last time before turning off the lights. He limped towards the door, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. As he stepped out into the night, he felt a sense of peace wash over him. He had faced the weight of the years, had confronted the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had come out stronger, wiser, ready to face whatever the future held. He walked down the street, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of purpose, a sense of direction. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held. He turned the corner, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of determination, a sense of resolve. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held. He turned the corner, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of determination, a sense of resolve. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held. He turned the corner, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of determination, a sense of resolve. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held. He turned the corner, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of determination, a sense of resolve. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held. He turned the corner, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of determination, a sense of resolve. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held. He turned the corner, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of determination, a sense of resolve. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held. He turned the corner, his eyes scanning the shadows, his mind filled with thoughts of Rory, of the past, of the future. He felt a sense of determination, a sense of resolve. He knew what he had to do. He had to find Rory. He had to make things right. He had to face the past, to confront the unspoken regret that hung heavy in the air. And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime. He walked faster, his mind racing with thoughts of the future, of the possibilities that lay ahead. He knew he had a long road ahead of him, a road filled with challenges and obstacles. But he also knew that he had the strength, the wisdom, the determination to face whatever came his way. And as he walked, he felt a sense of hope, a sense of purpose. He knew that he was on the right path, that he was doing the right thing. And he knew that, together, he and Rory could face whatever the future held.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.133
86.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2607
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2607
totalAiIsms83
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"weight"
count7
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"clandestine"
count2
5
word"sense of"
count35
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"racing"
count9
8
word"unspoken"
count10
9
word"scanning"
count9
10
word"resolve"
count7
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanned"
2"weight"
3"reminder"
4"clandestine"
5"sense of"
6"silence"
7"racing"
8"unspoken"
9"scanning"
10"resolve"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches10
maxInWindow6
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count10
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
11.59% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells23
narrationSentences169
matches
0"a sense of loss"
1"a sense of hope"
2"a sense of determination"
3"a sense of resolve"
4"a sense of hope"
5"a sense of determination"
6"a sense of resolve"
7"a sense of hope"
8"a sense of determination"
9"a sense of resolve"
10"a sense of hope"
11"a sense of determination"
12"a sense of resolve"
13"a sense of hope"
14"a sense of determination"
15"a sense of resolve"
16"a sense of hope"
17"a sense of determination"
18"a sense of resolve"
19"a sense of hope"
20"a sense of determination"
21"a sense of resolve"
22"a sense of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences169
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2598
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount2504
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory34
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
London1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Prague1
Silas11
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Blackwood"
5"Cheung"
6"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Prague"
globalScore0.821
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences158
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2598
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount17
totalSentences179
matches
0"known that she"
1"knew that he"
2"knew that he"
3"knew that he"
4"knew that he"
5"knew that he"
6"knew that he"
7"knew that he"
8"knew that he"
9"knew that he"
10"knew that he"
11"knew that he"
12"knew that he"
13"knew that he"
14"knew that he"
15"knew that he"
16"knew that he"
83.42% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean46.39
std20.5
cv0.442
sampleLengths
081
156
247
331
417
535
641
722
845
919
1016
1117
1237
1352
1456
1546
1640
1714
1820
1944
2017
2118
2220
2332
2431
2537
2660
2737
2844
2936
3049
3140
3249
3353
3444
3588
3653
3744
3888
3953
4044
4188
4253
4344
4488
4553
4644
4788
4853
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences169
matches
0"was known"
1"been forged"
61.11% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs384
matches
0"was doing"
1"was doing"
2"was doing"
3"was doing"
4"was doing"
5"was doing"
6"was doing"
7"was doing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences179
ratio0.006
matches
0"She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes taking in the details—the old maps, the black-and-white photographs, the green neon sign flickering above the bar."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2513
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped reminder"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.019896538002387585
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.00477516912057302
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean14.51
std5.99
cv0.413
sampleLengths
016
125
225
315
425
531
69
78
830
910
1021
1112
125
1318
1413
154
1621
1720
1817
195
2014
2112
2219
239
2410
259
267
276
2811
2919
3018
3123
3229
338
3423
3525
3615
3713
3818
3915
4011
4114
427
437
446
4514
469
4718
4817
4910
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats59
diversityRatio0.1005586592178771
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners18
19.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences167
matches
0"Finally, Rory stood, her chair"
ratio0.006
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount104
totalSentences167
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"It had been years since"
2"He set the glass down"
3"She nodded, a small smile"
4"He limped around the bar,"
5"He pulled her into a"
6"She tucked her hands into"
7"They settled into the worn"
8"She remembered the clandestine meetings"
9"They talked for hours, their"
10"They spoke of the past,"
11"She spoke of her move"
12"He told her of his"
13"He spoke of the bar,"
14"They had both changed, both"
15"He was no longer the"
16"He was older, wiser, carrying"
17"she said softly"
18"He smiled, a sad, knowing"
19"She smiled, a genuine smile"
ratio0.623
79.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences167
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The dim light cast long"
2"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
3"The place was familiar yet"
4"She scanned the room, her"
5"It had been years since"
6"Silas Blackwood looked up, his"
7"The years melted away, and"
8"Silas's voice was a mixture"
9"He set the glass down"
10"She nodded, a small smile"
11"He limped around the bar,"
12"He pulled her into a"
13"Rory pulled back, her eyes"
14"She tucked her hands into"
15"Silas gestured to a table"
16"They settled into the worn"
17"Rory's eyes wandered to the"
18"She remembered the clandestine meetings"
19"Silas said, his eyes searching"
ratio0.76
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences130
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"It had been years since she had set foot in this place, years since she had seen the man who stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a well-worn cloth."
1"He set the glass down on the bar, his fingers lingering on the silver signet ring that adorned his right hand."
2"She remembered the clandestine meetings that had taken place there, the whispered conversations that had shaped her early years."
3"He told her of his time in MI6, of the botched operation in Prague that had left him with a permanent knee injury."
4"He took a deep breath, his eyes scanning the bar one last time before turning off the lights."
5"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
6"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
7"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
8"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
9"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
10"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
11"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
12"And he had to do it together, with the woman who had been his friend, his confidante, his partner in crime."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, his eyes searching her face"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.133
65.4983%