| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s form flickered again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.354 | | leniency | 0.708 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |
| 92.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1306 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1306 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "gleaming" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "quivered" | | 13 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 155 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 22 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 1287 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "wet" | | 1 | "you" | | 2 | "real" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "song" | | 5 | "us" | | 6 | "entertainment" | | 7 | "rose" | | 8 | "is" | | 9 | "hunger" | | 10 | "Time" | | 11 | "trade" | | 12 | "dripped" | | 13 | "guardians" | | 14 | "shifted" | | 15 | "man-eating fungi" | | 16 | "lonely" | | 17 | "such" | | 18 | "court" | | 19 | "old" | | 20 | "memory" | | 21 | "That" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.06% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1020 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.06 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Nyx | 16 | | Ahead | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.471 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.60% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.554 | | wordCount | 1287 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer weathered grey but" | | 1 | "not of dirt but of smooth, pale stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 19.8 | | std | 19.34 | | cv | 0.977 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 155 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "The next, the world exhaled—warm, damp, alive." | | 1 | "Ahead, the standing stones loomed—no longer weathered grey but black as polished obsidian, their surfaces carved with spirals that pulsed faintly, like embers beneath ash." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals too vivid, too *wet*—blue as crushed sapphires, red as fresh wounds." | | 3 | "She stepped forward, boots crushing petals that didn’t bruise, didn’t die—just folded beneath her weight and sprang back, unharmed." | | 4 | "A path unfolded ahead, not of dirt but of smooth, pale stone—veined with silver that shimmered like liquid mercury." | | 5 | "Something hummed—a low, resonant note that vibrated in her teeth, her bones." | | 6 | "“The *song*? Hard to miss.” Their fingers—long, too many joints—brushed a passing frond." | | 7 | "The humming grew louder, layered now with something else—a wet, clicking sound, like stones knocking together underwater." | | 8 | "Not all of them—just three, near the pool’s edge." | | 9 | "The creature shrieked—a high, keening wail—and recoiled, its cap sealing shut like a clamming oyster." | | 10 | "Rory sheathed the blade—slowly." | | 11 | "The trees here grew in impossible spirals, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed from within—pears like molten gold, apples veined with sapphire." | | 12 | "No—a *court*." | | 13 | "And around it, figures—some Fae, their beauty sharp enough to cut, others…" |
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| 90.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1039 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "perfect, blood-red rose." |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04427333974975938 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005774783445620789 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 155 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 155 | | mean | 8.3 | | std | 5.81 | | cv | 0.7 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 54.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36774193548387096 | | totalSentences | 155 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 97.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the flowers swaying without" | | 1 | "Just depth, endless and hungry." | | 2 | "Then the grove opened up." |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She yanked her foot free" | | 1 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 2 | "She stepped forward, boots crushing" | | 3 | "It painted everything in gold" | | 4 | "It wound between the trees," | | 5 | "They moved deeper." | | 6 | "She touched it." | | 7 | "Their fingers—long, too many joints—brushed" | | 8 | "It blinked at them." | | 9 | "It *rose*, hanging in the" | | 10 | "Their fingers twitched" | | 11 | "She didn’t like the sound" | | 12 | "Their caps split open, peeling" | | 13 | "She sidestepped, blade flashing." | | 14 | "Her lavender eyes gleamed, amused" | | 15 | "She stepped forward, bare feet" | | 16 | "She reached out, brushed a" | | 17 | "She turned, silver hair sweeping" | | 18 | "She led them deeper." | | 19 | "She looked at Rory" |
| | ratio | 0.204 | |
| 27.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened the moment" | | 1 | "The next, the world exhaled—warm," | | 2 | "Rory’s boots sank into loam" | | 3 | "She yanked her foot free" | | 4 | "The grove stretched beyond, a" | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals" | | 6 | "The scent hit her next:" | | 7 | "Nyx’s voice slithered from the" | | 8 | "Rory’s head snapped toward the" | | 9 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 10 | "Nyx’s form flickered again, their" | | 11 | "Rory ignored that." | | 12 | "She stepped forward, boots crushing" | | 13 | "The light here was wrong." | | 14 | "It painted everything in gold" | | 15 | "A path unfolded ahead, not" | | 16 | "It wound between the trees," | | 17 | "Nyx laughed, the sound like" | | 18 | "They moved deeper." | | 19 | "The mist curled around Rory’s" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx’s form rippled, their edges blurring into the sudden gloom before snapping back into sharp, humanesque lines." | | 1 | "A path unfolded ahead, not of dirt but of smooth, pale stone—veined with silver that shimmered like liquid mercury." | | 2 | "It wound between the trees, disappearing into the mist that coiled at knee-height, thick as spilled milk." | | 3 | "Something hummed—a low, resonant note that vibrated in her teeth, her bones." | | 4 | "It *rose*, hanging in the air before drifting toward the pool’s surface, vanishing without a ripple." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.146 | | leniency | 0.292 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |