Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ5MJ86V2QB3MPS2K2TT36

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.004689
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened the moment they crossed the threshold. One step, they stood beneath the skeletal branches of Richmond Park’s winter oaks. The next, the world exhaled—warm, damp, alive. Rory’s boots sank into loam so rich it clung like wet velvet. She yanked her foot free with a squelch, fingers already twitching toward the Fae blade at her belt. Beside her, Nyx’s form rippled, their edges blurring into the sudden gloom before snapping back into sharp, humanesque lines. “Well,” Rory muttered, “this isn’t London anymore.” Ahead, the standing stones loomedno longer weathered grey but black as polished obsidian, their surfaces carved with spirals that pulsed faintly, like embers beneath ash. The grove stretched beyond, a cathedral of towering oaks whose trunks twisted into impossible knots, their bark etched with the same glowing sigils. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals too vivid, too *wet*—blue as crushed sapphires, red as fresh wounds. The scent hit her next: honey and iron, decay and bloom, so thick it coated the back of her throat. Nyx’s voice slithered from the shadows. “The Fae love their theatrics.” A rustle. Rory’s head snapped toward the sound. Nothing. Just the flowers swaying without wind, petals brushing against each other in a whisper of silk. She exhaled through her nose, forced her grip to loosen on the dagger’s hilt. “Isolde said it’d be safe.” “Isolde lies like she breathes.” Nyx’s form flickered again, their violet eyes gleaming. “Though I’ll admit, she’s never lied to *you*. Yet.” Rory ignored that. She stepped forward, boots crushing petals that didn’t bruise, didn’t die—just folded beneath her weight and sprang back, unharmed. The light here was wrong. No sun, no sky, only a diffuse glow seeping from the sigils, from the flowers, from the very air. It painted everything in gold and emerald, turned Nyx’s shadows into something almost solid, almost *real*. A path unfolded ahead, not of dirt but of smooth, pale stone—veined with silver that shimmered like liquid mercury. It wound between the trees, disappearing into the mist that coiled at knee-height, thick as spilled milk. “Stay sharp,” Rory said. Nyx laughed, the sound like dry leaves skittering. “Oh, *Carter*. Sharp is my default setting.” They moved deeper. The mist curled around Rory’s ankles, cold then warm then cold again, as if the air itself couldn’t decide what it wanted to be. The trees here grew closer together, their branches knitting overhead into a lattice that trapped the glow, made it pool in golden puddles on the path. Something hummed—a low, resonant note that vibrated in her teeth, her bones. The Heartstone at her collarbone pulsed in answer, its crimson light bleeding through her shirt. She touched it. Warm. Warmer than it should be. “You feel that?” she asked. Nyx’s head tilted. “The *song*? Hard to miss.” Their fingers—long, too many joints—brushed a passing frond. The plant shivered, then leaned into the touch, petals unfurling like a cat stretching. “They’re singing to *us*.” Rory’s skin prickled. “What do they want?” “Attention. Admiration.” Nyx plucked a flower, held it up. The petals were striped black and gold, the centre a whorl of tiny, watching eyes. It blinked at them. “The Fae grove doesn’t get many visitors. We’re *entertainment*.” She swallowed. “Great.” The path sloped downward, the stones slick beneath her boots. The humming grew louder, layered now with something else—a wet, clicking sound, like stones knocking together underwater. The mist thinned, revealing a clearing. And the pool. Water black as ink, still as glass, ringed by mushrooms the size of stools, their caps weeping silver droplets. The liquid didn’t fall. It *rose*, hanging in the air before drifting toward the pool’s surface, vanishing without a ripple. Rory crouched at the edge, peered in. No reflection. Just depth, endless and hungry. “Don’t touch it,” Nyx warned. “I wasn’t planning to.” A shape moved beneath the surface. Something pale. Something with too many limbs. Rory stood abruptly. “What *is* this place?” Nyx’s shadows stretched long across the water. “A pocket. A fold. The Fae stitch them into the world like patches on a quilt.” Their fingers twitched. “This one’s older than most. You can tell by the *hunger*.” She didn’t like the sound of that. “Hunger for what?” “Stories. Memories. *Time*.” Nyx’s voice dropped. “The Fae don’t just take. They *trade*. And they always collect interest.” A breeze, sudden and warm, rustled the trees. The flowers turned as one, petals tracking their movement. Rory’s nape prickled. “We’re being watched.” “Of course we are.” Nyx’s grin was all teeth. “But not by what you’d expect.” The clicking sound again. Louder. Rory spun. The mushrooms were moving. Not all of them—just three, near the pool’s edge. Their caps split open, peeling back to reveal hollow interiors lined with needle-thin teeth. The silver droplets quivered, then *dripped* into the waiting maws. The sound they made was wet, eager. Rory’s hand flew to the Fae blade. “You’ve got to be kidding me.” Nyx sighed. “Ah. The *guardians*. How quaint.” One of the mushrooms lunged. She sidestepped, blade flashing. Moonsilver met fungus-flesh with a sound like tearing parchment. Black ichor sprayed, sizzling where it hit the stones. The creature shrieked—a high, keening wail—and recoiled, its cap sealing shut like a clamming oyster. The other two hesitated. “Impressive,” Nyx murmured. “Most people scream first.” Rory didn’t take her eyes off the mushrooms. “Most people don’t have Fae steel.” A laugh, soft and not from Nyx. The air *shifted*. The mist between the trees coalesced, swirling into a tall, slender figure with skin like birch bark and hair like spun moonlight. Isolde. Her lavender eyes gleamed, amused and ancient. “Took you long enough,” she said. Rory didn’t lower the blade. “You could’ve mentioned the *man-eating fungi*.” Isolde’s lips curved. “Where’s the fun in that?” She stepped forward, bare feet hovering just above the path. No footprints. Never footprints. “Besides. You handled yourself well.” Nyx’s shadows writhed, restless. “Flattery, Seer? How unlike you.” Isolde ignored them, her gaze on Rory. “The grove tests those who enter. It’s been *lonely*.” She reached out, brushed a petal. The flower bloomed faster, unfurling into a perfect, blood-red rose. “But you’re here now. And you brought *such* interesting company.” Rory sheathed the blade—slowly. “We’re here for answers. Not games.” Isolde’s fingers stilled. “Aren’t they the same thing?” She turned, silver hair sweeping like a cloak. “Come. There’s something you should see.” She led them deeper. The trees here grew in impossible spirals, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed from within—pears like molten gold, apples veined with sapphire. The air hummed louder, the notes twisting into something almost like words. Rory’s skull ached with the pressure of it. Then the grove opened up. A meadow. No—a *court*. Stone thrones grew from the earth, carved with faces Rory didn’t want to look at too closely. A fire pit burned at the centre, flames blue and green, casting long shadows that moved on their own. And around it, figures—some Fae, their beauty sharp enough to cut, others… less definable. Things with too many eyes, too many limbs, things that wore skins not their own. Isolde stopped at the edge. “The *old* court. Before the Sundering.” Nyx’s form tightened, their voice a blade. “You brought us to a *memory*?” “A warning.” Isolde’s smile faded. “The Veil weakens. The grooves between worlds wear thin.” She looked at Rory. “And you, little storm, are standing at the centre of it.” Rory’s fingers found the Heartstone again. It burned against her skin. Isolde’s gaze dropped to the pendant. “Ah. *That* explains the interest.” “What interest?” Rory demanded. But Isolde only turned, her silver hair catching the un-light. “Walk with me. There’s more to show you.” The grove swallowed them whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s form flickered again [again]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.354
leniency0.708
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.042
92.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"quivered"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"gloom"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"etched"
5"whisper"
6"silk"
7"flickered"
8"gleaming"
9"weight"
10"shimmered"
11"vibrated"
12"quivered"
13"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans22
markdownWords23
totalWords1287
ratio0.018
matches
0"wet"
1"you"
2"real"
3"Carter"
4"song"
5"us"
6"entertainment"
7"rose"
8"is"
9"hunger"
10"Time"
11"trade"
12"dripped"
13"guardians"
14"shifted"
15"man-eating fungi"
16"lonely"
17"such"
18"court"
19"old"
20"memory"
21"That"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1020
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae3
Nyx16
Ahead1
Rory21
Heartstone2
Isolde8
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.471
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
44.60% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.554
wordCount1287
matches
0"no longer weathered grey but"
1"not of dirt but of smooth, pale stone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean19.8
std19.34
cv0.977
sampleLengths
09
169
27
384
411
544
622
762
836
94
1015
113
1277
139
145
1534
167
1737
183
1933
203
2139
2214
235
244
2513
267
2737
2810
2918
3023
3115
327
334
3440
3513
367
375
3837
394
407
4114
427
433
4430
456
4611
4727
489
4942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences155
ratio0.09
matches
0"The next, the world exhaled—warm, damp, alive."
1"Ahead, the standing stones loomed—no longer weathered grey but black as polished obsidian, their surfaces carved with spirals that pulsed faintly, like embers beneath ash."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals too vivid, too *wet*—blue as crushed sapphires, red as fresh wounds."
3"She stepped forward, boots crushing petals that didn’t bruise, didn’t die—just folded beneath her weight and sprang back, unharmed."
4"A path unfolded ahead, not of dirt but of smooth, pale stone—veined with silver that shimmered like liquid mercury."
5"Something hummed—a low, resonant note that vibrated in her teeth, her bones."
6"“The *song*? Hard to miss.” Their fingers—long, too many joints—brushed a passing frond."
7"The humming grew louder, layered now with something else—a wet, clicking sound, like stones knocking together underwater."
8"Not all of them—just three, near the pool’s edge."
9"The creature shrieked—a high, keening wail—and recoiled, its cap sealing shut like a clamming oyster."
10"Rory sheathed the blade—slowly."
11"The trees here grew in impossible spirals, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed from within—pears like molten gold, apples veined with sapphire."
12"No—a *court*."
13"And around it, figures—some Fae, their beauty sharp enough to cut, others…"
90.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1039
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"perfect, blood-red rose."
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04427333974975938
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005774783445620789
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean8.3
std5.81
cv0.7
sampleLengths
09
113
27
312
418
519
67
725
823
916
1020
116
125
132
146
151
1616
1714
185
1913
209
213
2219
235
2419
2516
2619
2717
284
298
307
313
3224
3326
3412
3515
363
371
385
395
403
4113
4214
434
443
454
469
4715
484
499
54.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.36774193548387096
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners57
97.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"Just the flowers swaying without"
1"Just depth, endless and hungry."
2"Then the grove opened up."
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences103
matches
0"She yanked her foot free"
1"She exhaled through her nose,"
2"She stepped forward, boots crushing"
3"It painted everything in gold"
4"It wound between the trees,"
5"They moved deeper."
6"She touched it."
7"Their fingers—long, too many joints—brushed"
8"It blinked at them."
9"It *rose*, hanging in the"
10"Their fingers twitched"
11"She didn’t like the sound"
12"Their caps split open, peeling"
13"She sidestepped, blade flashing."
14"Her lavender eyes gleamed, amused"
15"She stepped forward, bare feet"
16"She reached out, brushed a"
17"She turned, silver hair sweeping"
18"She led them deeper."
19"She looked at Rory"
ratio0.204
27.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences103
matches
0"The air thickened the moment"
1"The next, the world exhaled—warm,"
2"Rory’s boots sank into loam"
3"She yanked her foot free"
4"The grove stretched beyond, a"
5"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals"
6"The scent hit her next:"
7"Nyx’s voice slithered from the"
8"Rory’s head snapped toward the"
9"She exhaled through her nose,"
10"Nyx’s form flickered again, their"
11"Rory ignored that."
12"She stepped forward, boots crushing"
13"The light here was wrong."
14"It painted everything in gold"
15"A path unfolded ahead, not"
16"It wound between the trees,"
17"Nyx laughed, the sound like"
18"They moved deeper."
19"The mist curled around Rory’s"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Beside her, Nyx’s form rippled, their edges blurring into the sudden gloom before snapping back into sharp, humanesque lines."
1"A path unfolded ahead, not of dirt but of smooth, pale stone—veined with silver that shimmered like liquid mercury."
2"It wound between the trees, disappearing into the mist that coiled at knee-height, thick as spilled milk."
3"Something hummed—a low, resonant note that vibrated in her teeth, her bones."
4"It *rose*, hanging in the air before drifting toward the pool’s surface, vanishing without a ripple."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
3"Rory demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.167
80.4675%