Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ5WEFDK4WWSTMPN8C7CJV

Run Details

Duration:
25.7s
Cost:
$0.003887
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly, casting a sickly glow over the rain-slicked pavement. Rory ducked under the awning, shaking water from her jacket before pushing through the heavy oak door. The familiar scent of aged whiskey and polished wood wrapped around her, a comfort after the biting London wind. Inside, the bar hummed with low conversation and the occasional clink of glassware. Silas stood behind the counter, his signet ring glinting as he wiped down a tumbler. He glanced up, nodded once—no words needed—and slid a half-pint of bitter toward her usual spot at the far end. Rory peeled off her gloves, fingers numb from the cold, and reached for the drink. The first sip burned, sharp and bitter, grounding her. She exhaled, watching her breath fog in the dim light. Then she saw him. A man sat hunched over a whiskey at the corner table, his back to the room. Something about the set of his shoulders, the way his fingers drummed restlessly against the glass— No. Couldn’t be. She turned away, heart hammering. But the bar wasn’t that big. And he chose that moment to shift, just slightly, enough for the light to catch the angle of his jaw, the old scar above his eyebrow— *Evan.* Rory’s grip tightened around her glass. The last time she’d seen him, his voice had been a snarl, his hands bruises on her wrists. She’d left him bleeding on the kitchen floor, a knife in his thigh, her bag packed in under five minutes. That was three years ago. Now here he was, in *her* bar, like he had every right to be here. She should leave. Walk out, lose herself in the rain, pretend she’d never— “Rory?” His voice was different. Rougher. Thicker. Like gravel underfoot. She didn’t turn. “You’re mistaken.” A chair scraped. Footsteps. The heat of him too close. “It’s you.” Not a question. A statement. Like he’d been searching for her. Like he’d *known*. She finally looked up. Evan wasn’t the same. The sharp edges of his face had softened, his once-lean frame filled out with muscle that looked earned, not the wiry tension of a man always spoiling for a fight. His dark hair was longer, streaks of silver at the temples. But his eyes—still that unnerving pale green, still too knowing—locked onto hers. “What the hell are you doing here?” she asked, voice low. He hesitated. “Same as you, I’d guess. Drinking.” Silas appeared at her elbow, a silent sentinel. His gaze flicked between them, assessing. “Everything alright?” Rory didn’t take her eyes off Evan. “Peachy.” Silas lingered a beat longer, then melted back into the shadows behind the bar. Smart man. Evan exhaled through his nose, almost a laugh. “You always did pick the strangest places to hide.” “Not hiding.” She took a slow sip, letting the silence stretch. “Just living.” He rubbed the back of his neck, a gesture so familiar it made her stomach twist. “Yeah. Me too.” She waited. He’d come to her. He could damn well explain himself. Evan’s fingers twitched toward his glass, then stilled. “I got out. After… after that night. Left Cardiff. Went up north for a while. Construction. Manual labour.” A bitter smile. “Turns out I’m better with my hands than my mouth.” Rory’s scarred wrist ached. She flexed her fingers under the table. “Congratulations on the personal growth.” His jaw tightened. “I deserved that.” “And a hell of a lot more.” He didn’t argue. Just nodded, staring into his whiskey like it held answers. “I’m clean. Three years next month.” She blinked. “Clean?” “Off the coke. The booze. The—” He cut himself off, shook his head. “Everything.” Rory studied him. The Evan she knew had been all jagged edges and volatile tempers, fueled by whatever he could snort or swallow. This man held himself like someone who’d learned the weight of his own body. Like he wasn’t fighting himself anymore. It made her uneasy. “Why London?” she asked. He met her gaze. “Heard you were here.” Her breath hitched. “From who?” “Eva.” Rory’s fingers went cold. *Eva.* Her oldest friend. The one who’d smuggled her onto a train with fifty quid and a burner phone. The one who’d never once asked where the bruises came from. Betrayal sat heavy in her chest. “She told you.” Evan’s voice dropped. “Not at first. But I tracked her down last year. Begged her to tell me if you were—” He stopped. Swallowed. “Alive.” The bar’s ambient noise faded, replaced by the rush of blood in her ears. “You *begged*?” His hands clenched on the table. “I wasn’t in a good place, Rory. After you left, I—” A shuddering breath. “I nearly put a bullet in my skull. Eva’s the one who talked me down. Got me into rehab.” Rory’s vision blurred. She blinked hard, refusing to let anything slip. “So this is what, a thank-you tour? Apology circuit?” “No.” He leaned forward, voice raw. “I just needed to see you. To know you were okay.” She laughed, sharp and humourless. “I’ve been *okay* for years, Evan. Didn’t need your permission.” “I know.” His voice cracked. “God, I *know*. But I—fuck, Rory, I *miss* you.” The words hung between them, toxic and sweet. She wanted to slap him. She wanted to cry. She wanted to scream that he’d lost the right to miss her the second he put his hands on her. Instead, she drained her pint and stood. Evan flinched like she’d struck him. “Wait—” “No.” Her chair scraped against the floor. “You don’t get to ambush me in my local and expect—what? Forgiveness? Absolution?” She shook her head. “I’m not that girl anymore.” His face twisted. “I *know* you’re not. That’s the point.” She turned away, but his next words stopped her cold. “I’m dying, Rory.” The bar tilted. She gripped the edge of the table. “What?” Evan didn’t look at her. Just stared at his hands, fingers trembling. “Liver’s shot. Cirrhosis. Docs give me six months, maybe a year if I’m lucky.” The air left her lungs. She sank back into her chair, the fight drained out of her. Evan finally met her eyes. “I didn’t come here to make you feel sorry for me. I just… I couldn’t go without seeing you one last time.” Silence. The kind that pressed down like a physical weight. Rory’s throat burned. “You should’ve stayed gone.” “I know.” She stood again, slower this time. “Goodbye, Evan.” He didn’t try to stop her. The rain had eased to a drizzle by the time she stepped outside. She leaned against the brick wall, breathing in the damp air, the sting of it grounding her. The door creaked open behind her. Silas stepped out, lighting a cigarette. He offered her one. She took it, hands steady. “You alright?” he asked, exhaling smoke. Rory watched the ember glow in the dark. “I will be.” Silas nodded, like that was answer enough. “He’s gone.” She didn’t ask how he knew. Some things didn’t need explaining. The neon sign buzzed overhead, casting their shadows long and thin on the pavement. Rory took a drag, the nicotine sharp in her lungs. Time didn’t heal all wounds. But it did change people. And sometimes, that was worse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"sentinel"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"glinting"
3"eyebrow"
4"footsteps"
5"tension"
6"sentinel"
7"flicked"
8"silence"
9"stomach"
10"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords12
totalWords1217
ratio0.01
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Evan."
2"her"
3"known"
4"Eva."
5"begged"
6"okay"
7"know"
8"miss"
9"know"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount936
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
London1
Rory11
Evan10
Swallowed1
Silas5
Like4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.912
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1217
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"scream that he’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean16.45
std13.5
cv0.821
sampleLengths
057
148
234
34
432
53
637
71
849
915
1013
111
129
135
1410
1516
164
1757
1811
198
2016
218
2216
2317
2413
2519
2612
2739
2816
296
307
3119
323
3314
3443
354
364
378
385
391
4034
419
4225
4316
4439
4520
4617
4715
4814
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"wasn’t fighting"
55.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences164
ratio0.03
matches
0"He glanced up, nodded once—no words needed—and slid a half-pint of bitter toward her usual spot at the far end."
1"Something about the set of his shoulders, the way his fingers drummed restlessly against the glass—"
2"And he chose that moment to shift, just slightly, enough for the light to catch the angle of his jaw, the old scar above his eyebrow—"
3"Walk out, lose herself in the rain, pretend she’d never—"
4"But his eyes—still that unnerving pale green, still too knowing—locked onto hers."
99.74% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount943
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.04029692470837752
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006362672322375398
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean7.42
std5.82
cv0.785
sampleLengths
021
117
219
313
415
520
615
79
810
94
1016
1116
121
132
145
156
1626
171
186
1918
2020
215
2215
233
2410
251
264
271
281
293
303
312
323
331
346
355
362
376
383
394
404
4130
4211
4312
4411
452
466
478
486
492
51.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3353658536585366
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Just nodded, staring into his"
2"Instead, she drained her pint"
3"Just stared at his hands,"
ratio0.036
65.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences111
matches
0"He glanced up, nodded once—no"
1"She exhaled, watching her breath"
2"She turned away, heart hammering."
3"She’d left him bleeding on"
4"She should leave."
5"His voice was different."
6"She didn’t turn."
7"She finally looked up."
8"His dark hair was longer,"
9"she asked, voice low"
10"His gaze flicked between them,"
11"She took a slow sip,"
12"He rubbed the back of"
13"He’d come to her."
14"He could damn well explain"
15"She flexed her fingers under"
16"His jaw tightened."
17"He didn’t argue."
18"He cut himself off, shook"
19"It made her uneasy."
ratio0.387
36.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences111
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory ducked under the awning,"
2"The familiar scent of aged"
3"Silas stood behind the counter,"
4"He glanced up, nodded once—no"
5"Rory peeled off her gloves,"
6"The first sip burned, sharp"
7"She exhaled, watching her breath"
8"A man sat hunched over"
9"Something about the set of"
10"She turned away, heart hammering."
11"Rory’s grip tightened around her"
12"The last time she’d seen"
13"She’d left him bleeding on"
14"That was three years ago."
15"She should leave."
16"His voice was different."
17"She didn’t turn."
18"A chair scraped."
19"The heat of him too"
ratio0.847
45.05% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"Now here he was, in"
ratio0.009
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The sharp edges of his face had softened, his once-lean frame filled out with muscle that looked earned, not the wiry tension of a man always spoiling for a fig…"
1"This man held himself like someone who’d learned the weight of his own body."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, voice low"
1"He leaned, voice raw"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.6836%