Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ600FKGRD0PWXGZ7NPYMB

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Duration:
18.4s
Cost:
$0.000610
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm, cluttered light from within. Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes widening in surprise, stood frozen in the doorway of her flat. The scent of old books and something faintly herbal wafted out, mingling with the crisp evening air. She blinked, her straight black hair catching the light as she tilted her head slightly, as if she couldn't quite believe who was standing before her. Lucien Moreau offered a small, uncertain smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—searching her face. He was dressed in his usual tailored charcoal suit, the ivory-handled cane in his hand gleaming softly. "Aurora," he said, his voice a low, velvety rumble. "Or should I say Rory? It's been a while." Aurora's grip tightened on the door handle, her small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light as she shifted her weight. "Lucien," she acknowledged, her voice cool and measured. "What are you doing here?" Lucien glanced down at his cane, tracing the intricate carvings with his thumb. "Can I come in? It's a bit chilly out here." Aurora hesitated, then stepped aside, allowing him to enter. The flat was small, cramped with books and scrolls covering every available surface. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged on the armchair, eyeing Lucien with a mixture of curiosity and disdain. Lucien stepped inside, his polished shoes clicking softly on the wooden floor. He glanced around, taking in the familiar chaos. "Still a fan of clutter, I see," he remarked, a hint of amusement in his voice. Aurora closed the door, sliding the three deadbolts into place with a series of soft clicks. "It's not clutter, it's research," she said, crossing her arms over her chest. "And what makes you think you can just show up here unannounced?" Lucien turned to face her, his expression serious. "I needed to see you, Rory. There are things we need to talk about." Aurora raised an eyebrow, her cool demeanor slipping slightly. "Things? What kind of things?" Lucien sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back platinum blond hair. "Things that were left unsaid. Things that need to be addressed." Aurora studied him for a moment, her bright blue eyes searching his face. She could see the weariness in his eyes, the tension in his shoulders. Despite herself, she felt a pang of concern. "Alright," she said finally. "But let's get one thing straight. Just because we're talking doesn't mean anything has changed." Lucien nodded, a small, grateful smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "I understand," he said softly. Aurora gestured towards the small kitchenette. "Do you want some tea?" she asked, her voice softer now. Lucien nodded, following her into the small space. He leaned against the counter, watching as she filled the kettle and set it on the stove. The familiar domestic scene was oddly comforting, a stark contrast to the tension that had filled the room moments before. As the kettle heated, Aurora turned to face him, her arms crossed over her chest. "So," she said, her voice steady. "What is it you wanted to talk about?" Lucien took a deep breath, his eyes meeting hers. "Rory, I know things ended badly between us. I know I hurt you, and I'm sorry for that. But there's something you should know. Something I should have told you a long time ago." Aurora's eyes narrowed slightly, but she didn't interrupt. She waited, her expression unreadable. Lucien continued, his voice low and steady. "I care about you, Rory. More than I should, more than I ever intended to. And when I found out about Evan, about what he was doing to you, it tore me apart. I wanted to be there for you, to protect you. But I didn't know how. I didn't know how to be what you needed." Aurora's eyes widened slightly, a flicker of emotion crossing her face. She looked away, her gaze focusing on the kettle as it began to whistle softly. Lucien reached out, his hand covering hers. His touch was warm, gentle. "Rory, look at me," he said softly. Aurora turned to face him, her eyes meeting his. She could see the sincerity in his gaze, the depth of emotion there. It was a stark contrast to the cool, collected facade he usually wore. "I'm sorry," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I'm sorry for everything. For not being there when you needed me, for not telling you how I felt. I'm sorry for the hurt I caused you." Aurora's eyes welled up with tears, but she blinked them away, her expression softening. "Lucien," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I... I don't know what to say." Lucien smiled softly, his thumb tracing circles on the back of her hand. "You don't have to say anything," he said. "Just know that I'm here now. And I'm not going anywhere." Aurora took a deep breath, her eyes searching his face. She could see the sincerity in his gaze, the depth of emotion there. It was a stark contrast to the cool, collected facade he usually wore. "I believe you," she said finally, her voice soft but steady. "But Lucien, we can't just ignore the past. We can't just pretend it didn't happen." Lucien nodded, his expression serious. "I know," he said. "And I'm not asking you to. I'm asking for a chance. A chance to make things right, to prove to you that I'm here for you, that I care about you." Aurora studied him for a moment, her expression thoughtful. She could see the sincerity in his eyes, the depth of emotion there. She knew that this was a risk, that there was no guarantee that things would work out. But she also knew that she owed it to herself, to them, to at least try. "Alright," she said finally, her voice soft but steady. "We can try. But we take things slow. We talk about everything, the good and the bad. And we don't ignore the past, we learn from it." Lucien nodded, a small, grateful smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "I agree," he said softly. "To all of it." Aurora smiled softly, her hand reaching up to cup his cheek. "Good," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Now, about that tea..." Lucien chuckled softly, his hand covering hers. "Tea sounds perfect," he said, his eyes never leaving hers. As they stood there, in the warm, cluttered kitchen, the world outside seemed to fade away. The tension that had filled the room moments before was replaced with a sense of calm, of understanding. It was a fragile beginning, a tentative step towards something new. But it was a step nonetheless, and for now, that was enough. The kettle whistled softly, breaking the silence. Aurora turned to pour the tea, her movements steady and sure. Lucien watched her, his eyes filled with a mixture of awe and admiration. He knew that this was just the beginning, that there would be challenges and obstacles ahead. But he also knew that he was ready to face them, ready to fight for this, for her. As Aurora handed him a cup of tea, their fingers brushed, a spark of electricity passing between them. She looked up at him, her eyes meeting his, and for a moment, they were the only two people in the world. The past, the future, all of it faded away, leaving only the present, only this moment. "To new beginnings," Lucien said softly, raising his cup in a toast. Aurora smiled, her eyes never leaving his. "To new beginnings," she echoed, her voice barely above a whisper. And as they stood there, in the warm, cluttered kitchen, sipping their tea, they knew that this was just the beginning. A beginning filled with promise, with hope, with the possibility of something new, something beautiful. And for now, that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
5"he said softly [softly]"
6"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.513
leniency1
rawRatio0.35
effectiveRatio0.35
28.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1328
totalAiIsmAdverbs19
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
1
adverb"softly"
count11
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count4
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1328
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count2
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"tension"
count3
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"stark"
count3
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"facade"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count4
15
word"perfect"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"weight"
2"measured"
3"tracing"
4"intricate"
5"familiar"
6"eyebrow"
7"tension"
8"pang"
9"comforting"
10"stark"
11"unreadable"
12"flicker"
13"facade"
14"whisper"
15"perfect"
16"sense of"
17"silence"
18"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"g in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1323
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount963
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Aurora18
Lucien17
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.565
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite believe who was standing before her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1323
matches(empty)
7.94% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences105
matches
0"knew that this"
1"knew that she"
2"knew that this"
3"knew that he"
4"knew that this"
85.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean34.82
std15.64
cv0.449
sampleLengths
073
150
236
323
439
536
641
722
814
922
1053
1118
1217
1345
1429
1543
1613
1764
1826
1919
2035
2137
2230
2332
2436
2526
2640
2755
2836
2922
3024
3117
3257
3365
3456
3512
3618
3742
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was dressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences105
ratio0.01
matches
0"Lucien Moreau offered a small, uncertain smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—searching her face."
77.31% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount968
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.049586776859504134
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.029958677685950414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.6
std7.17
cv0.569
sampleLengths
013
117
217
326
415
517
69
79
823
98
105
1113
1210
139
1413
1517
1612
178
1816
1916
2013
2112
228
2314
249
255
2611
2711
2813
2913
308
314
3215
3313
345
356
3611
378
3817
3920
4015
416
428
439
4434
458
465
477
4857
4911
48.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.2761904761904762
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences84
matches
0"She blinked, her straight black"
1"He was dressed in his"
2"he said, his voice a"
3"she acknowledged, her voice cool"
4"He glanced around, taking in"
5"he remarked, a hint of"
6"she said, crossing her arms"
7"She could see the weariness"
8"she said finally"
9"he said softly"
10"she asked, her voice softer"
11"He leaned against the counter,"
12"she said, her voice steady"
13"She waited, her expression unreadable."
14"She looked away, her gaze"
15"His touch was warm, gentle."
16"he said softly"
17"She could see the sincerity"
18"It was a stark contrast"
19"he said, his voice barely"
ratio0.405
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences84
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora Carter, her bright blue"
2"The scent of old books"
3"She blinked, her straight black"
4"Lucien Moreau offered a small,"
5"He was dressed in his"
6"he said, his voice a"
7"Aurora's grip tightened on the"
8"she acknowledged, her voice cool"
9"Lucien glanced down at his"
10"Aurora hesitated, then stepped aside,"
11"The flat was small, cramped"
12"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged"
13"Lucien stepped inside, his polished"
14"He glanced around, taking in"
15"he remarked, a hint of"
16"Aurora closed the door, sliding"
17"she said, crossing her arms"
18"Lucien turned to face her,"
19"Aurora raised an eyebrow, her"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She blinked, her straight black hair catching the light as she tilted her head slightly, as if she couldn't quite believe who was standing before her."
1"The familiar domestic scene was oddly comforting, a stark contrast to the tension that had filled the room moments before."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"he said, his voice a low, velvety rumble"
1"she acknowledged, her voice cool and measured"
2"he remarked, a hint of amusement in his voice"
3"she asked, her voice softer now"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
6"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"she said finally, her voice soft but steady"
8"she said finally, her voice soft but steady"
9"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
10"she echoed, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she acknowledged (acknowledge)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.051
67.8546%