Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ6MAVFE2Z51N2G5MX0RZ6

Run Details

Duration:
21.1s
Cost:
$0.002116
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clink of glasses, the occasional burst of laughter that rose and fell like a tide. Rory wiped her hands on her apron, balancing a tray of empty pint glasses against her hip as she weaved through the crowd. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow over the bar, turning the faces of the patrons into shifting masks of light and shadow. She hadn’t expected the night to be busy. Not on a Tuesday. But the Nest was never empty, not really. Silas had a way of drawing people in—lost souls, old spies, drifters with stories too heavy to carry alone. Rory slid the tray onto the bar and turned to grab a fresh cloth when she saw him. He was sitting in the corner booth, the one with the cracked leather and the view of the door. The light caught the silver in his hair, the sharp angle of his jaw. His fingers tapped against the rim of a half-empty glass, the signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light like a warning. Her breath hitched. Evan. But no—it couldn’t be. Evan was back in Cardiff, or at least that’s what she’d told herself for the past three years. Evan didn’t drink whiskey neat. Evan didn’t sit still. Evan didn’t have that scar above his eyebrow, the one that pulled at the corner of his mouth when he smiled. The man in the booth looked up. Their eyes locked. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She should have turned away. She should have ducked into the kitchen, told Silas she was sick, anything but stand there like a deer in headlights. But she didn’t move. Couldn’t. He stood. The years had carved lines into his face she didn’t recognize. His shoulders were broader, his posture straighter, like he’d spent the time since she’d last seen him carrying something heavier than regret. He walked toward her, slow, deliberate, and Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the bar until her knuckles ached. “Rory.” His voice was deeper. Rougher. The way he said her name—like he’d been practicing it in the dark. She swallowed. “You’re not supposed to be here.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Neither are you.” The air between them thickened, charged with everything they weren’t saying. The last time she’d seen him, he’d had her pinned against a wall, his breath hot on her neck, his voice a snarl. *You’re not leaving me.* She’d believed him then. She’d believed a lot of things. She forced herself to breathe. “What do you want?” He tilted his head, studying her like she was a puzzle he’d been trying to solve. “To talk.” “About what?” “About why you ran.” The words hung between them, sharp and unyielding. Rory’s chest tightened. She could feel Silas watching from the other end of the bar, his hazel eyes sharp, assessing. She didn’t need his protection—not anymore—but the weight of his presence steadied her. “I didn’t run,” she said, lifting her chin. “I left.” Evan exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if it hadn’t been so bitter. “Semantics.” “It’s not semantics if it’s the truth.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell the whiskey on his breath, the faint scent of soap beneath it. “You changed your name. You moved cities. You didn’t even say goodbye.” Rory’s fingers curled into fists. “You think I owed you that?” “You owed me the truth.” “The truth?” Her voice cracked. “The truth is I was scared. The truth is I woke up every morning wondering if that was the day you’d finally—” She cut herself off, shaking her head. “I didn’t run. I survived.” Evan’s jaw tightened. For a second, she thought he might reach for her. Instead, his hands flexed at his sides, like he was fighting the urge to grab something that wasn’t his to take. “You think I don’t know that? You think I don’t wake up every damn day wishing I could take it all back?” Rory’s throat burned. She wanted to believe him. God, she wanted to. But the past wasn’t something you could rewrite, no matter how much you begged for a second chance. “It’s too late for that,” she said quietly. Evan’s gaze flicked over her shoulder, toward the door, like he was considering walking out. Then he met her eyes again, and the raw, unfiltered pain in them made her stomach twist. “Is it?” The question hung between them, heavy and unanswered. Rory didn’t know. She didn’t know anything anymore. She turned away first, her hands trembling as she reached for the tray of glasses. “I have to get back to work.” Evan didn’t stop her. He didn’t say another word. He just stood there, watching, as she walked away.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:28:01.003Z" 2/20/2026, 2:28:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.095
93.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"pulse"
2"charged"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"flicked"
6"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords815
ratio0.005
matches
0"You’re not leaving me."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount692
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Tuesday1
Cardiff1
Silas3
Rory8
Evan9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.85
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount815
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"have that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean22.03
std19.44
cv0.883
sampleLengths
074
139
218
357
43
51
652
77
83
937
102
1153
121
1318
148
1511
1648
179
1818
192
204
2141
2210
2320
247
2533
2611
275
2839
2956
3030
318
3234
338
348
3522
3618
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs124
matches
0"was sitting"
1"weren’t saying"
2"was fighting"
3"was considering"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences84
ratio0.048
matches
0"Silas had a way of drawing people in—lost souls, old spies, drifters with stories too heavy to carry alone."
1"But no—it couldn’t be."
2"The way he said her name—like he’d been practicing it in the dark."
3"She didn’t need his protection—not anymore—but the weight of his presence steadied her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount697
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.028694404591104734
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00430416068866571
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean9.7
std7.5
cv0.773
sampleLengths
026
123
225
38
44
58
619
718
819
914
1024
113
121
134
1418
155
164
1721
187
193
206
215
2221
234
241
252
2611
2722
2820
291
304
311
3213
332
346
358
363
3711
3823
398
406
415
424
4316
442
452
464
478
483
4917
38.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32142857142857145
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Instead, his hands flexed at"
1"Then he met her eyes"
ratio0.032
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences62
matches
0"She hadn’t expected the night"
1"He was sitting in the"
2"His fingers tapped against the"
3"Her breath hitched."
4"Their eyes locked."
5"She should have turned away."
6"She should have ducked into"
7"His shoulders were broader, his"
8"He walked toward her, slow,"
9"His voice was deeper."
10"*You’re not leaving me.* She’d"
11"She’d believed a lot of"
12"She forced herself to breathe."
13"He tilted his head, studying"
14"She could feel Silas watching"
15"She didn’t need his protection—not"
16"she said, lifting her chin"
17"He stepped closer, close enough"
18"Her voice cracked"
19"She cut herself off, shaking"
ratio0.419
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences62
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"The green neon sign outside"
3"She hadn’t expected the night"
4"Silas had a way of"
5"Rory slid the tray onto"
6"He was sitting in the"
7"The light caught the silver"
8"His fingers tapped against the"
9"Her breath hitched."
10"Evan was back in Cardiff,"
11"Evan didn’t drink whiskey neat."
12"Evan didn’t sit still."
13"Evan didn’t have that scar"
14"The man in the booth"
15"Their eyes locked."
16"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
17"She should have turned away."
18"She should have ducked into"
19"The years had carved lines"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He tilted his head, studying her like she was a puzzle he’d been trying to solve."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.8742%