| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 852 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 852 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "wavered" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "glinting" | | 12 | "looming" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 15 | | markdownWords | 32 | | totalWords | 844 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "off" | | 1 | "Richmond Park’s full of foxes. Deer. Probably just a badger." | | 2 | "In and out. Five minutes." | | 3 | "no, leaves" | | 4 | "above" | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "smooth" | | 7 | "shiny" | | 8 | "hands" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "smoothness" | | 11 | "too long, too many" | | 12 | "squished" | | 13 | "faces" | | 14 | "pain" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 833 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.84 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared ahead their ancient oak surfaces grey in the moonlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 844 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 21.1 | | std | 20.54 | | cv | 0.973 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.097 | | matches | | 0 | "Not rotten, not sour—just *off*, like the scent of rain on hot pavement when the sky stayed stubbornly clear." | | 1 | "The clearing should’ve been just ahead—the one with the split oak, its heartwood blackened by old lightning." | | 2 | "This time, a whisper of fabric—*no, leaves*—but the wind hadn’t stirred." | | 3 | "Then—a laugh." | | 4 | "The figure was *wrong*—too many limbs, too many joints, moving in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 5 | "A hand—no, *hands*, too many fingers—reached for her." | | 6 | "The beam spun wild circles, illuminating snatches of the grove: the split oak, its hollow gaping black; the wildflowers, their petals now *glistening*; the thing in front of her, its mouth stretching too wide, too many teeth glinting in the dark." | | 7 | "The grove had changed—paths she knew by heart now looped back on themselves, trees she didn’t recognise looming out of the dark." | | 8 | "Her hand lifted, fingers—*too long, too many*—beckoning." | | 9 | "The stones loomed closer, their carvings—*faces*, she realised, faces she hadn’t noticed before—twisting in the dark." | | 10 | "She lunged between them, expecting resistance, expecting *pain*—" |
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| 97.54% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 841 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04280618311533888 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0023781212841854932 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 7.47 | | std | 5.96 | | cv | 0.798 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 44.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3274336283185841 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the skeletal fingers of" | | 1 | "Probably just a badger.* But" | | 2 | "Too tall for a deer." | | 3 | "Just knots of wood, a" | | 4 | "Just stood there, between the" | | 5 | "Just *smoothness*, like a mask" |
| | ratio | 0.069 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "Its usual faint warmth had" | | 2 | "She’d been here before, in" | | 3 | "Her torch flickered." | | 4 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 5 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 6 | "She moved forward, boots sinking" | | 7 | "Her voice came out thinner" | | 8 | "She lowered the beam, heart" | | 9 | "It stepped forward, and the" | | 10 | "Her heel caught a root," | | 11 | "She scrambled up, fingers closing" | | 12 | "It burned now, hot as" | | 13 | "Its limbs twisted, knotted together" | | 14 | "Her lungs burned." | | 15 | "Her face was a smooth" | | 16 | "Her hand lifted, fingers—*too long," | | 17 | "She bolted, crashing through the" | | 18 | "Her boot connected with something" | | 19 | "She didn’t look back." |
| | ratio | 0.287 | |
| 51.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "Its usual faint warmth had" | | 3 | "The trees loomed too close," | | 4 | "She’d been here before, in" | | 5 | "Her torch flickered." | | 6 | "The beam wavered, then steadied," | | 7 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 8 | "A twig snapped." | | 9 | "Rory turned, light sweeping the" | | 10 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 11 | "*Richmond Park’s full of foxes." | | 12 | "She moved forward, boots sinking" | | 13 | "The clearing should’ve been just" | | 14 | "Isolde had left the package" | | 15 | "This time, a whisper of" | | 16 | "Rory swung the torch left." | | 17 | "The beam caught a flash" | | 18 | "Her voice came out thinner" | | 19 | "The pendant’s warmth seeped into" |
| | ratio | 0.816 | |
| 57.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the petals lay flat," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure was *wrong*—too many limbs, too many joints, moving in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 1 | "It stepped forward, and the torchlight slid over skin that wasn’t skin, but something *smooth*, something *shiny*, like oil on water." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "itself speaking (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |