| 37.84% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said sharply [sharply]" | | 1 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "Isolde turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.811 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.162 | |
| 74.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1564 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "lazily" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "utterly" | | 6 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1564 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "effortless" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "glistening" | | 14 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 159 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 43 | | markdownWords | 74 | | totalWords | 1544 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "reacted" | | 1 | "human" | | 2 | "\"This place is older than memory,\"" | | 3 | "\"And it does not like us.\"" | | 4 | "dislike" | | 5 | "remembers" | | 6 | "\"Fae.\"" | | 7 | "tell" | | 8 | "felt" | | 9 | "warped" | | 10 | "ancient" | | 11 | "\"Do you hear that?\"" | | 12 | "drip" | | 13 | "wrong" | | 14 | "\"That’s not for us.\"" | | 15 | "is" | | 16 | "very" | | 17 | "\"You think *this" | | 18 | "\"Wait until you see the heart of it.\"" | | 19 | "memory" | | 20 | "Of this." | | 21 | "shifted" | | 22 | "twisted" | | 23 | "voice" | | 24 | "here" | | 25 | "\"Some memories are *hungry" | | 26 | "hot" | | 27 | "alive" | | 28 | "pillar" | | 29 | "things" | | 30 | "moved" | | 31 | "hands" | | 32 | "shadow" | | 33 | "older" | | 34 | "drink" | | 35 | "\"Oh,\"" | | 36 | "\"Oh, no.\"" | | 37 | "what" | | 38 | "her" | | 39 | "shape" | | 40 | "Rory" | | 41 | "Help me." | | 42 | "stirred" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1357 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Fae | 7 | | Isolde | 16 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 23 | | Music | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Grove | 4 | | Rory-sized | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.653 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when she looked too long" | | 1 | "as if resonating with the air itself" | | 2 | "looked like eyes—dozens of them, blinking" | | 3 | "something like joy" | | 4 | "as if trying to escape" | | 5 | "darkness that seemed to drink* the light around it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.648 | | wordCount | 1544 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a sound, exactly, but a vibration in her bones, like the deep thrum of a bass note" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 27.57 | | std | 23.85 | | cv | 0.865 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 98 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 76 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 60 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 59 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 49 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 46 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | |
| 10.30% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 246 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "weren’t moving" | | 2 | "was falling" | | 3 | "was standing" | | 4 | "was dancing" | | 5 | "was watching" | | 6 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 159 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent was thick, cloying—like overripe fruit left to ferment in the sun, undercut with something darker, earthier." | | 1 | "Their shadowy form rippled, stretching taller for a heartbeat before contracting into something more solid, more *human*—or at least, human-adjacent." | | 2 | "\"It simply *remembers*.\" She gestured to the path beneath their feet—or what passed for a path." | | 3 | "The trees here weren’t just old—they were *ancient*, their trunks wide as houses, their bark etched with runes that burned with a faint inner light." | | 4 | "Once, she swore she saw a face in the knots of the wood—a woman’s visage, lips parted as if about to speak." | | 5 | "Then—" | | 6 | "The tune didn’t follow any scale she knew; it bent and twisted, pulling at something deep in her chest." | | 7 | "The flowers here were larger, their petals unfolding to reveal centers that looked like eyes—dozens of them, blinking lazily in the golden light." | | 8 | "Instead, she reached out and plucked a flower Rory hadn’t noticed before—a small, bell-shaped thing with petals like stained glass." | | 9 | "The air smelled of rain and ozone, and the sky—visible through the canopy—was a stormy gray, lit by flashes of something that wasn’t lightning." | | 10 | "One turned, and Rory’s breath caught—" | | 11 | "A sound like thunder rolled through the Grove, but it wasn’t thunder—it was a *voice*, deep and resonant, speaking words Rory couldn’t understand." | | 12 | "The path—if it could be called that—sloped downward, the moss giving way to smooth stone slick with moisture." | | 13 | "In the center stood a tree—no, not a tree." | | 14 | "Some had faces—tiny, half-formed things that twisted in silent agony." | | 15 | "It didn’t have a shape, not really—just a shifting, roiling darkness that seemed to *drink* the light around it." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1377 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, bell-shaped thing" | | 1 | "smooth, obsidian-black, its" | | 2 | "tiny, half-formed things" | | 3 | "small, Rory-sized figure" |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.0392156862745098 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011619462599854757 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 159 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 159 | | mean | 9.71 | | std | 6.92 | | cv | 0.713 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 54.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3710691823899371 | | totalSentences | 159 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 81.97% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Once, she swore she saw" | | 1 | "Instead, she reached out and" | | 2 | "Then the vision *twisted*." |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "She flexed her fingers, the" | | 1 | "Their shadowy form rippled, stretching" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes flickered like" | | 3 | "they murmured, their voice the" | | 4 | "she said, her silver hair" | | 5 | "She gestured to the path" | | 6 | "It had been pulsing since" | | 7 | "She didn’t like it." | | 8 | "Their form flickered at the" | | 9 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 10 | "It set her teeth on" | | 11 | "It was beautiful." | | 12 | "It was *wrong*." | | 13 | "She stepped over a root" | | 14 | "She forced her attention back" | | 15 | "She sidestepped one, and it" | | 16 | "They gestured to a cluster" | | 17 | "She held it out." | | 18 | "She was standing in the" | | 19 | "She was dancing with a" |
| | ratio | 0.23 | |
| 50.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "Rory exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 2 | "The scent was thick, cloying—like" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed behind" | | 4 | "She flexed her fingers, the" | | 5 | "Nyx didn’t breathe, but they" | | 6 | "Their shadowy form rippled, stretching" | | 7 | "Their violet eyes flickered like" | | 8 | "they murmured, their voice the" | | 9 | "Isolde, already three steps ahead," | | 10 | "she said, her silver hair" | | 11 | "She gestured to the path" | | 12 | "The ground was spongy, covered" | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors:" | | 14 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 15 | "It had been pulsing since" | | 16 | "She didn’t like it." | | 17 | "Isolde’s laugh was a chime," | | 18 | "Nyx made a sound that" | | 19 | "Their form flickered at the" |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 10.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed behind them, their gnarled oak surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to shift when she looked too long." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors: blues that hurt to look at, reds that pulsed like a heartbeat, whites that glowed faintly in the dim." | | 2 | "The trees here weren’t just old—they were *ancient*, their trunks wide as houses, their bark etched with runes that burned with a faint inner light." | | 3 | "At first, there was nothing but the hum, the rustle of leaves that weren’t moving, the distant *drip* of water from somewhere unseen." | | 4 | "Isolde, who had been walking ahead with her hands clasped behind her back, glanced over her shoulder." | | 5 | "The flowers here were larger, their petals unfolding to reveal centers that looked like eyes—dozens of them, blinking lazily in the golden light." | | 6 | "The air smelled of rain and ozone, and the sky—visible through the canopy—was a stormy gray, lit by flashes of something that wasn’t lightning." | | 7 | "Around them, others feasted at a long table laden with food that glowed faintly, steam rising in impossible colors." | | 8 | "Some had faces—tiny, half-formed things that twisted in silent agony." | | 9 | "Others had *hands*, small and delicate, pressing against the inside of their skins as if trying to escape." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice the sound of wind through dead leaves" | | 1 | "Their form flickered, shadows peeling away like smoke before reforming" | | 2 | "she said, her voice eerily calm" |
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| 41.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde pressed (press)" | | 3 | "they breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.216 | | leniency | 0.432 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.216 | |