Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ99Z2PKMH6835ZWPBR7J3

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.004836
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. A chain rattled. Then the door swung open just wide enough for Eva’s sleep-tousled face to appear in the gap, one eye squinting against the hallway light, the other still half-shut. She blinked, took in the figure standing there, and froze. Aurora didn’t wait for an invitation. She shouldered past, the scent of rain and exhaust clinging to her jacket, and let the door slam behind her. The flat was exactly as she remembered—stacks of books teetering like drunkards, yellowed scrolls pinned to the walls with knife-hilt tacks, the air thick with the smell of old paper and Eva’s jasmine incense. Ptolemy, the tabby, uncurled from his perch on the windowsill and stretched, tail flicking in lazy judgement. Eva exhaled through her nose, a sound somewhere between a laugh and a groan. “Well. This is a surprise.” Aurora didn’t turn around. She tossed her keys onto the counter, where they skidded into a pile of loose tea leaves. “Yeah. Bet it is.” Silence. The kind that hummed, heavy with everything neither of them was saying. Eva finally shut the door and leaned against it, arms crossed over her rumpled pyjama top. The fabric was thin, nearly transparent where the light hit it, and Aurora’s fingers twitched before she forced her hands into her pockets. “You look like hell,” Eva said. Aurora shot her a look. “Thanks.” “No, I mean—” Eva gestured vaguely at her face. “You’ve got… *something* under your eyes. And your hair’s a mess.” Aurora touched her wrist, fingers brushing the crescent scar before she caught herself. “Been a long night.” “Uh-huh.” Eva pushed off the door and padded barefoot toward the kettle. “Tea?” “No.” “Right. Because you’re here to yell at me.” The kettle hissed to life. Aurora watched Eva’s back—the way her shoulders moved, the dip of her spine beneath the thin cotton. Three years, and she still knew the exact spot just below her left shoulder blade that would make her shiver if touched. “Why’d you leave?” Eva’s voice was too casual, like she was asking about the weather. Aurora’s laugh was sharp. “You *know* why.” “Do I?” The kettle clicked off. Eva didn’t turn around. “Last I heard, you were packing a bag. Next thing I know, you’re gone. No note. No call. Just—poof. Like a fucking magic trick.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. “I *told* you. I couldn’t stay.” “Bullshit.” Eva finally faced her, hands gripping the counter. “You could’ve stayed. You *chose* not to.” The words hung there, raw and ugly. Aurora looked away, her gaze snagging on the spine of a book—*Demonology and the Infernal Courts*—half-buried under a stack of takeaway menus. Luc’s handwriting scrawled in the margins. She’d recognise that slanted, precise script anywhere. “You’re still working with him, then.” Eva followed her gaze. “Lucien? Yeah. Why?” “No reason.” “Liar.” Eva stepped closer, close enough that Aurora could see the dark smudge of ink on her collarbone, the faint scar above her eyebrow from the bar fight in Brighton. “You’re not here to ask about Luc. So what *is* this?” Aurora swallowed. The flat suddenly felt too small, the air too thick. She could hear her own pulse in her ears. “Evan’s out.” Eva went still. “What?” “Prison. Early release. Good behaviour.” Aurora’s laugh was hollow. “Guess he fooled the parole board.” Eva’s face darkened. “When?” “Three days ago.” A beat. Then Eva was moving, shoving past her to yank open the drawer by the door. She pulled out a knife—short, wickedly curved—and pressed it into Aurora’s hand. “Here.” Aurora stared at the blade. “What the hell am I supposed to do with this?” “Stab him if he comes near you.” “I’m not stabbing anyone.” “Then what’s your plan, Rory? Huh?” Eva’s voice rose, sharp with something that wasn’t quite anger. “You just gonna *hope* he doesn’t find you? Hope he’s *changed*?” Aurora’s grip tightened around the knife. “I handled it before.” “Barely!” Eva’s hands clenched into fists. “You were a *wreck*. You think I didn’t see the bruises? The way you jumped every time someone raised their voice?” Aurora flinched. “I’m not that person anymore.” “No?” Eva’s eyes burned. “Then who the *fuck* are you? Because the Rory I knew wouldn’t have run. She wouldn’t have *left*.” The words hit like a slap. Aurora’s chest ached. “I had to.” “Why?” “*Because I couldn’t breathe here!*” The admission tore out of her, raw and ugly. Aurora’s voice cracked. “Everywhere I looked, there you were. And I—” She stopped, pressed her lips together. Eva’s breath hitched. The space between them was a live wire. “You *what*?” Eva’s voice was barely a whisper. Aurora’s throat worked. The knife felt too heavy in her hand. She set it down on the counter with a clink. “I couldn’t do it anymore. Pretend it was just friendship. Pretend I didn’t—” She broke off, shook her head. “It was easier to leave.” Eva’s face went pale. Then, slow, like she was afraid Aurora would bolt, she reached out and touched her wrist. Just above the scar. Just where she used to. Aurora’s breath stuttered. “Three years,” Eva said, voice rough. “Three *years*, and you show up now because *he’s* back?” Aurora didn’t answer. Couldn’t. Eva’s fingers slid up, traced the line of her pulse. “You’re shaking.” “I’m fine.” “You’re a terrible liar.” Eva’s thumb brushed her skin, back and forth, back and forth. The touch was maddening. “Stay.” Aurora’s laugh was bitter. “That’s rich.” “Stay,” Eva repeated, voice firmer. “Not because of *him*. Because of *me*.” The air between them was electric. Aurora’s gaze dropped to Eva’s mouth, the way her lower lip was caught between her teeth. She remembered how it felt to kiss her—like drowning and flying at the same time. “Why?” Aurora whispered. Eva’s hand cupped her cheek. “Because I was an idiot. Because I *missed* you.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She should step back. Should leave. But Eva’s thumb was tracing her cheekbone now, and her skin was on fire, and— “Eva—” “Shut up.” Eva’s other hand found her hip, pulled her close. “For once in your life, *shut up*.” And then her mouth was on Aurora’s, hot and desperate, and Aurora *melted*. Three years of missing this, of dreaming about it, and here it was—Eva’s hands in her hair, Eva’s body pressed against hers, Eva’s teeth nipping her lower lip just the way she liked. Aurora gasped, and Eva deepened the kiss, her tongue sweeping in, tasting of sleep and something sweet—chocolate, maybe, from the half-eaten bar on the nightstand. Aurora’s hands found Eva’s waist, gripped the fabric of her pyjama top, and for a second, she let herself *have* this. Let herself pretend the last three years hadn’t happened. Then she pulled back. Eva’s eyes were dark, her lips swollen. “What?” Aurora’s chest heaved. “We can’t just—” “*Yes*, we can.” Eva’s hands tightened on her hips. “We *should*.” Aurora shook her head, even as her body screamed at her to stop talking, to *stay*. “It’s not that simple.” “Why not?” “*Because!*” Aurora stepped back, putting space between them. Her skin felt too tight. “Because last time we did this, I ended up leaving. Because *you* let me.” Eva flinched. “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it?” Aurora’s voice was raw. “You *knew* how I felt. You knew, and you *didn’t say anything*.” Eva’s jaw set. “I was scared.” Aurora laughed, sharp and humourless. “Scared? *You*? Eva, you face down demons for a living.” “This was different.” Eva’s voice dropped. “You were different.” The admission hung between them, heavy and fragile. Aurora looked away, her gaze landing on the knife still sitting on the counter. The blade glinted in the dim light. “What do you want from me?” she asked quietly. Eva didn’t answer for a long moment. Then, softer: “Everything.” Aurora’s breath caught. Eva reached for her again, slower this time. “Stay. Let me—” She stopped, swallowed. “Let me keep you safe. Not just from *him*. From… whatever’s got you running still.” Aurora’s throat ached. She wanted to. God, she *wanted* to. But the flat was too small, the memories too loud. And if she stayed, she’d have to admit that she’d never really left. She stepped back. “I can’t.” Eva’s hands dropped. “Rory—” “I *can’t*.” Aurora’s voice broke. She turned, grabbed her keys, and was at the door before Eva could stop her. “Aurora, *wait*—” The door slammed behind her. The lock clicked. And just like that, she was back in the hallway, gasping like she’d run a mile, her lips still burning from Eva’s kiss. Ptolemy yowled from the other side of the door, indignant. Aurora pressed her forehead against the wood and closed her eyes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Aurora stepped back [back]"
2"she asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.247
leniency0.494
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.071
89.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"wickedly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"wickedly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"eyebrow"
2"pulse"
3"whisper"
4"traced"
5"electric"
6"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences125
matches
0"was afraid"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans33
markdownWords44
totalWords1447
ratio0.03
matches
0"something"
1"know"
2"told"
3"chose"
4"Demonology and the Infernal Courts"
5"is"
6"hope"
7"changed"
8"wreck"
9"fuck"
10"left"
11"Because I couldn’t breathe here!"
12"what"
13"years"
14"he’s"
15"him"
16"me"
17"missed"
18"shut up"
19"melted"
20"have"
21"Yes"
22"should"
23"stay"
24"Because!"
25"you"
26"knew"
27"didn’t say anything"
28"You"
29"him"
30"wanted"
31"can’t"
32"wait"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions87
wordCount1042
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity4.32
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva45
Aurora40
Infernal1
Brighton1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Brighton"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite anger"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1447
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences182
matches
0"admit that she’d"
1"like that, she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean16.44
std14.32
cv0.871
sampleLengths
045
177
219
325
452
56
66
720
817
913
101
118
1244
1315
147
1534
169
1716
1842
196
207
212
2241
2321
242
254
2615
274
283
2930
3015
317
324
3327
3410
3527
367
3722
3812
391
4031
4111
428
4321
4424
4529
463
4716
484
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"was caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was saying"
1"was asking"
2"was tracing"
17.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences182
ratio0.044
matches
0"The flat was exactly as she remembered—stacks of books teetering like drunkards, yellowed scrolls pinned to the walls with knife-hilt tacks, the air thick with the smell of old paper and Eva’s jasmine incense."
1"Aurora watched Eva’s back—the way her shoulders moved, the dip of her spine beneath the thin cotton."
2"Aurora looked away, her gaze snagging on the spine of a book—*Demonology and the Infernal Courts*—half-buried under a stack of takeaway menus."
3"She pulled out a knife—short, wickedly curved—and pressed it into Aurora’s hand."
4"She remembered how it felt to kiss her—like drowning and flying at the same time."
5"But Eva’s thumb was tracing her cheekbone now, and her skin was on fire, and—"
6"Three years of missing this, of dreaming about it, and here it was—Eva’s hands in her hair, Eva’s body pressed against hers, Eva’s teeth nipping her lower lip just the way she liked."
7"Aurora gasped, and Eva deepened the kiss, her tongue sweeping in, tasting of sleep and something sweet—chocolate, maybe, from the half-eaten bar on the nightstand."
90.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1052
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.05038022813688213
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011406844106463879
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean7.95
std6.6
cv0.83
sampleLengths
04
13
228
310
46
520
634
717
814
95
104
1117
124
131
1412
1516
1623
176
185
191
209
2111
2213
234
2412
251
261
278
285
2917
3022
3115
324
333
346
354
3624
373
386
399
407
417
4222
436
447
456
464
473
482
4930
49.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences115
matches
0"Then the door swung open"
1"Then Eva was moving, shoving"
2"Then, slow, like she was"
3"Just above the scar."
4"Just where she used to."
5"Then she pulled back."
ratio0.052
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences115
matches
0"She blinked, took in the"
1"She shouldered past, the scent"
2"She tossed her keys onto"
3"She’d recognise that slanted, precise"
4"She could hear her own"
5"She pulled out a knife—short,"
6"She stopped, pressed her lips"
7"She set it down on"
8"She broke off, shook her"
9"She remembered how it felt"
10"She should step back."
11"Her skin felt too tight."
12"she asked quietly"
13"She stopped, swallowed"
14"She wanted to."
15"She stepped back."
16"She turned, grabbed her keys,"
ratio0.148
20.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences115
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"A chain rattled."
2"She blinked, took in the"
3"Aurora didn’t wait for an"
4"She shouldered past, the scent"
5"The flat was exactly as"
6"Ptolemy, the tabby, uncurled from"
7"Eva exhaled through her nose,"
8"Aurora didn’t turn around."
9"She tossed her keys onto"
10"The kind that hummed, heavy"
11"Eva finally shut the door"
12"The fabric was thin, nearly"
13"Aurora shot her a look."
14"Eva gestured vaguely at her"
15"Aurora touched her wrist, fingers"
16"Eva pushed off the door"
17"The kettle hissed to life."
18"Aurora watched Eva’s back—the way"
19"Eva’s voice was too casual,"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Three years of missing this, of dreaming about it, and here it was—Eva’s hands in her hair, Eva’s body pressed against hers, Eva’s teeth nipping her lower lip j…"
1"Aurora looked away, her gaze landing on the knife still sitting on the counter."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said, voice rough"
1"Eva repeated, voice firmer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva repeated (repeat)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.047
83.9266%