Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ9JX9VBB1W4HRVYAF072B

Run Details

Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.002243
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the London streets into a slick, shimmering maze. Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she rounded the corner, her breath sharp in the cold air. The neon glow of a pub sign—*The Raven’s Nest*—flickered ahead, its green light bleeding into the wet pavement. She didn’t slow. The suspect had ducked into the alley beside it, his dark coat flapping like a crow’s wing as he vanished into the shadows. Her fingers twitched near her holster. The radio at her shoulder crackled, but she ignored it. Backup would take too long. She’d lost him once already tonight—wouldn’t happen again. The alley reeked of stale beer and wet stone. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat as she pressed against the wall, edging forward. A dumpster loomed ahead, its lid half-open. She kicked it shut. The clang echoed, but no movement. No sound except the drumming rain. Then—a scuffle. A boot scraping concrete. She spun. The suspect stood at the alley’s end, silhouetted against the dim glow of the street beyond. He didn’t run. Just watched her, his face unreadable in the dark. Quinn’s jaw tightened. "Metropolitan Police. Hands where I can see them." A beat. Then he bolted. She cursed, sprinting after him. The alley spilled into a narrow side street, the pavement slick underfoot. He was fast—faster than she expected—but she closed the gap, her lungs burning. Ahead, the suspect veered left, disappearing down a set of stairs leading underground. Quinn skidded to a halt at the top. The stairs descended into darkness, the air rising from below thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic, like old coins. A sign hung crookedly above the entrance: *Camden Tube Station—Closed for Repairs.* She hesitated. This wasn’t right. The station had been abandoned for years. A shout echoed from below. The suspect. Quinn exhaled, sharp and controlled. She adjusted her grip on her torch, thumbing it on. The beam cut through the dark, illuminating graffiti-scarred walls and a tunnel stretching into blackness. No trains. No tracks. Just a yawning void. She stepped down. The air grew heavier with each step, the silence pressing in like a fist. The torchlight flickered over peeling posters and rusted turnstiles. Then—voices. Low, murmuring. The clink of glass. Quinn killed the light. Ahead, a faint glow pulsed in the dark. She moved toward it, her boots silent on the damp concrete. The tunnel opened into a cavernous space, the ceiling lost in shadow. Stalls lined the walls, their wares hidden under tarps and flickering lanterns. Figures moved between them—some human, some not. A woman with too many fingers bartered over a jar of swirling smoke. A man in a long coat examined a set of teeth strung on a necklace. The Veil Market. Quinn’s stomach twisted. She’d heard whispers of this place—had dismissed them as urban legends. But here it was, real as the rain still dripping from her coat. The suspect was nowhere in sight. She edged forward, keeping to the shadows. A stall to her left displayed vials of liquid that glowed like embers. The vendor, a gaunt man with hollow eyes, watched her pass. "Looking for something, love?" Quinn ignored him. Her gaze flicked over the crowd, searching. Then—movement. A flash of dark fabric near the far wall. The suspect. She pushed through the throng, dodging a cart piled with what looked like animal bones. The air hummed with energy, raising the hairs on her arms. A child—no, not a child, something with too-large eyes—grabbed at her sleeve. "You don’t belong here." Quinn shook it off. The suspect was slipping through a narrow archway, into another tunnel. She followed, her pulse roaring in her ears. The tunnel sloped downward, the walls slick with moisture. The voices faded behind her. The air grew colder. Then—light. A single lantern hung from the ceiling, casting long shadows. The suspect stood beneath it, his back to her. Quinn drew her baton. "Turn around." He did. Slowly. His face was younger than she expected—early twenties, maybe. Dark eyes, sharp cheekbones. A scar ran along his jaw. "You’re not here for me," he said. Quinn’s grip tightened. "Hands. Now." He lifted them, palms out. "You don’t understand what you’re walking into." "Try me." A pause. Then—footsteps. Not his. Coming from the tunnel behind her. Quinn turned. Three figures emerged from the dark. Tall. Too tall. Their faces were wrong—stretched, like melted wax. One grinned, revealing rows of needle-thin teeth. The suspect exhaled. "Told you." Quinn’s breath hitched. She’d faced gangsters, killers, men with guns. But this—this was different. The lead figure tilted its head. "Detective Quinn. We’ve been expecting you." Her blood turned to ice. The suspect stepped forward. "Run. Now." She didn’t need to be told twice.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"roaring"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"loomed"
3"echoed"
4"unreadable"
5"silence"
6"pulsed"
7"stomach"
8"flicked"
9"roaring"
10"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords797
ratio0.01
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Camden Tube Station—Closed for Repairs."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount753
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Raven1
Tube1
Station1
Closed1
Veil1
Market1
Quinn13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Station"
2"Quinn"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.637
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like animal bones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount797
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean20.44
std18.98
cv0.929
sampleLengths
076
129
246
36
430
511
65
743
844
912
107
1138
123
1330
144
1578
163
1727
186
1935
2022
2142
2223
2338
246
2522
267
275
2812
292
3011
312
3223
335
3414
3512
365
376
387
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"been abandoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was slipping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences118
ratio0.136
matches
0"The neon glow of a pub sign—*The Raven’s Nest*—flickered ahead, its green light bleeding into the wet pavement."
1"She’d lost him once already tonight—wouldn’t happen again."
2"Then—a scuffle."
3"He was fast—faster than she expected—but she closed the gap, her lungs burning."
4"The stairs descended into darkness, the air rising from below thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic, like old coins."
5"A sign hung crookedly above the entrance: *Camden Tube Station—Closed for Repairs.*"
6"Then—voices."
7"Figures moved between them—some human, some not."
8"She’d heard whispers of this place—had dismissed them as urban legends."
9"Then—movement."
10"A child—no, not a child, something with too-large eyes—grabbed at her sleeve."
11"Then—light."
12"His face was younger than she expected—early twenties, maybe."
13"Then—footsteps."
14"Their faces were wrong—stretched, like melted wax."
15"But this—this was different."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount774
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"illuminating graffiti-scarred walls"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03488372093023256
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003875968992248062
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean6.75
std4.76
cv0.705
sampleLengths
015
117
218
33
423
56
610
75
88
99
1014
117
124
136
146
152
164
172
1816
193
209
213
228
232
243
255
2612
2713
2813
298
3024
3112
322
333
347
355
362
375
3810
3915
402
412
424
433
4414
459
461
472
484
494
45.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2966101694915254
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just watched her, his face"
1"Then he bolted."
2"Just a yawning void."
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences87
matches
0"She didn’t slow."
1"Her fingers twitched near her"
2"She’d lost him once already"
3"She kicked it shut."
4"He didn’t run."
5"She cursed, sprinting after him."
6"He was fast—faster than she"
7"She adjusted her grip on"
8"She stepped down."
9"She moved toward it, her"
10"She’d heard whispers of this"
11"She edged forward, keeping to"
12"Her gaze flicked over the"
13"She pushed through the throng,"
14"She followed, her pulse roaring"
15"His face was younger than"
16"He lifted them, palms out."
17"Their faces were wrong—stretched, like"
18"She’d faced gangsters, killers, men"
19"Her blood turned to ice."
ratio0.241
28.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences87
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles"
2"The neon glow of a"
3"She didn’t slow."
4"The suspect had ducked into"
5"Her fingers twitched near her"
6"The radio at her shoulder"
7"Backup would take too long."
8"She’d lost him once already"
9"The alley reeked of stale"
10"Quinn’s pulse hammered in her"
11"A dumpster loomed ahead, its"
12"She kicked it shut."
13"The clang echoed, but no"
14"A boot scraping concrete."
15"The suspect stood at the"
16"He didn’t run."
17"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
18"She cursed, sprinting after him."
19"The alley spilled into a"
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A stall to her left displayed vials of liquid that glowed like embers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.6907%