Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ9VEZNN3SNBG698VCXSEB

Run Details

Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.000553
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm light that spilled onto the dimly lit staircase. Aurora Carter, her straight black hair slightly disheveled from a long day, stood in the doorway, her bright blue eyes widening in surprise. She blinked, her gaze flickering between the unexpected visitor and the three deadbolts she had meticulously secured just hours before. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side, his platinum blond hair slicked back as always, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers, an unreadable expression on his face. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, the thin blade concealed within it a secret only she knew. "Lucien," Aurora said, her voice a mix of surprise and wariness. She tightened the belt of her robe, suddenly conscious of her casual attire. "What are you doing here?" Lucien's gaze flicked over her, taking in the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident they had once laughed about. "Aurora," he acknowledged, his voice smooth and measured. "May I come in?" Aurora hesitated, her fingers tightening around the door handle. The last time they had seen each other, things had been left unsaid, wounds left open. But the cold London night pressed in around them, and the warmth of her flat beckoned. She stepped aside, allowing him to enter. The flat was small, cluttered with books and scrolls that covered every available surface. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, stretched lazily on the armchair, his tail flicking in mild annoyance at the interruption. Lucien's gaze swept over the room, taking in the familiar chaos that was uniquely Aurora's. "You've made yourself comfortable," he remarked, his tone neutral. Aurora closed the door behind him, her heart pounding in her chest. "It's not like I had much choice," she replied, her voice tinged with bitterness. "Eva's place was the only one available on short notice." Lucien turned to face her, his expression softening slightly. "I heard about what happened," he said, his voice low. "I'm sorry, Aurora." Aurora's eyes flashed, her cool-headed demeanor slipping for a moment. "Are you? Really?" she challenged, her hands clenched at her sides. "Because the last time we spoke, you made it pretty clear where you stood." Lucien sighed, running a hand through his hair. "Aurora, you know it's not that simple," he said, his voice weary. "You know the kind of life I lead. The kind of people I deal with." Aurora scoffed, turning away from him to busy herself with making tea. "Yeah, I know," she said, her back to him. "I know all about the supernatural underworld and your fancy suits and your ivory-handled cane that's really a blade. I know all about the lies and the secrets and the half-truths." Lucien's expression darkened, his jaw tightening. "Aurora, turn around," he said, his voice a low growl. Aurora ignored him, her hands trembling slightly as she poured hot water into the teapot. "What, Lucien? What do you want from me?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien stepped closer, his presence filling the small kitchen. "I want you to look at me," he said, his voice firm. "I want you to see me, Aurora. Really see me." Aurora turned to face him, her eyes shining with unshed tears. "I see you, Lucien," she said, her voice barely a whisper. "I see you, and I know you're not the monster you pretend to be. But I also know that you're not the man I thought you were either." Lucien reached out, his hand cupping her cheek. "Aurora, I—" he began, his voice choked with emotion. But Aurora pulled away, her eyes flashing with anger. "No, Lucien," she said, her voice firm. "You don't get to do this. You don't get to show up here, in the middle of the night, and expect me to just forgive and forget." Lucien's hand dropped to his side, his expression unreadable. "I'm not asking for forgiveness, Aurora," he said, his voice low. "I'm asking for a chance. A chance to explain. A chance to make things right." Aurora looked at him, her heart pounding in her chest. She wanted to believe him. She wanted to believe that he could change, that they could find their way back to each other. But the hurt was still fresh, the wounds still open. "Lucien, I—" she began, her voice trembling. But before she could finish, a loud crash echoed from the living room. Both Aurora and Lucien turned, their eyes widening in shock as Ptolemy, the tabby cat, knocked over a stack of books, sending them scattering across the floor. The moment was broken, the tension dissipating as Aurora and Lucien exchanged a look. Aurora let out a shaky laugh, her shoulders relaxing slightly. "Well, that's one way to break the tension," she said, her voice light. Lucien chuckled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "I must admit, I've never had a cat interrupt a conversation quite like that before," he said, his voice amused. Aurora smiled, her heart feeling lighter than it had in weeks. "Ptolemy has a way of doing that," she said, her voice warm. "He's got a bit of a temper, that one." Lucien's gaze softened as he looked at her, his heart aching with longing. "Aurora, I—" he began, his voice low. But Aurora held up a hand, her smile fading slightly. "Lucien, I need time," she said, her voice firm. "I need time to think. To process. To heal." Lucien nodded, his expression understanding. "I understand, Aurora," he said, his voice gentle. "I'll give you all the time you need." Aurora looked at him, her heart aching with a mix of love and pain. "Thank you, Lucien," she said, her voice barely a whisper. Lucien reached out, his hand brushing against hers. "I'll be here, Aurora," he said, his voice low. "I'll be here when you're ready." And with that, he turned and left, the door clicking shut behind him. Aurora stood in the silence, her heart pounding in her chest, her mind racing with thoughts and memories. She looked down at Ptolemy, who was now curled up on the armchair, his tail flicking contentedly. "Well, Ptolemy," she said, her voice soft. "I guess it's just you and me again." But as she looked around her flat, at the books and scrolls and the remnants of her past, she knew that Lucien's words would haunt her, that his presence would linger in the air, that the love and pain they shared would forever be a part of her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.61
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
45.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count6
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count3
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"lazily"
3"really"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"unreadable"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"comfortable"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count3
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count3
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"tension"
count2
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"flicked"
2"reminder"
3"measured"
4"warmth"
5"familiar"
6"comfortable"
7"pounding"
8"tinged"
9"whisper"
10"echoed"
11"tension"
12"silence"
13"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
89.79% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences71
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"g with anger"
2"g with longing"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1103
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount788
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Aurora18
London1
Ptolemy3
Lucien16
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.358
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1103
matches(empty)
13.41% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
1"believe that he change, that they"
2"knew that Lucien's"
70.96% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean33.42
std13.31
cv0.398
sampleLengths
060
155
229
338
448
547
69
736
822
935
1035
1152
1216
1331
1431
1550
1617
1743
1835
1943
207
2140
2237
2328
2432
2520
2628
2721
2824
2923
3048
3115
3248
95.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"been left"
1"was broken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences87
ratio0.011
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers, an unreadable expression on his face."
93.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount793
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03656998738965952
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.0201765447667087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.68
std6.77
cv0.534
sampleLengths
017
123
220
324
413
518
611
713
85
926
108
114
129
1316
1416
157
1614
1718
1815
199
2012
2114
2210
239
2410
253
2610
2711
2814
298
3012
3115
3212
339
3431
356
3610
3715
3816
399
4012
4110
4211
4311
4428
458
469
479
487
4927
40.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.26436781609195403
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences71
matches
0"She blinked, her gaze flickering"
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
2"He leaned slightly on his"
3"She tightened the belt of"
4"he acknowledged, his voice smooth"
5"She stepped aside, allowing him"
6"he remarked, his tone neutral"
7"she replied, her voice tinged"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"she challenged, her hands clenched"
10"he said, his voice weary"
11"she said, her back to"
12"he said, his voice a"
13"she asked, her voice barely"
14"he said, his voice firm"
15"she said, her voice barely"
16"he began, his voice choked"
17"she said, her voice firm"
18"he said, his voice low"
19"She wanted to believe him."
ratio0.451
9.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences71
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora Carter, her straight black"
2"She blinked, her gaze flickering"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"He leaned slightly on his"
6"Aurora said, her voice a"
7"She tightened the belt of"
8"Lucien's gaze flicked over her,"
9"he acknowledged, his voice smooth"
10"Aurora hesitated, her fingers tightening"
11"The last time they had"
12"She stepped aside, allowing him"
13"The flat was small, cluttered"
14"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, stretched"
15"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
16"he remarked, his tone neutral"
17"Aurora closed the door behind"
18"she replied, her voice tinged"
19"Lucien turned to face her,"
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm light that spilled onto the dimly lit staircase."
1"Both Aurora and Lucien turned, their eyes widening in shock as Ptolemy, the tabby cat, knocked over a stack of books, sending them scattering across the floor."
2"Lucien's gaze softened as he looked at her, his heart aching with longing."
3"Aurora stood in the silence, her heart pounding in her chest, her mind racing with thoughts and memories."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount20
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice a mix of surprise and wariness"
1"he acknowledged, his voice smooth and measured"
2"he remarked, his tone neutral"
3"he said, his voice low"
4"he said, his voice weary"
5"he said, his voice a low growl"
6"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"he said, his voice firm"
8"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
9"she said, her voice firm"
10"he said, his voice low"
11"she began, her voice trembling"
12"he said, his voice amused"
13"she said, her voice warm"
14"he began, his voice low"
15"she said, her voice firm"
16"he said, his voice gentle"
17"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
18"he said, his voice low"
19"she said, her voice soft"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"she challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.512
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
69.9557%