| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "cascading" | | 6 | "echoes" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "fluttered" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "unraveling" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "gleaming" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "footsteps" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 38 | | markdownWords | 203 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0.183 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Veil is thin here,\"" | | 1 | "\"Can you feel it?\"" | | 2 | "\"We’re not in Richmond Park anymore, are we?\"" | | 3 | "\"Not quite.\"" | | 4 | "\"The Grove doesn’t follow the same rules.\"" | | 5 | "\"You’ve come at last,\"" | | 6 | "\"The threads of fate are tangled tonight.\"" | | 7 | "\"You said you had something for me.\"" | | 8 | "\"Patience, little mortal. The Grove gives its gifts in its own time.\"" | | 9 | "\"Look. Listen. Learn.\"" | | 10 | "alive" | | 11 | "\"This isn’t just a pocket of the Fae realm,\"" | | 12 | "\"It’s a threshold. A place where the Veil is so thin it’s almost porous.\"" | | 13 | "\"And thresholds are dangerous things. They invite… attention.\"" | | 14 | "\"What kind of attention?\"" | | 15 | "\"Something’s coming.\"" | | 16 | "\"The Grove is not pleased. It senses your fear.\"" | | 17 | "\"I’m not afraid.\"" | | 18 | "\"Liar.\"" | | 19 | "\"But fear is not always a weakness. Sometimes, it is the only thing that keeps us alive.\"" | | 20 | "\"Leave. Leave. LEAVE.\"" | | 21 | "\"We need to go. Now.\"" | | 22 | "unraveling" | | 23 | "hungry" | | 24 | "shifted" | | 25 | "\"Dymas,\"" | | 26 | "\"We’re not just in the Grove anymore. We’ve slipped through.\"" | | 27 | "\"How?\"" | | 28 | "\"The Veil is weak here. The Grove is a threshold, remember? And thresholds…\"" | | 29 | "\"They can be crossed.\"" | | 30 | "gong" | | 31 | "\"This is not where we were meant to go.\"" | | 32 | "\"Then how do we get back?\"" | | 33 | "\"You’ll need this,\"" | | 34 | "\"Dymas is not kind to intruders.\"" | | 35 | "\"And we are most definitely intruders.\"" | | 36 | "\"We need to move.\"" | | 37 | "\"Run.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.99% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 909 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Isolde | 10 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.62 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 1 | "looked like tiny golden stars, their peta" | | 2 | "something like awe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 33.55 | | std | 22.21 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 70 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 3 |
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| 95.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "was carpeted" | | 1 | "was locked" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "were speaking" | | 1 | "was splitting" | | 2 | "was *unraveling" | | 3 | "was standing" | | 4 | "were struggling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was different—thicker, sweeter, laced with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in late November." | | 1 | "The ground was carpeted in flowers—bluebells, foxgloves, and something that looked like tiny golden stars, their petals shimmering with dew that never fell." | | 2 | "The trees here weren’t just trees—they were *alive* in a way that went beyond biology." | | 3 | "The scent of the place was intoxicating—honeysuckle and something sharper, like ozone after a storm." | | 4 | "Not an earthquake—something deeper, more fundamental." | | 5 | "Not a crack—no, it was more like the ground was *unraveling*, threads of reality peeling back to reveal something beneath." | | 6 | "The air was thick with the scent of roasting meat and something sweeter, cloying—rotting fruit, maybe, or spoiled wine." | | 7 | "A sound cut through the air—a deep, resonant *gong*, vibrating through Rory’s bones." | | 8 | "The ground trembled again, and this time, Rory heard it—the sound of footsteps, heavy and deliberate, approaching from the direction of the city." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 919 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03264417845484222 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007616974972796518 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 11.78 | | std | 7.08 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 54.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.35106382978723405 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she reached into the" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 2 | "It prickled along her skin," | | 3 | "She nodded, then glanced back" | | 4 | "She turned as they approached," | | 5 | "she said, her voice layered" | | 6 | "She gestured to the space" | | 7 | "Their bark pulsed faintly, like" | | 8 | "they said, their voice hushed" | | 9 | "She reached into her bag," | | 10 | "Her gaze was locked on" | | 11 | "She gasped, clutching at it," | | 12 | "She was standing in a" | | 13 | "she said, her voice urgent" | | 14 | "She tightened her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 28.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air here was different—thicker," | | 3 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 4 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 5 | "The violet glow of their" | | 6 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 7 | "It prickled along her skin," | | 8 | "She nodded, then glanced back" | | 9 | "The trees beyond the stones" | | 10 | "Nyx extended a shadowy hand," | | 11 | "Rory stepped forward, her boots" | | 12 | "The ground was carpeted in" | | 13 | "The air hummed, a low," | | 14 | "Isolde stood in the center" | | 15 | "She turned as they approached," | | 16 | "she said, her voice layered" | | 17 | "Isolde smiled, slow and knowing." | | 18 | "She gestured to the space" | | 19 | "The trees here weren’t just" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Isolde could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was different—thicker, sweeter, laced with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in late November." | | 1 | "She exhaled, watching her breath curl into mist that didn’t dissipate, but instead drifted upward like smoke caught in an unseen current." | | 2 | "It prickled along her skin, a static charge that made the fine hairs on her arms stand on end." | | 3 | "The trees beyond the stones were already fading, their edges blurring as if viewed through warped glass." | | 4 | "The ground was carpeted in flowers—bluebells, foxgloves, and something that looked like tiny golden stars, their petals shimmering with dew that never fell." | | 5 | "A butterfly with wings like stained glass fluttered past, its path leaving a trail of glittering dust that hung in the air before fading." | | 6 | "The flowers at Rory’s feet wilted, their petals curling inward as if burned." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, their voice hushed" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed, their voice tight with something like awe" | | 2 | "she said, her voice urgent" |
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| 89.39% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.303 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |