Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQAHQPD086Q676ZAQ9PH6T

Run Details

Duration:
41.8s
Cost:
$0.000731
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, or Rory as her friends called her, adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck a constant, comforting presence. She stepped cautiously through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary of the Fae Grove. The air here was different, thicker, humming with an energy that made her skin prickle. She glanced back at her companions, Nyx and Isolde, their forms barely visible through the shimmering distortion of the Veil. Nyx, a being of living shadow, shifted uneasily, their form flickering between solid and incorporeal. "This place... it's strange," they whispered, their voice carried on the wind. "I can feel the shadows here, but they're... different. They don't obey me." Isolde, the Seer, smiled enigmatically, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the dappled sunlight filtering through the canopy above. "The Fae Grove is a place between worlds, Nyx. The shadows here are not bound by the rules of your realm or mine." Rory nodded, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder as she took in the sight before her. The grove was a riot of color, wildflowers blooming in profusion, their petals a kaleidoscope of hues. The trees were ancient, their gnarled branches twisting towards the sky, their leaves shimmering with an otherworldly glow. The air was filled with the sweet scent of blossoms and the hum of unseen insects. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the sounds of the outside world faded away, replaced by the rustling of leaves and the distant murmur of a stream. Rory could feel the time behaving strangely, the seconds stretching and contracting in a way that defied logic. She glanced at her watch, but the hands were spinning wildly, the numbers blurring together. Nyx reached out a shadowy hand, brushing against the trunk of a nearby tree. "It's alive," they murmured, their voice filled with awe. "But not in the way that trees are alive. It's... conscious." Isolde nodded, her silver hair catching the light as she moved. "The Fae Grove is a living entity, Nyx. It responds to the emotions of those who enter it. The more you open yourself to it, the more it will reveal to you." Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against a cluster of wildflowers. She gasped as a surge of emotion washed over her, a sense of joy and wonder that was not her own. She could feel the flowers, their delicate petals reaching out to her, their roots delving deep into the earth, drawing up the essence of the grove. As they continued to explore, they came across a clearing, the grass here a vibrant emerald green. In the center of the clearing was a pool of water, its surface still and reflective. Rory approached the pool, her reflection gazing back at her, her bright blue eyes wide with curiosity. She knelt down, her fingers brushing against the water. It was warm, the surface rippling gently at her touch. As she gazed into the depths, she saw images flickering beneath the surface, scenes from a past long forgotten. She saw the grove as it had been, a place of revelry and merriment, the Fae dancing beneath the stars. She saw the grove as it would be, a place of desolation and decay, the trees withered and bare, the flowers long dead. She gasped, pulling back her hand as if burned. "What was that?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde approached the pool, her eyes reflecting the images beneath the surface. "The pool shows the past and the future, Rory. It shows the truth of the grove, the essence of its being." Nyx joined them, their form flickering in the reflection. "It's beautiful," they murmured, their voice filled with a longing that Rory had never heard before. "But it's also sad. The grove is dying, isn't it?" Isolde nodded, her eyes filled with a sorrow that Rory had never seen before. "The grove is a reflection of the Fae realm, Nyx. As the Fae realm weakens, so too does the grove. The Veil is thinning, and the grove is suffering as a result." Rory looked around, her eyes taking in the vibrant colors, the ancient trees, the wildflowers in full bloom. "But it's still beautiful," she said, her voice filled with a determination that surprised even her. "We can't let it die. We have to do something." Isolde smiled, her eyes filled with a warmth that Rory had never seen before. "You have the heart of a warrior, Rory. But this is not a battle that can be fought with swords and shields. The grove needs healing, not fighting." Nyx nodded, their form solidifying, their faintly glowing violet eyes filled with a resolve that Rory had never seen before. "We will find a way to heal the grove, Rory. We will find a way to strengthen the Veil. But first, we need to understand the grove, to understand its essence. We need to open ourselves to it, to let it guide us." Rory nodded, her eyes filled with a determination that matched Nyx's. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the water once more. She closed her eyes, letting the essence of the grove wash over her, letting it fill her with its joy and its sorrow, its beauty and its pain. As she opened herself to the grove, she felt a connection forming, a bond that transcended time and space. She felt the grove, its ancient trees, its vibrant flowers, its conscious shadows. She felt its joy and its sorrow, its beauty and its pain. She felt its essence, its very being, and she knew that she would do whatever it took to save it. As she opened her eyes, she saw the grove in a new light, its colors more vibrant, its sounds more melodious, its essence more profound. She saw the past and the future, the joy and the sorrow, the beauty and the pain. She saw the truth of the grove, and she knew that she would do whatever it took to save it. Nyx and Isolde watched her, their eyes filled with a respect and a admiration that Rory had never seen before. They knew that she was ready, that she was prepared to face whatever challenges lay ahead. They knew that she had the heart of a warrior, the spirit of a healer, and the soul of a guardian. As they continued to explore the grove, they came across a hidden glade, the trees here forming a natural archway. Rory stepped through the archway, her eyes widening as she took in the sight before her. The glade was filled with ancient standing stones, their surfaces covered in intricate carvings. The stones were arranged in a circle, their tops pointing towards the sky, their bases rooted deep in the earth. Rory approached the stones, her fingers brushing against the carvings. She felt a surge of energy, a pulse of power that resonated deep within her. She looked up, her eyes meeting Nyx's. "Do you feel that?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx nodded, their form flickering, their eyes filled with a sense of awe. "It's the essence of the grove," they murmured. "It's the heart of the grove, the source of its power." Isolde joined them, her eyes reflecting the carvings on the stones. "These stones are ancient, Rory. They are the heart of the grove, the source of its power. They are the key to healing the grove, to strengthening the Veil." Rory looked around, her eyes taking in the ancient stones, the intricate carvings, the pulse of power that resonated within her. She knew that this was the heart of the grove, the source of its power. She knew that this was the key to healing the grove, to strengthening the Veil. As she reached out, her fingers brushing against the carvings once more, she felt a surge of energy, a pulse of power that resonated deep within her. She felt the grove, its ancient trees, its vibrant flowers, its conscious shadows. She felt its joy and its sorrow, its beauty and its pain. She felt its essence, its very being, and she knew that she would do whatever it took to save it. As she looked up, her eyes meeting Nyx's and Isolde's, she knew that they were ready, that they were prepared to face whatever challenges lay ahead. She knew that they had the heart of warriors, the spirit of healers, and the soul of guardians. Together, they would heal the grove. Together, they would strengthen the Veil. Together, they would save the Fae Grove, the heart of the Fae realm, the essence of its being.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"gently"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"sense of"
count2
6
word"delving"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count2
14
word"pulse"
count3
15
word"resonated"
count3
highlights
0"weight"
1"comforting"
2"kaleidoscope"
3"otherworldly"
4"could feel"
5"sense of"
6"delving"
7"depths"
8"dancing"
9"whisper"
10"warmth"
11"resolve"
12"profound"
13"intricate"
14"pulse"
15"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
68.69% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences74
matches
0"e with wonder"
1"filled with awe"
2"d with awe"
3"a sense of joy"
4"a sense of awe"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1453
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1165
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory15
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae4
Grove2
Nyx10
Isolde9
Veil3
Seer1
Together3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Seer"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.856
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1453
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount10
totalSentences86
matches
0"longing that Rory"
1"knew that she"
2"knew that she"
3"knew that she"
4"knew that she"
5"knew that this"
6"knew that this"
7"knew that she"
8"knew that they"
9"knew that they"
43.23% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean50.1
std15.1
cv0.301
sampleLengths
078
140
241
368
461
534
643
758
850
981
1020
1133
1235
1346
1444
1542
1663
1750
1864
1962
2057
2170
2244
2332
2440
2551
2672
2744
2830
81.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"was filled"
1"was prepared"
2"was filled"
3"were arranged"
4"were prepared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs194
matches
0"were spinning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences86
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1165
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.024892703862660945
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00944206008583691
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
95.96% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean16.9
std6.59
cv0.39
sampleLengths
028
115
215
320
415
512
613
718
823
917
1017
1118
1216
1328
1418
1515
1614
179
1811
1911
2032
2111
2221
2326
2417
2516
2617
279
2810
2919
3020
3123
329
3311
3412
3521
369
3716
3810
3914
4032
4118
4216
4310
4414
4528
4620
4743
4811
4911
29.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.22093023255813954
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences73
matches
0"She stepped cautiously through the"
1"She glanced back at her"
2"they whispered, their voice carried"
3"She glanced at her watch,"
4"they murmured, their voice filled"
5"She gasped as a surge"
6"She could feel the flowers,"
7"She knelt down, her fingers"
8"It was warm, the surface"
9"She saw the grove as"
10"She saw the grove as"
11"She gasped, pulling back her"
12"she asked, her voice barely"
13"they murmured, their voice filled"
14"she said, her voice filled"
15"She reached out, her fingers"
16"She closed her eyes, letting"
17"She felt the grove, its"
18"She felt its joy and"
19"She felt its essence, its"
ratio0.452
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
1"She stepped cautiously through the"
2"The air here was different,"
3"She glanced back at her"
4"Nyx, a being of living"
5"they whispered, their voice carried"
6"Isolde, the Seer, smiled enigmatically,"
7"Rory nodded, her bright blue"
8"The grove was a riot"
9"The trees were ancient, their"
10"The air was filled with"
11"Rory could feel the time"
12"She glanced at her watch,"
13"Nyx reached out a shadowy"
14"they murmured, their voice filled"
15"Isolde nodded, her silver hair"
16"Rory reached out, her fingers"
17"She gasped as a surge"
18"She could feel the flowers,"
19"Rory approached the pool, her"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
2.34% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The air here was different, thicker, humming with an energy that made her skin prickle."
1"The trees were ancient, their gnarled branches twisting towards the sky, their leaves shimmering with an otherworldly glow."
2"Rory could feel the time behaving strangely, the seconds stretching and contracting in a way that defied logic."
3"She gasped as a surge of emotion washed over her, a sense of joy and wonder that was not her own."
4"She could feel the flowers, their delicate petals reaching out to her, their roots delving deep into the earth, drawing up the essence of the grove."
5"Nyx nodded, their form solidifying, their faintly glowing violet eyes filled with a resolve that Rory had never seen before."
6"Rory nodded, her eyes filled with a determination that matched Nyx's."
7"She closed her eyes, letting the essence of the grove wash over her, letting it fill her with its joy and its sorrow, its beauty and its pain."
8"As she opened herself to the grove, she felt a connection forming, a bond that transcended time and space."
9"She felt a surge of energy, a pulse of power that resonated deep within her."
10"Rory looked around, her eyes taking in the ancient stones, the intricate carvings, the pulse of power that resonated within her."
11"As she reached out, her fingers brushing against the carvings once more, she felt a surge of energy, a pulse of power that resonated deep within her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"they murmured (murmur)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.421
65.5217%