Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQAXNY2DN8RYF9DH67G2WA

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Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.004516
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before I could turn the last deadbolt. "Rory." Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, platinum hair catching the dim light like a blade. His amber eye gleamed; the black one swallowed the light whole. The ivory handle of his cane tapped against the doorframe, a metronome counting down to something I couldn’t name. I should have slammed the door. Should have pretended I wasn’t home. Should have done anything but stand there, fingers still curled around the cold metal of the lock, heart hammering against my ribs like it wanted out. "May I come in?" His voice was smooth, the kind of smooth that came from years of practice, from knowing exactly how to say things to get exactly what he wanted. I stepped back, not because I wanted to, but because my body moved before my brain caught up. The door clicked shut behind him, sealing us in the cramped space of Eva’s flat. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, lifted his head from the armchair, tail flicking in disapproval before he settled back into his nap. Lucien’s gaze swept over the room—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the faint scent of curry clinging to the air from the restaurant downstairs. His lip curled, just slightly, before he smoothed it away. "Charming." I crossed my arms. "What do you want?" He turned to face me, close enough that I could see the faint scar along his jawline, the one he’d gotten the last time we’d seen each other. The night everything had gone to hell. "Straight to the point. I’ve always admired that about you." "Cut the flattery. You didn’t come here to admire me." "No," he admitted, tapping his cane against the floor. "I came because I need your help." I laughed, sharp and bitter. "You’ve got a nerve." His expression didn’t change, but the air between us tightened, like a wire pulled taut. "I wouldn’t ask if it weren’t important." "Important to who? You? The half-demon fixer who trades in secrets and lies?" I stepped closer, close enough to see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, close enough to remember the way his hands had felt on my skin. "You left, Lucien. No warning, no explanation. Just gone." For the first time, something flickered in his gaze—something raw, something real. "I had my reasons." "Reasons you couldn’t share with me." "I couldn’t share them with anyone." I wanted to hit him. Wanted to scream. Wanted to do anything but stand there, breathing in the scent of him—expensive cologne and something darker, something that smelled like smoke and old books. "You don’t get to waltz back into my life and ask for help." He reached into his coat, slow and deliberate, like he was giving me time to flinch. I didn’t. He pulled out a folded piece of paper and held it out. "This is bigger than us." I didn’t take it. "There is no *us*." Lucien sighed, a sound that carried the weight of centuries. "Aurora, please." The way he said my name—like it was something precious, something he’d missed—made my chest ache. I snatched the paper from his hand and unfolded it. A name. An address. A date scrawled in the corner, two days from now. "What is this?" "A job." "I don’t work for you anymore." "You never worked for me. You worked *with* me." He stepped closer, close enough that I could feel the heat of him, close enough that I had to tilt my head back to meet his gaze. "And you were damn good at it." I crumpled the paper in my fist. "I’m not doing this." "You don’t even know what *this* is." "I don’t need to. Whatever it is, it’s your problem, not mine." His hand closed over mine, his fingers warm, his grip firm. "It’s not just my problem. It’s yours too. And Eva’s. And every other poor soul in this city who doesn’t know what’s coming." I yanked my hand away. "You’re lying." "Am I?" He reached into his coat again, this time pulling out a small, leather-bound notebook. He flipped it open and held it out. Inside, pages of names, dates, symbols I didn’t recognise. "This is happening with or without you. But if you walk away now, you won’t like the outcome." I stared at the notebook, my pulse roaring in my ears. "What is this?" "A ledger. Of sorts." He closed it with a snap. "A record of deals made, favours owed, souls collected. And someone’s been adding names that don’t belong." "Whose names?" "People who shouldn’t be on anyone’s list." His voice dropped, low and dangerous. "Innocents. People who don’t know the rules of the game." I swallowed. "And you think I can help?" "I know you can." I wanted to refuse. Wanted to tell him to leave and never come back. But the way he was looking at me—like I was the only person in the world who could fix this—made my resolve waver. "Why me?" "Because you’re the only one who’s ever seen through my bullshit." He reached out, his fingers brushing against my wrist, just below the crescent-shaped scar. "And because I trust you." I pulled away. "You don’t get to say that." "Say what?" "That you trust me. Not after you left." His jaw tightened. "I had to." "Why?" "Because if I’d stayed, I would have ruined you." The words hung between us, heavy and suffocating. I wanted to laugh, to tell him he was being dramatic, but the look in his eyes—raw, unguarded—stopped me. "You don’t get to decide what ruins me." "I know." He stepped back, putting space between us, like he was afraid of what might happen if he didn’t. "But I also know that if you walk away from this, you’ll regret it." I looked down at the crumpled paper in my hand, then back at him. "What do you need me to do?" A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Just what you do best. Be brilliant." I should have said no. Should have thrown him out and bolted the door behind him. But the way he was looking at me—like I was his last hope—made my chest tighten. "Fine. But I’m not doing this for you." "I know." He reached into his coat one last time, pulling out a small, silver key. "You’re doing it for them." I took the key, my fingers brushing against his. A spark. A jolt. Something I didn’t want to name. "What’s this for?" "The first door." He turned toward the exit, his cane tapping against the floor. "I’ll be in touch." I watched him go, the door clicking shut behind him, leaving me standing in the middle of Eva’s flat, holding a key and a secret I wasn’t sure I wanted to uncover. Ptolemy stretched in the armchair, his green eyes locking onto mine. *Well*, he seemed to say. *That was interesting.* I crumpled the paper tighter in my fist. Interesting didn’t even begin to cover it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.034
95.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"carried the weight"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"roaring"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"carried the weight"
2"could feel"
3"pulse"
4"roaring"
5"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords7
totalWords1179
ratio0.006
matches
0"us"
1"with"
2"this"
3"Well"
4"That was interesting."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount810
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva2
Lucien3
Should3
Wanted3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Should"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like smoke and old books"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1179
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean20.33
std15.38
cv0.757
sampleLengths
011
11
245
338
431
554
640
78
845
910
1016
119
1222
1350
1416
156
166
1746
1835
198
2012
2140
223
232
246
2543
2611
277
2812
2934
307
3151
3214
3327
342
3523
368
374
3839
3930
409
412
428
436
441
459
4635
4734
4821
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
38.38% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was giving"
1"was looking"
2"was being"
3"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences119
ratio0.067
matches
0"His amber eye gleamed; the black one swallowed the light whole."
1"Lucien’s gaze swept over the room—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the faint scent of curry clinging to the air from the restaurant downstairs."
2"For the first time, something flickered in his gaze—something raw, something real."
3"Wanted to do anything but stand there, breathing in the scent of him—expensive cologne and something darker, something that smelled like smoke and old books."
4"The way he said my name—like it was something precious, something he’d missed—made my chest ache."
5"But the way he was looking at me—like I was the only person in the world who could fix this—made my resolve waver."
6"I wanted to laugh, to tell him he was being dramatic, but the look in his eyes—raw, unguarded—stopped me."
7"But the way he was looking at me—like I was his last hope—made my chest tighten."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount820
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound notebook."
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03048780487804878
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004878048780487805
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean9.91
std7.88
cv0.796
sampleLengths
011
11
215
311
419
56
66
726
831
918
1015
1121
1229
1310
141
154
164
1728
187
1910
2010
219
227
235
244
2515
267
2741
289
2912
304
316
326
335
343
3525
3613
3716
382
3912
405
414
424
4310
442
4516
4610
472
482
4910
49.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3445378151260504
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences65
matches
0"His amber eye gleamed; the"
1"I should have slammed the"
2"His voice was smooth, the"
3"I stepped back, not because"
4"His lip curled, just slightly,"
5"I crossed my arms."
6"He turned to face me,"
7"he admitted, tapping his cane"
8"I laughed, sharp and bitter."
9"His expression didn’t change, but"
10"I stepped closer, close enough"
11"I wanted to hit him."
12"He reached into his coat,"
13"He pulled out a folded"
14"I didn’t take it."
15"I snatched the paper from"
16"He stepped closer, close enough"
17"I crumpled the paper in"
18"His hand closed over mine,"
19"I yanked my hand away."
ratio0.585
52.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences65
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"His amber eye gleamed; the"
3"The ivory handle of his"
4"I should have slammed the"
5"His voice was smooth, the"
6"I stepped back, not because"
7"The door clicked shut behind"
8"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, lifted"
9"Lucien’s gaze swept over the"
10"His lip curled, just slightly,"
11"I crossed my arms."
12"He turned to face me,"
13"The night everything had gone"
14"he admitted, tapping his cane"
15"I laughed, sharp and bitter."
16"His expression didn’t change, but"
17"I stepped closer, close enough"
18"I wanted to hit him."
19"He reached into his coat,"
ratio0.815
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Wanted to do anything but stand there, breathing in the scent of him—expensive cologne and something darker, something that smelled like smoke and old books."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He reached, this time pulling out a small, leather-bound notebook"
1"He turned, his cane tapping against the floor"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.034
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.034
77.9744%