Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQBM0CHARQTJ14SXH4YR6T

Run Details

Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.003751
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of *The Raven’s Nest*, the hinge groaning under the weight of years. Inside, the air clung thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the faint metallic tang of old secrets. She exhaled, shoulders dropping an inch as the hum of low conversation wrapped around her. A familiar ache pulsed in her left wrist—phantom pain from the scar Evan had given her, years ago now, but still there when the weather turned. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the bar, where the light was dimmest. Silas was polishing a glass, his signet ring glinting under the muted bulb. He didn’t look up, but his voice cut through the murmur of the room. “Took you long enough.” Rory smirked. “Had to dodge a cyclist with a death wish near Piccadilly.” “Excuses.” He set the glass down, finally meeting her eyes. “You’re late.” “And you’re a tyrant.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips before he turned to grab a bottle of bourbon. The ice clinked as he poured, the amber liquid catching the light like molten gold. Rory watched his hands—steady, despite the limp he favoured when he thought no one was looking. The door swung open again, letting in a gust of damp autumn air. Rory didn’t turn. Neither did Silas. But the hair on the back of her neck prickled. A voice, warm and rough-edged, cut through the haze. “Well, I’ll be damned.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. Silas glanced up, his expression unreadable. “Evening.” The stool beside hers scraped against the floor. A shadow fell over her, tall and broad-shouldered, smelling of leather and something faintly chemical—antiseptic, maybe. Or gunpowder. “Rory Carter,” the voice said. “Or do you go by Laila these days?” She turned. Eva’s brother stood there, older, harder, his once-boyish face carved into sharp angles. His dark hair was cropped short now, a stark contrast to the unruly mop she remembered. A jagged scar ran from his temple to his jawline, pale against his olive skin. “Jesus,” she breathed. “Matteo.” He grinned, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “In the flesh.” Silas set a fresh glass on the counter, his gaze flicking between them. “You two know each other?” Rory swallowed. “Used to.” Matteo leaned in, close enough that she could see the faint lines around his eyes, the way his pupils dilated just slightly when he looked at her. “Used to be a lot of things.” She forced a laugh, brittle as old glass. “Yeah. Like kids.” “Kids don’t leave scars like these.” He tapped his temple, right where the scar disappeared into his hairline. Rory’s throat went dry. She took a sip of bourbon, the burn grounding her. “What happened to you?” Matteo’s fingers drummed against the bar. “Life. War. The usual.” Silas cleared his throat. “You want a drink, or are you just here to haunt the place?” Matteo didn’t look away from Rory. “Bourbon. Neat.” Silas poured, then slid the glass toward him before melting into the background, leaving them to the weight of the past. Matteo took a slow sip, watching her over the rim. “Eva told me you were in London.” Rory stiffened. “Did she now.” “Said you were doing alright.” “Did she also say I didn’t want to be found?” His jaw tightened. “She didn’t have to.” The silence stretched, thick and suffocating. Rory traced the crescent scar on her wrist, the old habit flaring up. Matteo’s gaze followed the movement. “Still got that?” he asked, voice low. She dropped her hand. “Some things don’t fade.” “No.” He took another drink. “They don’t.” The jukebox in the corner crackled to life, some old blues tune Rory didn’t recognise. It felt like a violation. “What are you doing here, Matteo?” He set his glass down. “Passing through.” “Bullshit.” A flicker of something—amusement?—crossed his face. “Fine. Looking for someone.” “Let me guess. Not me.” “No.” He hesitated. “But I’d be lying if I said I didn’t wonder.” Rory’s chest ached. She drained the rest of her drink. “Wonder what?” “If you ever think about it. About *us*.” The words hung there, raw and bleeding. She wanted to laugh. To scream. To slap the smug, broken look off his face. Instead, she said, “There is no *us*, Matteo. There hasn’t been in years.” He leaned in closer, his voice a rough whisper. “You sure about that?” Her pulse hammered in her throat. “I’m sure you didn’t come here to reminisce.” “No.” He sat back, rubbing his thumb over the scar on his temple. “I came because I need a favour.” Rory barked a laugh. “Of course you did.” Matteo didn’t smile. “It’s not what you think.” “Enlighten me.” He glanced around, then lowered his voice. “I need to get into a place. Tomorrow night.” “And you want me to what? Pick the lock?” “Something like that.” She shook her head. “I’m not that girl anymore.” “Aren’t you?” His gaze flicked to Silas, who was pretending not to listen. “You’re still running with spies, Rory. Some things don’t change.” Her nails bit into her palms. “I deliver takeout. That’s it.” Matteo’s expression darkened. “Then why’d you run?” The question hit like a punch to the gut. She opened her mouth, but nothing came out. He exhaled sharply. “Forget it. I shouldn’t have—” “No,” she cut in, voice trembling. “You shouldn’t have.” The air between them crackled, charged with all the things they weren’t saying. The way he’d left without a word. The way she’d burned every bridge behind her. The way they’d both pretended the other didn’t exist. Matteo broke first, looking away. “I’ll find someone else.” Rory should’ve let him. Should’ve watched him walk out the door and never looked back. But the old habit died hard. “Where?” she asked. He met her eyes. “You sure?” No. “Just tell me where.” A slow, bitter smile curved his lips. “Some things *do* stay the same.” She ignored the twist in her chest. “The address, Matteo.” He pulled a folded slip of paper from his pocket and slid it across the bar. His fingers brushed hers—deliberate, lingering. Rory snatched her hand back. Silas appeared beside them, refilling her glass without a word. His presence was a reminder, a anchor. Matteo stood, tossing a few notes onto the counter. “Tomorrow. Midnight.” Rory didn’t look up. “I’ll be there.” The door swung shut behind him, leaving only the ghost of his cologne and the weight of a decision she already regretted. Silas cleared his throat. “You want to talk about it?” She downed the bourbon in one go. “No.” He didn’t push. Just took the glass and wiped the counter, his signet ring glinting under the dim light. Rory stared at the door, at the space where Matteo had been. Some things didn’t change. And that was the problem.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He sat back [back]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.029
91.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"flicked"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"pulsed"
4"glinting"
5"unreadable"
6"stark"
7"silence"
8"traced"
9"flicker"
10"whisper"
11"pulse"
12"flicked"
13"charged"
14"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords6
totalWords1155
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"us"
2"us"
3"do"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount860
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Raven1
Evan1
Silas9
Matteo10
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Matteo"
places(empty)
globalScore0.512
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside them, refilling her glass without a word"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1155
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean13.59
std12.39
cv0.912
sampleLengths
087
144
24
313
412
54
648
729
89
94
106
117
1226
1313
142
1544
164
1711
1818
194
2034
2111
2218
2318
2410
2517
268
2721
2817
295
305
3110
327
3324
347
358
367
3720
386
397
401
4110
425
4313
4412
458
4622
4713
4813
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was cropped"
38.38% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was looking"
2"was pretending"
3"weren’t saying"
53.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences159
ratio0.031
matches
0"A familiar ache pulsed in her left wrist—phantom pain from the scar Evan had given her, years ago now, but still there when the weather turned."
1"Rory watched his hands—steady, despite the limp he favoured when he thought no one was looking."
2"A shadow fell over her, tall and broad-shouldered, smelling of leather and something faintly chemical—antiseptic, maybe."
3"A flicker of something—amusement?—crossed his face."
4"His fingers brushed hers—deliberate, lingering."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount869
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.028768699654775604
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006904487917146145
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean7.26
std5.27
cv0.725
sampleLengths
027
119
215
326
417
513
614
74
82
911
1010
112
124
1317
1415
1516
1613
173
183
1910
209
214
226
236
241
258
2616
272
285
298
302
3113
3216
3315
343
351
368
373
3813
395
402
412
4227
437
448
453
4618
474
4810
494
55.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.34591194968553457
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners55
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, she said,"
1"Just took the glass and"
ratio0.022
73.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences93
matches
0"She exhaled, shoulders dropping an"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"He didn’t look up, but"
3"He set the glass down,"
4"His dark hair was cropped"
5"He grinned, but it didn’t"
6"She forced a laugh, brittle"
7"He tapped his temple, right"
8"She took a sip of"
9"His jaw tightened."
10"he asked, voice low"
11"She dropped her hand."
12"He took another drink"
13"It felt like a violation."
14"He set his glass down."
15"She drained the rest of"
16"She wanted to laugh."
17"He leaned in closer, his"
18"Her pulse hammered in her"
19"He sat back, rubbing his"
ratio0.366
3.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences93
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered"
1"She exhaled, shoulders dropping an"
2"A familiar ache pulsed in"
3"She slid onto a stool"
4"Silas was polishing a glass,"
5"He didn’t look up, but"
6"He set the glass down,"
7"A ghost of a smile"
8"The ice clinked as he"
9"Rory watched his hands—steady, despite"
10"The door swung open again,"
11"Rory didn’t turn."
12"Neither did Silas."
13"A voice, warm and rough-edged,"
14"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
15"Silas glanced up, his expression"
16"The stool beside hers scraped"
17"A shadow fell over her,"
18"the voice said"
19"Eva’s brother stood there, older,"
ratio0.914
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"To slap the smug, broken"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he asked, voice low"
1"she cut in, voice trembling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.147
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.029
81.8169%