| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.029 | |
| 91.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1164 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1164 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "glinting" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "charged" | | 14 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 159 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1155 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 1 | "us" | | 2 | "us" | | 3 | "do" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 860 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | Raven | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 9 | | Matteo | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Matteo" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.512 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beside them, refilling her glass without a word" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 13.59 | | std | 12.39 | | cv | 0.912 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | |
| 38.38% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "was polishing" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was pretending" | | 3 | "weren’t saying" |
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| 53.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 159 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "A familiar ache pulsed in her left wrist—phantom pain from the scar Evan had given her, years ago now, but still there when the weather turned." | | 1 | "Rory watched his hands—steady, despite the limp he favoured when he thought no one was looking." | | 2 | "A shadow fell over her, tall and broad-shouldered, smelling of leather and something faintly chemical—antiseptic, maybe." | | 3 | "A flicker of something—amusement?—crossed his face." | | 4 | "His fingers brushed hers—deliberate, lingering." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 869 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.028768699654775604 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006904487917146145 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 159 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 159 | | mean | 7.26 | | std | 5.27 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 55.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.34591194968553457 | | totalSentences | 159 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 71.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she said," | | 1 | "Just took the glass and" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 73.76% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, shoulders dropping an" | | 1 | "She slid onto a stool" | | 2 | "He didn’t look up, but" | | 3 | "He set the glass down," | | 4 | "His dark hair was cropped" | | 5 | "He grinned, but it didn’t" | | 6 | "She forced a laugh, brittle" | | 7 | "He tapped his temple, right" | | 8 | "She took a sip of" | | 9 | "His jaw tightened." | | 10 | "he asked, voice low" | | 11 | "She dropped her hand." | | 12 | "He took another drink" | | 13 | "It felt like a violation." | | 14 | "He set his glass down." | | 15 | "She drained the rest of" | | 16 | "She wanted to laugh." | | 17 | "He leaned in closer, his" | | 18 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 19 | "He sat back, rubbing his" |
| | ratio | 0.366 | |
| 3.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon raven flickered" | | 1 | "She exhaled, shoulders dropping an" | | 2 | "A familiar ache pulsed in" | | 3 | "She slid onto a stool" | | 4 | "Silas was polishing a glass," | | 5 | "He didn’t look up, but" | | 6 | "He set the glass down," | | 7 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 8 | "The ice clinked as he" | | 9 | "Rory watched his hands—steady, despite" | | 10 | "The door swung open again," | | 11 | "Rory didn’t turn." | | 12 | "Neither did Silas." | | 13 | "A voice, warm and rough-edged," | | 14 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around her" | | 15 | "Silas glanced up, his expression" | | 16 | "The stool beside hers scraped" | | 17 | "A shadow fell over her," | | 18 | "the voice said" | | 19 | "Eva’s brother stood there, older," |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "To slap the smug, broken" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he asked, voice low" | | 1 | "she cut in, voice trembling" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.074 | | leniency | 0.147 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.029 | |