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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQBVF97AQ9XTF1FN1442QX
Run Details
Model:
Mistral Small 3.2 24B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.001174
Provider:
Mistral
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
86.04%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
80.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
0.00%
Cliché density
(details)
38.95%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
90.56%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
92.20%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
78.57%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
25.44%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
99.05%
Sentence length variance
(details)
34.93%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
52.97%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
3.96%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
68.3108%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off
the platform of the abandoned Tube station, her boots
echoing
in the cavernous space.
The air was thick with
the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and sharp.
She adjusted the cuff of
her coat, the worn leather of her
watch
brushing against her fingers. The station was a relic, forgotten by time, yet tonight it
pulsed
with an eerie energy.
Her colleague, Detective Morris—no, not
Morris. Morris
was gone
.
She had to stop thinking
of him.
This was Detective Evans, a
young, eager face with a penchant for jumping to conclusions.
He stood near the center
of the platform, his flashlight cutting through the
gloom
. "Evening, Quinn,"
Evans
called out, his voice
echoing
slightly
. "Took you long enough." Quinn didn't respond immediately. She took in the scene, her sharp brown eyes
scanning
every detail.
The platform was littered with
debris—broken glass, scattered papers, and what looked like remnants of a makeshift market stall.
A bone token lay near
the edge, its surface smooth and worn. "What have we got?"
Quinn asked, her voice steady
and
measured
.
Evans
gestured to the mess. "Looks like some kind of underground market. Probably a drug deal gone wrong."
Quinn crouched down, examining the
bone token.
It was cold to the
touch, and there was something unsettling about it.
She had seen similar tokens
before, but never in this context. "This isn't a drug deal,
Evans
. This is something else."
She stood up, her military
precision evident in her movements. The station was eerily quiet, the only sound the distant drip of water
echoing
through the tunnels.
She walked further into the
platform, her eyes taking in every detail. The debris
was scattered
haphazardly, but there was a pattern to it. The stalls had been set up in a specific arrangement, and the debris was concentrated around certain areas. "Look at this," Quinn said, pointing to a series of symbols
etched
into the concrete. They were faint, almost imperceptible, but they were there. Protective sigils, designed to ward off something—or someone.
Evans
frowned. "What are those?" "Sigils," Quinn said. "They're used in occult practices. This wasn't just a market,
Evans
. This was a gathering place for something supernatural."
Evans
looked skeptical. "Supernatural? Come on, Quinn. You're not seriously buying into that, are you?" Quinn ignored him, her eyes
scanning
the symbols.
She had seen similar sigils
before, in the case files of her former partner. Morris had
been obsessed
with the supernatural, convinced that there was more to the world than met the eye. Quinn had always dismissed his theories, but now she wasn't so sure.
She walked over to a
pile of debris, her eyes narrowing as she examined a small brass compass.
It was old, the casing
tarnished with a patina of verdigris. The face
was etched
with the same protective sigils, and the needle pointed towards the far wall of the station. "What's that?"
Evans
asked, peering over her shoulder. Quinn picked up the compass, her fingers brushing against the cold metal. The needle
was pointing
towards a specific spot on the wall, a spot that was
slightly
darker than the rest. She walked over to it, her heart
pounding
in her chest. There was something about this place, something that
sent a shiver down
her spine.
She reached out, her fingers
brushing against the wall. It was cold and damp, but there was something else—a faint
pulse
of energy.
She could feel it, a
low
hum that seemed to resonate through her bones
. "Quinn, what are you doing?"
Evans
asked, his voice laced with concern. Quinn ignored him, her eyes fixed on the wall. There was a faint outline of a door, almost imperceptible, but it was there.
She reached out, her fingers
tracing
the outline. The energy
pulsed
stronger, and she
could feel
a slight resistance, as if the door was locked.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes blazing with determination. "We need to get this door open."
Evans
looked at her like she had lost her mind. "Quinn, we don't even know what's behind that door. It could be dangerous." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "That's exactly why we need to open it. Whatever is behind that door is connected to this case, and I intend to find out what it is."
She turned back to the
door, her fingers
tracing
the outline once more. The energy
pulsed
stronger, and she
could feel
the resistance fading. She pushed against the door, her muscles straining. For a moment, nothing happened, and then, with a sudden jolt, the door gave way. A gust of cold air rushed out, and Quinn stumbled back, her eyes widening in shock. The door led to a narrow tunnel, the walls lined with more of the protective sigils.
The air was thick with
the scent of ozone, and there was a faint glow coming from the end of the tunnel. Quinn took a deep breath, steeling herself for what lay ahead. She stepped into the tunnel, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The sigils on the walls
seemed to
pulse
with energy, and she
could feel
the power coursing through her veins.
Evans
hesitated at the entrance, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, are you sure about this? We don't know what's down there." Quinn turned to him, her eyes blazing with determination. "That's exactly why we need to find out. Whatever is down there is connected to this case, and I intend to get to the bottom of it."
She turned back to the
tunnel, her eyes fixed on the faint glow at the end. She took a deep breath and stepped forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The tunnel
seemed to
stretch on forever, the walls lined with the protective sigils.
The air was thick with
the scent of ozone, and she
could feel
the power coursing through her veins. As she neared the end of the tunnel, the glow grew brighter, and she could see a faint outline of a door.
She reached out, her fingers
brushing against the cold metal. The door was locked, but she
could feel
the energy pulsing through it. She pushed against the door, her muscles straining. For a moment, nothing happened, and then, with a sudden jolt, the door gave way. A gust of cold air rushed out, and Quinn stumbled back, her eyes widening in shock. The room beyond the door was vast, the walls lined with shelves filled with ancient tomes and artifacts.
The air was thick with
the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp. Quinn stepped into the room, her eyes
scanning
the shelves. The tomes
were written
in languages she didn't recognize, and the artifacts were unlike anything she had ever seen. There was a
sense of
power in the room, a
sense of
something ancient and forgotten.
She walked over to a
shelf, her fingers brushing against the spine of a tome. The leather was worn and cracked, and the pages were yellowed with age. She opened the tome, her eyes
scanning
the text. It
was written
in a language she didn't recognize, but she
could feel
the power coursing through the pages.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes blazing with determination. "We need to find out what this place is. It's connected to the case, and I intend to find out how."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what we're dealing with here. This could be dangerous." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "That's exactly why we need to find out. Whatever is in this room is connected to the case, and I intend to get to the bottom of it."
She turned back to the
shelves, her eyes
scanning
the tomes. She
could feel
the power coursing through the room, and she
knew that she
was on the verge of something big. She just had to find the right tome, the right artifact, and she would uncover the truth.
She reached out, her fingers
brushing against the spine of a tome. The leather was worn and cracked, and the pages were yellowed with age. She opened the tome, her eyes
scanning
the text. It
was written
in a language she didn't recognize, but she
could feel
the power coursing through the pages.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes blazing with determination. "We need to find out what this place is. It's connected to the case, and I intend to find out how."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what we're dealing with here. This could be dangerous." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "That's exactly why we need to find out. Whatever is in this room is connected to the case, and I intend to get to the bottom of it."
She turned back to the
shelves, her eyes
scanning
the tomes. She
could feel
the power coursing through the room, and she
knew that she
was on the verge of something big. She just had to find the right tome, the right artifact, and she would uncover the truth. As she reached out to another tome, she heard a faint noise behind her. She turned, her eyes widening in shock. The door to the room was
slowly
closing, the energy pulsing through the air.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes wide with fear. "
Evans
, we need to get out of here. Now."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what's happening. We need to stay and find out." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "No, we need to get out of here. Now."
She turned back to the
door, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The door was
slowly
closing, the energy pulsing through the air.
She reached out, her fingers
brushing against the cold metal. The door was locked, but she
could feel
the energy pulsing through it. She pushed against the door, her muscles straining. For a moment, nothing happened, and then, with a sudden jolt, the door gave way. A gust of cold air rushed out, and Quinn stumbled back, her eyes widening in shock. The room beyond the door was vast, the walls lined with shelves filled with ancient tomes and artifacts.
The air was thick with
the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp. Quinn stepped into the room, her eyes
scanning
the shelves. The tomes
were written
in languages she didn't recognize, and the artifacts were unlike anything she had ever seen. There was a
sense of
power in the room, a
sense of
something ancient and forgotten.
She walked over to a
shelf, her fingers brushing against the spine of a tome. The leather was worn and cracked, and the pages were yellowed with age. She opened the tome, her eyes
scanning
the text. It
was written
in a language she didn't recognize, but she
could feel
the power coursing through the pages.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes blazing with determination. "We need to find out what this place is. It's connected to the case, and I intend to find out how."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what we're dealing with here. This could be dangerous." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "That's exactly why we need to find out. Whatever is in this room is connected to the case, and I intend to get to the bottom of it."
She turned back to the
shelves, her eyes
scanning
the tomes. She
could feel
the power coursing through the room, and she
knew that she
was on the verge of something big. She just had to find the right tome, the right artifact, and she would uncover the truth. As she reached out to another tome, she heard a faint noise behind her. She turned, her eyes widening in shock. The door to the room was
slowly
closing, the energy pulsing through the air.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes wide with fear. "
Evans
, we need to get out of here. Now."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what's happening. We need to stay and find out." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "No, we need to get out of here. Now."
She turned back to the
door, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The door was
slowly
closing, the energy pulsing through the air.
She reached out, her fingers
brushing against the cold metal. The door was locked, but she
could feel
the energy pulsing through it. She pushed against the door, her muscles straining. For a moment, nothing happened, and then, with a sudden jolt, the door gave way. A gust of cold air rushed out, and Quinn stumbled back, her eyes widening in shock. The room beyond the door was vast, the walls lined with shelves filled with ancient tomes and artifacts.
The air was thick with
the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp. Quinn stepped into the room, her eyes
scanning
the shelves. The tomes
were written
in languages she didn't recognize, and the artifacts were unlike anything she had ever seen. There was a
sense of
power in the room, a
sense of
something ancient and forgotten.
She walked over to a
shelf, her fingers brushing against the spine of a tome. The leather was worn and cracked, and the pages were yellowed with age. She opened the tome, her eyes
scanning
the text. It
was written
in a language she didn't recognize, but she
could feel
the power coursing through the pages.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes blazing with determination. "We need to find out what this place is. It's connected to the case, and I intend to find out how."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what we're dealing with here. This could be dangerous." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "That's exactly why we need to find out. Whatever is in this room is connected to the case, and I intend to get to the bottom of it."
She turned back to the
shelves, her eyes
scanning
the tomes. She
could feel
the power coursing through the room, and she
knew that she
was on the verge of something big. She just had to find the right tome, the right artifact, and she would uncover the truth. As she reached out to another tome, she heard a faint noise behind her. She turned, her eyes widening in shock. The door to the room was
slowly
closing, the energy pulsing through the air.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes wide with fear. "
Evans
, we need to get out of here. Now."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what's happening. We need to stay and find out." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "No, we need to get out of here. Now."
She turned back to the
door, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The door was
slowly
closing, the energy pulsing through the air.
She reached out, her fingers
brushing against the cold metal. The door was locked, but she
could feel
the energy pulsing through it. She pushed against the door, her muscles straining. For a moment, nothing happened, and then, with a sudden jolt, the door gave way. A gust of cold air rushed out, and Quinn stumbled back, her eyes widening in shock. The room beyond the door was vast, the walls lined with shelves filled with ancient tomes and artifacts.
The air was thick with
the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp. Quinn stepped into the room, her eyes
scanning
the shelves. The tomes
were written
in languages she didn't recognize, and the artifacts were unlike anything she had ever seen. There was a
sense of
power in the room, a
sense of
something ancient and forgotten.
She walked over to a
shelf, her fingers brushing against the spine of a tome. The leather was worn and cracked, and the pages were yellowed with age. She opened the tome, her eyes
scanning
the text. It
was written
in a language she didn't recognize, but she
could feel
the power coursing through the pages.
She turned to Evans, her
eyes blazing with determination. "We need to find out what this place is. It's connected to the case, and I intend to find out how."
Evans
hesitated, his eyes wide with fear. "Quinn, we don't know what we're dealing with here. This could be dangerous." Quinn's jaw set in a sharp line. "That's exactly why we need to find out. Whatever is in this room is connected to the case, and I intend to get to the bottom of it."
She turned back to the
shelves, her eyes
scanning
the tomes. She
could feel
the power coursing through the room, and she
knew that she
was on the verge of something big. She just had to find the right tome, the right artifact, and she would uncover the truth.
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"2026-02-20T14:30:52.151Z"
2/20/2026, 2:30:52 PM
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streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
282
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
86494
tokens_prompt
923
tokens_completion
4105
native_tokens_prompt
875
native_tokens_completion
3620
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
128
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
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"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
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"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
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router
(null)
provider_responses
0
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"23fd6b91-74d8-45fc-ac00-cf141ec7f4a5"
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is_byok
false
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282
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provider_name
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status
200
api_type
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(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
41
tagDensity
0.146
leniency
0.293
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
86.04%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2865
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
6
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
80.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
0
"Evans"
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2865
totalAiIsms
64
found
0
word
"echoing"
count
3
1
word
"pulsed"
count
3
2
word
"gloom"
count
1
3
word
"scanning"
count
16
4
word
"measured"
count
1
5
word
"etched"
count
2
6
word
"pounding"
count
6
7
word
"down her spine"
count
1
8
word
"pulse"
count
2
9
word
"could feel"
count
19
10
word
"tracing"
count
2
11
word
"sense of"
count
8
highlights
0
"echoing"
1
"pulsed"
2
"gloom"
3
"scanning"
4
"measured"
5
"etched"
6
"pounding"
7
"down her spine"
8
"pulse"
9
"could feel"
10
"tracing"
11
"sense of"
0.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
8
maxInWindow
4
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
7
1
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
1
"sent a shiver down"
38.95%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
19
narrationSentences
184
matches
0
"g with determination"
1
"e with fear"
2
"g with determination"
3
"g with determination"
4
"e with fear"
5
"g with determination"
6
"e with fear"
7
"e with fear"
8
"e with fear"
9
"g with determination"
10
"e with fear"
11
"e with fear"
12
"e with fear"
13
"g with determination"
14
"e with fear"
15
"e with fear"
16
"e with fear"
17
"g with determination"
18
"e with fear"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
184
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
219
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
28
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2856
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
65
wordCount
2289
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
1.31
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow
1
Quinn
30
Tube
1
Detective
3
Morris
4
Evans
26
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Detective"
3
"Morris"
4
"Evans"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.845
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
178
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"looked like remnants of a makeshift marke"
1
"hum that seemed to resonate through her bones"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
2856
matches
(empty)
90.56%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
5
totalSentences
219
matches
0
"knew that she"
1
"knew that she"
2
"knew that she"
3
"knew that she"
4
"knew that she"
92.20%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
77
mean
37.09
std
17.53
cv
0.473
sampleLengths
0
68
1
45
2
13
3
47
4
11
5
18
6
41
7
69
8
32
9
5
10
22
11
15
12
53
13
49
14
8
15
57
16
37
17
12
18
48
19
16
20
23
21
34
22
47
23
54
24
42
25
22
26
36
27
63
28
68
29
50
30
45
31
56
32
30
33
20
34
35
35
49
36
53
37
30
38
20
39
35
40
49
41
44
42
9
43
20
44
16
45
69
46
50
47
45
48
56
49
30
78.57%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
14
totalSentences
184
matches
0
"was gone"
1
"was littered"
2
"was scattered"
3
"been obsessed"
4
"was etched"
5
"were written"
6
"was written"
7
"was written"
8
"were written"
9
"was written"
10
"were written"
11
"was written"
12
"were written"
13
"was written"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
383
matches
0
"was pointing"
25.44%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
9
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
9
totalSentences
219
ratio
0.041
matches
0
"The air was thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and sharp."
1
"Her colleague, Detective Morris—no, not Morris."
2
"The platform was littered with debris—broken glass, scattered papers, and what looked like remnants of a makeshift market stall."
3
"Protective sigils, designed to ward off something—or someone."
4
"It was cold and damp, but there was something else—a faint pulse of energy."
5
"The air was thick with the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp."
6
"The air was thick with the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp."
7
"The air was thick with the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp."
8
"The air was thick with the scent of old parchment and something else—something metallic and sharp."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2298
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
52
adverbRatio
0.022628372497824196
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.005221932114882507
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
219
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
99.05%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
219
mean
13.04
std
5.19
cv
0.398
sampleLengths
0
19
1
16
2
17
3
16
4
6
5
3
6
7
7
15
8
14
9
9
10
4
11
4
12
12
13
19
14
12
15
11
16
5
17
13
18
7
19
13
20
11
21
10
22
10
23
17
24
12
25
12
26
18
27
15
28
9
29
8
30
2
31
3
32
3
33
19
34
3
35
12
36
8
37
14
38
19
39
12
40
18
41
11
42
20
43
8
44
12
45
20
46
11
47
14
48
9
49
14
34.93%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
33
diversityRatio
0.1187214611872146
totalSentences
219
uniqueOpeners
26
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
182
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
52.97%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
76
totalSentences
182
matches
0
"She adjusted the cuff of"
1
"Her colleague, Detective Morris—no, not"
2
"She had to stop thinking"
3
"He stood near the center"
4
"She took in the scene,"
5
"It was cold to the"
6
"She had seen similar tokens"
7
"She stood up, her military"
8
"She walked further into the"
9
"They were faint, almost imperceptible,"
10
"She had seen similar sigils"
11
"She walked over to a"
12
"It was old, the casing"
13
"She walked over to it,"
14
"She reached out, her fingers"
15
"It was cold and damp,"
16
"She could feel it, a"
17
"She reached out, her fingers"
18
"She turned to Evans, her"
19
"She turned back to the"
ratio
0.418
3.96%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
166
totalSentences
182
matches
0
"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1
"The air was thick with"
2
"She adjusted the cuff of"
3
"The station was a relic,"
4
"Her colleague, Detective Morris—no, not"
5
"Morris was gone."
6
"She had to stop thinking"
7
"This was Detective Evans, a"
8
"He stood near the center"
9
"Evans called out, his voice"
10
"Quinn didn't respond immediately."
11
"She took in the scene,"
12
"The platform was littered with"
13
"A bone token lay near"
14
"Quinn asked, her voice steady"
15
"Evans gestured to the mess."
16
"Quinn crouched down, examining the"
17
"It was cold to the"
18
"She had seen similar tokens"
19
"She stood up, her military"
ratio
0.912
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
182
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
124
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"The needle was pointing towards a specific spot on the wall, a spot that was slightly darker than the rest."
1
"There was something about this place, something that sent a shiver down her spine."
2
"The energy pulsed stronger, and she could feel a slight resistance, as if the door was locked."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
2
matches
0
"Evans called out, his voice echoing slightly"
1
"Quinn asked, her voice steady and measured"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Evans called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences
41
tagDensity
0.146
leniency
0.293
rawRatio
0.167
effectiveRatio
0.049
68.3108%