Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQC0RVZ67KEPAN4K4D9XDB

Run Details

Duration:
24.3s
Cost:
$0.002322
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped back with a sound like a knife being drawn. Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening around the edge of the door. The chain rattled, the last barrier between her and the hallway’s dim light. Lucien stood there, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, the other adjusting the cuff of his charcoal suit. His amber eye caught the light from the stairwell, sharp as a blade. The black one swallowed it whole. "You’re not Eva." Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. "No. She’s at work." The words came out flatter than she intended. She didn’t step aside. A muscle twitched in his jaw. "I see." He didn’t move. Neither did she. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, tail flicking. The cat’s green eyes locked onto Lucien, unblinking. "You going to let me in, *chérie*?" The old endearment curled around her ribs like smoke. She should’ve said no. Should’ve shut the door, turned the deadbolts, pretended she hadn’t heard him at all. But her body betrayed her, shifting just enough to let him slip past. The flat smelled of old paper and cardamom from the curry house below. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floorboards as he stepped inside, his gaze sweeping over the clutter—stacks of books teetering on the coffee table, scrolls unrolled across the sofa, a half-empty mug of tea gone cold. "You’ve been busy," he said. Rory shut the door harder than necessary. "What do you want, Lucien?" He turned, slow, deliberate. The lamplight caught the silver threads in his suit, the way his platinum hair gleamed like something forged. "Straight to the point. I always liked that about you." "Cut the act. You didn’t come here for nostalgia." His mouth quirked. "No. I didn’t." He reached into his jacket, and Rory’s hand twitched toward the knife in her boot. But all he pulled out was a folded slip of paper. He held it between two fingers, offering it to her. "This was left at my office. No note. No explanation." She didn’t take it. "And?" "And it’s addressed to you." Her name was scrawled across the paper in ink that looked too dark, too wet, like it had been written in something thicker than ink. Rory’s stomach twisted. She snatched it from him, unfolded it. A single line, in a handwriting she didn’t recognize: *"Ask her about the night at the docks."* Her fingers trembled. She crumpled the paper in her fist. Lucien’s voice was quiet. "You know what it means." She did. Of course she did. The docks. The fire. The way the air had smelled of salt and burning hair. The way Lucien had looked at her afterward, like she was something broken he couldn’t fix. She turned away, pressing her palm against the windowpane. The glass was cold. "Why bring it to me?" "Because I don’t like being used." His cane tapped once, twice. "And because whoever sent this knows we have history." History. Such a clean word for the mess they’d made. Rory exhaled through her nose. "You could’ve mailed it. Or burned it." "I could have." A pause. "But I wanted to see you." The words hung between them, heavy as the scent of rain before a storm. She should’ve laughed. Should’ve told him to leave. Instead, she said, "You always did have terrible timing." His laugh was low, rough. "And you always did have a talent for understatement." Ptolemy leapt onto the back of the sofa, tail lashing. The cat’s eyes were slits, fixed on Lucien like he was prey. Rory crossed her arms. "You’re not staying." "Wouldn’t dream of it." He didn’t move. "But we both know this isn’t over." She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him he was wrong, that she’d moved on, that whatever had been between them was dead and buried. But the words stuck in her throat. Lucien stepped closer. Close enough that she could see the faint scar above his eyebrow, the way his pupils dilated in the dim light. Close enough that she could smell the bergamot and gunpowder scent of him. "You’re shaking," he murmured. She wasn’t. Not really. But her skin prickled where his breath ghosted over her temple. His fingers brushed her wrist, just below the crescent-shaped scar. "Still jumpy, I see." Rory jerked back. "Don’t." He held up his hands, palms out. "Just an observation." "An observation you didn’t need to make in person." His mouth twisted. "Maybe I missed you." The air left her lungs. She wanted to hit him. Wanted to kiss him. Wanted to scream until her throat was raw. Instead, she said, "Get out." Lucien studied her for a long moment. Then he dipped his head, just once. "As you wish." He turned toward the door, his cane clicking against the floor. At the threshold, he paused. "Rory." She didn’t look at him. "Be careful." The door clicked shut behind him. Rory pressed her forehead against the wood, listening to the sound of his footsteps fading down the stairs. Her fingers uncurled from the crumpled paper in her hand. The night at the docks. The fire. The way Lucien had looked at her when she’d lied to his face. She should’ve burned the note. Should’ve let him walk away. But some things, once lit, couldn’t be extinguished.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:30:57.575Z" 2/20/2026, 2:30:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His cane tapped once [once]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.057
94.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount888
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount888
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"stomach"
2"trembled"
3"eyebrow"
4"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords885
ratio0.01
matches
0"chérie"
1"\"Ask her about the night at the docks.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount714
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Rory9
History1
Should3
Wanted3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Should"
places(empty)
globalScore0.87
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount885
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"on, that whatever"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean17.02
std12.62
cv0.741
sampleLengths
036
141
23
322
414
515
67
740
848
95
1012
1132
129
1352
145
155
1635
179
188
1910
209
2137
2218
2320
2410
2512
2611
2731
2814
2922
307
3114
3232
3337
344
3515
3614
374
3810
399
407
4122
425
4317
4417
455
462
476
4828
4920
93.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"being drawn"
1"was scrawled"
2"been written"
3"been between"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs136
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences116
ratio0.009
matches
0"Lucien’s cane tapped against the floorboards as he stepped inside, his gaze sweeping over the clutter—stacks of books teetering on the coffee table, scrolls unrolled across the sofa, a half-empty mug of tea gone cold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount717
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03486750348675035
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001394700139470014
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean7.63
std5.42
cv0.71
sampleLengths
012
111
213
322
413
56
63
76
812
94
106
115
123
137
148
157
169
174
1814
1913
2013
2135
225
237
245
254
2618
2710
289
293
3018
3111
3210
3310
344
351
365
3725
383
397
409
418
423
437
444
455
462
474
482
492
50.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3448275862068966
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences81
matches
0"Of course she did."
1"Such a clean word for"
2"Instead, she said,"
3"Instead, she said,"
4"Then he dipped his head,"
ratio0.062
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences81
matches
0"His amber eye caught the"
1"She didn’t step aside."
2"He didn’t move"
3"She should’ve said no."
4"He turned, slow, deliberate."
5"His mouth quirked."
6"He reached into his jacket,"
7"He held it between two"
8"She didn’t take it."
9"Her name was scrawled across"
10"She snatched it from him,"
11"Her fingers trembled."
12"She crumpled the paper in"
13"She turned away, pressing her"
14"His cane tapped once, twice"
15"She should’ve laughed."
16"His laugh was low, rough."
17"He didn’t move"
18"She wanted to argue."
19"His fingers brushed her wrist,"
ratio0.333
77.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences81
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped back with"
1"Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening"
2"The chain rattled, the last"
3"Lucien stood there, one hand"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"The black one swallowed it"
6"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
7"The words came out flatter"
8"She didn’t step aside."
9"A muscle twitched in his"
10"He didn’t move"
11"Neither did she."
12"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
13"The cat’s green eyes locked"
14"The old endearment curled around"
15"She should’ve said no."
16"The flat smelled of old"
17"Lucien’s cane tapped against the"
18"Rory shut the door harder"
19"He turned, slow, deliberate."
ratio0.765
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her name was scrawled across the paper in ink that looked too dark, too wet, like it had been written in something thicker than ink."
1"Rory pressed her forehead against the wood, listening to the sound of his footsteps fading down the stairs."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His cane tapped once, twice"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.057
90.6935%