Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQC25MR7QP3XJB8612M8F4

Run Details

Duration:
29.5s
Cost:
$0.002502
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, the chain rattling like a warning. There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe with the effortless grace of a man who had never once in his life been kept waiting. His platinum hair caught the dim hallway light, sharp as a blade, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with the precision of a predator. Rory’s breath hitched. She hadn’t seen him in six months. Six months of silence, of pretending she didn’t still wake up some nights with the ghost of his touch on her skin. “Bonjour, *chérie*,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. The French rolled off his tongue like he’d never stopped speaking it, like he’d never stopped speaking *to her*. His gaze flicked over her—barefoot, in an oversized Cardiff University hoodie, hair piled messily atop her head—and something dark and knowing flickered in his eyes. “You look like hell.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door. “And you look like you’ve got a death wish, showing up here unannounced.” Lucien smirked, adjusting the cuffs of his tailored charcoal suit. The ivory handle of his cane glinted as he shifted his weight. “If I wanted to die, *ma belle*, I’d have let the vampires at the Black Dahlia finish the job last week.” He tilted his head, studying her. “May I come in? Or are we doing this in the hallway like common thugs?” Rory hesitated. The last time they’d been in a room together, things had ended with a slammed door, a shattered glass, and a promise—his, not hers—that he’d never darken her doorstep again. But Ptolemy chose that moment to wind himself around her ankles, purring like a traitor, and the scent of curry from the restaurant below curled into the flat, rich and familiar. She stepped back. Lucien moved past her, the faintest brush of his sleeve against her arm sending a jolt through her. The door clicked shut behind him, the three deadbolts sliding home with finality. The flat was exactly as he remembered it—books stacked in precarious towers, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the air thick with the scent of old paper and Eva’s incense. But something was different. A photograph on the wall, one she didn’t recognize: Rory and Eva at Brighton Beach, arms slung around each other, grinning like idiots. Lucien’s fingers twitched toward it before he caught himself. “You’ve been busy.” “And you’ve been *gone*,” Rory said, crossing her arms. “So. What’s so important it couldn’t wait for a phone call?” He turned, the amber of his left eye catching the light like a struck match. “I need your help.” Rory laughed, sharp and humorless. “Of course you do.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “This isn’t a game, Aurora. The Obsidian Covenant is moving against the London Conclave. They’ve already taken three of the lesser houses. If they succeed—” “—the city burns, the supernatural world implodes, yada yada.” Rory waved a hand. “I’ve heard this song before, Lucien. You’ll forgive me if I’m not exactly rushing to dance.” His cane tapped against the floor, a slow, deliberate rhythm. “I’m not here for your forgiveness.” “Then why *are* you here?” The words came out harsher than she intended, but she didn’t take them back. Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound like a bull about to charge. Then, in one fluid motion, he closed the distance between them. Rory’s back hit the bookshelf, a cascade of paperbacks tumbling to the floor. Lucien braced one hand against the shelf above her head, the other gripping his cane so tightly his knuckles whitened. His breath was warm against her lips, his voice a low growl. “Because I *missed* you, *putain*. Because every time I close my eyes, I see you walking out that door. Because I am *tired*, Aurora, of pretending I don’t give a damn.” Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. She should push him away. She *should*. But the scent of him—bergamot and something darker, something like smoke—wrapped around her, familiar and intoxicating. “You have a funny way of showing it,” she whispered. Lucien’s free hand cupped her face, his thumb brushing over the crescent scar on her wrist. His touch was fire and sin, and Rory hated how much she’d missed it. “I know,” he murmured. “And I will spend the rest of my life making it up to you, if you’ll let me.” The air between them crackled, charged with all the things they’d left unsaid. Rory’s gaze dropped to his lips, then back to his eyes. “The rest of your life is a long time, Lucien.” His mouth quirked. “Not long enough.” And then he kissed her. It wasn’t gentle. It wasn’t sweet. It was hunger and heat and six months of pent-up frustration, his lips crashing against hers with a desperation that stole her breath. Rory’s hands fisted in his lapels, pulling him closer, her body betraying every logical thought in her head. Lucien groaned against her mouth, his cane clattering to the floor as he pressed her into the bookshelf, his hands sliding down to grip her hips. When they finally broke apart, both of them were breathing hard. Lucien rested his forehead against hers, his eyes closed. “I should have come sooner.” Rory swallowed, her fingers still tangled in his shirt. “You should have.” A beat of silence. Then Lucien pulled back just enough to meet her gaze, his expression uncharacteristically serious. “I’m not leaving again, Aurora. Not unless you tell me to.” Rory studied him—the sharp angles of his face, the way his heterochromatic eyes burned with something like hope. She thought of all the nights she’d lain awake, wondering if she’d made a mistake. Wondering if he’d ever come back. She exhaled, slow and steady. “Then I guess you’d better start talking. What’s this about the Obsidian Covenant?” Lucien’s smile was slow, triumphant. He bent to retrieve his cane, then offered her his arm like they were about to step into a ballroom, not a war. “Where would you like me to begin, *ma belle*?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.538
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"predator"
2"silence"
3"flicked"
4"flickered"
5"weight"
6"shattered"
7"familiar"
8"dance"
9"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords13
totalWords1019
ratio0.013
matches
0"chérie"
1"to her"
2"ma belle"
3"gone"
4"are"
5"missed"
6"putain"
7"tired"
8"should"
9"ma belle"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount764
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Lucien12
Moreau1
French1
Cardiff1
University1
Ptolemy1
Eva2
Brighton1
Beach1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"French"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brighton"
2"Beach"
globalScore0.518
windowScore0.667
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like smoke—wrapped around her, fam"
1"something like hope"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1019
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean35.14
std25.16
cv0.716
sampleLengths
069
132
257
322
464
563
63
788
812
920
1019
119
1228
1329
1416
1519
16100
1739
1852
1934
206
215
2273
2325
2412
2529
2639
2718
2837
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"been kept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"were breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences82
ratio0.085
matches
0"There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe with the effortless grace of a man who had never once in his life been kept waiting."
1"His platinum hair caught the dim hallway light, sharp as a blade, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with the precision of a predator."
2"His gaze flicked over her—barefoot, in an oversized Cardiff University hoodie, hair piled messily atop her head—and something dark and knowing flickered in his eyes."
3"The last time they’d been in a room together, things had ended with a slammed door, a shattered glass, and a promise—his, not hers—that he’d never darken her doorstep again."
4"The flat was exactly as he remembered it—books stacked in precarious towers, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the air thick with the scent of old paper and Eva’s incense."
5"But the scent of him—bergamot and something darker, something like smoke—wrapped around her, familiar and intoxicating."
6"Rory studied him—the sharp angles of his face, the way his heterochromatic eyes burned with something like hope."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount776
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.037371134020618556
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006443298969072165
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.43
std7.98
cv0.642
sampleLengths
017
125
227
33
47
522
69
719
825
94
109
1113
1210
1312
1427
1515
162
1730
1831
193
2018
2113
2230
234
2423
259
263
279
2811
2915
304
315
324
333
3425
3513
3616
3710
386
3919
4013
4111
4213
4320
4412
4531
466
475
482
4916
47.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3170731707317073
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Then, in one fluid motion,"
1"Then Lucien pulled back just"
ratio0.034
97.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences59
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the"
1"She hadn’t seen him in"
2"he said, voice smooth as"
3"His gaze flicked over her—barefoot,"
4"He tilted his head, studying"
5"She stepped back."
6"He turned, the amber of"
7"His cane tapped against the"
8"His breath was warm against"
9"She should push him away."
10"His touch was fire and"
11"His mouth quirked."
12"It wasn’t gentle."
13"It wasn’t sweet."
14"It was hunger and heat"
15"She thought of all the"
16"She exhaled, slow and steady."
17"He bent to retrieve his"
ratio0.305
36.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences59
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning"
2"His platinum hair caught the"
3"Rory’s breath hitched."
4"She hadn’t seen him in"
5"he said, voice smooth as"
6"The French rolled off his"
7"His gaze flicked over her—barefoot,"
8"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
9"Lucien smirked, adjusting the cuffs"
10"The ivory handle of his"
11"He tilted his head, studying"
12"The last time they’d been"
13"She stepped back."
14"Lucien moved past her, the"
15"The door clicked shut behind"
16"The flat was exactly as"
17"A photograph on the wall,"
18"Lucien’s fingers twitched toward it"
19"Rory said, crossing her arms"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe with the effortless grace of a man who had never once in his life been kept waiting."
1"It was hunger and heat and six months of pent-up frustration, his lips crashing against hers with a desperation that stole her breath."
2"Rory’s hands fisted in his lapels, pulling him closer, her body betraying every logical thought in her head."
3"Lucien groaned against her mouth, his cane clattering to the floor as he pressed her into the bookshelf, his hands sliding down to grip her hips."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.154
79.7507%