Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQCDJEPWDS8YQXJ0TK2FQ9

Run Details

Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.004565
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened the moment they crossed the threshold. One step, they stood beneath the skeletal branches of Richmond Park’s winter oaks, the next—warmth. Not the brittle, hearth-fire kind, but something deeper, like the first breath of summer after a long frost. Rory’s boots sank into moss so dense it might’ve been velvet. She flexed her toes, half-expecting the ground to give way entirely. It didn’t. The earth held, solid and alive beneath her. Nyx materialised beside her, their form rippling like ink spilled into water. "Well. This is new." Ahead, the grove unfolded in impossible geometry. Trees stretched upward, their bark silvered like moonlight on still water, branches twisting into arcs that defied gravity. Leaves—emerald, gold, the deep violet of twilight—drifted lazily, though there was no wind. The air smelled of crushed petals and something sharper, like ozone before a storm. Rory exhaled, her breath curling into the space between them. "Isolde wasn’t kidding about the ‘hidden’ part." "She rarely is." Nyx’s voice carried that whispery edge, like words spoken just beyond hearing. They reached out, fingers—if they could be called that—brushing a low-hanging branch. The leaves shivered, then *sang*. A single, crystalline note, high and clear, before dissolving into silence. Rory’s pulse jumped. "Did you—?" "Hear it? Yes." Nyx retracted their hand, shadow-coils tightening around their wrist. "Touch lightly here, I think." She didn’t need telling twice. Rory extended her own hand, hesitant, then grazed the nearest trunk. The bark was smooth, warm, almost *breathing*. Under her fingertips, a faint vibration hummed, like the deepest string of a cello played in another room. She pressed harder. The tree *pulsed*. A slow, rhythmic throb, as if blood moved beneath the silvered surface. "Okay," she muttered. "That’s—" "Alive?" Nyx’s form flickered, amusement threading through their voice. "More than you know." A rustle. Not from the leaves this time. Rory spun, hand dropping to the Fae blade at her belt. The grove stretched behind them, the standing stones they’d passed through now gone, replaced by a tangle of vines heavy with blooms that hadn’t existed a heartbeat ago. The flowers were wrong—petals too dark, centres glistening like fresh wounds. Nyx tilted their head. "Curious." "Curious?" Rory’s grip tightened on the dagger’s hilt. "That’s your take? They weren’t there before." "And now they are." Nyx stepped forward, their silhouette bleeding into the shadows cast by the unnatural foliage. "The Grove shifts. It’s not malicious. Just… *adaptive*." Rory didn’t relax, but she didn’t draw the blade either. "Adaptive how?" "Watch." Nyx plucked one of the dark blooms. The moment their fingers closed around the stem, the petals *unfurled*, revealing a core that wasn’t red but a swirling, liquid black. The flower *moved*, tendrils of darkness lashing out— Nyx crushed it. The bloom disintegrated into smoke, the tendrils retreating with a sound like a sigh. The remaining flowers on the vine withered instantly, shrinking into brittle husks before Rory’s eyes. She exhaled. "Right. Adaptive." Nyx’s form solidified, their violet gaze flicking to hers. "Not all gifts here are meant to be taken." A lesson, then. Rory filed it away, scanning the path ahead—or what passed for one. The grove didn’t have trails so much as *suggestions*, gaps between the trees that might’ve been invitations or warnings. The light filtered through the canopy in shifting patterns, casting prismatic patches on the forest floor. She stepped into one, and the colours *clung*, staining her boots in iridescent hues before fading. "Your pendant’s reacting," Nyx observed. Rory glanced down. The Heartstone at her throat had begun to glow, not the faint pulse it gave near Hel-rifts, but a steady, deep crimson, like an ember held to the skin. She touched it, half-expecting heat. It was cool. Almost *soothing*. "Great. So we’re standing on a Hell-mouth *and* a Fae pocket realm." She adjusted the chain, tucking the stone under her shirt. "Any chance this place is just *beautifully* lethal, or—?" Nyx didn’t answer. Their attention had shifted upward. Rory followed their gaze. The trees ended abruptly fifty paces ahead, giving way to a clearing—and in its centre, a pool. Not water. *Light*. A perfect circle of liquid radiance, its surface rippling with colours that didn’t have names. It cast no reflection, only a glow that made the air above it *shimmer*, like heat off asphalt in high summer. Nyx took a step toward it. "Ah." Rory caught their arm—or where an arm would’ve been, if Nyx had been fully solid. Her fingers passed through shadow, but Nyx stilled all the same. "Wait." She crouched, studying the ground. The moss here was thinner, revealing patches of something else beneath. Not soil. *Bones*. Small, delicate—bird, maybe, or something equally fragile. They were arranged in a pattern, a spiral leading right to the pool’s edge. Nyx’s voice dropped. "A warning, or an offering?" Rory didn’t like either option. She stood, brushing her hands off on her jeans. "Isolde said the Grove gives answers. But nothing’s free with the Fae." "Nothing’s free anywhere," Nyx murmured. The light in the pool *pulsed*, as if in response. The colours deepened, swirling into shapes—almost faces, almost words—before dissolving back into the luminous soup. Rory’s skin prickled. "We didn’t ask a question." "No." Nyx’s form darkened, their edges bleeding into the grove’s shifting shadows. "But *something* did." The air pressure changed. A weight, like the moment before a thunderclap, pressed down on Rory’s shoulders. The Heartstone burned against her collarbone. She yanked it free, holding it up. The crimson glow had intensified, threads of black weaving through the light like cracks in glass. Nyx’s voice sharpened. "Rory." She turned. The trees had *moved*. No—not moved. *Grown*. The silver trunks had thickened, branches elongating, weaving together into a lattice above the pool. The gaps between them were no longer gaps but *eyes*, hollows of darkness watching, *waiting*. And the flowers—the ones that had withered at Nyx’s touch—were back. Not on the vines this time. They sprouted from the moss at their feet, petals unfolding with wet, tearing sounds. The centres weren’t just dark. They were *empty*. Little voids, hungry and deep. Rory’s breath came faster. "We should go." Nyx didn’t argue. They reached for her— The pool *exploded*. Not with sound, not with force—with *light*. A geyser of it, arcing upward before crashing down in a wave that hit Rory like a physical blow. She staggered, arms flying up to shield her face. The light *burned*, not with heat but with *meaning*, images searing behind her eyelids: —A crown of antlers, shattered. —A hand, pale as marble, pressing a knife into another’s palm. —A city, drowning in fire. —A name, whispered in a voice that wasn’t hers: *"Malphora."* The vision cut off. Rory gasped, blinking spots from her vision. The grove was still. The trees had retreated to their original positions. The void-flowers were gone. The pool had returned to its gentle, rippling glow. Nyx’s form flickered, their voice tight. "You saw something." Rory’s hands shook. She clenched them into fists. "Yeah." "Care to share?" She swallowed. The name still echoed in her skull. *Malphora.* It tasted like copper. "Not yet." Nyx studied her for a long moment. Then, with a ripple of shadows, they turned toward the path—or what Rory hoped was the path. "Then we walk." Rory followed, but her gaze lingered on the pool. The light within it had dimmed, the colours muted, as if it had spent itself. As if it had *given* something. She adjusted the Heartstone, the metal warm now against her skin. The name coiled in her thoughts, insistent. *Malphora.* The grove seemed to hum around her, the trees leaning in just a fraction, as if listening. Waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.684
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"crystalline"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count2
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
15
word"marble"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"velvet"
2"crystalline"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"pulsed"
6"rhythmic"
7"throb"
8"flickered"
9"glistening"
10"scanning"
11"perfect"
12"weight"
13"searing"
14"shattered"
15"marble"
16"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans29
markdownWords29
totalWords1278
ratio0.023
matches
0"sang"
1"breathing"
2"pulsed"
3"adaptive"
4"unfurled"
5"moved"
6"suggestions"
7"clung"
8"soothing"
9"and"
10"beautifully"
11"Light"
12"shimmer"
13"Bones"
14"pulsed"
15"something"
16"moved"
17"Grown"
18"eyes"
19"waiting"
20"empty"
21"exploded"
22"light"
23"burned"
24"meaning"
25"\"Malphora.\""
26"Malphora."
27"given"
28"Malphora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1140
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx22
Fae1
Rory21
Heartstone3
Hel-rifts1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Hel-rifts"
globalScore0.535
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if listening"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.13
wordCount1278
matches
0"Not the brittle, hearth-fire kind, but something deeper, like the first breath of summer after a lo"
1"not the faint pulse it gave near Hel-rifts, but a steady, deep crimson, like an ember held to the skin"
2"no longer gaps but"
3"not with heat but with *meaning*, images searing behind her eyelids"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences159
matches
0"carried that whispery"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21.3
std18.24
cv0.856
sampleLengths
09
165
216
352
417
543
65
717
859
94
1013
1158
125
1315
1426
1512
1638
173
1829
194
2018
2166
225
2342
2431
258
264
2756
287
2926
3041
318
3226
335
3425
358
3615
3746
384
392
404
4133
4244
437
447
453
4649
4731
4836
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"were arranged"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences159
ratio0.119
matches
0"One step, they stood beneath the skeletal branches of Richmond Park’s winter oaks, the next—warmth."
1"Leaves—emerald, gold, the deep violet of twilight—drifted lazily, though there was no wind."
2"They reached out, fingers—if they could be called that—brushing a low-hanging branch."
3"The flowers were wrong—petals too dark, centres glistening like fresh wounds."
4"The flower *moved*, tendrils of darkness lashing out—"
5"Rory filed it away, scanning the path ahead—or what passed for one."
6"The trees ended abruptly fifty paces ahead, giving way to a clearing—and in its centre, a pool."
7"Rory caught their arm—or where an arm would’ve been, if Nyx had been fully solid."
8"Small, delicate—bird, maybe, or something equally fragile."
9"The colours deepened, swirling into shapes—almost faces, almost words—before dissolving back into the luminous soup."
10"No—not moved."
11"And the flowers—the ones that had withered at Nyx’s touch—were back."
12"They reached for her—"
13"Not with sound, not with force—with *light*."
14"—A crown of antlers, shattered."
15"—A hand, pale as marble, pressing a knife into another’s palm."
16"—A city, drowning in fire."
17"—A name, whispered in a voice that wasn’t hers: *\"Malphora.\"*"
18"Then, with a ripple of shadows, they turned toward the path—or what Rory hoped was the path."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1164
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.036941580756013746
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006013745704467354
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean8.04
std5.73
cv0.713
sampleLengths
09
115
218
311
411
52
68
712
84
97
1018
1113
1214
1310
147
1515
1612
175
1811
193
202
2112
225
235
2411
257
2618
273
283
2912
303
311
329
334
342
356
3611
3728
3811
394
401
418
427
4318
448
4510
462
478
4822
498
44.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.32075471698113206
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners51
28.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Then, with a ripple of"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences117
matches
0"She flexed her toes, half-expecting"
1"They reached out, fingers—if they"
2"She didn’t need telling twice."
3"She pressed harder."
4"She stepped into one, and"
5"She touched it, half-expecting heat."
6"It was cool."
7"She adjusted the chain, tucking"
8"Their attention had shifted upward."
9"It cast no reflection, only"
10"Her fingers passed through shadow,"
11"She crouched, studying the ground"
12"They were arranged in a"
13"She stood, brushing her hands"
14"She yanked it free, holding"
15"They sprouted from the moss"
16"They were *empty*."
17"They reached for her—"
18"She staggered, arms flying up"
19"She clenched them into fists."
ratio0.179
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences117
matches
0"The air thickened the moment"
1"Rory’s boots sank into moss"
2"She flexed her toes, half-expecting"
3"The earth held, solid and"
4"Nyx materialised beside her, their"
5"Trees stretched upward, their bark"
6"Leaves—emerald, gold, the deep violet"
7"The air smelled of crushed"
8"Rory exhaled, her breath curling"
9"Nyx’s voice carried that whispery"
10"They reached out, fingers—if they"
11"The leaves shivered, then *sang*."
12"A single, crystalline note, high"
13"Rory’s pulse jumped."
14"Nyx retracted their hand, shadow-coils"
15"She didn’t need telling twice."
16"Rory extended her own hand,"
17"The bark was smooth, warm,"
18"She pressed harder."
19"The tree *pulsed*."
ratio0.889
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"As if it had *given*"
ratio0.009
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Trees stretched upward, their bark silvered like moonlight on still water, branches twisting into arcs that defied gravity."
1"The grove stretched behind them, the standing stones they’d passed through now gone, replaced by a tangle of vines heavy with blooms that hadn’t existed a heart…"
2"The moment their fingers closed around the stem, the petals *unfurled*, revealing a core that wasn’t red but a swirling, liquid black."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx’s form flickered, amusement threading through their voice"
18.42% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx retracted (retract)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx observed (observe)"
3"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
4"—A name whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.263
76.6729%