| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.342 | | leniency | 0.684 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1303 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1303 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "crystalline" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "marble" | | 16 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 159 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 29 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 1278 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "sang" | | 1 | "breathing" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "adaptive" | | 4 | "unfurled" | | 5 | "moved" | | 6 | "suggestions" | | 7 | "clung" | | 8 | "soothing" | | 9 | "and" | | 10 | "beautifully" | | 11 | "Light" | | 12 | "shimmer" | | 13 | "Bones" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "something" | | 16 | "moved" | | 17 | "Grown" | | 18 | "eyes" | | 19 | "waiting" | | 20 | "empty" | | 21 | "exploded" | | 22 | "light" | | 23 | "burned" | | 24 | "meaning" | | 25 | "\"Malphora.\"" | | 26 | "Malphora." | | 27 | "given" | | 28 | "Malphora." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1140 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 22 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel-rifts | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Hel-rifts" |
| | globalScore | 0.535 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.13 | | wordCount | 1278 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the brittle, hearth-fire kind, but something deeper, like the first breath of summer after a lo" | | 1 | "not the faint pulse it gave near Hel-rifts, but a steady, deep crimson, like an ember held to the skin" | | 2 | "no longer gaps but" | | 3 | "not with heat but with *meaning*, images searing behind her eyelids" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 21.3 | | std | 18.24 | | cv | 0.856 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 66 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 49 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 36 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "were arranged" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 23 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 159 | | ratio | 0.119 | | matches | | 0 | "One step, they stood beneath the skeletal branches of Richmond Park’s winter oaks, the next—warmth." | | 1 | "Leaves—emerald, gold, the deep violet of twilight—drifted lazily, though there was no wind." | | 2 | "They reached out, fingers—if they could be called that—brushing a low-hanging branch." | | 3 | "The flowers were wrong—petals too dark, centres glistening like fresh wounds." | | 4 | "The flower *moved*, tendrils of darkness lashing out—" | | 5 | "Rory filed it away, scanning the path ahead—or what passed for one." | | 6 | "The trees ended abruptly fifty paces ahead, giving way to a clearing—and in its centre, a pool." | | 7 | "Rory caught their arm—or where an arm would’ve been, if Nyx had been fully solid." | | 8 | "Small, delicate—bird, maybe, or something equally fragile." | | 9 | "The colours deepened, swirling into shapes—almost faces, almost words—before dissolving back into the luminous soup." | | 10 | "No—not moved." | | 11 | "And the flowers—the ones that had withered at Nyx’s touch—were back." | | 12 | "They reached for her—" | | 13 | "Not with sound, not with force—with *light*." | | 14 | "—A crown of antlers, shattered." | | 15 | "—A hand, pale as marble, pressing a knife into another’s palm." | | 16 | "—A city, drowning in fire." | | 17 | "—A name, whispered in a voice that wasn’t hers: *\"Malphora.\"*" | | 18 | "Then, with a ripple of shadows, they turned toward the path—or what Rory hoped was the path." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1164 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.036941580756013746 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006013745704467354 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 159 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 159 | | mean | 8.04 | | std | 5.73 | | cv | 0.713 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 44.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.32075471698113206 | | totalSentences | 159 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 28.49% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a ripple of" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She flexed her toes, half-expecting" | | 1 | "They reached out, fingers—if they" | | 2 | "She didn’t need telling twice." | | 3 | "She pressed harder." | | 4 | "She stepped into one, and" | | 5 | "She touched it, half-expecting heat." | | 6 | "It was cool." | | 7 | "She adjusted the chain, tucking" | | 8 | "Their attention had shifted upward." | | 9 | "It cast no reflection, only" | | 10 | "Her fingers passed through shadow," | | 11 | "She crouched, studying the ground" | | 12 | "They were arranged in a" | | 13 | "She stood, brushing her hands" | | 14 | "She yanked it free, holding" | | 15 | "They sprouted from the moss" | | 16 | "They were *empty*." | | 17 | "They reached for her—" | | 18 | "She staggered, arms flying up" | | 19 | "She clenched them into fists." |
| | ratio | 0.179 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened the moment" | | 1 | "Rory’s boots sank into moss" | | 2 | "She flexed her toes, half-expecting" | | 3 | "The earth held, solid and" | | 4 | "Nyx materialised beside her, their" | | 5 | "Trees stretched upward, their bark" | | 6 | "Leaves—emerald, gold, the deep violet" | | 7 | "The air smelled of crushed" | | 8 | "Rory exhaled, her breath curling" | | 9 | "Nyx’s voice carried that whispery" | | 10 | "They reached out, fingers—if they" | | 11 | "The leaves shivered, then *sang*." | | 12 | "A single, crystalline note, high" | | 13 | "Rory’s pulse jumped." | | 14 | "Nyx retracted their hand, shadow-coils" | | 15 | "She didn’t need telling twice." | | 16 | "Rory extended her own hand," | | 17 | "The bark was smooth, warm," | | 18 | "She pressed harder." | | 19 | "The tree *pulsed*." |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 42.74% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees stretched upward, their bark silvered like moonlight on still water, branches twisting into arcs that defied gravity." | | 1 | "The grove stretched behind them, the standing stones they’d passed through now gone, replaced by a tangle of vines heavy with blooms that hadn’t existed a heart…" | | 2 | "The moment their fingers closed around the stem, the petals *unfurled*, revealing a core that wasn’t red but a swirling, liquid black." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s form flickered, amusement threading through their voice" |
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| 18.42% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx retracted (retract)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "—A name whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.132 | | leniency | 0.263 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.263 | |