Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQDJJMBN4B1Y2JPVQZ83GM

Run Details

Duration:
21.0s
Cost:
$0.002086
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clink of glasses, the occasional burst of laughter that rose and fell like a tide. Rory wiped her hands on her apron, balancing a tray of empty pint glasses against her hip as she weaved through the crowd. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow over the faces of the patrons, turning them into shifting shadows. She didn’t see him at first. Not until she turned, tray tucked under her arm, and nearly collided with a man leaning against the bar. His auburn hair was streaked with grey now, the lines around his eyes deeper, but the signet ring on his right hand caught the light just the same. Silas. His gaze flicked up, hazel eyes locking onto hers. A beat of silence stretched between them, thick as the smoke curling from the cigarette dangling between his fingers. "You’re still here," he said. Rory set the tray down with a clatter. "Where else would I be?" Silas exhaled a slow stream of smoke, watching it dissipate into the air. "Last I heard, you were halfway to Paris with that girl—what was her name? Eva?" "Things change." She wiped her hands on her apron again, though they weren’t wet. "You look like hell." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "And you look like you haven’t slept in a year." She bristled. "I sleep fine." "Do you?" The question hung there, heavy. Rory turned away, busying herself with the glasses. "What are you doing here, Silas? Thought you’d be off in some safe house, counting your secrets." "I own the place, remember?" She stilled. Of course. The Raven’s Nest had always been his. She’d just never thought he’d actually stick around. Silas stubbed out his cigarette. "You’re working here now?" "Part-time. Yu-Fei needed someone for deliveries, and I needed the cash." She shrugged. "It’s not exactly the legal career your old man wanted for you, is it?" His jaw tightened. "Brendan’s not here to care anymore." Rory flinched. She hadn’t known. Hadn’t even thought to ask. Silas must have seen it on her face. "Cancer. Two years back." "I’m sorry." He waved a hand, as if brushing away the words. "You didn’t know." No, she hadn’t. And that was the problem, wasn’t it? The years had slipped by, and she’d let them. Let people fade. Let herself fade. Silas leaned in, voice dropping. "You ever think about how things might’ve been different?" Rory’s fingers curled around the edge of the bar. "All the time." A silence settled between them, not uncomfortable, but heavy. The kind that came with things left unsaid. "You ever hear from Evan?" Silas asked. The name hit like a punch. Rory’s breath caught. "No. And I don’t want to." Silas studied her, his gaze too sharp, too knowing. "You’re lying." She turned away, busying herself with the glasses again. "What do you want from me, Silas?" "The truth." Rory laughed, sharp and bitter. "The truth? The truth is I ran. From him, from Cardiff, from everything. And I don’t regret it." Silas didn’t blink. "Then why do you jump every time the door opens?" Her hands stilled. The glasses clinked softly as she set them down. Silas leaned back, satisfied. "That’s what I thought." Rory exhaled, long and slow. "It’s not that simple." "Nothing ever is." He reached into his pocket, pulled out a fresh cigarette. "You ever think about leaving again?" She hesitated. "Sometimes." "Then do it." He lit the cigarette, the flame flickering in his eyes. "Before it’s too late." Rory looked at him, really looked at him. The grey in his hair, the lines on his face, the way he held himself like a man who’d spent a lifetime waiting for something that never came. She’d known him when he was younger. When he still believed in things. "What about you?" she asked. "You ever think about getting out of this place?" Silas took a drag, exhaled. "This place is all I’ve got left." Rory wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him he deserved more. But the words stuck in her throat. Because she knew what it was like to feel trapped. Silas flicked ash into the tray. "You ever wonder if we just got too good at running?" Rory didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The door to the bar swung open, letting in a gust of cold air. Rory didn’t jump this time. But she did watch it, just for a second, before turning back to Silas. He was watching her too. Neither of them said a word.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.378
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount773
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount773
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"flicked"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords770
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
39.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount543
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Rory12
Silas12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.395
windowScore0.5
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if brushing away the words"
70.13% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.299
wordCount770
matches
0"not uncomfortable, but heavy"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean15.4
std12.21
cv0.793
sampleLengths
069
16
247
31
428
55
613
728
818
918
105
112
1230
135
1419
159
1627
179
1810
1912
202
2113
2225
2314
2412
2517
267
2715
2811
2916
302
3123
3213
3312
348
359
3619
373
3817
3936
4013
4114
4212
4318
4410
4517
467
4733
485
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"was streaked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs108
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences100
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.49% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount543
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.049723756906077346
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009208103130755065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean7.7
std5.71
cv0.741
sampleLengths
026
123
220
36
419
528
61
79
819
95
108
115
1213
1315
1414
154
168
1710
182
193
202
215
228
2317
245
252
262
277
288
295
304
3113
3214
333
346
352
363
375
388
394
402
4110
423
433
447
459
463
473
485
499
60.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.37
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences60
matches
0"She didn’t see him at"
1"His auburn hair was streaked"
2"His gaze flicked up, hazel"
3"She wiped her hands on"
4"She’d just never thought he’d"
5"His jaw tightened."
6"She hadn’t known."
7"He waved a hand, as"
8"She turned away, busying herself"
9"Her hands stilled."
10"He reached into his pocket,"
11"He lit the cigarette, the"
12"She’d known him when he"
13"She didn’t have to."
14"He was watching her too."
ratio0.25
51.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences60
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"The green neon sign outside"
3"She didn’t see him at"
4"His auburn hair was streaked"
5"His gaze flicked up, hazel"
6"A beat of silence stretched"
7"Rory set the tray down"
8"Silas exhaled a slow stream"
9"She wiped her hands on"
10"A ghost of a smile"
11"The question hung there, heavy."
12"Rory turned away, busying herself"
13"The Raven’s Nest had always"
14"She’d just never thought he’d"
15"Silas stubbed out his cigarette."
16"His jaw tightened."
17"She hadn’t known."
18"Silas must have seen it"
19"He waved a hand, as"
ratio0.817
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Because she knew what it"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He lit, the flame flickering in his eyes"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.162
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.5817%