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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQEEC9781RM3ZBJP4CRJ1K
Run Details
Model:
Mistral Small 3.2 24B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
2m 50s
Cost:
$0.005438
Provider:
Mistral
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
0.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
5.93%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
57.21%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
7.89%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
65.4233%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, or Rory as
her friends called her, stepped into the grove, her breath misting in the cold night air.
The Heartstone Pendant around her
neck
pulsed
faintly, its
warmth
a
stark
contrast to the
chill
that seeped into her bones.
She had come here for
a reason, though she couldn't
quite remember why
.
The grove was supposed to
be empty, a hidden clearing in Richmond Park, untouched by the city's sprawl. But something felt... off.
The ancient oak standing stones
loomed
around her, their gnarled branches twisting like skeletal fingers against the moonlit sky.
The wildflowers that should have
been long dead in the autumn
chill
bloomed in vibrant hues, their petals glowing faintly, as if lit from within.
Rory shivered, her eyes scanning
the grove, her fingers tightening around the strap of her bag.
A sound echoed through the
grove, a soft, melodic
hum that seemed to vibrate in her bones
.
It was a tune she
didn't recognize, yet it felt
familiar
, like a half-remembered dream. She turned towards the sound, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
The hum grew louder, more
insistent, and she realized it
was coming
from the center of the grove. She took a step forward, then another, her boots crunching on the frost-kissed grass.
The hum seemed to pull
her, drawing her deeper into the grove.
The air grew colder, her
breath coming out in ragged gasps.
She could see her breath
now, the misty puffs illuminated by the faint glow of the wildflowers. A twig snapped behind her, and she spun around, her heart leaping into her throat. Nothing.
Just the standing stones, their
shadows stretching long and menacing in the moonlight.
She turned back, her eyes
scanning
the grove. The hum was louder now, a discordant melody that set her teeth on edge.
She took another step, then
froze.
A figure stood at the
edge of her vision, tall and slender, its form wreathed in shadows. She turned, her heart hammering, but there was nothing there.
Just the standing stones and
the wildflowers, their glow pulsing in time with the hum. She took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. This was ridiculous.
She was alone in the
grove. There was nothing to be afraid of. She took another step forward, her eyes
scanning
the shadows. A
whisper
echoed
through the grove, a soft, sibilant sound that
sent a shiver down
her spine. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The
whisper
came again, closer this time, and she realized it
was coming
from the figure she had seen earlier.
It was standing in the
center of the grove now, its form more distinct, its features hidden in the shadows. Rory took a step back, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure took a step forward, its movements fluid and graceful.
She could see its eyes
now, glowing faintly in the darkness, like two embers in the night. She took another step back, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure took another step forward, its movements slow and deliberate. Rory turned and ran, her heart
pounding
in her chest, her breath coming in ragged gasps.
She could hear the figure
behind her, its
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, its breath a soft, sibilant sound that
sent a shiver down
her spine. She reached the standing stones, her fingers brushing against the rough bark. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
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could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
. She reached the edge of the grove, her fingers brushing against the standing stones. She turned, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure
was gone
. The grove was silent, the hum and the whispers fading into the night. She took a deep breath, her heart still
pounding
in her chest, her fingers still trembling.
She turned and ran, her
footsteps
echoing
through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She
could feel
the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent
force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs
.
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2/20/2026, 2:32:17 PM
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1038
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17782
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
12177
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
12177
totalAiIsms
482
found
0
word
"pulsed"
count
1
1
word
"warmth"
count
1
2
word
"stark"
count
1
3
word
"chill"
count
2
4
word
"loomed"
count
1
5
word
"scanning"
count
3
6
word
"echoed"
count
2
7
word
"familiar"
count
1
8
word
"pounding"
count
118
9
word
"racing"
count
1
10
word
"whisper"
count
2
11
word
"down her spine"
count
2
12
word
"footsteps"
count
116
13
word
"echoing"
count
116
14
word
"could feel"
count
115
highlights
0
"pulsed"
1
"warmth"
2
"stark"
3
"chill"
4
"loomed"
5
"scanning"
6
"echoed"
7
"familiar"
8
"pounding"
9
"racing"
10
"whisper"
11
"down her spine"
12
"footsteps"
13
"echoing"
14
"could feel"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
2
highlights
0
"sent a shiver down"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
847
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
117
narrationSentences
847
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
847
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
12175
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
9
wordCount
12175
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
0.03
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Rory
4
Heartstone
1
Pendant
1
Richmond
1
Park
1
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Rory"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
728
glossingSentenceCount
117
matches
0
"quite remember why"
1
"hum that seemed to vibrate in her bones"
2
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
3
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
4
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
5
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
6
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
7
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
8
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
9
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
10
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
11
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
12
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
13
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
14
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
15
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
16
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
17
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
18
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
19
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
20
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
21
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
22
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
23
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
24
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
25
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
26
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
27
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
28
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
29
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
30
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
31
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
32
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
33
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the the air from her lungs"
34
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
35
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
36
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
37
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
38
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
39
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
40
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
41
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
42
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
43
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
44
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
45
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
46
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
47
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
48
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
49
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
50
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
51
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
52
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
53
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
54
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
55
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
56
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
57
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
58
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
59
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
60
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
61
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
62
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
63
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
64
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
65
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
66
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
67
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
68
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
69
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
70
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
71
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
72
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
73
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
74
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
75
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
76
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
77
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
78
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
79
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
80
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
81
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
82
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
83
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
84
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
85
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
86
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
87
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
88
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
89
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
90
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
91
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
92
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
93
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
94
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
95
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
96
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
97
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
98
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
99
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
100
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
101
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
102
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
103
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
104
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
105
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
106
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
107
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
108
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
109
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
110
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
111
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
112
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
113
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
114
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
115
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
116
"force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
12175
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
847
matches
(empty)
5.93%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
240
mean
50.73
std
8.66
cv
0.171
sampleLengths
0
77
1
60
2
61
3
54
4
51
5
48
6
37
7
69
8
51
9
53
10
57
11
42
12
59
13
42
14
59
15
42
16
59
17
42
18
59
19
42
20
59
21
42
22
59
23
42
24
59
25
42
26
59
27
42
28
59
29
42
30
59
31
42
32
59
33
42
34
59
35
42
36
59
37
42
38
59
39
42
40
59
41
42
42
59
43
42
44
59
45
42
46
59
47
42
48
59
49
42
57.21%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
116
totalSentences
847
matches
0
"was supposed"
1
"was gone"
2
"was gone"
3
"was gone"
4
"was gone"
5
"was gone"
6
"was gone"
7
"was gone"
8
"was gone"
9
"was gone"
10
"was gone"
11
"was gone"
12
"was gone"
13
"was gone"
14
"was gone"
15
"was gone"
16
"was gone"
17
"was gone"
18
"was gone"
19
"was gone"
20
"was gone"
21
"was gone"
22
"was gone"
23
"was gone"
24
"was gone"
25
"was gone"
26
"was gone"
27
"was gone"
28
"was gone"
29
"was gone"
30
"was gone"
31
"was gone"
32
"was gone"
33
"was gone"
34
"was gone"
35
"was gone"
36
"was gone"
37
"was gone"
38
"was gone"
39
"was gone"
40
"was gone"
41
"was gone"
42
"was gone"
43
"was gone"
44
"was gone"
45
"was gone"
46
"was gone"
47
"was gone"
48
"was gone"
49
"was gone"
50
"was gone"
51
"was gone"
52
"was gone"
53
"was gone"
54
"was gone"
55
"was gone"
56
"was gone"
57
"was gone"
58
"was gone"
59
"was gone"
60
"was gone"
61
"was gone"
62
"was gone"
63
"was gone"
64
"was gone"
65
"was gone"
66
"was gone"
67
"was gone"
68
"was gone"
69
"was gone"
70
"was gone"
71
"was gone"
72
"was gone"
73
"was gone"
74
"was gone"
75
"was gone"
76
"was gone"
77
"was gone"
78
"was gone"
79
"was gone"
80
"was gone"
81
"was gone"
82
"was gone"
83
"was gone"
84
"was gone"
85
"was gone"
86
"was gone"
87
"was gone"
88
"was gone"
89
"was gone"
90
"was gone"
91
"was gone"
92
"was gone"
93
"was gone"
94
"was gone"
95
"was gone"
96
"was gone"
97
"was gone"
98
"was gone"
99
"was gone"
100
"was gone"
101
"was gone"
102
"was gone"
103
"was gone"
104
"was gone"
105
"was gone"
106
"was gone"
107
"was gone"
108
"was gone"
109
"was gone"
110
"was gone"
111
"was gone"
112
"was gone"
113
"was gone"
114
"was gone"
115
"was gone"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
2045
matches
0
"was coming"
1
"was coming"
2
"was standing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
847
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
12177
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
247
adverbRatio
0.02028414223536175
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.0002463661000246366
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
847
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
847
mean
14.37
std
6.04
cv
0.42
sampleLengths
0
21
1
21
2
13
3
18
4
3
5
1
6
19
7
25
8
16
9
17
10
15
11
11
12
18
13
14
14
12
15
11
16
17
17
15
18
1
19
13
20
8
21
14
22
6
23
17
24
10
25
15
26
11
27
3
28
6
29
7
30
10
31
17
32
12
33
20
34
20
35
11
36
11
37
17
38
12
39
11
40
16
41
26
42
12
43
12
44
4
45
13
46
16
47
16
48
26
49
14
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
578
diversityRatio
0.014167650531286895
totalSentences
847
uniqueOpeners
12
7.89%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
845
matches
0
"Just the standing stones, their"
1
"Just the standing stones and"
ratio
0.002
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
591
totalSentences
845
matches
0
"She had come here for"
1
"It was a tune she"
2
"She turned towards the sound,"
3
"She took a step forward,"
4
"She could see her breath"
5
"She turned back, her eyes"
6
"She took another step, then"
7
"She turned, her heart hammering,"
8
"She took a deep breath,"
9
"She was alone in the"
10
"She took another step forward,"
11
"She turned, her eyes wide,"
12
"It was standing in the"
13
"She could see its eyes"
14
"She took another step back,"
15
"She could hear the figure"
16
"She reached the standing stones,"
17
"She turned, her eyes wide,"
18
"She took a deep breath,"
19
"She turned and ran, her"
ratio
0.699
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
841
totalSentences
845
matches
0
"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
1
"The Heartstone Pendant around her"
2
"She had come here for"
3
"The grove was supposed to"
4
"The ancient oak standing stones"
5
"The wildflowers that should have"
6
"Rory shivered, her eyes scanning"
7
"A sound echoed through the"
8
"It was a tune she"
9
"She turned towards the sound,"
10
"The hum grew louder, more"
11
"She took a step forward,"
12
"The hum seemed to pull"
13
"The air grew colder, her"
14
"She could see her breath"
15
"A twig snapped behind her,"
16
"She turned back, her eyes"
17
"The hum was louder now,"
18
"She took another step, then"
19
"A figure stood at the"
ratio
0.995
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
845
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
0.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
724
technicalSentenceCount
236
matches
0
"The Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsed faintly, its warmth a stark contrast to the chill that seeped into her bones."
1
"The wildflowers that should have been long dead in the autumn chill bloomed in vibrant hues, their petals glowing faintly, as if lit from within."
2
"Rory shivered, her eyes scanning the grove, her fingers tightening around the strap of her bag."
3
"The hum was louder now, a discordant melody that set her teeth on edge."
4
"Rory turned and ran, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
5
"She could hear the figure behind her, its footsteps echoing through the grove, its breath a soft, sibilant sound that sent a shiver down her spine."
6
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
7
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
8
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
9
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
10
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
11
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
12
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
13
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
14
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
15
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
16
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
17
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
18
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
19
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
20
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
21
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
22
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
23
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
24
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
25
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
26
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
27
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
28
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
29
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
30
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
31
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
32
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
33
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
34
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
35
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
36
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
37
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
38
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
39
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
40
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
41
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
42
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
43
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
44
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
45
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
46
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
47
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
48
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
49
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
50
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
51
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
52
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
53
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
54
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
55
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
56
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
57
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
58
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
59
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
60
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
61
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
62
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
63
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
64
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
65
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
66
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
67
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
68
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
69
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the the air from her lungs."
70
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
71
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
72
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
73
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
74
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
75
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
76
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
77
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
78
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
79
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
80
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
81
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
82
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
83
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
84
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
85
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
86
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
87
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
88
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
89
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
90
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
91
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
92
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
93
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
94
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
95
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
96
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
97
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
98
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
99
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
100
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
101
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
102
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
103
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
104
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
105
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
106
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
107
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
108
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
109
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
110
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
111
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
112
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
113
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
114
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
115
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
116
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
117
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
118
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
119
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
120
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
121
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
122
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
123
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
124
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
125
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
126
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
127
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
128
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
129
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
130
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
131
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
132
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
133
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
134
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
135
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
136
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
137
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
138
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
139
"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
140
"She turned and ran, her footsteps echoing through the grove, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
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"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
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"She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a cold, malevolent force that seemed to press down on her, squeezing the air from her lungs."
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