Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQEJX0PQ0QCKH1289R1W7Y

Run Details

Duration:
26.5s
Cost:
$0.003288
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. The door swung open just wide enough for Aurora to see a sliver of Eva’s face—eyes narrowed, lips pressed thin—before the chain caught. “You’ve got some nerve.” Lucien’s voice came from behind her, smooth as aged brandy. “I do. But not as much as you, *chérie*.” Eva’s glare flicked past Aurora’s shoulder, then snapped back. “What the hell is *he* doing here?” Aurora didn’t move. The hallway smelled of curry and damp concrete, the scent clinging to her jacket. She could feel Lucien’s presence like a current, warm and dangerous, just out of sight. “He’s with me.” A beat. Eva’s fingers tightened around the door edge. “You’re joking.” “Wish I was.” The chain rattled as Eva unhooked it, then yanked the door wide. The flat beyond was a maze of towering book stacks, yellowed scrolls curled at the edges, and takeaway containers balanced precariously on every surface. Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between a pile of leather-bound tomes, tail flicking in disdain. Eva crossed her arms. “Last time I saw him, he left you crying in a back alley. Or did you forget?” Aurora’s jaw clenched. The memory tasted like copper—Lucien’s low laugh as he walked away, the weight of his words still bruising her ribs. *Some things aren’t worth fixing, Rory.* She stepped inside before Eva could slam the door in their faces. The floorboards groaned under her boots. “I haven’t forgotten. But we need his help.” Lucien followed, the tip of his cane tapping lightly against the threshold. His suit was immaculate, not a crease out of place, as if he hadn’t just spent the last hour trailing Aurora through the rain-slicked streets. “Always a pleasure, Eva.” Eva’s nostrils flared. “Don’t ‘Eva’ me, you snake-eyed bastard.” A slow smile curled his lips. “Still so charming.” Aurora shoved a stack of books off the sofa with her hip, sending a cloud of dust into the air. “Sit. Both of you.” Lucien lowered himself onto the newly cleared space with the grace of a man who’d never once doubted his welcome. Eva remained standing, arms folded, glaring at him like he might sprout horns at any moment. (He already had, technically. Just not the visible kind.) Aurora dragged over a wooden crate and perched on it, rolling up the sleeves of her hoodie. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the light. “We’ve got a problem.” Eva’s gaze flicked to the scar, then away. “When don’t we?” Lucien leaned forward, resting his forearms on his knees. The amber eye, the black one—both locked onto Aurora. “The thing from the docks. It wasn’t a one-off.” A cold finger traced Aurora’s spine. “You’re sure?” “Three more sightings. All near the Thames. All within the last forty-eight hours.” His voice dropped. “It’s hunting.” Eva exhaled sharply. “Fantastic. And let me guess—you two lovebirds already tried to handle it yourselves and fucked it up?” Aurora ignored the jab. “We tracked it to an old warehouse in Wapping. Lost it in the tunnels.” “Convenient.” Lucien’s cane rotated between his palms, a slow, deliberate motion. “It’s not just convenient, *ma petite sorcière*. It’s deliberate. That thing *wanted* us to follow.” Eva’s fingers twitched toward the athame tucked into her boot. “So what? It’s playing with you?” “With *us*,” Aurora corrected. “And yeah. Like a cat with a mouse.” A muscle feathered in Lucien’s jaw. “Then we stop being mice.” Eva barked a laugh. “Oh, brilliant plan. Why didn’t I think of that?” She turned on Aurora. “And you—you actually *trust* him after what he did?” Aurora met her stare. “I don’t. But I trust that he doesn’t want to die any more than we do.” Lucien’s mouth quirked. “Flattering.” Eva threw her hands up. “Unbelievable. You’re both insane.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the sofa, tail brushing against Lucien’s sleeve. The demon froze. The cat sniffed, then—after a considering pause—curled into a tight ball against his thigh and began purring. Eva’s eyes narrowed. “Traitor.” Lucien stroked a finger along the cat’s spine. “Animals have excellent judgement.” Aurora rubbed her temples. “Can we focus? The thing’s getting bolder. Last night it took a dockworker. Left his *shadow* painted on the wall like a fucking calling card.” Eva’s breath hitched. “Shadow?” “Not a metaphor.” Lucien’s voice was flat. “The man was there one second, gone the next. All that remained was… an imprint. Like he’d been pressed into the bricks.” A silence settled, thick and suffocating. Ptolemy’s purr was the only sound. Eva finally exhaled. “Fine. But if this goes sideways, I’m leaving you both to the mercy of whatever the hell that thing is.” Lucien inclined his head. “Wouldn’t expect anything less.” Aurora stood, shaking out her hands. “Good. Then we—” The lights flickered. All three of them went still. Eva’s voice dropped to a whisper. “That’s not the wiring.” A low, wet *click* echoed from the hallway. Then another. Like bones knitting together. Lucien was on his feet in an instant, cane gripped tight. The blade inside remained sheathed—for now. “It found us.” Aurora’s pulse hammered in her throat. “Eva, your salt line—” “Already down.” Eva lunged for the shelf behind her, fingers closing around a jar of black powder. “Shit. *Shit.*” The clicking grew louder. Closer. Lucien moved to Aurora’s side, his free hand brushing the small of her back—just for a second. A silent *stay behind me*. She ignored it, reaching for the iron poker by the fireplace. The flat’s temperature plummeted. Eva hurled the powder toward the door. It hit the air and *ignited*, a wall of blue flame roaring to life. The shadows beyond the fire *twisted*, coalescing into something with too many joints, too many eyes— Then the lights went out. In the dark, Aurora heard Lucien’s breath against her ear. “Run.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount981
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount981
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"roaring"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"could feel"
2"jaw clenched"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
7"whisper"
8"echoed"
9"pulse"
10"roaring"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
2"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans13
markdownWords22
totalWords966
ratio0.023
matches
0"chérie"
1"he"
2"Some things aren’t worth fixing, Rory."
3"ma petite sorcière"
4"wanted"
5"us"
6"trust"
7"shadow"
8"click"
9"Shit."
10"stay behind me"
11"ignited"
12"twisted"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
5.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount657
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.89
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora18
Eva19
Lucien16
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.054
windowScore0.167
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like copper—Lucien’s low laugh as"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount966
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean17.56
std11.69
cv0.665
sampleLengths
027
14
219
316
435
511
63
750
821
929
1026
1141
129
139
1424
1545
1630
1711
1827
198
2018
2120
2218
231
2425
2516
2612
2711
2826
2920
304
319
3234
334
3412
3529
364
3729
3812
3923
408
419
423
436
4410
4514
4620
4710
4819
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences120
ratio0.058
matches
0"The door swung open just wide enough for Aurora to see a sliver of Eva’s face—eyes narrowed, lips pressed thin—before the chain caught."
1"The memory tasted like copper—Lucien’s low laugh as he walked away, the weight of his words still bruising her ribs."
2"The amber eye, the black one—both locked onto Aurora."
3"The cat sniffed, then—after a considering pause—curled into a tight ball against his thigh and began purring."
4"The blade inside remained sheathed—for now."
5"Lucien moved to Aurora’s side, his free hand brushing the small of her back—just for a second."
6"The shadows beyond the fire *twisted*, coalescing into something with too many joints, too many eyes—"
96.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount667
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.043478260869565216
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010494752623688156
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean8.05
std6
cv0.745
sampleLengths
04
123
24
310
49
59
67
73
814
915
103
112
127
132
143
1512
1624
1714
184
1917
203
2120
226
2312
246
258
2612
2725
284
293
306
316
323
3320
344
3520
3616
374
385
3917
409
414
428
433
449
459
469
476
482
4916
64.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4083333333333333
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners49
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Just not the visible kind.)"
1"Then the lights went out."
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences75
matches
0"She could feel Lucien’s presence"
1"She stepped inside before Eva"
2"His suit was immaculate, not"
3"(He already had, technically."
4"His voice dropped"
5"She turned on Aurora"
6"She ignored it, reaching for"
7"It hit the air and"
ratio0.107
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences75
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"The door swung open just"
2"Lucien’s voice came from behind"
3"Eva’s glare flicked past Aurora’s"
4"Aurora didn’t move."
5"The hallway smelled of curry"
6"She could feel Lucien’s presence"
7"Eva’s fingers tightened around the"
8"The chain rattled as Eva"
9"The flat beyond was a"
10"Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between"
11"Eva crossed her arms."
12"Aurora’s jaw clenched."
13"The memory tasted like copper—Lucien’s"
14"*Some things aren’t worth fixing,"
15"She stepped inside before Eva"
16"The floorboards groaned under her"
17"Lucien followed, the tip of"
18"His suit was immaculate, not"
19"Eva’s nostrils flared."
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His suit was immaculate, not a crease out of place, as if he hadn’t just spent the last hour trailing Aurora through the rain-slicked streets."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva lunged, fingers closing around a jar of black powder"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.022
leniency0.043
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.043
76.0475%