Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQEQVETYATH9D9EGFP2BRN

Run Details

Duration:
29.0s
Cost:
$0.002834
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones loomed like jagged teeth against the indigo sky, their gnarled roots twisting deep into the earth. Rory’s breath misted in the cold air as she stepped between them, the soles of her boots sinking into damp moss. The Fae Grove didn’t so much welcome her as it *allowed* her entry—a distinction she’d learned the hard way. She shouldn’t have come at night. The thought skittered through her mind, sharp and unwelcome, but she shoved it down. The pendant around her neck had pulsed all afternoon, warm against her collarbone, insistent. That meant a Hel portal was near. And if there was a portal, there was a chance—however slim—of finding answers. The wildflowers here never slept. They swayed in a breeze that didn’t exist, petals brushing her wrists as she moved deeper into the clearing. The air smelled of wet earth and something older, something metallic and faintly sweet, like rust and overripe fruit. Her fingers twitched toward the pendant, but she didn’t touch it. Not yet. A twig snapped behind her. Rory froze. The sound was too deliberate, too *loud* for the soft ground. She turned slowly, scanning the shadows between the trees. Nothing moved. Just the flowers, nodding in their silent rhythm. “Right. Just the wind.” Her voice came out thinner than she intended. She cleared her throat and kept walking. The deeper she went, the heavier the air became, pressing against her skin like damp wool. The pendant’s glow seeped through her shirt, casting a faint red halo on the fabric. She could feel it now—the portal. Close. Maybe twenty feet ahead, near the cluster of birch trees with their peeling bark like sun-bleached bones. Another sound. This time, a whisper of fabric, the faintest *shush* of movement. Rory spun. The clearing was empty. “Okay, this is getting old.” She exhaled through her nose, forced her shoulders to relax. The Grove played tricks. That’s what Eva had warned her. *Time slips. Shadows breathe. Don’t trust what you see.* But this wasn’t shadows. This was something else. A low hum vibrated in her skull, just at the edge of hearing. Not an insect, not the wind—something deeper, like a tuning fork struck against bone. The pendant flared hot against her sternum. She yanked it free of her shirt, the silver chain cold between her fingers. The crimson gem pulsed in time with the hum, its inner light flickering like a dying ember. “There you are.” The portal wasn’t a door or a tear in the air. It was a *absence*—a patch of darkness between the birches that drank the light around it. No stars reflected in its depths. No wind stirred its edges. Just a void, waiting. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She took a step forward. A branch creaked above her. She ducked on instinct, arms flying up to shield her head. Nothing fell. When she looked, the birch branches were still, their leaves trembling only when she exhaled. “Stop it,” she muttered. The hum swelled, pressing against her eardrums. The pendant’s glow brightened, casting long, wavering shadows across the ground. Shadows that didn’t quite match the shapes of the trees. One of them twitched. Rory’s breath hitched. The shadow—long, spindly, *wrong*—detached itself from the base of an oak and slithered toward her. Not like a person. Not like anything with bones. It moved like ink in water, rippling, stretching. Her fingers clenched around the pendant. The heat of it bordered on pain. “You’re not real.” The shadow paused. Then it *laughed*. A wet, clicking sound, like a throat full of phlegm. Rory stumbled back. The portal was right there, a black maw between the trees. She could run. She could— The shadow lunged. She barely dodged, her boot catching on a root. She went down hard, palms slapping into the damp earth. The pendant flew from her grip, the chain snapping. It landed near the portal, the gem’s glow now a frantic stutter, like a heartbeat. The shadow coiled above her, its edges fraying into tendrils. One brushed her cheek—cold, clammy, like a slug’s belly. She recoiled, scrambling backward on her hands and heels. “What the *hell* are you?” It didn’t answer. It didn’t need to. The way it *leaned* toward her, the way its form shifted—sometimes tall, sometimes squat, sometimes stretching long and thin like a starving thing—told her enough. The pendant’s light dimmed. The hum faded. The portal was closing. Rory dove. Her fingers closed around the chain just as the shadow’s tendrils wrapped around her ankle. Ice seared her skin where it touched. She kicked, twisted, and the thing *screamed*—a sound like tearing silk, like a thousand voices whispering at once. The portal swallowed her whole. Cold. Darkness. The sensation of falling without moving. Then— Silence. Rory gasped, her lungs burning. She was on her hands and knees in the Grove again, the pendant clutched in her fist. The shadow was gone. The portal was gone. The only light came from the stars above, sharp and indifferent. Her wrist throbbed. She turned her hand over. Three thin, blackened lines scored her skin above the old crescent scar. Like burns. Like something had *marked* her. She swallowed hard. The Grove was still. Too still. Something was watching.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount887
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount887
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"depths"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"wavering"
count1
9
word"maw"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"scanning"
3"could feel"
4"whisper"
5"vibrated"
6"depths"
7"pulse"
8"wavering"
9"maw"
10"silk"
11"silence"
12"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords19
totalWords877
ratio0.022
matches
0"allowed"
1"loud"
2"shush"
3"Time slips. Shadows breathe. Don’t trust what you see."
4"absence"
5"wrong"
6"laughed"
7"hell"
8"leaned"
9"screamed"
10"marked"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount855
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove4
Hel1
Eva1
Silence1
Rory8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite match the shapes of the trees"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount877
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean17.9
std18.17
cv1.015
sampleLengths
060
16
248
356
45
532
64
715
855
913
102
114
125
1329
148
1565
163
1742
1811
195
2028
214
2228
234
2435
2513
263
2716
2819
293
3043
3128
325
3332
347
354
362
3740
385
398
401
411
4241
438
4419
453
464
472
483
98.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences116
ratio0.095
matches
0"The Fae Grove didn’t so much welcome her as it *allowed* her entry—a distinction she’d learned the hard way."
1"And if there was a portal, there was a chance—however slim—of finding answers."
2"She could feel it now—the portal."
3"Not an insect, not the wind—something deeper, like a tuning fork struck against bone."
4"It was a *absence*—a patch of darkness between the birches that drank the light around it."
5"The shadow—long, spindly, *wrong*—detached itself from the base of an oak and slithered toward her."
6"She could—"
7"One brushed her cheek—cold, clammy, like a slug’s belly."
8"The way it *leaned* toward her, the way its form shifted—sometimes tall, sometimes squat, sometimes stretching long and thin like a starving thing—told her enough."
9"She kicked, twisted, and the thing *screamed*—a sound like tearing silk, like a thousand voices whispering at once."
10"Then—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount865
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03930635838150289
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008092485549132947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean7.56
std5.38
cv0.712
sampleLengths
020
121
219
36
414
514
67
713
85
919
1019
1111
122
135
142
1511
169
172
188
194
208
217
2216
2315
246
251
2617
272
2811
292
304
315
3210
334
346
352
362
375
384
394
4013
4114
427
4314
4417
453
4611
4716
486
495
42.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3275862068965517
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences93
matches
0"Just the flowers, nodding in"
1"Maybe twenty feet ahead, near"
2"Just a void, waiting."
3"Then it *laughed*."
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences93
matches
0"She shouldn’t have come at"
1"They swayed in a breeze"
2"Her fingers twitched toward the"
3"She turned slowly, scanning the"
4"Her voice came out thinner"
5"She cleared her throat and"
6"She could feel it now—the"
7"She exhaled through her nose,"
8"She yanked it free of"
9"It was a *absence*—a patch"
10"She took a step forward."
11"She ducked on instinct, arms"
12"It moved like ink in"
13"Her fingers clenched around the"
14"She could run."
15"She barely dodged, her boot"
16"She went down hard, palms"
17"It landed near the portal,"
18"She recoiled, scrambling backward on"
19"It didn’t answer."
ratio0.29
51.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences93
matches
0"The oak standing stones loomed"
1"Rory’s breath misted in the"
2"The Fae Grove didn’t so"
3"She shouldn’t have come at"
4"The thought skittered through her"
5"The pendant around her neck"
6"That meant a Hel portal"
7"The wildflowers here never slept."
8"They swayed in a breeze"
9"The air smelled of wet"
10"Her fingers twitched toward the"
11"A twig snapped behind her."
12"The sound was too deliberate,"
13"She turned slowly, scanning the"
14"Her voice came out thinner"
15"She cleared her throat and"
16"The deeper she went, the"
17"The pendant’s glow seeped through"
18"She could feel it now—the"
19"This time, a whisper of"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was a *absence*—a patch of darkness between the birches that drank the light around it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.333
83.6104%