| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 887 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 887 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "maw" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 877 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "allowed" | | 1 | "loud" | | 2 | "shush" | | 3 | "Time slips. Shadows breathe. Don’t trust what you see." | | 4 | "absence" | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "laughed" | | 7 | "hell" | | 8 | "leaned" | | 9 | "screamed" | | 10 | "marked" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 855 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the shapes of the trees" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 877 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 17.9 | | std | 18.17 | | cv | 1.015 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 65 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 3 |
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| 98.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove didn’t so much welcome her as it *allowed* her entry—a distinction she’d learned the hard way." | | 1 | "And if there was a portal, there was a chance—however slim—of finding answers." | | 2 | "She could feel it now—the portal." | | 3 | "Not an insect, not the wind—something deeper, like a tuning fork struck against bone." | | 4 | "It was a *absence*—a patch of darkness between the birches that drank the light around it." | | 5 | "The shadow—long, spindly, *wrong*—detached itself from the base of an oak and slithered toward her." | | 6 | "She could—" | | 7 | "One brushed her cheek—cold, clammy, like a slug’s belly." | | 8 | "The way it *leaned* toward her, the way its form shifted—sometimes tall, sometimes squat, sometimes stretching long and thin like a starving thing—told her enough." | | 9 | "She kicked, twisted, and the thing *screamed*—a sound like tearing silk, like a thousand voices whispering at once." | | 10 | "Then—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 865 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03930635838150289 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008092485549132947 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 7.56 | | std | 5.38 | | cv | 0.712 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 42.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3275862068965517 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the flowers, nodding in" | | 1 | "Maybe twenty feet ahead, near" | | 2 | "Just a void, waiting." | | 3 | "Then it *laughed*." |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 1 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 2 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 3 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 4 | "Her voice came out thinner" | | 5 | "She cleared her throat and" | | 6 | "She could feel it now—the" | | 7 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 8 | "She yanked it free of" | | 9 | "It was a *absence*—a patch" | | 10 | "She took a step forward." | | 11 | "She ducked on instinct, arms" | | 12 | "It moved like ink in" | | 13 | "Her fingers clenched around the" | | 14 | "She could run." | | 15 | "She barely dodged, her boot" | | 16 | "She went down hard, palms" | | 17 | "It landed near the portal," | | 18 | "She recoiled, scrambling backward on" | | 19 | "It didn’t answer." |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 51.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones loomed" | | 1 | "Rory’s breath misted in the" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove didn’t so" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 4 | "The thought skittered through her" | | 5 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 6 | "That meant a Hel portal" | | 7 | "The wildflowers here never slept." | | 8 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 9 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 10 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 11 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 12 | "The sound was too deliberate," | | 13 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 14 | "Her voice came out thinner" | | 15 | "She cleared her throat and" | | 16 | "The deeper she went, the" | | 17 | "The pendant’s glow seeped through" | | 18 | "She could feel it now—the" | | 19 | "This time, a whisper of" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a *absence*—a patch of darkness between the birches that drank the light around it." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |