Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQF7X3TG03B3PQRRY1QCSH

Run Details

Duration:
15.2s
Cost:
$0.000494
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm, cluttered life beyond. Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes wide with surprise, stood in the doorway of her flat, her straight black hair slightly disheveled, as if she'd been running her fingers through it in frustration. She blinked at the figure standing before her, her heart pounding in her chest like a drum. Lucien Moreau offered a small, tentative smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—searching her face. He was dressed in his usual tailored charcoal suit, the ivory-handled cane in his hand a stark contrast to the worn wood of the doorframe. "Aurora," he said, his voice a low, velvety rumble. "May I come in?" Rory hesitated, her fingers tightening around the edge of the door. She could feel the weight of the past pressing down on her, the memories of their last encounter still raw and aching. But there was something in his eyes, a vulnerability she hadn't seen before, that made her step back and let him in. The flat was small and cramped, every surface covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged on the armchair, his tail flicking lazily as he watched them. Lucien's gaze swept over the room, taking in the familiar chaos. "You've made yourself at home," he commented, a hint of amusement in his voice. Rory closed the door behind him, the sound of the three deadbolts clicking into place echoing through the room. "It's not like I had much choice," she said, crossing her arms over her chest. "Eva needed a place to stay, and I needed a place to hide." Lucien turned to face her, his expression softening. "I'm sorry, Aurora," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "For everything." Rory looked away, her eyes burning with unshed tears. She could still remember the way he had looked at her the last time they had been together, the way his hands had felt on her skin. She could still remember the way he had left, without a word, without a backward glance. "Why are you here, Lucien?" she asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. Lucien sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back platinum blond hair. "I needed to see you," he said. "To explain. To apologize." Rory turned to face him, her eyes searching his. "For what?" she asked. "For leaving me? For breaking my heart? For making me feel like I was nothing more than a pawn in your games?" Lucien flinched, as if her words had physically struck him. "For all of it," he said. "For everything. I never meant to hurt you, Aurora. You have to believe me." Rory looked away, her eyes filling with tears. She could feel the weight of his words pressing down on her, the truth of them resonating deep within her. But she was afraid, afraid to trust him, afraid to let him back into her life. Lucien reached out, his hand hovering over her shoulder for a moment before he let it fall to his side. "I know I have no right to ask for your forgiveness," he said. "But I'm asking anyway. Please, Aurora. Give me a chance to make things right." Rory looked up at him, her eyes searching his face. She could see the sincerity in his eyes, the depth of his regret. And she knew, in that moment, that she couldn't turn him away. "Okay," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "But you have to promise me something, Lucien. You have to promise me that you won't hurt me again." Lucien reached out, his hand cupping her cheek. "I promise," he said, his voice steady and sure. "I promise, Aurora. I won't hurt you again." Rory leaned into his touch, her eyes closing as she savored the feel of his skin against hers. She could feel the warmth of his hand, the strength of his promise. And she knew, in that moment, that she could trust him. Lucien's hand slid down to her shoulder, his fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "I'm sorry," he said, his voice soft. "For everything." Rory opened her eyes, looking up at him. "I know," she said, her voice steady. "I know you are." They stood there for a moment, their eyes locked, their breaths mingling. And then, slowly, Lucien leaned down, his lips brushing against hers in a gentle, tentative kiss. Rory melted into him, her arms wrapping around his neck as she deepened the kiss. She could feel the heat of his body against hers, the strength of his arms as they pulled her close. And she knew, in that moment, that she was exactly where she was meant to be. Lucien's hands slid down her back, pulling her closer as he deepened the kiss. He could feel the softness of her body against his, the warmth of her breath against his skin. And he knew, in that moment, that he would do anything to protect her, to keep her safe. They broke apart, their breaths coming in ragged gasps. Rory looked up at him, her eyes bright with unshed tears. "I've missed you," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien cupped her face in his hands, his thumbs brushing away the tears that had spilled onto her cheeks. "I've missed you too," he said, his voice soft. "More than you know." Rory leaned into his touch, her eyes closing as she savored the feel of his hands on her skin. She could feel the warmth of his touch, the strength of his love. And she knew, in that moment, that she was exactly where she was meant to be. Lucien's lips brushed against hers once more, a gentle, tender kiss that promised so much more. And as they stood there, wrapped in each other's arms, Rory knew that she could trust him, that she could believe in him. And she knew that, together, they could face whatever the future held. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, watched them from the armchair, his tail flicking lazily as he purred. And as the sun set over the rooftops of East London, casting a warm, golden glow over the flat, Rory and Lucien knew that they were exactly where they were meant to be. Together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
67.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lazily"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count6
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"encounter"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count3
8
word"pawn"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count3
10
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"stark"
2"could feel"
3"weight"
4"encounter"
5"familiar"
6"echoing"
7"whisper"
8"pawn"
9"warmth"
10"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
87.69% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences67
matches
0"e with surprise"
1"t in frustration"
2"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1056
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount889
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Rory13
Ptolemy2
Lucien13
East1
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore0.769
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1056
matches(empty)
82.28% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"knew that she"
1"knew that they"
52.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean39.11
std13.06
cv0.334
sampleLengths
062
153
255
356
447
521
652
715
822
935
1030
1144
1247
1335
1428
1525
1642
1727
1819
1928
2051
2150
2231
2332
2448
2551
2650
84.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences67
matches
0"was dressed"
1"was meant"
2"was meant"
3"were meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences79
ratio0.013
matches
0"Lucien Moreau offered a small, tentative smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—searching her face."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03131991051454139
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012304250559284116
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean13.37
std6.37
cv0.477
sampleLengths
012
133
217
315
425
59
64
711
822
922
1015
1116
1211
1314
1419
1515
1613
178
1811
192
209
2127
2216
2315
2411
257
264
279
284
2922
3010
316
3214
338
3420
3516
3620
3713
3814
3910
4013
4112
429
4319
448
459
468
4718
4813
4911
42.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.26582278481012656
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences62
matches
0"She blinked at the figure"
1"He was dressed in his"
2"he said, his voice a"
3"She could feel the weight"
4"he commented, a hint of"
5"she said, crossing her arms"
6"he said, his voice barely"
7"She could still remember the"
8"She could still remember the"
9"she asked, her voice steady"
10"She could feel the weight"
11"She could see the sincerity"
12"she said, her voice barely"
13"he said, his voice steady"
14"She could feel the warmth"
15"he said, his voice soft"
16"she said, her voice steady"
17"They stood there for a"
18"She could feel the heat"
19"He could feel the softness"
ratio0.387
48.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences62
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora Carter, her bright blue"
2"She blinked at the figure"
3"Lucien Moreau offered a small,"
4"He was dressed in his"
5"he said, his voice a"
6"Rory hesitated, her fingers tightening"
7"She could feel the weight"
8"The flat was small and"
9"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged"
10"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
11"he commented, a hint of"
12"Rory closed the door behind"
13"she said, crossing her arms"
14"Lucien turned to face her,"
15"he said, his voice barely"
16"Rory looked away, her eyes"
17"She could still remember the"
18"She could still remember the"
19"she asked, her voice steady"
ratio0.823
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes wide with surprise, stood in the doorway of her flat, her straight black hair slightly disheveled, as if she'd been running …"
1"She blinked at the figure standing before her, her heart pounding in her chest like a drum."
2"She could feel the weight of his words pressing down on her, the truth of them resonating deep within her."
3"Lucien cupped her face in his hands, his thumbs brushing away the tears that had spilled onto her cheeks."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he said, his voice a low, velvety rumble"
1"he commented, a hint of amusement in his voice"
2"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
3"she asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"he said, his voice steady and sure"
6"he said, his voice soft"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"he said, his voice soft"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he commented (comment)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
75.9999%