Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQFC6WHF4WNNKDVBB18VFV

Run Details

Duration:
42.3s
Cost:
$0.003583
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he owned the place, one platinum eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like burnt sugar, curled into the flat before he did. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, hissed from the arm of the sofa and vanished into the kitchen. Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door. “What the hell are you doing here?” Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered over her, slow and deliberate, like he was memorizing the way she looked in an old band T-shirt and leggings, her black hair still damp from the shower. “Is that any way to greet an old friend?” “You’re not my friend.” The words came out sharper than she intended, but she didn’t take them back. She stepped aside anyway, because Eva’s flat was small, and if she didn’t let him in, he’d just stand there, blocking the hallway like some kind of immovable, expensive obstacle. “And you didn’t answer the question.” He sauntered inside, his cane tapping against the floorboards, the ivory handle catching the dim light from the single lamp. The flat was a mess—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy’s fur clinging to the armchair—but Lucien didn’t seem to notice. Or if he did, he didn’t care. He never did. Rory shut the door harder than necessary, the three deadbolts clicking into place with finality. “Eva’s not here.” “I know.” He turned, his coat brushing against a tower of grimoires that wobbled but didn’t fall. “I came to see you.” Her pulse jumped. She crossed her arms, mostly to keep her hands from doing something stupid, like reaching for him. “Why?” Lucien’s mouth quirked. Not quite a smile. Not quite anything. “Can’t a man check on an old… associate?” “Cut the bullshit, Lucien. You don’t do anything without a reason.” He exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if it weren’t so dry. Then he reached into his coat and pulled out a folded piece of paper. Not just any paper—parchment, yellowed at the edges, the ink smudged like it had been handled too many times. He held it out to her. Rory didn’t take it. “What is that?” “A job.” “I don’t do jobs for you anymore.” “This one’s different.” “Why?” “Because,” he said, stepping closer, the parchment still extended between them, “it involves Evan.” The name hit her like a punch to the sternum. She hadn’t heard it spoken aloud in months. Hadn’t let herself think it. But here it was, hanging in the air between them, heavy and unavoidable. Lucien’s expression didn’t change, but his voice dropped, low and rough. “He’s back in London.” Rory’s fingers twitched. She wanted to snatch the parchment from his hand. Wanted to crumple it up and throw it in his face. Wanted to pretend she hadn’t heard him. But she did none of those things. Instead, she took the paper, her skin brushing against his for the briefest second—enough to feel the heat of him, the way it always seemed to radiate just a little too much, like his half-demon blood was always simmering beneath the surface. She unfolded it. The handwriting was familiar—Evan’s, looping and precise, the kind of script that looked elegant until you realized it was all a mask for something uglier. The note was short. Three lines. *I know what you are. I know what you’ve done. And I’m going to make sure everyone else does too.* Rory’s breath came a little faster. She’d been careful. So careful. But Evan had always been good at digging up secrets. And he’d always been good at using them against her. She looked up. Lucien was watching her, his face unreadable. “When did this arrive?” “This morning. Delivered to my office.” “Why you?” “Because,” he said, “he knows I’m the one who helped you disappear.” The words settled between them, thick with everything they weren’t saying. The way he’d shown up at her door that night, six months ago, when she’d been bleeding and shaking and half-convinced she was going to die. The way he’d driven her to Eva’s, no questions asked, no payment expected. The way he’d looked at her when she’d told him she never wanted to see him again. Rory swallowed. “I don’t need your help.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “That’s not what I’m offering.” “Then what are you offering?” “A chance to end this.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar above his eyebrow, the one he’d gotten in Marseille years ago. Close enough that she could feel the heat of him again, like standing too near a fire. “Before he ruins you.” She should have stepped back. Should have put distance between them. But she didn’t. She stood there, the parchment crumpling in her fist, and let herself remember the way his hands had felt on her skin. The way he’d kissed her like he was trying to memorize the shape of her mouth. The way he’d walked away without looking back. “Why do you care?” she asked, her voice quieter than she intended. Lucien’s amber eye burned. The black one was just a void. “You know why.” She did. And that was the problem. Rory turned away, crossing to the window. The street below was slick with rain, the neon signs of the curry house reflecting in the puddles. She could feel him behind her, a presence like a live wire, dangerous and electric. “What’s the job?” she asked, staring at her own reflection in the glass. “There’s a relic,” he said. “A dagger. It’s being auctioned off tomorrow night at the Black Lily.” She knew the place. A high-end club for the supernatural elite, the kind of place where deals were made in back rooms and blood was spilled in the bathrooms. “And?” “And Evan’s going to be there. He’s the one selling it.” Rory’s fingers curled into her palms. “You want me to steal it.” “No.” Lucien’s voice was right behind her now, close enough that she could feel his breath on the back of her neck. “I want you to take it back.” She turned. He was closer than she expected, his face inches from hers, his heterochromatic eyes locked onto her own. She could see the faintest stubble along his jaw, the way his lips parted just slightly, like he was about to say something else. “Take it back,” she repeated. He nodded. “It’s yours, isn’t it?” Rory didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. They both knew the truth. The dagger had been her mother’s. A family heirloom, passed down through generations of Ellis women. Evan had taken it from her the night she’d left him, the night he’d broken her wrist and left her curled on the kitchen floor. She’d thought it was gone forever. Until now. She exhaled, long and slow. “What’s the catch?” Lucien’s mouth twisted. “No catch. Just… a favor.” “What kind of favor?” “The kind I’ll collect later.” Of course. Lucien never did anything for free. She should have known. She stepped back, putting space between them again. “And if I say no?” He didn’t answer right away. Just watched her, his gaze heavy, like he was trying to see straight through her. Then, quietly: “Then I walk out that door, and you never see me again.” The words hung in the air, sharp and final. Rory looked away, her throat tight. She’d spent six months trying to forget him. Six months telling herself she was better off without him. Six months pretending she didn’t still dream about the way his hands had felt on her skin, the way his voice had sounded in the dark. And now here he was, standing in Eva’s flat like no time had passed at all. She turned back to him. “Fine. I’ll do it.” Something flickered in his eyes—relief, maybe, or something darker. “Good.” “But,” she added, holding up a finger, “I’m not doing it for you.” Lucien’s mouth quirked. “Of course not.” She ignored the way her pulse jumped at the sight of that almost-smile. “And I’m not working with you.” “Wouldn’t dream of it.” “And if you touch me—” “I won’t,” he said, his voice low, rough. “Unless you ask me to.” The words sent a shiver down her spine. Rory swallowed hard. “Get out.” Lucien didn’t move. Just stood there, watching her, like he was waiting for something. She crossed her arms. “Now.” He exhaled, a sound that might have been a laugh. Then he turned, his coat swirling around him as he made his way to the door. He paused with his hand on the knob, looking back at her over his shoulder. “Tomorrow night,” he said. “Midnight. Don’t be late.” Then he was gone, the door clicking shut behind him, leaving Rory standing in the middle of Eva’s flat, her heart pounding, her skin still burning where his had almost touched hers. Ptolemy slunk back into the room, tail twitching, and let out a low, disapproving meow. Rory sank onto the sofa, the parchment still clutched in her hand. She was in trouble.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:32:47.592Z" 2/20/2026, 2:32:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.228
leniency0.456
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1558
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Lily"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1558
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count3
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"flickered"
2"pulse"
3"simmering"
4"familiar"
5"unreadable"
6"could feel"
7"electric"
8"down her spine"
9"pounding"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences125
filterMatches
0"think"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords20
totalWords1545
ratio0.013
matches
0"I know what you are. I know what you’ve done. And I’m going to make sure everyone else does too."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1281
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Lucien13
Moreau1
Eva5
Ptolemy3
Evan3
Marseille1
Close1
Ellis1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Evan"
6"Ellis"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore0.954
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like burnt sugar, curled into the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1545
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean20.33
std18.21
cv0.896
sampleLengths
068
116
242
354
456
518
622
721
818
911
1057
117
122
137
143
151
1614
1736
1815
1979
2034
2120
2231
2314
246
252
2612
2767
287
298
305
3149
3260
3312
3414
357
3640
3713
3817
3930
4011
4112
4229
4344
445
456
4612
4747
482
498
94.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences125
matches
0"been handled"
1"were made"
2"was spilled"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
12.58% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs249
matches
0"was memorizing"
1"was watching"
2"weren’t saying"
3"was trying"
4"was trying"
5"was, standing"
6"was waiting"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences168
ratio0.042
matches
0"The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he owned the place, one platinum eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his."
1"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered over her, slow and deliberate, like he was memorizing the way she looked in an old band T-shirt and leggings, her black hair still damp from the shower."
2"The flat was a mess—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy’s fur clinging to the armchair—but Lucien didn’t seem to notice."
3"Not just any paper—parchment, yellowed at the edges, the ink smudged like it had been handled too many times."
4"Instead, she took the paper, her skin brushing against his for the briefest second—enough to feel the heat of him, the way it always seemed to radiate just a little too much, like his half-demon blood was always simmering beneath the surface."
5"The handwriting was familiar—Evan’s, looping and precise, the kind of script that looked elegant until you realized it was all a mask for something uglier."
6"Something flickered in his eyes—relief, maybe, or something darker."
94.43% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1294
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount60
adverbRatio0.04636785162287481
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0030911901081916537
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean9.2
std7.66
cv0.833
sampleLengths
035
118
215
39
47
533
69
718
830
96
1020
1126
127
133
1415
153
1617
175
183
1917
201
213
224
233
248
2511
2618
2714
2819
296
304
313
322
337
343
351
3614
3710
388
395
4013
4111
424
433
449
4511
467
477
4842
493
43.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.30952380952380953
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then he reached into his"
1"Instead, she took the paper,"
2"Just watched her, his gaze"
3"Just stood there, watching her,"
4"Then he turned, his coat"
5"Then he was gone, the"
ratio0.054
73.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences112
matches
0"She stepped aside anyway, because"
1"He sauntered inside, his cane"
2"He never did."
3"He turned, his coat brushing"
4"Her pulse jumped."
5"She crossed her arms, mostly"
6"He exhaled through his nose,"
7"He held it out to"
8"he said, stepping closer, the"
9"She hadn’t heard it spoken"
10"She wanted to snatch the"
11"She unfolded it."
12"*I know what you are."
13"I know what you’ve done."
14"She’d been careful."
15"She looked up."
16"He stepped closer, close enough"
17"She should have stepped back."
18"She stood there, the parchment"
19"she asked, her voice quieter"
ratio0.366
71.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences112
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"The scent of bergamot and"
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, hissed from"
3"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
4"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered"
5"The words came out sharper"
6"She stepped aside anyway, because"
7"He sauntered inside, his cane"
8"The flat was a mess—books"
9"He never did."
10"Rory shut the door harder"
11"He turned, his coat brushing"
12"Her pulse jumped."
13"She crossed her arms, mostly"
14"Lucien’s mouth quirked."
15"He exhaled through his nose,"
16"He held it out to"
17"Rory didn’t take it."
18"he said, stepping closer, the"
19"The name hit her like"
ratio0.777
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He sauntered inside, his cane tapping against the floorboards, the ivory handle catching the dim light from the single lamp."
1"Instead, she took the paper, her skin brushing against his for the briefest second—enough to feel the heat of him, the way it always seemed to radiate just a li…"
2"The handwriting was familiar—Evan’s, looping and precise, the kind of script that looked elegant until you realized it was all a mask for something uglier."
3"Then he was gone, the door clicking shut behind him, leaving Rory standing in the middle of Eva’s flat, her heart pounding, her skin still burning where his had…"
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, her voice quieter than she intended"
1"he said, his voice low, rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.07
80.7228%