| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 958 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 958 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "gleaming" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "resolved" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 941 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "old" | | 1 | "Stupid. Stupid to listen to Eva, stupid to think this would be quick." | | 2 | "hunger" | | 3 | "Animal" | | 4 | "Fox, maybe. Or deer." | | 5 | "shaped" | | 6 | "breathing" | | 7 | "something" | | 8 | "moved" | | 9 | "had" | | 10 | "skin" | | 11 | "Inviting" | | 12 | "safety" | | 13 | "flared" | | 14 | "ripped" | | 15 | "PAYMENT." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "*Animal*, she told herself." |
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| 96.06% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 927 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.961 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.73% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.063 | | wordCount | 941 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the sickly green of the grove, but gold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 24.13 | | std | 23.97 | | cv | 0.993 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have been able to see them—not really—not in this dark, not without the torch in her hand." | | 1 | "The stories made it sound like a place of whispered bargains, not this—this *hunger* pressing against her skin." | | 2 | "The sound had come from behind her—the direction of the standing stones, the way she’d just come." | | 3 | "The torchlight caught on something pale between the roots—a bone, half-buried, gleaming wetly." | | 4 | "One of them—no, *something* in the shadows—*moved*." | | 5 | "It had no face—just a smooth expanse of pale skin where features should have been, and a lipless slit that might have been a mouth." | | 6 | "At the end of the path stood an archway of twisted branches, hung with strips of fabric—no, *skin*, peeled in thin ribbons, fluttering in a breeze that didn’t exist." | | 7 | "She could smell it—damp wool and iron, like a butcher’s apron left in the rain." | | 8 | "A hand—cold, too many fingers—brushed her shoulder." | | 9 | "The thing lunged—" | | 10 | "—and the gold light *flared*." | | 11 | "Rory threw her arms over her head as something *ripped*—a sound like fabric tearing, like the world itself splitting at the seams." | | 12 | "The archway, the skinned banners, the gold light—all of it." | | 13 | "Old, tarnished silver, stamped with a symbol she didn’t recognise—a crescent moon cradling a dagger." |
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| 93.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 944 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04766949152542373 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01059322033898305 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 7.91 | | std | 5.77 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 47.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3445378151260504 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Too sweet, like overripe fruit" | | 1 | "Just the grove again, the" | | 2 | "Somewhere in the dark, something" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Their gnarled roots coiled like" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have been able" | | 2 | "She hadn’t meant to come" | | 3 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 4 | "She turned slowly, torch held" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too loud." | | 6 | "She took a step back," | | 7 | "She clenched her free hand" | | 8 | "she said, voice steadier than" | | 9 | "Her breath hitched." | | 10 | "It had no face—just a" | | 11 | "It raised one spindly arm" | | 12 | "She didn’t want to look." | | 13 | "She *had* to look." | | 14 | "They glistened, slick with something" | | 15 | "She could smell it—damp wool" | | 16 | "It promised answers." | | 17 | "It promised *safety*." | | 18 | "She whirled, torch swinging." | | 19 | "She stumbled back, her heel" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain burned cold" | | 1 | "Their gnarled roots coiled like" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have been able" | | 3 | "The air smelled wrong." | | 4 | "She hadn’t meant to come" | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed once, weak" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 7 | "The stories made it sound" | | 8 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "The flame flickered, though there" | | 10 | "A twig snapped." | | 11 | "The sound had come from" | | 12 | "She turned slowly, torch held" | | 13 | "The trees stood silent, their" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded too loud." | | 15 | "The grove swallowed it whole." | | 16 | "Another crack, closer this time." | | 17 | "Rory’s pulse hammered in her" | | 18 | "She took a step back," | | 19 | "The torchlight caught on something" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "—and the gold light *flared*." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "But the grove had its own light, a sickly green luminescence bleeding from the moss that carpeted the stones." | | 1 | "She clenched her free hand around it, as if she could smother the warning." | | 2 | "Limbs elongated like stretched taffy, joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 3 | "At the end of the path stood an archway of twisted branches, hung with strips of fabric—no, *skin*, peeled in thin ribbons, fluttering in a breeze that didn’t e…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |