Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQHRAHDTV7NW7QERDPB8M6

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.003946
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. A pause. Then the door swung open just enough for Eva’s tabby, Ptolemy, to slink through the gap, tail flicking in irritation at the disturbance. Aurora didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. Just stared at the man on the other side of the threshold, his platinum hair slicked back despite the damp London air, his heterochromatic gaze—one eye amber, the other black—fixed on her with the same unreadable intensity as always. Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if it weren’t so controlled. "You’re blocking the doorway, *chérie*." Her fingers tightened around the takeout bag from Golden Empress, the scent of chilli oil and fried garlic sharp between them. "What the hell are you doing here?" He leaned against the doorframe, cane resting against his shoulder like an afterthought. The ivory handle gleamed under the flickering hallway bulb. "Can’t a man visit an old friend?" "Friends don’t vanish for six months without a word." A muscle in his jaw twitched. "No. They don’t." Ptolemy wound between his ankles, purring, and Lucien absently scratched behind the cat’s ears. The gesture was too casual, too *domestic*, and it sent a jolt through her chest. She stepped back, letting the door swing wider—not an invitation, just refusal to be crowded. "Eva’s not here." "I know." His voice dropped, rougher than she remembered. "I came to see you." The flat smelled of old paper and the jasmine incense Eva burned when she was stress-translating Sumerian tablets. Aurora dumped the takeout on the kitchen counter, the plastic containers clattering. "You’ve got a hell of a way of showing it." He shut the door behind him, the click of the deadbolts engaging one by one. Methodical. Deliberate. The way he did everything. "I had my reasons." "Reasons you couldn’t share?" She turned, arms crossed. "Or did you just forget my number?" His cane tapped once against the floorboards. "You think I don’t know every digit by heart?" The words hit like a physical blow. She looked away, her gaze snagging on the scarred wooden table where they’d once shared cheap wine and even cheaper takeaway, his thigh pressed against hers under the pretense of reaching for the last spring roll. "Then why—" "Why didn’t I call?" He cut her off, stepping closer. The heat of him radiated through the thin fabric of her hoodie. "Because some things aren’t fixed with a phone call, Rory. Some things need to be said in person." She swallowed. "So say them." His free hand lifted, hovered near her face—close enough that she felt the ghost of his touch before he dropped it. "I was in Avaros." The name of his father’s demonic realm hung between them, heavy as a curse. "You *went home*?" "Not by choice." His lips pressed into a line. "My father summoned me. And when the Lord of the Obsidian Throne calls, even his bastard son answers." Aurora’s pulse hammered in her throat. "For six *months*?" "Time moves differently there." His fingers flexed around the cane. "A week in Avaros is a month here. I was gone sixty days. I came back to find you’d moved out of Silas’ place, changed your number, and the only lead I had was Eva’s flat." She should’ve been relieved. Should’ve been *understanding*. But the old hurt still burned, sharp and bright. "You could’ve left a message. A *note*. Something." "And say what?" His voice cracked, just slightly. "That I was trapped in a realm where the sky bleeds and the rivers run with molten silver? That I didn’t know if I’d make it back?" Her breath came faster. "You’re here now." "Yes." His gaze darkened. "I am." The air between them thickened, charged with everything they’d never said. His cologne—bergamot and something darker, like gunpowder—filled her lungs. She should’ve stepped back. Should’ve told him to leave. But her body refused to obey, rooted in place by the memory of his hands on her skin, his mouth against hers, the way he’d whispered her name like a prayer the last time they’d been alone. Ptolemy yowled, breaking the spell. Aurora jerked away, putting the kitchen island between them. "You want a drink or something?" Lucien’s smile was slow, bitter. "You’re offering me hospitality now?" "Fine. Don’t have one." She grabbed a chipped mug from the drainer, filled it with tap water. Her hands shook. He watched her, unblinking. "You’re angry." "Damn right I am." The water sloshed over the rim. "You don’t get to waltz back in here after half a year and expect—" "Expect what?" He closed the distance again, his cane thudding softly against the floor. "That you’d still want me?" The mug slipped from her fingers. It hit the counter, cracked, water pooling around the base. Neither of them moved to clean it up. Aurora’s chest ached. "I don’t *want* anything from you, Lucien." Liar. His thumb brushed her wrist, right over the crescent scar. "Liar." She flinched. "Get out." "No." Her palm connected with his cheek before she registered moving. The crack of skin on skin echoed in the small flat. Lucien didn’t so much as blink. Just turned his head back, his black eye gleaming. "Again, if it’ll make you feel better." Her breath hitched. "You’re *impossible*." "And you’re still terrified of what you feel for me." His voice dropped. "Admit it." She wanted to deny it. Wanted to shove him out the door and never look back. But the truth clawed its way up her throat, raw and bleeding. "I *hated* you for leaving." "I know." "And I *missed* you." Her voice broke. "Every damn day." His cane clattered to the floor. His hands cupped her face, thumbs smoothing over her cheekbones. "Rory—" She kissed him. It wasn’t gentle. It was six months of rage and longing, of sleepless nights and whispered curses into her pillow. Her fingers tangled in his hair, disrupting the careful slick, and he groaned against her mouth, his grip tightening. The taste of him—dark, spiced, *his*—sent her senses reeling. He walked her backward until her hips hit the counter, his body pinning hers. "Tell me to stop," he murmured against her lips. She bit his lower lip hard enough to draw blood. "Never." A growl rumbled in his chest. His hands slid under her hoodie, calloused palms mapping the dip of her waist, the flare of her ribs. "You’re going to be the death of me, *mon ange*." She arched into his touch, her nails digging into his shoulders through the fine wool of his suit. "Then die happy." The laugh he let out was dark, desperate. His mouth trailed down her throat, teeth grazing the pulse point that fluttered wildly beneath his lips. "I’ve dreamed of this. Every night." Her head fell back, exposing more of her skin to him. "Liar." His breath was hot against her collarbone. "I’d sooner lie to the Devil himself than to you." The words sent a shiver through her. She grabbed his face, forced him to meet her eyes. "Then don’t ever leave me like that again." Something fractured in his expression—pride, maybe, or the last remnants of his control. "I won’t. *Je te le jure.*" She didn’t know French. Didn’t need to. The vow in his voice was enough. His cane lay forgotten on the floor as he lifted her onto the counter, his hands sliding up her thighs. The takeout containers teetered, forgotten. The world outside Eva’s flat ceased to exist. And for the first time in six months, Aurora Carter stopped missing him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His fingers flexed around [around]"
1"His voice cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.433
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.067
92.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"disrupting"
count1
8
word"fluttered"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"intensity"
2"methodical"
3"pulse"
4"charged"
5"echoed"
6"gleaming"
7"disrupting"
8"fluttered"
9"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
1"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans13
markdownWords18
totalWords1260
ratio0.014
matches
0"chérie"
1"domestic"
2"went home"
3"months"
4"understanding"
5"note"
6"want"
7"impossible"
8"hated"
9"missed"
10"his"
11"mon ange"
12"Je te le jure."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount905
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Ptolemy3
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien4
Sumerian1
Aurora6
French1
Carter1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Carter"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1260
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21
std13.97
cv0.665
sampleLengths
029
144
222
328
429
59
69
747
814
940
1026
1115
1216
1345
1440
155
1625
1717
1827
199
2046
2124
2235
237
246
2566
2620
2710
2820
296
3024
3119
3224
3310
341
3511
364
371
3836
397
405
4115
4233
432
4410
4517
463
4748
4823
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been relieved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
22.98% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences143
ratio0.042
matches
0"Just stared at the man on the other side of the threshold, his platinum hair slicked back despite the damp London air, his heterochromatic gaze—one eye amber, the other black—fixed on her with the same unreadable intensity as always."
1"She stepped back, letting the door swing wider—not an invitation, just refusal to be crowded."
2"His free hand lifted, hovered near her face—close enough that she felt the ghost of his touch before he dropped it."
3"His cologne—bergamot and something darker, like gunpowder—filled her lungs."
4"The taste of him—dark, spiced, *his*—sent her senses reeling."
5"Something fractured in his expression—pride, maybe, or the last remnants of his control."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount914
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03938730853391685
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00437636761487965
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean8.81
std7.17
cv0.814
sampleLengths
04
12
223
33
42
539
617
75
821
97
1013
119
127
139
146
153
1614
1715
1815
193
209
215
2218
2312
2410
2515
261
271
285
294
308
317
327
339
347
3536
362
3710
3812
3918
402
413
4221
434
4414
453
469
4718
486
493
54.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.34965034965034963
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then the door swung open"
1"Just stared at the man"
2"Just turned his head back,"
ratio0.034
13.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her fingers tightened around the"
1"He leaned against the doorframe,"
2"She stepped back, letting the"
3"His voice dropped, rougher than"
4"He shut the door behind"
5"She turned, arms crossed"
6"His cane tapped once against"
7"She looked away, her gaze"
8"He cut her off, stepping"
9"His free hand lifted, hovered"
10"His lips pressed into a"
11"His fingers flexed around the"
12"She should’ve been relieved."
13"His voice cracked, just slightly"
14"Her breath came faster."
15"His gaze darkened"
16"His cologne—bergamot and something darker,"
17"She should’ve stepped back."
18"She grabbed a chipped mug"
19"Her hands shook."
ratio0.517
21.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences89
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"Aurora didn’t move."
2"Lucien exhaled through his nose,"
3"Her fingers tightened around the"
4"He leaned against the doorframe,"
5"The ivory handle gleamed under"
6"A muscle in his jaw"
7"Ptolemy wound between his ankles,"
8"The gesture was too casual,"
9"She stepped back, letting the"
10"His voice dropped, rougher than"
11"The flat smelled of old"
12"Aurora dumped the takeout on"
13"He shut the door behind"
14"The way he did everything."
15"She turned, arms crossed"
16"His cane tapped once against"
17"The words hit like a"
18"She looked away, her gaze"
19"He cut her off, stepping"
ratio0.876
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She looked away, her gaze snagging on the scarred wooden table where they’d once shared cheap wine and even cheaper takeaway, his thigh pressed against hers und…"
1"Her fingers tangled in his hair, disrupting the careful slick, and he groaned against her mouth, his grip tightening."
2"His mouth trailed down her throat, teeth grazing the pulse point that fluttered wildly beneath his lips."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He closed, his cane thudding softly against the floor"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"His lips pressed (press)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.067
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.067
84.4865%