Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQJ5E0ZDYCPGJMWM3JBCSY

Run Details

Duration:
35.3s
Cost:
$0.003057
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he owned the place, one platinum eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like burnt sugar, curled into the flat before he did. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, hissed from the arm of the sofa and vanished into the kitchen. Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door. “What the hell are you doing here?” Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered over her, slow and deliberate, from the messy bun holding her black hair in place to the oversized Cardiff University hoodie she’d stolen from her ex and never returned. His gaze lingered on the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist before snapping back to her face. “Is that any way to greet an old friend?” “You’re not my friend.” The words came out sharper than she intended, but she didn’t take them back. She stepped aside just enough to let him in, because the alternative was slamming the door in his face, and she wasn’t sure she could do that either. Not yet. Lucien straightened, smoothing a hand over his tailored charcoal suit as he stepped inside. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the flat’s flickering overhead light. “You’ve added more locks,” he observed, nodding at the three deadbolts. “Paranoia suits you.” “Eva’s idea.” Rory shut the door harder than necessary, the latch clicking like a gunshot. The flat was exactly as she’d left it—books stacked on every available surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy’s fur clinging to the armchair. She crossed her arms. “You didn’t answer my question.” Lucien turned, his cane tapping lightly against the floorboards. “I need your help.” Rory laughed, but there was no humor in it. “That’s rich. You ghost me for six months, and now you waltz in here like nothing happened?” His jaw tightened, just for a second. “I had my reasons.” “Oh, I’m sure you did.” She stepped closer, close enough to see the faint stubble along his jaw, close enough to remember how it had felt against her skin. “Reasons that involved not returning a single one of my calls. Not even a text. Just—poof. Gone.” Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound like a held breath finally released. “You think I wanted to leave?” “You did leave.” “Because I had to.” “Bullshit.” Rory’s hands curled into fists at her sides. “You could’ve said something. Anything. Instead, you just—disappeared. Like I was nothing.” For a moment, neither of them spoke. The hum of the curry house downstairs seeped through the floorboards, the scent of turmeric and cumin thick in the air. Lucien’s amber eye burned brighter, the black one swallowing the light. “You were never nothing,” he said quietly. Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to believe him. Wanted to, but— “Then why?” Lucien’s fingers flexed around the handle of his cane. “Because if I’d stayed, I would’ve ruined you.” The words hung between them, heavy and impossible. Rory’s breath caught. “That’s not your choice to make.” “It was.” His voice was rough. “You don’t know what I am, Rory. What I’m capable of.” “Then tell me.” She stepped closer, close enough that the hem of her hoodie brushed against his polished shoes. “Tell me now.” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her mouth. “You should be afraid of me.” “I’m not.” “You should be.” Rory reached up, her fingers hovering just shy of his cheek. “I’m not.” A sound escaped him—something between a growl and a groan—and then his hand was in her hair, his mouth crashing down on hers. There was nothing gentle about it. His kiss was heat and hunger, his teeth nipping at her lower lip, his tongue demanding entry. Rory gasped, her hands fisting in the lapels of his suit as she kissed him back just as fiercely. Six months of silence, of missing him, of wondering—it all poured out of her in that kiss. Lucien’s cane clattered to the floor as he backed her against the wall, his body pressing hers into the peeling floral wallpaper. His hands slid under her hoodie, calloused fingers tracing the curve of her waist, the dip of her spine. Rory arched into him, her nails digging into his shoulders. She’d forgotten how good he felt—how right. Then, just as suddenly as he’d kissed her, Lucien pulled away. His breath came in ragged bursts, his forehead resting against hers. “This changes nothing,” he said, but his voice was unsteady. Rory’s lips were swollen, her pulse hammering in her throat. “Liar.” Lucien’s black eye flickered, the amber one dark with something like regret. “I came here for a reason.” “And it wasn’t this?” “No.” He stepped back, retrieving his cane from the floor. The space between them felt like a chasm. “There’s a job. A dangerous one.” Rory crossed her arms, suddenly aware of how exposed she was—how exposed she’d let herself be. “Of course there is.” Lucien’s mouth twisted. “You don’t have to help me.” “But you want me to.” “Yes.” “Why?” “Because you’re the only one who can.” Rory studied him—the way his suit jacket strained slightly over his shoulders, the way his fingers tightened around his cane, the way his eyes kept darting to her mouth like he was fighting the urge to kiss her again. She exhaled, long and slow. “You’re an asshole, Lucien.” “I know.” “And I’m still mad at you.” “I know that too.” Rory pushed off the wall, stepping around him to grab a half-empty mug of cold tea from the coffee table. She took a sip, buying herself time. “Tell me about the job.” Lucien’s shoulders relaxed, just a fraction. “There’s a relic. A dagger. It’s being auctioned off tonight at a private event in Mayfair.” “And?” “And it’s not just any dagger.” He reached into his jacket, pulling out a folded piece of parchment. “It’s the Blade of Avaros. A demon-forged weapon. Whoever wields it can open a gate to the underworld.” Rory’s fingers stilled around the mug. “You’re joking.” “I wish I were.” She set the mug down. “And you want me to—what? Steal it?” “Yes.” “Why me?” Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers. “Because the auction is invitation-only. And the only way in is with a plus-one.” Rory’s stomach twisted. “You want me to be your date.” “Yes.” She should’ve said no. Should’ve told him to leave and never come back. But the truth was, she’d missed him. Missed the way his mind worked, the way he challenged her, the way he looked at her like she was the only person in the room. And if she was being honest with herself, she wanted to know why he’d left. Really left. “Fine,” she said. “But we do this my way.” Lucien’s mouth quirked. “I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Rory ignored the way her heart skipped. “And after?” “After?” “After the job. What happens then?” Lucien was silent for a long moment. Then, softly: “Then we talk.” Rory nodded, even though her chest ached. “Okay.” Lucien reached for her hand, his fingers brushing over the scar on her wrist. “Thank you.” Rory pulled away. “Don’t thank me yet. You haven’t seen what I’m capable of.” Lucien’s smile was slow, dangerous. “Oh, I think I have.” Outside, the rain began to fall, tapping against the window like a warning. Rory ignored it. She had a job to do. And maybe, just maybe, she’d finally get the answers she needed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.159
leniency0.319
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.058
76.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"calloused fingers"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
3"calloused fingers"
4"tracing"
5"pulse"
6"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1258
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
39.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount909
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory20
Lucien18
Moreau1
Eva1
Cardiff1
University1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.4
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something like burnt sugar, curled into the"
1"something between a growl and a groan—and then"
2"something like regret"
3"felt like a chasm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1258
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean19.35
std18.84
cv0.973
sampleLengths
068
116
260
348
441
549
613
726
811
946
1019
113
124
1321
1446
1513
1617
1717
1817
1922
2012
212
223
2313
2482
2558
2632
2711
2818
294
3024
3120
329
335
341
351
367
3748
382
396
404
4132
4222
431
4436
458
464
4712
481
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
83.72% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was slamming"
1"was fighting"
2"was being"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences137
ratio0.066
matches
0"The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he owned the place, one platinum eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his."
1"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered over her, slow and deliberate, from the messy bun holding her black hair in place to the oversized Cardiff University hoodie she’d stolen from her ex and never returned."
2"The flat was exactly as she’d left it—books stacked on every available surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy’s fur clinging to the armchair."
3"Wanted to, but— “Then why?”"
4"A sound escaped him—something between a growl and a groan—and then his hand was in her hair, his mouth crashing down on hers."
5"Six months of silence, of missing him, of wondering—it all poured out of her in that kiss."
6"She’d forgotten how good he felt—how right."
7"Rory crossed her arms, suddenly aware of how exposed she was—how exposed she’d let herself be."
8"Rory studied him—the way his suit jacket strained slightly over his shoulders, the way his fingers tightened around his cane, the way his eyes kept darting to her mouth like he was fighting the urge to kiss her again."
97.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.04234527687296417
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013029315960912053
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean9.18
std7.38
cv0.804
sampleLengths
035
118
215
39
47
534
617
79
818
928
102
1114
1213
1311
143
1515
1625
174
185
199
204
219
2217
237
244
2529
2617
2713
286
293
304
319
3212
337
3421
3511
367
373
385
395
409
418
428
433
446
456
4611
4719
483
496
49.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.31386861313868614
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners43
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then, just as suddenly as"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences78
matches
0"His gaze lingered on the"
1"She stepped aside just enough"
2"he observed, nodding at the"
3"She crossed her arms."
4"His jaw tightened, just for"
5"She stepped closer, close enough"
6"he said quietly"
7"She wanted to believe him."
8"His voice was rough"
9"She stepped closer, close enough"
10"His kiss was heat and"
11"His hands slid under her"
12"She’d forgotten how good he"
13"His breath came in ragged"
14"he said, but his voice"
15"He stepped back, retrieving his"
16"She exhaled, long and slow."
17"She took a sip, buying"
18"He reached into his jacket,"
19"She set the mug down."
ratio0.282
30.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences78
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"The scent of bergamot and"
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, hissed from"
3"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
4"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered"
5"His gaze lingered on the"
6"The words came out sharper"
7"She stepped aside just enough"
8"Lucien straightened, smoothing a hand"
9"The ivory handle of his"
10"he observed, nodding at the"
11"Rory shut the door harder"
12"The flat was exactly as"
13"She crossed her arms."
14"Lucien turned, his cane tapping"
15"Rory laughed, but there was"
16"His jaw tightened, just for"
17"She stepped closer, close enough"
18"Lucien exhaled through his nose,"
19"Rory’s hands curled into fists"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien’s cane clattered to the floor as he backed her against the wall, his body pressing hers into the peeling floral wallpaper."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory shut, the latch clicking like a gunshot"
1"he said, but his voice was unsteady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.058
leniency0.116
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.029
77.4510%