Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQK59PP70GPAJADDHC7C1P

Run Details

Duration:
28.9s
Cost:
$0.002619
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could knock a second time, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he’d been expecting her. His platinum hair was slicked back as always, the amber of one eye catching the dim hallway light while the other swallowed it whole. He wore one of his charcoal suits, tailored to perfection, the ivory handle of his cane resting against his thigh. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like smoke, curled into the air between them. Rory’s pulse jumped. She hadn’t seen him in three months—not since that night in the alley behind Silas’ bar, when she’d walked away without looking back. “Aurora,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. “I was beginning to think you’d forgotten where Eva lives.” She exhaled through her nose. “I was in the neighborhood.” “Liar.” His mouth quirked, but there was no humor in it. “You only come to Brick Lane when you’re running from something.” Rory’s fingers twitched at her sides. She could lie again, but what was the point? Lucien had always seen through her. “Fine. I needed to talk to Eva.” “She’s not here.” He stepped aside, gesturing into the flat. “But you might as well come in.” The last time she’d been inside, the place had been a controlled chaos of books and scrolls, Ptolemy the tabby weaving between stacks like a furry sentinel. Now, the living room was even more cluttered, if that was possible. A half-empty cup of tea sat on the coffee table beside a leather-bound tome, its pages yellowed with age. The air smelled of old paper and the faint, spicy tang of the curry house downstairs. Rory hesitated. “I don’t want to intrude.” Lucien shut the door behind her, the three deadbolts clicking into place with practiced ease. “You’re already here.” She turned, and suddenly the space between them felt too small. His heterochromatic gaze held hers, unreadable. “Why are *you* here, Lucien?” “Eva asked me to check on the wards.” He tapped his cane against the floor, a rhythmic *click-click* that set her teeth on edge. “She’s been jumpy since the incident at the docks.” Rory’s stomach twisted. The docks. That had been her fault—another mess she’d dragged Eva into. “Right.” Silence stretched, thick and heavy. Lucien’s fingers flexed around the cane’s handle, and for a second, she thought he might say something real. Instead, he turned toward the kitchen. “Tea?” “No.” He paused, then glanced back at her. “Something stronger, then?” She should leave. Every instinct screamed at her to walk out, to put distance between them before the past could claw its way back up. But her feet stayed rooted to the floor. “Whiskey. If you’ve got it.” Lucien’s lips curved, just slightly. “I always have whiskey.” He moved to the cabinet above the sink, pulling out a bottle of something dark and expensive-looking. Rory watched as he poured two fingers into a glass, the amber liquid catching the light. He didn’t ask if she wanted ice. He didn’t need to. When he handed it to her, their fingers brushed. A spark, sharp and electric, shot up her arm. Rory jerked back, sloshing whiskey over the rim of the glass. Lucien’s expression didn’t change, but his voice dropped, low and rough. “Careful.” She took a sip, letting the burn ground her. “You’re not usually this clumsy.” “And you’re not usually this quiet.” He leaned against the counter, swirling his own drink. “What’s really going on, Aurora?” The sound of her full name on his lips sent a shiver down her spine. She set the glass down harder than she meant to. “Nothing. I just—” She cut herself off. *Just what?* Missed him? Hated him? Wanted to kiss him and strangle him in the same breath? Lucien pushed off the counter, closing the distance between them in two strides. “You just what?” Rory’s breath hitched. He was close enough that she could see the faint scar above his eyebrow, the way his pupils dilated when he looked at her. “I don’t know why I came here.” “Yes, you do.” His hand lifted, fingers hovering just shy of her cheek. “You came because you knew I’d be here.” She should step back. She *should*. But her body betrayed her, leaning into the heat of him. “That’s not—” “True?” His thumb grazed her jaw, sending a jolt through her. “Or just inconvenient?” Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. Three months of silence, of pretending she didn’t think about him every damn day, and now he was here, touching her like it was the most natural thing in the world. “You left first,” she said, voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s hand stilled. “And you didn’t stop me.” “I *tried*.” “Not hard enough.” The words hung between them, sharp as broken glass. Rory’s chest ached. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” For a heartbeat, she thought he wouldn’t answer. Then his fingers tangled in her hair, tilting her head back. “Everything,” he murmured. “But I’ll settle for the truth.” She should push him away. She *should*. But the way he looked at her—like she was the only thing in the world that mattered—made her reckless. “I missed you,” she admitted, the words spilling out before she could stop them. Lucien’s breath hitched. Then his mouth was on hers, hot and demanding, and Rory melted into him, her hands fisting in his suit jacket. He tasted like whiskey and sin, and she wanted more. She *needed* more. He walked her back until her spine hit the wall, his body pressing against hers. “Say it again,” he growled against her lips. Rory’s heart hammered. “I missed you.” Lucien’s hands slid down her sides, gripping her hips. “Good.” His teeth grazed her bottom lip. “Because I’m not letting you walk away this time.” She should argue. She *should*. But the way he kissed her—like he was drowning and she was the only air—made her forget all the reasons this was a terrible idea. Ptolemy chose that moment to wind between their legs, purring loudly. Rory broke the kiss with a gasp, her cheeks flushing. “Your cat has terrible timing.” Lucien chuckled, low and dark, his forehead resting against hers. “He’s not the only one.” Rory swallowed hard. This was dangerous. He was dangerous. But as his hands slid up her back, pulling her closer, she realized she didn’t care. Not anymore.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.622
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.044
81.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"sentinel"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"sentinel"
2"practiced ease"
3"unreadable"
4"rhythmic"
5"stomach"
6"silence"
7"electric"
8"down her spine"
9"eyebrow"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords9
totalWords1072
ratio0.008
matches
0"you"
1"click-click"
2"Just what?"
3"should"
4"tried"
5"should"
6"needed"
7"should"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount870
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Lucien11
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Eva1
Missed1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.695
windowScore0.833
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like smoke, curled into the air be"
1"tasted like whiskey and sin, and she want"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1072
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.82
std16.93
cv0.711
sampleLengths
085
126
218
310
422
528
617
774
87
918
1022
1133
1216
1330
141
1510
1638
179
1844
1929
2012
2114
2220
2349
2416
2534
2621
2719
2814
2947
308
312
323
3319
3428
3540
3637
3723
386
3925
4030
4126
4215
4325
442
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was drowning"
25.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences122
ratio0.041
matches
0"The door swung open before Rory could knock a second time, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he’d been expecting her."
1"She hadn’t seen him in three months—not since that night in the alley behind Silas’ bar, when she’d walked away without looking back."
2"That had been her fault—another mess she’d dragged Eva into."
3"But the way he looked at her—like she was the only thing in the world that mattered—made her reckless."
4"But the way he kissed her—like he was drowning and she was the only air—made her forget all the reasons this was a terrible idea."
79.71% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount216
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.06018518518518518
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.023148148148148147
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean8.79
std6.55
cv0.745
sampleLengths
025
124
220
316
43
523
68
710
85
95
1011
1111
126
139
146
157
1610
177
1827
1912
2019
2116
222
235
2415
253
2611
276
285
2924
309
313
322
3310
341
355
3618
376
381
391
407
413
423
4322
448
455
465
474
4817
4916
60.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.38524590163934425
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"Instead, he turned toward the"
1"*Just what?* Missed him?"
2"Then his fingers tangled in"
3"Then his mouth was on"
ratio0.049
54.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences82
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked"
1"He wore one of his"
2"She hadn’t seen him in"
3"he said, voice smooth as"
4"She exhaled through her nose."
5"His mouth quirked, but there"
6"She could lie again, but"
7"He stepped aside, gesturing into"
8"She turned, and suddenly the"
9"His heterochromatic gaze held hers,"
10"He tapped his cane against"
11"He paused, then glanced back"
12"She should leave."
13"He moved to the cabinet"
14"He didn’t ask if she"
15"He didn’t need to."
16"She took a sip, letting"
17"He leaned against the counter,"
18"She set the glass down"
19"She cut herself off"
ratio0.415
45.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences82
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"His platinum hair was slicked"
2"He wore one of his"
3"The scent of bergamot and"
4"Rory’s pulse jumped."
5"She hadn’t seen him in"
6"he said, voice smooth as"
7"She exhaled through her nose."
8"His mouth quirked, but there"
9"Rory’s fingers twitched at her"
10"She could lie again, but"
11"Lucien had always seen through"
12"He stepped aside, gesturing into"
13"The last time she’d been"
14"A half-empty cup of tea"
15"The air smelled of old"
16"Lucien shut the door behind"
17"She turned, and suddenly the"
18"His heterochromatic gaze held hers,"
19"He tapped his cane against"
ratio0.829
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now, the living room was"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey"
1"His hand lifted, fingers hovering just shy of her cheek"
2"she said, voice barely above a whisper"
3"she admitted, the words spilling out before she could stop them"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
2"he growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.133
82.2576%