| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice trembled slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 86.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "amidst" | | 2 | "standard" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "imposing" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "marble" | | 11 | "complex" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "intricate" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1105 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "leaving" | | 1 | "unmooring" | | 2 | "used" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 761 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Veil | 4 | | Market | 4 | | Shade | 2 | | Davies | 8 | | Eva | 10 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Davies" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.252 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like wet concrete and ozone" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 33.48 | | std | 17.03 | | cv | 0.509 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 70 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 57 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 7 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "was positioned" | | 1 | "were arranged" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "wasn’t fighting" | | 2 | "was *leaving" | | 3 | "was nearing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "A body lay sprawled amidst overturned stalls and scattered wares – glittering powders, dried herbs, strange idols carved from obsidian." | | 1 | "The victim, a man Quinn didn't recognize, wore the distinctive mark of a Shade artisan – a spiraling tattoo on his left wrist." | | 2 | "Faint, almost invisible lines – scratches, perhaps?" | | 3 | "– that led away from the body and towards a side tunnel." | | 4 | "She’d heard that tone before – condescending, dismissive." | | 5 | "“Not just anyone. According to this, it takes a specific catalyst. A vessel.” Eva pointed to a symbol within the diagram – a stylized representation of a human heart." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 758 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.032981530343007916 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01978891820580475 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 10.42 | | std | 6.78 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 61.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4056603773584906 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "He gestured to the scattered" | | 1 | "He scrubbed a hand over" | | 2 | "His limbs were arranged at" | | 3 | "It resembled a poorly staged" | | 4 | "She knelt, careful not to" | | 5 | "She ran a gloved finger" | | 6 | "she murmured, more to herself" | | 7 | "She pulled out a small" | | 8 | "She’d heard that tone before" | | 9 | "She'd briefly met her a" | | 10 | "She tugged at her hair" | | 11 | "Her voice trembled slightly" | | 12 | "She hailed a taxi, giving" | | 13 | "She was already replaying the" | | 14 | "It didn't add up." | | 15 | "She flashed her badge at" | | 16 | "It was *leaving*." | | 17 | "She looked up at Eva," | | 18 | "She paused, her gaze hardening" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted like wet" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn wrinkled her" | | 2 | "Water dripped from the vaulted" | | 3 | "The Veil Market hadn’t chosen" | | 4 | "Crime scene tape, a garish" | | 5 | "A body lay sprawled amidst" | | 6 | "The victim, a man Quinn" | | 7 | "Sergeant Davies asked, his voice" | | 8 | "He gestured to the scattered" | | 9 | "He scrubbed a hand over" | | 10 | "Quinn ignored him, her gaze" | | 11 | "The body was positioned oddly," | | 12 | "His limbs were arranged at" | | 13 | "It resembled a poorly staged" | | 14 | "She knelt, careful not to" | | 15 | "The man's eyes were wide," | | 16 | "Davies said, pointing down" | | 17 | "A small, intricately carved bone" | | 18 | "The entry requirement for the" | | 19 | "Quinn’s eyes narrowed." |
| | ratio | 0.933 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn glanced at Davies, who was busy barking orders into his own radio." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, more to herself than to Davies" | | 1 | "Quinn said, realization dawning" | | 2 | "She looked up, her brown eyes sharp with understanding" | | 3 | "Quinn said, her voice resolute" | | 4 | "She paused, her gaze hardening" |
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| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Quinn questioned (question)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |