Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7GX9CA7HRD918KWP3K9B3

Run Details

Duration:
39.9s
Cost:
$0.001835
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above the door jingles, high and tinny, slicing through the hum of the jukebox. Rory Carter pauses, her rag hovering over a smudge on the mahogany bar. The neon green sign outside bleeds through the dusty window, casting a sickly glow over the walls—old maps pinned crookedly, black-and-white photos that might be Berlin in ’89, a sailor in a peaked cap. She blinks, wipes faster. *Just a regular*, she murmurs, though it’s half a lie. The bar’s empty save for the dartboard, its darts hanging like forgotten teeth. She turns, ready to say *evening*—stops. A man stands in the doorway, backlit by the streetlight. Tall, broad. Hair grey-streaked auburn, trimmed close, cut even with the cropped beard. Hazel eyes, sharp as a blade. Limp—left leg stiff, dragging like a weighted bag. He’s wearing a leather jacket, scuffed at the cuffs, a signet ring glinting on his right hand, etched with a black raven. The name hits her like a fist. “Silas?” He stops, too. The bell jingles again, echoing. “Rory.” His voice is lower, rougher than she remembers, like sandpaper on wood. “Thought I’d recognized the name. The delivery notes… Yu-Fei’s.” She sets the rag down, hard. The sound startles her, a crack that bounces off the walls. “You—you got a package from Yu-Fei’s?” “No,” he says, stepping closer. His limp is more pronounced now, a shuffle that makes the floor creak. “I come here to drink. After all these years, I thought… thought the ghost of the place might still hold you.” Rory stares at him. The man who let her sleep on the couch when the radiator broke, who bought her tea when she cried over Evan’s texts, who taught her to spot a lie before it left someone’s mouth. The man who asked her once, *Ever gonna tell me why you’re running?* and when she’d shaken her head, said, *I’ll wait*. She looks down at her hands. The scar on her left wrist, a thin white crescent, glints in the light—from a kitchen knife, Evan’s anger, a mistake she’d made thinking she could fight. “Thought you’d left,” she says, finally. “Prague, maybe. Gave up the spy game.” He laughs, a dry huff that hits the ceiling and falls. “Left? Can’t leave a place that’s buried itself in your bones. The Raven’s Nest… smells the same. Pipe smoke, old beer, regret. Same as when I opened it.” Rory’s throat tightens. “Regret’s all I know,” she says, before she can stop herself. The words hang, thick, a spiderweb in the air. She looks up. His eyes are on her face, studying, like he’s trying to etch the years into his memory. “You changed,” he says. Not a question. “You too,” she fires back, but it’s flat. He’s 58, she’s 25—how could he not? But his hair, once black with a few grey strands, is now auburn streaked with silver, like autumn leaves. His face is lined, crow’s feet at the corners of his eyes, his posture a little stooped, as if he’s carrying a secret the size of a suitcase. He takes a step closer, and she can smell the whiskey on his breath, warm and sharp. “Better,” he says. “Better?” She scoffs. “Or just… quieter? You used to talk. About Prague, about the people you saved, about how the world’s not all sunshine and rainbows.” His face hardens, just for a second. “Prague’s a long time ago.” “How long?” she asks. “Ten years? Eleven? When I showed up here, red-eyed, trembling, you said… *Aurora, you don’t know me. Stay out of my business.* But then you let me stay. Let me work here, even when Yu-Fei wanted me to deliver at 3 a.m. Let me keep the front room as my bedroom when the rent was two months late.” He doesn’t answer. He just stands there, watching her, like he’s afraid she’ll disappear if he looks away. The silence stretches, broken only by the ticking of a clock behind the bar—old, brass, slow. “Why’d you leave?” she asks suddenly. The words are out before she can think better of them. He flinches. Just once, a sudden jerk, like she’s touched a raw nerve. “Retired. Got hurt.” He nods at his leg. “Knee. Botched operation. The bullet didn’t get me, but the anesthesia did. Paralyzed me for six months. They said I’d never walk again.” “Botched? Or you were just… bad at it?” The words land like a punch. She braces, waiting for him to storm out, to call her ungrateful, to say she has no idea what she’s talking about. But his face doesn’t change. “I was good. Too good. Some missions you can’t win. You just… survive.” “You survived,” she says. “But you stopped living. Opened a bar, closed yourself off. What’s the point of being a spy if you can’t save the people you care about?” He steps back, as if the words hit him. “You think I wanted to open a bar? Thought I’d grow old counting change and telling drunks they should *just smile* at their problems? Eva wrote to me. Said you were in London, that you’d run off to escape an ex. Said you needed help. I should’ve ignored her. Should’ve let you figure it out on your own. But….” He trails off, looks at the scar on her wrist, and for a second, she sees Evan’s face in his eyes—cold, angry, *mine*. “You were sixteen that day I found you, huddled in an alley, crying. And you fought back. Kicked him in the balls, I think. Said you weren’t going to let him take what you had left.” Rory’s breath catches. She didn’t remember that. Not the specifics. Just the cold, the rain, the way someone had grabbed her arm, skin as hard as a stone, and then… a hand on her shoulder, gentle, saying, *It’s over. You’re safe now*. “You came looking for me?” she asks. “Every day for a month,” he says. “I watched you through the window. Delivering packages, ducking into the bar when the rain got too bad. You’d sit in the corner, read a book—*law* books, for chrissakes—and never drink, never go out. I thought… if I could just keep you here, keep you safe, you’d start living again. Let yourself *breathe*.” “I did start living,” she says. “I work at Yu-Fei’s. I make good money. I have a routine. Some people need that.” “Routine’s not living,” he says. “It’s surviving. Like me.” She looks away, towards the bookshelf that hides the secret room. Silas had told her once, *Don’t go back there. It’s not for you*. Now, she wonders what secrets are buried behind it—dead letters, a gun, a photo of a woman who isn’t Eva, or maybe she is. “You never told me your name,” she says. His blink is slow, deliberate. “My name? Silas Blackwood. No nickname. Just… Blackwood.” “Aurora Carter,” she says. “But you can call me Rory. Only my father called me Aurora. He said it suited me. Like a song.” He smiles. It’s small, tight, but it’s there. “Rory.” She closes the distance between them, halfway around the bar. “Why didn’t you tell me you were Eva’s father? After all these years?” His smile fades. “Eva and I… we had a fight. When she was sixteen, she ran off with a boy. We tried to find her. Found her in a motel, pregnant. She hated me for it. Said I’d always been too controlling, that I didn’t trust her. Told me I’d never understand what it was like to be her. I should’ve trusted her to make her own mistakes. But I didn’t. And now… now she won’t even return my calls.” Rory stares at him, at the way his hands are clenched, at the way his eyes are glassy—like he’s trying to hold back a storm. The man who saved her is, in some way, the man who abandoned another. “Why are you telling me this now?” she asks. He takes a deep breath, like he’s trying to fill his lungs with something, anything. “Because I’m dying. Cancer. Stage four. Spread to my bones. The doctors say I have a few months. Maybe less.” The words hit her like a truck. She staggers back, hitting the bar with her elbow. The pain makes her gasp. “No. You’re fine. You just… you have a limp. That’s it.” “Cancer,” he says, quiet. “Not a bullet, not a botched operation. This time, there’s no fixing it. No coming back.” She looks at him, at the way he’s holding himself, and she realizes she never really *saw* him. Not the man, just the landlord, the mentor, the man who helped her escape Evan but never let her escape the past. The same past that’s still clawing at her, even now. “I didn’t mean to hurt you,” he says. “You didn’t hurt me,” she says. “You just… didn’t know how to help me. How to let me help myself.” He reaches into his jacket, pulls out a photo. It’s a younger Silas, in a dark uniform, a gun slung over his shoulder, smiling. Next to him, a woman—Eva, she realizes, 18, but the same sharp eyes, the same tilt of the chin. “Eva’s in Dublin,” he says. “Shes got a daughter now. A little girl, same age as you were when you first came here. She has my eyes. Her name is Lila. After her mother’s grandmother.” Rory takes the photo, her fingers trembling. Lila. She can almost see her—dark hair, sharp eyes, a temper like fire. “We can fix it,” she says. “Me and you, we can… I can write. You can call. Tell her—tell her about you. About how brave you were. About how you saved me.” “Fix it?” He laughs, a wet, broken sound. “What’s the point? I don’t have time. I don’t have *anything* left.” She looks up, and there it is—the regret. The guilt. The man who spent his life saving others can’t save himself, or the ones he loves. “You could try,” she says. He shakes his head, but he’s smiling, a little sad, a little tired. “You’re a lot like her, you know. The girl who fought back. The one I should’ve protected, not kept locked away.” “Eva?” “Both of you,” he says. He pauses, then adds, “Tell her I’m sorry. For everything. Tell her I love her. Even if she never says it back.” She nods, unable to speak. The clock behind the bar ticks on, louder now, a heartbeat. He turns to leave, his limp more pronounced. At the door, he stops, turns back. “You’re living, Rory. More than I did. Don’t stop. Even when it gets hard. Especially then.” She watches him go, the bell jingles, a reminder that time doesn’t wait. The jukebox starts up again, a soft, slurring tune—*I’ll Be Seeing You*. She sits down, the bar empty around her, the scar on her wrist throbbing. She picks up a pen, finds a napkin from Yu-Fei behind the bar, and starts writing. The words flow, slow at first, then faster, until she can’t stop. *Dear Lila*, she writes, *Your grandfather is a brave man. He saved me when I needed saving…* And as she writes, she feels it—the weight of time easing, just a little, the regret unspooling like thread. The bar grows dark as she writes. The neon sign flickers, but she doesn’t notice. She’s already moving, towards the bookshelf, towards the secret room, towards the secrets she kept for too long. The bell jingles again, but she doesn’t look up. She’s home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she remembers like [like]"
1"she asks suddenly [suddenly]"
2"He pauses then [then]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.951
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.098
94.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1956
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1956
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"etch"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"etched"
2"echoing"
3"etch"
4"silence"
5"reminder"
6"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen83
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords62
totalWords1934
ratio0.032
matches
0"Just a regular"
1"evening"
2"Ever gonna tell me why you’re running?"
3"I’ll wait"
4"Aurora, you don’t know me. Stay out of my business."
5"just smile"
6"mine"
7"It’s over. You’re safe now"
8"law"
9"breathe"
10"Don’t go back there. It’s not for you"
11"saw"
12"anything"
13"I’ll Be Seeing You"
14"Dear Lila"
15"Your grandfather is a brave man. He saved me when I needed saving…"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions39
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1151
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Berlin1
Evan4
Rory6
Eva2
Silas2
Be1
Seeing1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Berlin"
1"Yu-Fei"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.517
wordCount1934
matches
0"Not the man, just the landlord, the mentor, the man who helped her escape Evan but never let her escape the past"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean32.78
std23.59
cv0.72
sampleLengths
096
167
230
323
439
561
646
739
843
97
1062
1120
1226
1312
1462
1534
1617
1744
188
1946
2030
21127
2242
237
2460
2522
269
2748
288
2913
3024
319
3223
3380
3439
359
3635
3732
3820
3950
408
4120
4243
4335
4420
4532
4620
4726
485
4934
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"are buried"
1"are clenched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences156
ratio0.09
matches
0"The neon green sign outside bleeds through the dusty window, casting a sickly glow over the walls—old maps pinned crookedly, black-and-white photos that might be Berlin in ’89, a sailor in a peaked cap."
1"She turns, ready to say *evening*—stops."
2"Limp—left leg stiff, dragging like a weighted bag."
3"The scar on her left wrist, a thin white crescent, glints in the light—from a kitchen knife, Evan’s anger, a mistake she’d made thinking she could fight."
4"He’s 58, she’s 25—how could he not?"
5"The silence stretches, broken only by the ticking of a clock behind the bar—old, brass, slow."
6"“You think I wanted to open a bar? Thought I’d grow old counting change and telling drunks they should *just smile* at their problems? Eva wrote to me. Said you were in London, that you’d run off to escape an ex. Said you needed help. I should’ve ignored her. Should’ve let you figure it out on your own. But….” He trails off, looks at the scar on her wrist, and for a second, she sees Evan’s face in his eyes—cold, angry, *mine*."
7"Now, she wonders what secrets are buried behind it—dead letters, a gun, a photo of a woman who isn’t Eva, or maybe she is."
8"Rory stares at him, at the way his hands are clenched, at the way his eyes are glassy—like he’s trying to hold back a storm."
9"Next to him, a woman—Eva, she realizes, 18, but the same sharp eyes, the same tilt of the chin."
10"She can almost see her—dark hair, sharp eyes, a temper like fire."
11"She looks up, and there it is—the regret."
12"The jukebox starts up again, a soft, slurring tune—*I’ll Be Seeing You*."
13"He saved me when I needed saving…* And as she writes, she feels it—the weight of time easing, just a little, the regret unspooling like thread."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1166
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03773584905660377
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005145797598627788
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean12.4
std11.86
cv0.957
sampleLengths
016
113
234
34
410
513
66
710
82
911
106
118
1222
137
141
153
165
1713
189
196
2011
216
225
2313
2421
254
2635
2722
286
2927
306
317
3211
3328
343
3511
369
373
3817
394
403
418
427
4319
4428
4517
463
473
4823
497
44.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"*Just a regular*, she murmurs,"
1"Just once, a sudden jerk,"
2"Just the cold, the rain,"
ratio0.03
12.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences100
matches
0"She blinks, wipes faster."
1"She turns, ready to say"
2"He’s wearing a leather jacket,"
3"He stops, too."
4"His voice is lower, rougher"
5"She sets the rag down,"
6"he says, stepping closer"
7"His limp is more pronounced"
8"She looks down at her"
9"she says, finally"
10"He laughs, a dry huff"
11"she says, before she can"
12"She looks up."
13"His eyes are on her"
14"she fires back, but it’s"
15"He’s 58, she’s 25—how could"
16"His face is lined, crow’s"
17"He takes a step closer,"
18"His face hardens, just for"
19"He doesn’t answer."
ratio0.52
25.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences100
matches
0"The bell above the door"
1"Rory Carter pauses, her rag"
2"The neon green sign outside"
3"She blinks, wipes faster."
4"The bar’s empty save for"
5"She turns, ready to say"
6"A man stands in the"
7"Hair grey-streaked auburn, trimmed close,"
8"Hazel eyes, sharp as a"
9"He’s wearing a leather jacket,"
10"The name hits her like"
11"He stops, too."
12"The bell jingles again, echoing."
13"His voice is lower, rougher"
14"She sets the rag down,"
15"The sound startles her, a"
16"he says, stepping closer"
17"His limp is more pronounced"
18"Rory stares at him."
19"The man who let her"
ratio0.87
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Now, she wonders what secrets"
ratio0.01
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The neon green sign outside bleeds through the dusty window, casting a sickly glow over the walls—old maps pinned crookedly, black-and-white photos that might b…"
1"The man who let her sleep on the couch when the radiator broke, who bought her tea when she cried over Evan’s texts, who taught her to spot a lie before it left…"
2"His face is lined, crow’s feet at the corners of his eyes, his posture a little stooped, as if he’s carrying a secret the size of a suitcase."
3"The man who spent his life saving others can’t save himself, or the ones he loves."
90.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she says, finally"
1"he says, quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He laughs (laugh)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.377
leniency0.754
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.033
86.0138%