Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7HAEESZZS0SKGKGQR906D

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15.7s
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$0.001242
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Mistral

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the knuckles could rap a second time. Rory stood there, her black hair damp at the temples, a kitchen knife gripped in one hand like it was the only thing keeping her upright. The flour dusting her cheek and the way her bright blue eyes locked onto him—wide, wary—told him she hadn’t been expecting company. Not this kind. Lucien didn’t flinch. He stepped inside, letting the door click shut behind him, and leaned against the frame like he owned the place. “You’re late.” She didn’t lower the knife. “You’re not supposed to be here.” “Neither are you.” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—stacks of books precariously balanced against the walls, scrolls pinned with bent paper clips, the faint scent of old parchment and something sharper underneath. “Still living in squalor, I see.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “I pay rent.” “Do you?” He pushed off the doorframe and took a step forward, close enough that she could see the way his tailored charcoal suit clung to his shoulders, the faint sheen of sweat at his temples. “Last I checked, you were still squatting.” “Eva’s my friend.” “And I’m your problem.” He reached into his coat—not for a weapon, not yet, but for the silver flask tucked in his inner pocket. The one that had once held whisky, now empty. “You left a message.” “I didn’t leave you a message.” “No.” He unscrewed the cap, took a swig, then offered it to her. “But you left *this*.” She didn’t take it. “I don’t want your charity.” “It’s not charity.” He took another drink, the muscles in his throat working as he swallowed. “It’s an apology.” The knife wavered. “You don’t owe me anything.” “Don’t I?” His free hand brushed against the scar on her wrist—the small crescent moon left from that childhood accident she’d never told him about. “You think I don’t remember the way you looked when you walked out of that flat in Camden? Like you’d rather face a demon than me.” Rory’s breath hitched. “I wasn’t facing you.” “No.” His voice dropped, rougher now. “You were running.” The flask clinked against his teeth as he recapped it. “You should’ve called.” “I didn’t have your number.” “Bullshit.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell the rain on his coat, the faint metallic tang of something darker beneath. “You had three months to find it.” She swallowed. “I didn’t want to.” “Why?” His fingers brushed the knife’s handle, not taking it, just testing the weight. “Because you were afraid I’d stop you?” The words hung between them, raw and unspoken. Rory’s grip tightened. “I wasn’t afraid of you.” “Liar.” His thumb traced the edge of the blade, slow, deliberate. “You were terrified of what I’d make you feel.” She lunged. The knife didn’t connect. Lucien twisted, caught her wrist, and yanked her against him. The flask hit the floor with a dull *thud*, rolling under the couch. Rory’s other hand flew to his chest, fingers curling into the lapel of his suit, but he didn’t let go. Didn’t even breathe. “You always were a terrible liar,” he murmured against her hair. Her pulse hammered in her throat. “Let go.” “Make me.” She didn’t. The silence between them was thick, charged, the kind that crackled before a storm. Rory’s fingers flexed against his coat, her nails digging in just enough to leave marks. Lucien’s breath was warm against her ear, his voice a low growl. “You came back,” he said. “I didn’t.” “You did.” His free hand slid up her arm, past her shoulder, until his fingers tangled in her hair. “You’re here.” She should’ve pushed him away. Should’ve screamed. Should’ve done something. But the knife slipped from her fingers, clattering to the floor. Lucien’s lips brushed the shell of her ear. “Tell me you didn’t miss me.” Rory’s breath hitched. “I didn’t.” “Liar.” His mouth crashed onto hers. It wasn’t gentle. It was years of anger and want and things left unsaid, all colliding in one brutal kiss. Rory’s back hit the door, the impact knocking the wind from her lungs, but she didn’t pull away. Her hands fisted in his coat, yanking him closer, and Lucien groaned against her lips, the sound vibrating through her like a promise. The door creaked behind them. Rory froze. Lucien didn’t. His teeth grazed her lower lip, a warning. “Don’t.” She didn’t. But the sound of footsteps outside—slow, deliberate—made her blood turn to ice. Lucien’s body tensed. He pulled back just enough to press his forehead against hers, his breath ragged. “Whoever it is, they’re not getting in.” “Luc—” “Shh.” His fingers found hers, lacing through them. “Stay quiet.” The knock came again. Three sharp raps. Rory’s stomach twisted. “That’s not—” “Doesn’t matter.” Lucien’s voice was steel. “We’re not answering.” The knock came a third time. Louder. Then a voice—deep, familiar—called out. “Rory? You in there?” Lucien’s grip tightened. “Fuck.” Rory’s heart pounded. “That’s Silas.” “Then we’ve got a problem.” The doorknob turned. The door didn’t budge. Lucien’s cane—ivory-handled, deceptively thin—materialised in his hand. The blade inside it glinted in the dim light of Eva’s flat. Rory’s breath caught. “You’re not—” “Not what?” He pressed the tip against the door, just above the lock. “Not going to make sure no one walks in on us?” The knob rattled. Lucien’s voice dropped to a whisper. “You want them to see you like this?” Rory’s fingers dug into his wrist. “No.” “Then hold on.” The blade slid home. The lock clicked. Silas’s voice came again, muffled now, frustrated. “Rory, open up. I know you’re in there.” Lucien’s lips brushed her temple. “Ready?” She swallowed. “No.” “Good.” His mouth found hers again, harder this time, desperate. “Then let’s give them a show.” The door burst open. Silas stood there, his usual smirk replaced by something sharper—shock, maybe, or recognition. His gaze flicked between them, taking in the way Rory’s back was pressed against the wall, the way Lucien’s hand was still tangled in her hair, the way her lips were swollen from his kiss. For a heartbeat, no one moved. Then Silas’s eyes narrowed. “Well. This is new.” Lucien didn’t let go. “Get out.” Silas’s smirk returned, slower this time, colder. “Or what, Frenchman? You’ll cut me?” “Try me.” Rory’s fingers twisted in Lucien’s coat. “Silas, it’s not—” “Not what?” He stepped inside, shutting the door behind him. “Not what you think? Or not what you *want*?” Lucien’s free hand curled around her waist, pulling her flush against him. “Leave.” Silas’s gaze flicked to their joined hands, then back to Lucien’s face. “You’re bleeding.” Rory’s breath hitched. She looked down. A thin line of red welled from the corner of Lucien’s mouth, where her teeth had grazed him in the heat of the kiss. Lucien didn’t wipe it away. Didn’t look away. Silas’s expression darkened. “You two are *insane*.” Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. “Silas—” “Fine.” He held up his hands in surrender. “But if you’re done playing house, Rory, your delivery’s been waiting for three hours. And Yu-Fei’s going to *skin* me if I don’t get it out.” Lucien’s grip on her waist tightened. “You’re not going anywhere.” Silas’s smirk was back, sharper than ever. “Oh, I’m going. But you?” He jerked his chin toward the door. “You’re staying.” And with that, he was gone, the door slamming shut behind him. Rory didn’t move. Lucien’s breath was still ragged against her ear. “You’re trembling.” “I’m not.” “Liar.” His fingers traced the line of her jaw, his thumb brushing away the flour still clinging to her skin. “You’re shaking.” She swallowed. “What now?” His lips curved, just barely. “Now?” Rory’s heart hammered. “Yes.” Lucien’s hand slid down her back, his fingers pressing into the small of her spine. “Now,” he murmured, “we finish what we started.” And then his mouth was on hers again, and the world outside Eva’s flat ceased to exist.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences89
tagDensity0.236
leniency0.472
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1343
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1343
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flicked"
count3
1
word"wavered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"wavered"
2"weight"
3"unspoken"
4"traced"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"charged"
8"footsteps"
9"stomach"
10"familiar"
11"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences183
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1329
ratio0.004
matches
0"this"
1"thud"
2"want"
3"insane"
4"skin"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount989
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Rory19
Lucien22
Silas7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.388
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
49.51% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.505
wordCount1329
matches
0"not for a weapon, not yet, but for the silver flask tucked in his inner pocket"
1"not yet, but for the silver flask tucked in his inner pocket"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences183
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs101
mean13.16
std13.3
cv1.011
sampleLengths
063
125
211
344
46
543
63
737
86
917
109
1119
128
1351
147
159
1613
175
1830
196
2021
2116
2220
232
2450
2511
268
272
282
2941
305
312
3221
3310
3411
3514
365
371
385
3961
405
412
422
439
442
4512
4624
471
4810
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs179
matches(empty)
17.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences183
ratio0.044
matches
0"The flour dusting her cheek and the way her bright blue eyes locked onto him—wide, wary—told him she hadn’t been expecting company."
1"“Neither are you.” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—stacks of books precariously balanced against the walls, scrolls pinned with bent paper clips, the faint scent of old parchment and something sharper underneath."
2"“And I’m your problem.” He reached into his coat—not for a weapon, not yet, but for the silver flask tucked in his inner pocket."
3"“Don’t I?” His free hand brushed against the scar on her wrist—the small crescent moon left from that childhood accident she’d never told him about."
4"But the sound of footsteps outside—slow, deliberate—made her blood turn to ice."
5"Then a voice—deep, familiar—called out."
6"Lucien’s cane—ivory-handled, deceptively thin—materialised in his hand."
7"Silas stood there, his usual smirk replaced by something sharper—shock, maybe, or recognition."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1002
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03592814371257485
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003992015968063872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences183
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences183
mean7.26
std6.99
cv0.962
sampleLengths
012
126
222
33
43
520
62
75
86
938
106
113
123
1336
147
153
1624
179
184
196
2013
214
224
235
2416
253
263
275
2825
2926
303
314
326
333
3410
353
365
3723
387
392
404
4114
427
438
443
455
4611
479
482
494
45.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3005464480874317
totalSentences183
uniqueOpeners55
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then a voice—deep, familiar—called out."
1"Then Silas’s eyes narrowed."
ratio0.019
93.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences104
matches
0"He stepped inside, letting the"
1"She didn’t lower the knife."
2"His gaze flicked past her,"
3"He pushed off the doorframe"
4"He reached into his coat—not"
5"He unscrewed the cap, took"
6"She didn’t take it."
7"He took another drink, the"
8"His free hand brushed against"
9"His voice dropped, rougher now"
10"He stepped closer, close enough"
11"His fingers brushed the knife’s"
12"His thumb traced the edge"
13"he murmured against her hair"
14"Her pulse hammered in her"
15"His free hand slid up"
16"She should’ve pushed him away."
17"His mouth crashed onto hers."
18"It wasn’t gentle."
19"It was years of anger"
ratio0.317
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences104
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, her black"
2"The flour dusting her cheek"
3"Lucien didn’t flinch."
4"He stepped inside, letting the"
5"She didn’t lower the knife."
6"His gaze flicked past her,"
7"Rory’s jaw tightened."
8"He pushed off the doorframe"
9"He reached into his coat—not"
10"The one that had once"
11"He unscrewed the cap, took"
12"She didn’t take it."
13"He took another drink, the"
14"The knife wavered."
15"His free hand brushed against"
16"Rory’s breath hitched."
17"His voice dropped, rougher now"
18"The flask clinked against his"
19"He stepped closer, close enough"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her hands fisted in his coat, yanking him closer, and Lucien groaned against her lips, the sound vibrating through her like a promise."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His fingers brushed, not taking it, just testing the weight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"He pressed (press)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences89
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.09
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.067
81.5052%