Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7HBVJP96RZ2BMYSF2ZJQV

Run Details

Duration:
2m 50s
Cost:
$0.015883
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slung her Golden Empress delivery bag over her opposite shoulder, the crinkle of leftover spring roll wrappers rubbing against the worn cuff of her uniform shirt—stained with soy sauce from a mid-shift spill at a Soho flat. She slipped through Richmond Park’s locked side gate, the metal jangling soft against her left wrist—where the crescent scar throbbed, a faint warning she’d ignored since Eva’s 2 a.m. text. The winter air bit at her cheeks, snow dusting the park’s usual underbrush, but when she rounded the gnarled oak copse Eva had described, the snow vanished. Ancient oak standing stones marked the clearing’s edge, their bark cracked with grooves that looked like faded runes she couldn’t place—runes her Welsh teacher mother had once pointed out in a Cardiff museum, calling them fae markers. She paused, her scuffed delivery boots sinking into moss that stayed green despite the December frost, the same moss her mother had collected for a classroom project when Rory was 10. She reached for the silver chain around her neck, tugging the Heartstone Pendant free. The crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, glowed faint in the moon’s thin light. Its surface caught the faint wildflower scent drifting from the clearing, turning the glow into a tangled web of red and gold. What did Eva even know about this place? She tucked the pendant back under her shirt, its warmth seeping through the uniform fabric. She’d left her abusive ex Evan’s Cardiff flat for London at Eva’s plea, taken the Golden Empress delivery job to pay rent for her flat above Silas’ bar—where she’d listened to Silas’ late-night rants about fae-touched spots in Richmond more times than she could count—and found the pendant tucked in her delivery bag three weeks prior—no note, no name, just the cold silver chain looped around a spring roll container labeled with Yu-Fei Cheung’s handwriting. Eva’s text had claimed the Richmond grove held a clue to the benefactor, that the pendant’s pulse tied to something hidden there, something that could explain why Evan had never found her in London despite his frantic texts. She stepped across the standing stones’ invisible boundary. Wildflowers bloomed at her feet—bluebells, daisies, poppies—all out of season, their petals glossy as polished glass. She’d delivered to a floral shop in Kensington earlier that day, had listened to the owner complain about how winter killed every bloom, so the sight made her stomach twist. She checked her phone, the screen flickering when she tapped the time. 11:27 PM, it read. She glanced at her wristwatch, a hand-me-down from her barrister father—brass band, scratched face, a gift for her 18th birthday when she’d started pre-law at Cardiff: 12:15 AM. Time’s already playing games. She stuffed her phone into her uniform pocket, the device’s static hum fading when she turned her gaze to the clearing’s center. A single oak stood taller than the rest, its branches weaving a canopy that blocked the moon’s light in patches. Rustling sounded from its base—too sharp, too deliberate to be wind. She tensed, her delivery bag slipping further down her arm. She’d made late-night deliveries to rough London estates, had faced Evan’s raised voice more times than she could count, had once hidden in a Cardiff alley for two hours to avoid his rage, but this rustling held a weight she couldn’t name—like someone was dragging a heavy object through the moss, slow and steady. She took a step forward. The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed harder, and she rubbed it with her right hand—her fingers brushing the pendant’s chain through her shirt. The gem pulsed once, warmer than before, the heat matching the burn she’d felt when Evan had grabbed her wrist during their final fight in Cardiff. Eva better not have sent me on a wild goose chase. A child’s laugh echoed through the clearing. She spun, her boots kicking a poppy across the moss. No child stood there—only the wildflowers, their petals twisting slightly as if they’d heard the sound too. She scanned the edge of her vision, catching a shadow that stretched longer than her own, its shape blurring when she stared directly at it. It had no feet, no hands, just a long, dark line that curved around a standing stone. That’s not a branch. She reached into her delivery bag, pulling out a crumpled fortune cookie wrapper from the Golden Empress—her last delivery of the night, a regular at a Richmond flat who’d left a £5 tip tucked in the wrapper, saying she’d looked like she needed it. She crumpled it tighter, the paper’s crackle cutting through the silence. The shadow vanished. She dropped the wrapper, its white paper contrasting with the green moss and red poppies. She checked her phone again—this time, the screen was black, no amount of tapping bringing it back. Her watch’s hands had stopped moving, stuck at 12:15 AM. She’d fixed the watch’s mechanism with her father’s old tools last month, had tested it against the Golden Empress’ kitchen clock every morning for a week, so the stillness made her breath catch. I should leave. She turned to the standing stones, but their positions had shifted—what had been a straight line now curved into a circle, blocking her exit. She stepped toward one, her hand pressing against its rough bark. A jolt shot up her arm, making her yank her hand back. The jolt’s intensity matched the shock she’d felt when she’d found Evan’s fist through her Cardiff flat’s window the day she left. The pendant pulsed again, this time in quick, staccato beats, its crimson glow seeping through her shirt. The benefactor knew this would happen. She tugged the pendant free again, holding it up to the faint light filtering through the canopy. The gem’s glow brightened, and she noticed a tiny crack running down its center—one she hadn’t seen before, a crack that looked like the split in her father’s old law book, the one Evan had thrown at her during a fight. Her left wrist’s scar tingled, and she traced the crescent shape with her thumb, remembering the childhood accident that had made it: she’d climbed a Cardiff oak with Eva, slipped, and cut her wrist on a broken branch. Eva had wrapped it with a handkerchief from her Welsh teacher mother’s purse, the fabric printed with daffodils that had faded over time. Eva’s always been tied to this. Another rustling sounded, this time from behind her. She spun, catching a glimpse of a shadow that had no source—no branch, no rock, just a dark shape that darted toward the wildflowers. A poppy’s petal snapped off when the shadow brushed it, the petal falling to the moss and melting into a black puddle. The puddle spread slowly, eating through the moss and leaving a bare patch of dirt in its wake. That’s not natural. She took a step back, her boot hitting the fortune cookie wrapper. She bent to pick it up, her fingers brushing the moss. The moss felt sticky, like dried honey, and she pulled her hand back quickly. The pendant’s pulses grew stronger, warmth spreading up her neck and into her cheeks. She realized the pulses matched the thud of her heart, each beat making her scar tingle more. She’d learned to control her breathing during Evan’s rages, to count the beats of her heart until he left, but here the counting did nothing—each pulse made the world feel smaller, the standing stones’ circle tighter. What’s the pendant trying to show me? A soft hum filled the clearing, coming from the tall oak’s base. She stepped toward it, her delivery bag’s spring roll wrappers crinkling louder with each step. The hum grew louder, and she noticed a small crack in the oak’s trunk—its shape matching the crescent scar on her wrist. She pressed her left wrist against the crack. The pendant’s glow flared, and the hum turned into a whisper—too faint to make out, but familiar, like the voice of someone she’d known as a child, someone who’d sung Welsh lullabies to her when her mother was grading papers. I know that voice. She leaned closer, her ear pressing against the oak’s bark. The whisper cleared, turning into a single word: Hel. She jolted back, her delivery bag falling off her arm and spilling its contents—spring roll wrappers, a soy sauce packet, a crumpled menu from Golden Empress with Yu-Fei’s note scrawled on the back (Don’t work too late), a small toy car she’d found in a delivery bag for a child’s birthday. The Heartstone Pendant slipped from her hand, clattering to the moss. She bent to pick it up, and when she looked up, a shadow stood at the edge of her vision—taller than any human, its arms stretching toward her, its fingers ending in sharp points that glinted like broken glass. Don’t look directly at it. She grabbed the pendant, tucking it back under her shirt. The shadow vanished when she stood, but the wildflowers around her had started to wilt, their glossy petals turning brown and crumbling into dust. The standing stones’ circle had tightened, their bark now oozing a black liquid that seeped into the moss. She turned to the clearing’s entrance, but the snow outside the boundary had vanished, replaced by a blank white wall of light—no trees, no gate, no sign of the Richmond Park she’d entered. I can’t get out. She pressed her hand against her left wrist, the crescent scar now burning like a brand. The pendant’s warmth turning into a searing heat, making her gasp. She looked at the tall oak’s trunk, the crescent crack now glowing the same crimson as the pendant. Rustling sounded again, this time from every direction, and she realized the rustling was not from branches but from hundreds of tiny shadows, all darting toward her from the wildflowers’ remains. Each shadow was the size of her thumb, each moving with the same deliberate speed as the first rustling she’d heard. They’re coming. She backed toward the tall oak, her delivery bag’s spilled toy car crunching under her boot. She grabbed the oak’s bark, her fingers sinking into the sticky moss, and tried to pull herself up—anything to get away from the approaching shadows. The pendant’s heat flared again, and she felt a jolt run from her left wrist to her shoulder, a jolt that made her see a flash of the benefactor’s hand—pale, with a scar on the knuckle—looping the silver chain around her spring roll container. I saw them. She blinked the flash away, but the shadows were closer now, their tiny points scraping against the moss. She traced the crescent scar on her wrist, the same shape as the oak’s crack, the same shape as the pendant’s crack, and realized the three were tied—her scar, the pendant, the grove—all part of something the benefactor had planned from the start. This isn’t a clue. It’s a trap.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1858
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1858
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"throbbed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"traced"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"stomach"
4"weight"
5"pulsed"
6"echoed"
7"scanned"
8"silence"
9"intensity"
10"traced"
11"whisper"
12"familiar"
13"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"felt a jolt"
54.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch’s"
1"feel"
2"know"
3"see"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen81
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1821
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1733
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Golden5
Empress4
Soho1
Richmond4
Park2
Eva9
Welsh3
Cardiff7
December1
Rory2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Evan7
London3
Wildflowers1
Kensington1
Hel1
Yu-Fei1
Don2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Evan"
4"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Golden"
1"Soho"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
6"Kensington"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like faded runes she couldn’t plac"
1"looked like she needed it"
2"looked like the split in her father’s old"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.549
wordCount1821
matches
0"not from branches but from hundreds of tiny shadows, all darting toward her from t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"know that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean53.56
std47.97
cv0.896
sampleLengths
0163
147
28
3128
498
54
6117
756
811
976
104
1158
1275
133
1486
156
16119
176
1872
193
20104
217
2297
234
24120
255
2685
274
2897
292
3085
313
3261
337
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"been tied"
1"were tied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs292
matches
0"was dragging"
1"was grading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences23
totalSentences97
ratio0.237
matches
0"Rory slung her Golden Empress delivery bag over her opposite shoulder, the crinkle of leftover spring roll wrappers rubbing against the worn cuff of her uniform shirt—stained with soy sauce from a mid-shift spill at a Soho flat."
1"She slipped through Richmond Park’s locked side gate, the metal jangling soft against her left wrist—where the crescent scar throbbed, a faint warning she’d ignored since Eva’s 2 a.m."
2"Ancient oak standing stones marked the clearing’s edge, their bark cracked with grooves that looked like faded runes she couldn’t place—runes her Welsh teacher mother had once pointed out in a Cardiff museum, calling them fae markers."
3"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet—bluebells, daisies, poppies—all out of season, their petals glossy as polished glass."
4"She glanced at her wristwatch, a hand-me-down from her barrister father—brass band, scratched face, a gift for her 18th birthday when she’d started pre-law at Cardiff: 12:15 AM."
5"Rustling sounded from its base—too sharp, too deliberate to be wind."
6"She’d made late-night deliveries to rough London estates, had faced Evan’s raised voice more times than she could count, had once hidden in a Cardiff alley for two hours to avoid his rage, but this rustling held a weight she couldn’t name—like someone was dragging a heavy object through the moss, slow and steady."
7"The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed harder, and she rubbed it with her right hand—her fingers brushing the pendant’s chain through her shirt."
8"No child stood there—only the wildflowers, their petals twisting slightly as if they’d heard the sound too."
9"She reached into her delivery bag, pulling out a crumpled fortune cookie wrapper from the Golden Empress—her last delivery of the night, a regular at a Richmond flat who’d left a £5 tip tucked in the wrapper, saying she’d looked like she needed it."
10"She checked her phone again—this time, the screen was black, no amount of tapping bringing it back."
11"She turned to the standing stones, but their positions had shifted—what had been a straight line now curved into a circle, blocking her exit."
12"The gem’s glow brightened, and she noticed a tiny crack running down its center—one she hadn’t seen before, a crack that looked like the split in her father’s old law book, the one Evan had thrown at her during a fight."
13"She spun, catching a glimpse of a shadow that had no source—no branch, no rock, just a dark shape that darted toward the wildflowers."
14"She’d learned to control her breathing during Evan’s rages, to count the beats of her heart until he left, but here the counting did nothing—each pulse made the world feel smaller, the standing stones’ circle tighter."
15"The hum grew louder, and she noticed a small crack in the oak’s trunk—its shape matching the crescent scar on her wrist."
16"The pendant’s glow flared, and the hum turned into a whisper—too faint to make out, but familiar, like the voice of someone she’d known as a child, someone who’d sung Welsh lullabies to her when her mother was grading papers."
17"She jolted back, her delivery bag falling off her arm and spilling its contents—spring roll wrappers, a soy sauce packet, a crumpled menu from Golden Empress with Yu-Fei’s note scrawled on the back (Don’t work too late), a small toy car she’d found in a delivery bag for a child’s birthday."
18"She bent to pick it up, and when she looked up, a shadow stood at the edge of her vision—taller than any human, its arms stretching toward her, its fingers ending in sharp points that glinted like broken glass."
19"She turned to the clearing’s entrance, but the snow outside the boundary had vanished, replaced by a blank white wall of light—no trees, no gate, no sign of the Richmond Park she’d entered."
20"She grabbed the oak’s bark, her fingers sinking into the sticky moss, and tried to pull herself up—anything to get away from the approaching shadows."
21"The pendant’s heat flared again, and she felt a jolt run from her left wrist to her shoulder, a jolt that made her see a flash of the benefactor’s hand—pale, with a scar on the knuckle—looping the silver chain around her spring roll container."
22"She traced the crescent scar on her wrist, the same shape as the oak’s crack, the same shape as the pendant’s crack, and realized the three were tied—her scar, the pendant, the grove—all part of something the benefactor had planned from the start."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount264
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.01893939393939394
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean18.77
std13.51
cv0.72
sampleLengths
038
129
21
327
437
531
614
711
822
98
1015
1175
1238
138
1416
1530
1612
174
1828
194
2022
2120
2211
2310
2454
255
2625
2726
2811
297
3010
3117
3225
3317
344
3544
3611
373
3815
3917
4010
4133
423
4324
4411
4512
4622
4717
486
4917
31.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.23711340206185566
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences94
matches
0"She slipped through Richmond Park’s"
1"She paused, her scuffed delivery"
2"She reached for the silver"
3"Its surface caught the faint"
4"She tucked the pendant back"
5"She’d left her abusive ex"
6"She stepped across the standing"
7"She’d delivered to a floral"
8"She checked her phone, the"
9"She glanced at her wristwatch,"
10"She stuffed her phone into"
11"She tensed, her delivery bag"
12"She’d made late-night deliveries to"
13"She took a step forward."
14"She spun, her boots kicking"
15"She scanned the edge of"
16"It had no feet, no"
17"She reached into her delivery"
18"She crumpled it tighter, the"
19"She dropped the wrapper, its"
ratio0.532
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences94
matches
0"Rory slung her Golden Empress"
1"She slipped through Richmond Park’s"
2"The winter air bit at"
3"She paused, her scuffed delivery"
4"She reached for the silver"
5"The crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, glowed"
6"Its surface caught the faint"
7"She tucked the pendant back"
8"She’d left her abusive ex"
9"Eva’s text had claimed the"
10"She stepped across the standing"
11"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet—bluebells,"
12"She’d delivered to a floral"
13"She checked her phone, the"
14"She glanced at her wristwatch,"
15"Time’s already playing games."
16"She stuffed her phone into"
17"A single oak stood taller"
18"She tensed, her delivery bag"
19"She’d made late-night deliveries to"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Ancient oak standing stones marked the clearing’s edge, their bark cracked with grooves that looked like faded runes she couldn’t place—runes her Welsh teacher …"
1"She paused, her scuffed delivery boots sinking into moss that stayed green despite the December frost, the same moss her mother had collected for a classroom pr…"
2"Eva’s text had claimed the Richmond grove held a clue to the benefactor, that the pendant’s pulse tied to something hidden there, something that could explain w…"
3"She scanned the edge of her vision, catching a shadow that stretched longer than her own, its shape blurring when she stared directly at it."
4"The gem’s glow brightened, and she noticed a tiny crack running down its center—one she hadn’t seen before, a crack that looked like the split in her father’s o…"
5"Her left wrist’s scar tingled, and she traced the crescent shape with her thumb, remembering the childhood accident that had made it: she’d climbed a Cardiff oa…"
6"Eva had wrapped it with a handkerchief from her Welsh teacher mother’s purse, the fabric printed with daffodils that had faded over time."
7"The pendant’s glow flared, and the hum turned into a whisper—too faint to make out, but familiar, like the voice of someone she’d known as a child, someone who’…"
8"She bent to pick it up, and when she looked up, a shadow stood at the edge of her vision—taller than any human, its arms stretching toward her, its fingers endi…"
9"The pendant’s warmth turning into a searing heat, making her gasp."
10"The pendant’s heat flared again, and she felt a jolt run from her left wrist to her shoulder, a jolt that made her see a flash of the benefactor’s hand—pale, wi…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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73.2020%