Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7J3AZ2GF1VMFGC1JFJ0NK

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.050570
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora gripped the Heartstone Pendant tighter, its crimson glow pulsing against her palm like a frantic heartbeat. She stood at the edge of Richmond Park, where the trees twisted into unnatural arches, their branches whispering secrets to the wind. Nyx hovered beside her, a shifting silhouette of shadow that stretched and contracted with the fading daylight. Isolde lingered a step behind, her silver hair catching the last rays of sun, her pale lavender eyes scanning the air as if reading invisible threads. "This rift hums with hunger," Isolde murmured, her voice weaving through the rustle of leaves like a riddle uncoiling. "Step lightly, or it devours what you carry." Aurora glanced at Nyx, whose form rippled. "Hunger for what? Souls? Secrets?" She kept her tone sharp, pushing forward through the underbrush, the pendant's warmth guiding her like a compass needle. Nyx's whisper slithered through the air, faint and wind-borne. "Not souls, Rory. Excess. This tear in the Veil leads to Dymas, where gluttony reigns. Belphegor's domain. Touch nothing unless you crave eternity's bloat." They pressed on, the air thickening with a sweet, cloying scent that clawed at Aurora's throat. Ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their bark etched with glowing runes that flickered like dying embers. As they crossed the threshold, the world blurred. Time stretched, then snapped. An hour in the grove felt like a fleeting breath, but this rift yanked them elsewhere. Aurora's stomach lurched as colors inverted—greens bled to amber, the sky above cracking open into a warm, honeyed expanse. She stumbled out first, boots sinking into soil that pulsed underfoot, alive and fertile. Vines snaked across the ground, heavy with fruits she'd never seen: orbs of deep purple that shimmered like liquid metal, clusters of berries that dripped nectar onto the earth, staining it gold. The air hummed with distant laughter, overlaid by the sizzle of flames and the clatter of utensils. Heat washed over her, not oppressive but inviting, wrapping around her skin like a lover's embrace. "Look at this," Aurora breathed, crouching to brush a vine. It coiled around her finger, gentle at first, then insistent, pulling her toward a sprawling orchard where trees bowed under the weight of swollen peaches, their skins splitting to reveal flesh that glowed faintly. Nyx solidified slightly, their violet eyes glowing brighter in the amber light. "Careful. These groves feed on desire. One bite, and you forget the way back." Isolde glided forward, her feet leaving no imprint on the lush grass. Wildflowers bloomed in her wake, alien to this place—petals of iridescent blue that unfurled and withered in seconds. "The Prince's garden tempts the famished. See how the fruits whisper promises? Eternal satisfaction, they claim, but chains lie in the seeds." Aurora yanked her hand free, the vine retracting with a soft, disappointed sigh. Unease prickled her spine as she scanned the horizon. Massive stone halls rose in the distance, their walls carved with feasts in bas-relief: figures gorging on platters piled high, mouths stretched wide in ecstasy or agony. Smoke curled from chimneys, carrying scents of roasted spices and caramelized sugars that made her mouth water despite herself. She swallowed hard, fingers tracing the crescent scar on her wrist, a reminder of earthly pains. They moved deeper, the path widening into a boulevard lined with trellises. Grapevines twisted overhead, grapes swelling to the size of fists, their skins translucent and veined with light. A breeze carried snippets of conversation—voices booming with laughter, then dropping to greedy murmurs. "Smell that? Like every craving you've ever buried," Aurora said, her bright blue eyes narrowing as she spotted movement ahead. Figures shuffled between the vines, their forms hunched and bloated, eyes glazed with perpetual hunger. One turned, a soul bound here, cheeks smeared with juice, lips moving in silent pleas. Nyx drifted closer, their shadowy form blending with the lengthening shadows cast by the amber sky. "Helbound chefs, contracted from your world. They cook for demons, forever tasting but never sated. Listen—their knives sing." A rhythmic chopping echoed from a nearby pavilion, blades flashing against slabs of meat that writhed as if still alive. Aurora's pulse quickened. Wonder bloomed in her chest, mingling with a creeping dread. This place pulsed with life, every leaf and fruit vibrating with energy, yet it felt wrong, like a dream teetering on nightmare. She reached for the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt, its moonsilver cold against her skin, a stark contrast to the pendant's insistent warmth. Isolde tilted her head, her long silver hair swaying like a curtain of moonlight. "Deeper lies the heart of indulgence. Feasts that span horizons, where tables groan under bounties from realms unseen. But beware the competitors—they wager more than gold." As they crested a gentle hill, the scene unfolded. A vast clearing sprawled before them, dotted with enormous banquet tables hewn from petrified wood, laden with dishes that defied logic: towers of pastries that shifted colors, soups bubbling in cauldrons carved from crystal, meats skewered on bones that hummed tunes. Demons lounged at the edges, their forms grotesque and elegant—horns curling like vines, skins patterned with fruit motifs. One belched a plume of scented smoke, eyes locking onto the newcomers with predatory gleam. Aurora froze, heart pounding. The air thrummed with a low, resonant hum, as if the ground itself digested the excesses. She felt it in her bones, a pull to join, to taste, to lose herself. "This is insane. It's like the world decided to throw a party and forgot to invite restraint." Nyx's form flickered, unease evident in the way their shadows sharpened. "Insane, yes. Wondrous, too. See those orchards beyond? They bear fruits that grant visions—or madness. Aldric tasted one once, before I became this. It showed me realms folding into each other." Isolde nodded, her ethereal features tightening. "Visions that mislead, as Fae truths do. The Veil thins here, shimmering like a veil torn by greedy hands. Touch it, and Hel claims a piece of you." They ventured toward a garden maze, hedges bursting with blossoms that released puffs of pollen, each grain sparkling like tiny stars. Aurora brushed one, and colors exploded in her vision—flashes of her Cardiff childhood, superimposed with feasts she'd never attended. She shook her head, disoriented, the wonder turning sharp. "Something's watching us," she said, voice low as she drew the blade. It glowed faintly, cutting through an illusory vine that sprang up to block their path. The air split with a hiss, revealing a hidden alcove where a fountain bubbled wine instead of water, its surface rippling with faces trapped in silent screams. Nyx extended a tendril of shadow, probing the fountain's edge. "Souls diluted into drink. Refreshing for some, torment for others. Feel the chill? That's their regret seeping through." Isolde circled the fountain, her compulsion to mislead twisting her words into poetry. "Drink deep, and knowledge flows. Or drown in what you learn." Aurora resisted the urge, stepping back. The unease gnawed deeper now, the alien beauty revealing its teeth. Birds—or what passed for them here—flitted overhead, wings made of folded pastry that crumbled in flight, raining sweetness onto the ground. One landed nearby, pecking at seeds that sprouted instantly into miniature trees. They pushed on, the environment shifting subtly. The amber sky deepened to ochre, casting long shadows that danced independently. A grand amphitheater emerged, ringed by statues of bloated figures, their stone eyes following the group's movement. Echoes of cheers reverberated from within, where culinary battles unfolded: chefs wielding flames like weapons, conjuring dishes that levitated and sang. "Listen to that roar," Aurora said, creeping to the edge. Demons and souls clashed spatulas against pans, creating symphonies of sound and scent. One creation—a pie that breathed steam in rhythmic puffs—elicited gasps of awe from the crowd. Nyx whispered closer, their voice a cool breeze against her ear. "Wonder turns to unease here. These competitions bind winners to eternal service, losers to the pits below." Isolde's eyes gleamed with faint luminescence. "Pits where excess ferments into poison. Feel the ground tremble? It hungers for more." Aurora felt it—a subtle vibration underfoot, like the earth digesting secrets. She moved deeper into the amphitheater's shadow, discovering a side path lined with reflective pools. Each pool mirrored not the sky, but alternate feasts: banquets in underwater realms, skies filled with floating delicacies. Touching the water sent ripples through her mind, fragments of lore bubbling up unbidden—tales of Belphegor's indolence, his throne of cushions stuffed with forgotten desires. Unease coiled tighter as a shadowy figure detached from the statues, approaching with deliberate slowness. It resembled a chef, apron stained with iridescent sauces, but its eyes burned with infernal fire. "You wander far for mortals," it growled, voice thick with oil and spice. "Taste our wares, or compete. Dymas welcomes all appetites." Aurora brandished the blade, its cold edge humming. "We're not here to eat. Show us the way to the Prince's core." The figure laughed, a sound like cracking bones. "Core? That's for the bold or the foolish. Follow the vines—they lead to indulgence's heart." They retreated, the encounter leaving a bitter aftertaste in the air. Deeper still, the landscape morphed into terraced fields where grains waved like golden seas, harvested by ethereal hands that faded in and out of visibility. Aurora ran her fingers through the stalks, feeling their unnatural softness, each kernel pulsing with warmth. "This place... it's alive in ways Earth isn't," she said, wonder edging out the fear for a moment. "Everything grows, feeds, consumes." Nyx nodded, their form stretching to touch a blooming flower that unfurled petals revealing tiny, edible gems. "Alive, yes. But parasitic. It draws from the Veil's rifts, pulling essence from your world." Isolde paused at a clearing's edge, where a massive tree dominated, its trunk a coiled mass of roots forming natural seats. Fruits dangled low, inviting plucks. "Sit, and stories unfold from the bark. But rise, and you carry its weight forever." Aurora resisted, pressing onward. The air grew heavier, laden with perfumes that evoked memories—her mother's kitchen in Cardiff, mingled with the acrid tang of Evan's betrayal. Unease peaked as illusions flickered: feasts that dissolved into skeletal remains, laughter twisting to wails. They discovered a hidden glade, encircled by bioluminescent fungi that cast eerie glows. In the center, a table set for three, dishes steaming with unknown delicacies. The pendant burned hotter against her chest, signaling proximity to something profound. "Look," Aurora whispered, pointing to inscriptions on the table's edge—symbols of gluttony, etched in glowing script. Nyx's shadows coiled protectively. "A trap disguised as welcome. Eat, and Dymas claims you." Isolde traced the symbols without touching. "Claims, but reveals. The Prince's secrets lie in the flavors." As they circled the table, the ground shifted again, vines creeping closer, the alien wonder of Dymas pressing in from all sides, a symphony of temptation and terror that refused to relent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1832
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1832
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count3
6
word"fleeting"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"lurched"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"desire"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count2
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
20
word"quickened"
count1
21
word"stark"
count1
22
word"crystal"
count1
23
word"pounding"
count1
24
word"chill"
count1
25
word"echoes"
count1
26
word"reverberated"
count1
27
word"encounter"
count1
28
word"profound"
count1
29
word"traced"
count1
30
word"symphony"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"loomed"
4"etched"
5"flickered"
6"fleeting"
7"stomach"
8"lurched"
9"pulsed"
10"shimmered"
11"oppressive"
12"weight"
13"desire"
14"scanned"
15"tracing"
16"reminder"
17"rhythmic"
18"echoed"
19"pulse"
20"quickened"
21"stark"
22"crystal"
23"pounding"
24"chill"
25"echoes"
26"reverberated"
27"encounter"
28"profound"
29"traced"
30"symphony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"g with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1812
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1431
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora17
Nyx10
Figures1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Cardiff2
Demons2
Belphegor1
Evan1
Dymas1
Isolde9
Unease3
One4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Figures"
3"Demons"
4"Belphegor"
5"Evan"
6"Dymas"
7"Isolde"
8"Unease"
9"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.906
windowScore1
95.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reading invisible threads"
1"felt like a fleeting breath, but this r"
89.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.104
wordCount1812
matches
0"not oppressive but inviting, wrapping around her skin like a lover's embrace"
1"not the sky, but alternate feasts: banquets in underwater realms, skies fille"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
91.32% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean42.14
std19.79
cv0.47
sampleLengths
082
127
231
333
480
579
644
726
852
984
1043
1150
1234
1378
1440
1583
1652
1742
1834
1949
2054
2128
2224
2350
2457
2538
2628
2720
2869
2931
3022
3121
3223
3352
3422
3532
3641
3741
3838
3916
4014
4116
4232
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs284
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences118
ratio0.093
matches
0"Aurora's stomach lurched as colors inverted—greens bled to amber, the sky above cracking open into a warm, honeyed expanse."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in her wake, alien to this place—petals of iridescent blue that unfurled and withered in seconds."
2"A breeze carried snippets of conversation—voices booming with laughter, then dropping to greedy murmurs."
3"Demons lounged at the edges, their forms grotesque and elegant—horns curling like vines, skins patterned with fruit motifs."
4"Aurora brushed one, and colors exploded in her vision—flashes of her Cardiff childhood, superimposed with feasts she'd never attended."
5"Birds—or what passed for them here—flitted overhead, wings made of folded pastry that crumbled in flight, raining sweetness onto the ground."
6"One creation—a pie that breathed steam in rhythmic puffs—elicited gasps of awe from the crowd."
7"Aurora felt it—a subtle vibration underfoot, like the earth digesting secrets."
8"Touching the water sent ripples through her mind, fragments of lore bubbling up unbidden—tales of Belphegor's indolence, his throne of cushions stuffed with forgotten desires."
9"The air grew heavier, laden with perfumes that evoked memories—her mother's kitchen in Cardiff, mingled with the acrid tang of Evan's betrayal."
10"\"Look,\" Aurora whispered, pointing to inscriptions on the table's edge—symbols of gluttony, etched in glowing script."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1447
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.017277125086385625
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0055286800276434
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean15.36
std6.86
cv0.447
sampleLengths
017
122
217
326
419
58
67
724
89
924
1016
1117
128
134
1416
1519
1614
1732
1817
1916
2010
2134
2212
2314
2412
2518
2622
2713
289
2927
3019
3116
3212
3317
3414
3520
3615
3715
3816
3918
4020
413
4210
4322
4423
4514
4626
479
4841
4918
74.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4491525423728814
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences97
matches
0"She stood at the edge"
1"She kept her tone sharp,"
2"They pressed on, the air"
3"She stumbled out first, boots"
4"It coiled around her finger,"
5"She swallowed hard, fingers tracing"
6"They moved deeper, the path"
7"She reached for the Fae-Forged"
8"She felt it in her"
9"They ventured toward a garden"
10"She shook her head, disoriented,"
11"she said, voice low as"
12"It glowed faintly, cutting through"
13"They pushed on, the environment"
14"She moved deeper into the"
15"It resembled a chef, apron"
16"it growled, voice thick with"
17"They retreated, the encounter leaving"
18"she said, wonder edging out"
19"They discovered a hidden glade,"
ratio0.206
27.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences97
matches
0"Aurora gripped the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She stood at the edge"
2"Nyx hovered beside her, a"
3"Isolde lingered a step behind,"
4"Isolde murmured, her voice weaving"
5"Aurora glanced at Nyx, whose"
6"She kept her tone sharp,"
7"Nyx's whisper slithered through the"
8"They pressed on, the air"
9"Time stretched, then snapped."
10"An hour in the grove"
11"Aurora's stomach lurched as colors"
12"She stumbled out first, boots"
13"Vines snaked across the ground,"
14"The air hummed with distant"
15"Aurora breathed, crouching to brush"
16"It coiled around her finger,"
17"Nyx solidified slightly, their violet"
18"Isolde glided forward, her feet"
19"Wildflowers bloomed in her wake,"
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount15
matches
0"Nyx hovered beside her, a shifting silhouette of shadow that stretched and contracted with the fading daylight."
1"Isolde lingered a step behind, her silver hair catching the last rays of sun, her pale lavender eyes scanning the air as if reading invisible threads."
2"Vines snaked across the ground, heavy with fruits she'd never seen: orbs of deep purple that shimmered like liquid metal, clusters of berries that dripped necta…"
3"It coiled around her finger, gentle at first, then insistent, pulling her toward a sprawling orchard where trees bowed under the weight of swollen peaches, thei…"
4"Smoke curled from chimneys, carrying scents of roasted spices and caramelized sugars that made her mouth water despite herself."
5"A rhythmic chopping echoed from a nearby pavilion, blades flashing against slabs of meat that writhed as if still alive."
6"A vast clearing sprawled before them, dotted with enormous banquet tables hewn from petrified wood, laden with dishes that defied logic: towers of pastries that…"
7"The air split with a hiss, revealing a hidden alcove where a fountain bubbled wine instead of water, its surface rippling with faces trapped in silent screams."
8"Echoes of cheers reverberated from within, where culinary battles unfolded: chefs wielding flames like weapons, conjuring dishes that levitated and sang."
9"Deeper still, the landscape morphed into terraced fields where grains waved like golden seas, harvested by ethereal hands that faded in and out of visibility."
10"Nyx nodded, their form stretching to touch a blooming flower that unfurled petals revealing tiny, edible gems."
11"The air grew heavier, laden with perfumes that evoked memories—her mother's kitchen in Cardiff, mingled with the acrid tang of Evan's betrayal."
12"Unease peaked as illusions flickered: feasts that dissolved into skeletal remains, laughter twisting to wails."
13"They discovered a hidden glade, encircled by bioluminescent fungi that cast eerie glows."
14"As they circled the table, the ground shifted again, vines creeping closer, the alien wonder of Dymas pressing in from all sides, a symphony of temptation and t…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora breathed, crouching to brush a vine"
1"she said, voice low as she drew the blade"
2"it growled, voice thick with oil and spice"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
2"it growled (growl)"
3"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.267
72.6561%