Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7JPC3EEQE3GYY3FDEAHX5

Run Details

Duration:
27.6s
Cost:
$0.001526
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavements of Camden, turning the gutters into rushing black rivers. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through the downpour, her boots slapping against slick cobbles. Streetlights blurred into yellow halos, casting jagged shadows that danced with every gust. She kept her eyes locked on the figure ahead—a man in a dark hoodie, darting between parked vans and overflowing bins. He moved like he knew these alleys, cutting sharp lefts that forced her to vault a low fence, thorns snagging her coat. "Dispatch, this is Quinn," she barked into her radio, breath ragged against the static. Water streamed down her face, stinging her eyes. "Suspect heading north on Inverness Street. Male, mid-twenties, olive skin. Possible link to the Soho crew. Request backup, now." The voice crackled back, faint over the roar of the storm. "Copy, Quinn. Units en route, ETA ten minutes." Ten minutes. Too long. The man glanced over his shoulder, his face a pale flash under the hood. He bolted harder, weaving past a cluster of late-night revellers huddled under umbrellas outside a kebab shop. Their shouts faded as Quinn pushed through, elbow knocking a bottle from someone's hand. It shattered behind her, shards glinting like broken teeth. She rounded the corner onto Kentish Town Road, lungs burning. The suspect veered right, into a narrower lane flanked by brick walls slick with graffiti. Puddles exploded under his feet, soaking his jeans. Quinn followed, her worn leather watch ticking sodden seconds on her wrist. Military precision kept her strides even, but the rain clawed at her focus, blurring the edges of the world. He ducked under a fire escape, the metal groaning as rain dripped from its rungs. She mirrored him, coat flapping like a broken wing. Up ahead, the lane dead-ended at a chain-link fence, but he didn't stop. Instead, he scrambled over a rusted manhole cover half-hidden in the shadows, prying it loose with frantic hands. The lid clanged open, revealing a yawning black maw. Quinn slowed, heart pounding against her ribs. "Police! Stop right there!" Her voice cut through the deluge, but he didn't hesitate. He dropped into the hole, feet first, vanishing into the dark. She approached the edge, torch beam from her phone slicing down. Concrete steps descended into a tunnel, walls tagged with faded symbols—spirals, eyes, things that didn't belong in a disused Tube line. The air reeked of damp earth and something sharper, like ozone after lightning. Echoes of dripping water answered her breaths. Backup was minutes away, but he was slipping through her fingers. She flashed the light lower. Footprints smeared the steps, fresh and muddy. Her sharp jaw clenched. Three years since Morris vanished on a case like this—chasing shadows into places they shouldn't go. Unexplained. Supernatural whispers she shoved down deep. No time for ghosts. She holstered her radio and descended, the manhole lid thudding shut above her like a coffin nail. Darkness swallowed the light, forcing her to grip the rail. Steps slick, she took them two at a time, boots echoing in the confined space. The tunnel opened into a wider passage, arched brick laced with cobwebs. Faint glows flickered ahead— not electric, but something warmer, like candle flames dancing. Voices murmured, low and urgent, bouncing off the walls. She killed her phone light, letting her eyes adjust. The suspect's silhouette hurried on, merging with the flow of figures emerging from side shafts. What the hell was this? Abandoned Tube station, sure, but not empty. People—dozens—cloaked in hoods and scarves, bartering under strung-up lanterns that cast faces in eerie amber. Stalls lined the platform: vials of shimmering liquid, amulets etched with runes, books bound in leather that didn't look animal. A woman haggled over a dagger with a hilt that pulsed faint blue. Another man held up a bone token, grinning as a door of warped wood swung open for him. Quinn pressed against the wall, pulse thundering in her ears. The Veil Market. She'd heard rumours in vice—whispers from informants about an underground bazaar that dealt in the forbidden. Enchanted goods. Banned alchemy. Information that could topple governments or summon things from nightmares. It moved every full moon, ghosts in the machine of London's underbelly. The suspect weaved through the crowd, pausing at a stall piled with herbs that smoked on their own. He exchanged quick words with the vendor—a wiry man with tattoos snaking up his neck—then slipped toward a shadowed archway. Guards flanked it, burly types with eyes that gleamed unnatural in the low light. She edged closer, rain water dripping from her coat onto the gritty floor. A child nearby clutched a stuffed raven that croaked softly, real as any bird. "Oi, watch it," a voice hissed as she brushed past a group of sellers unpacking crates. The air thickened with scents: incense, blood, something metallic like fear. "Looking for something special, love?" A stall owner leaned out, his breath fogging the air. He dangled a necklace of teeth. "Protection from the unseen. Five quid." Quinn ignored him, eyes on the suspect. He flashed a bone token—small, carved, yellowish—and the guards stepped aside. The archway led deeper, into tunnels that branched like veins. Her hand hovered near her holster. Draw now, and the market would erupt. These weren't your average punters; stories said they traded in curses, had ties to whatever clique she hunted. The one running off-books clinics, dodging her raids in Soho. Tomás Herrera's face flashed in her mind— that scar on his arm, the medallion glinting as he patched up wounds she couldn't explain. Backup radioed in. "Quinn, position? We're at the lane." "Underground," she whispered back. "Old Tube under Camden. Suspect in a market—can't explain. Hold position." Static buzzed. "Say again? Market?" She clicked off, focus sharpening. The suspect vanished into the arch. Follow, and she stepped into the unknown. No warrant for this pit. No idea what waited—traps, enforcers, worse. But let him go, and the trail on the clique cooled. Morris's case haunted her: partner gone, case files sealed with "unexplained circumstances." Supernatural origins. She didn't believe in that rot, but the doubt gnawed. A shout erupted from a nearby stall. "Thief!" A vendor lunged at a pickpocket, fists flying. The crowd surged, bodies pressing in. Quinn ducked low, using the chaos to inch forward. The guards scanned the commotion, distracted. She reached the arch, bone token or not. Her fingers brushed the rough stone. Beyond, voices echoed—accents thick, words in languages she half-recognised. Spanish, maybe. Laughter cut sharp, then a door slammed. Decision loomed, heavy as the rain above. Turn back, wait for the cavalry. Or plunge in, chase the shadow into the heart of it all. The tunnel's chill seeped into her bones. She stared into the dark, breath steadying. One step. Then another. Figures moved within, cloaked shapes bartering secrets. A woman's voice rose, haggling over a map that shimmered like water. "This shows the ley lines, straight to the Nest. But it'll cost you more than bone." The suspect's path led there—deeper, where the real deals happened. Quinn's jaw tightened. No more ghosts. She crossed the threshold. The passage narrowed, walls closing in with moisture that beaded like sweat. Lanterns hung sporadic, their flames unnaturally steady against drafts. She kept to the shadows, footsteps muffled on the uneven stone. Whispers flanked her: deals struck in corners, a man muttering incantations over a glowing orb. Up ahead, the suspect slowed, glancing back. His hood slipped, revealing short curly dark hair, olive skin. Tomás Herrera. The off-books medic, the one who'd vanished from her watchlist after that clinic bust. He clutched his medallion, Saint Christopher warding off pursuit. Quinn's breath caught. Him. Tied to the clique, patching up their messes. If he reached whatever waited, evidence scattered. He turned a corner, into a chamber alive with activity. Stalls overflowed: potions bubbling in cauldrons, weapons that hummed with energy, scrolls unrolling to reveal futures in ink. Patrons haggled fiercely. "Prime essence from the Thames naiads," a seller bellowed. "Heals what modern meds can't touch." Tomás nodded to a contact—a tall figure in a trench coat—handing over a vial. The man pocketed it, gesturing toward a hidden door behind a tapestry of ravens. Quinn crept closer, heart a drumbeat. The air hummed, charged like before a storm. She spotted an alcove, slipped in, watching. Tomás argued low with the contact. "Silas needs this by dawn," Tomás said, voice urgent. "The Nest can't hold without it." The man chuckled. "Full moon shift's coming. Market moves, your secrets with it. Pay up, Herrera." Tomás tossed coins, scar on his forearm catching the light. He pushed through the door, into deeper tunnels. Quinn emerged, blending into the throng. A guard eyed her, hand on a blade that looked too keen. She forced a nod, casual, and pressed on. The door creaked as she followed, hinges whispering warnings. Inside, the space widened into a vaulted room, maps pinned to walls—old London overlays with glowing lines marking unseen paths. A table held artifacts: a watch like hers but antique, ticking backwards; a bone token identical to Tomás's. He stood there, back to her, rifling a drawer. Papers rustled—names, dates, connections to her cases. She stepped forward, gun half-drawn. "Herrera. Hands where I can see them." He spun, eyes wide—warm brown, startled. "Detective Quinn. You shouldn't be here." Rain echoed distant, but down here, thunder brewed in the tension. Guards' footsteps approached from the outer room. Tomás edged toward a side exit, medallion glinting. "You've got nowhere left," she said, voice steel. "That clinic stunt? The clique's games? Ends now." He smirked, faint. "You chase shadows, Detective. This place... it bites back." The door behind her rattled. Choices narrowed: cuff him, risk the enforcers. Or let the market's undercurrent pull them both under. She lunged, but he dodged, scar flashing as he bolted. The chase reignited, tunnels twisting like a labyrinth built on lies.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she whispered back [back]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.083
97.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1680
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1680
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count3
2
word"maw"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"echoes"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count2
15
word"loomed"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count2
19
word"tapestry"
count1
20
word"charged"
count1
21
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"glinting"
2"maw"
3"pounding"
4"echoes"
5"jaw clenched"
6"echoing"
7"flickered"
8"electric"
9"dancing"
10"etched"
11"pulsed"
12"pulse"
13"scanned"
14"echoed"
15"loomed"
16"chill"
17"shimmered"
18"footsteps"
19"tapestry"
20"charged"
21"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences157
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1651
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1485
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Water1
Kentish1
Town1
Road1
Tube2
Morris2
Veil1
Market1
London2
Soho1
Herrera2
Static1
Supernatural2
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás8
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Water"
4"Morris"
5"Market"
6"Herrera"
7"Static"
8"Saint"
9"Christopher"
10"Tomás"
places
0"Kentish"
1"Town"
2"Road"
3"London"
4"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.606
wordCount1651
matches
0"not electric, but something warmer, like candle flames dancing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean34.4
std19.47
cv0.566
sampleLengths
082
141
219
358
464
564
632
752
850
946
1058
1178
1255
1352
1454
1527
1628
1764
189
1915
205
2164
2237
2332
2425
2518
2635
2720
2847
2942
3019
3131
3215
3328
3427
3515
3616
3718
3826
3947
4016
4112
4212
4326
4416
4512
4621
4721
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs309
matches
0"was slipping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences18
totalSentences172
ratio0.105
matches
0"She kept her eyes locked on the figure ahead—a man in a dark hoodie, darting between parked vans and overflowing bins."
1"Concrete steps descended into a tunnel, walls tagged with faded symbols—spirals, eyes, things that didn't belong in a disused Tube line."
2"Three years since Morris vanished on a case like this—chasing shadows into places they shouldn't go."
3"Faint glows flickered ahead— not electric, but something warmer, like candle flames dancing."
4"People—dozens—cloaked in hoods and scarves, bartering under strung-up lanterns that cast faces in eerie amber."
5"She'd heard rumours in vice—whispers from informants about an underground bazaar that dealt in the forbidden."
6"He exchanged quick words with the vendor—a wiry man with tattoos snaking up his neck—then slipped toward a shadowed archway."
7"He flashed a bone token—small, carved, yellowish—and the guards stepped aside."
8"These weren't your average punters; stories said they traded in curses, had ties to whatever clique she hunted."
9"Tomás Herrera's face flashed in her mind— that scar on his arm, the medallion glinting as he patched up wounds she couldn't explain."
10"No idea what waited—traps, enforcers, worse."
11"Beyond, voices echoed—accents thick, words in languages she half-recognised."
12"The suspect's path led there—deeper, where the real deals happened."
13"Tomás nodded to a contact—a tall figure in a trench coat—handing over a vial."
14"Inside, the space widened into a vaulted room, maps pinned to walls—old London overlays with glowing lines marking unseen paths."
15"A table held artifacts: a watch like hers but antique, ticking backwards; a bone token identical to Tomás's."
16"Papers rustled—names, dates, connections to her cases."
17"He spun, eyes wide—warm brown, startled."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1470
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"revealing short curly dark hair,"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.017006802721088437
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004081632653061225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean9.6
std4.87
cv0.507
sampleLengths
013
113
213
321
422
514
68
719
811
98
102
112
1214
1317
1414
159
1610
1715
188
1912
2019
2115
229
2313
2418
259
267
2714
2811
2911
3021
3113
327
3311
345
357
364
3716
381
396
404
4117
4210
4315
4412
4513
469
479
4815
495
80.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4883720930232558
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners84
22.83% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"Instead, he scrambled over a"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences146
matches
0"She kept her eyes locked"
1"He moved like he knew"
2"she barked into her radio,"
3"He bolted harder, weaving past"
4"Their shouts faded as Quinn"
5"It shattered behind her, shards"
6"She rounded the corner onto"
7"He ducked under a fire"
8"She mirrored him, coat flapping"
9"Her voice cut through the"
10"He dropped into the hole,"
11"She approached the edge, torch"
12"She flashed the light lower."
13"Her sharp jaw clenched."
14"She holstered her radio and"
15"She killed her phone light,"
16"She'd heard rumours in vice—whispers"
17"It moved every full moon,"
18"He exchanged quick words with"
19"She edged closer, rain water"
ratio0.295
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences146
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through"
1"Streetlights blurred into yellow halos,"
2"She kept her eyes locked"
3"He moved like he knew"
4"she barked into her radio,"
5"Water streamed down her face,"
6"The voice crackled back, faint"
7"The man glanced over his"
8"He bolted harder, weaving past"
9"Their shouts faded as Quinn"
10"It shattered behind her, shards"
11"She rounded the corner onto"
12"The suspect veered right, into"
13"Puddles exploded under his feet,"
14"Quinn followed, her worn leather"
15"Military precision kept her strides"
16"He ducked under a fire"
17"She mirrored him, coat flapping"
18"The lid clanged open, revealing"
19"Quinn slowed, heart pounding against"
ratio0.836
34.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"If he reached whatever waited,"
ratio0.007
70.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Streetlights blurred into yellow halos, casting jagged shadows that danced with every gust."
1"He moved like he knew these alleys, cutting sharp lefts that forced her to vault a low fence, thorns snagging her coat."
2"Concrete steps descended into a tunnel, walls tagged with faded symbols—spirals, eyes, things that didn't belong in a disused Tube line."
3"People—dozens—cloaked in hoods and scarves, bartering under strung-up lanterns that cast faces in eerie amber."
4"She'd heard rumours in vice—whispers from informants about an underground bazaar that dealt in the forbidden."
5"Guards flanked it, burly types with eyes that gleamed unnatural in the low light."
6"Stalls overflowed: potions bubbling in cauldrons, weapons that hummed with energy, scrolls unrolling to reveal futures in ink."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"A stall owner leaned, his breath fogging the air"
1"A vendor lunged, fists flying"
2"Tomás said, voice urgent"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
1"a voice hissed (hiss)"
2"she whispered back (whisper)"
3"a seller bellowed (bellow)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.333
77.6735%