"She’d seen the rumors online—folk claiming to hear voices in the wind, to touch something that wasn’t quite there—but never *seen* it."
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"“Beyond the stones,” Isolde said, her voice like wind chimes, “the line blurs. Time does not tick as it does for you.” She turned, and for the first time, Rory saw the rift— a shimmer, faint as a heat mirage, just beyond the ring of ancient oaks."
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"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, blooms in every color— magenta, indigo, gold— and their petals shifted, as if lit from within."
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"Not a river— the water was still, a mirror for the sky, which was the color of burnished amber."
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"The reflection wasn’t of them— it was of a garden, sprawling and lush, with fountains that shot emerald water into the air, and trees heavy with fruit that glowed like rubies and sapphires."
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"Evan had loved food— loved *taking* it, hoarding it, then discarding it when he was sated."
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"He’d saved her, then vanished— only to reappear a week later, waiting outside her flat."
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"She was a liar, she told herself, but she’d learned to read people— to see the lies in their eyes."
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"The water looked inviting, but there was something about it— a wrongness, like a mirror that showed a distorted reflection."
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"When she leaned down, she saw not her own reflection, but Evan’s— not in the flesh, but as a soul, trapped in the form he’d had when he’d first met her, slim, with dark hair and a smile that had made her knees weak."
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"She struggled to breathe, but the liquid filled her lungs, and she felt herself sinking— not into the pond, but into something else."
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"Something pulled her upward— Nyx, she realized, their shadowy form wrapping around her, lifting her out of the water."
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"Isolde closed her eyes, and for a moment, she looked different— older, the lines in her face deeper, as if time had crept up on her."
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"Isolde nodded, but her eyes lingered on the water, as if she saw something there— something that made her skin prickle."
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"They turned, and Rory noticed for the first time the path leading into the east grove— a narrow trail, bordered by thorned bushes that glowed with bioluminescent sap."
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"It was everything the codex had said— a sprawling city of marble and gold, with vineyards that stretched to the horizon and orchards heavy with fruit no mortal had ever seen."
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"The air was thick with a rot— not the stench of death, but of excess."
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"His hair was shorter, his face more haggard, but his smile was the same— empty, greedy."
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"Evan looked at her, and for a moment, his eyes were clear— *he* was clear."
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"Nyx and Isolde fell in beside her, the Grove fading behind them as they stepped toward the rift— toward Dymas, toward answers, toward whatever lay ahead."
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"It pulsed faintly, a slow, warm thrumming, as if it knew what lay ahead."
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"The reflection wasn’t of them— it was of a garden, sprawling and lush, with fountains that shot emerald water into the air, and trees heavy with fruit that glow…"
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"Rory looked at them, at the flicker of shadow that wasn’t quite solid, and felt a surge of gratitude."
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"The water looked inviting, but there was something about it— a wrongness, like a mirror that showed a distorted reflection."
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"When she leaned down, she saw not her own reflection, but Evan’s— not in the flesh, but as a soul, trapped in the form he’d had when he’d first met her, slim, w…"
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"Memories flooded her: Evan slamming doors, calling her names, breaking her favorite mug."
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"Isolde closed her eyes, and for a moment, she looked different— older, the lines in her face deeper, as if time had crept up on her."
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"Isolde nodded, but her eyes lingered on the water, as if she saw something there— something that made her skin prickle."
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"They turned, and Rory noticed for the first time the path leading into the east grove— a narrow trail, bordered by thorned bushes that glowed with bioluminescen…"
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"The flowers along the path had started to wilt, their petals turning gray, as if they’d seen something terrible."
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"It was everything the codex had said— a sprawling city of marble and gold, with vineyards that stretched to the horizon and orchards heavy with fruit no mortal …"